Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GTWQXGP0VSSQY4770EFW4C

Run Details

Duration:
4m 24s
Cost:
$0.002183
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain turned the green neon above the door into a smear across the glass. Inside the Raven's Nest the radiator ticked, and Silas worked the till with a coin-counting rhythm he didn't trust to any machine. Rory stacked the last chairs upside down on the tables, the insulated bag from her final Golden Empress run still breathing ginger and chilli oil by the sink. The bell over the door rang. "Last orders were an hour ago." She kept her back to it. Silas could handle the drunks; he'd had fifty years of practice and one good knee. "One of whatever's Welsh." The voice landed in the middle of her spine and stayed there. She turned with the cloth still in her hand. A man stood dripping on the mat, coat the colour of wet slate, umbrella furled like something he'd forgotten how to use. Grey at the temples now. The same crooked front tooth when he spoke. "You've got the wrong—" "Third row, Criminal Law. You argued with Professor Haines so long he gave you the room and marked it as attendance." He hung his coat over the nearest stool. "There's a crescent scar on your left wrist from a wall in Roath, and a copy of my contracts notes you never gave back." "Rhys Bevan." "There's a name I haven't heard anyone say in years." Silas didn't ask. He pressed somewhere along the bookshelf behind the bar, a panel swung open and shut again with a dusty bottle in his hand. Rhys studied the maps on the walls instead, the black-and-white streets of a city he didn't know. Some doors you weren't meant to notice. She'd learned that the hard way. Silas set down two glasses and limped to the far end, to the till, to anywhere that wasn't them. "What are you doing in Soho at half eleven on a Thursday?" "Injunction. A bank against a former employee. Four months of prep, settled by lunch." He turned his glass once on the wood. "I stood up this morning, said 'I appear for the applicant,' and my father came out of my mouth." "Congratulations. You made it." "That wasn't a compliment." "It sounded like one." He laughed, and the crooked tooth showed, and for a second the room was a seminar room in Cardiff with rain on different glass. Then it wasn't. "You've lost the valleys out of your voice." "London takes deposits." "And you?" His eyes went over her — the black hair, the apron, the bag by the sink. "Barrister now, I assumed. Your dad's chambers, probably. Running moots from a corner office." "Deliveries." "Deliveries." "Golden Empress. Number nine on the menu is worth the cycle up Wardour Street." She wiped a glass that was already dry. "It's temporary." "You said that about the gap year. Before uni." "Then I'm consistent." "You used to argue like it was breathing, Carter. Tonight you read me the closing rules off a chalkboard." He leaned in over the bar. "And you flinched at your own name. Who's Laila?" "Depends who's asking." "Fair." He drank. The Penderyn went down without a face. Cardiff training. "I'm sorry. I had a whole speech and it's gone." "Don't spend it." "Eva rang me. Eighteen months after you disappeared. Said you were safe, wouldn't say more. I went round to your old flat and the landlord said the rent stopped that same week, and there was a scorch mark on the door." "Don't." "I sat him next to you at my graduation dinner." He pulled the words out fast, like a tooth. "You hated the ceremonial crowd, so I saved you the seat, and I put him beside you. And at Sian's wedding I saw what his hand did when he thought the room wasn't looking, and I told myself it wasn't mine to carry." The scar turned under her palm where it lay flat on the bar. "It wasn't." "It was everyone's. That's what I've worked out in six years with no one to tell it to." "I stayed a year after the first—" The word caught. She let it go. "We're not doing arithmetic." "No." "Your round, then." She took the bottle and poured them both, heavier than Silas would have. "Tell me the rest. Elin. Everyone said you'd marry her." "Eight years in June. She's a GP in Grangetown. There's a girl. Nell." He smiled at the wood. "She's got a temper. Won't back down in an argument with her own feet about whether shoes go on." "Whose side wins?" "Her feet's." Then, quieter: "I kept meaning to post something back. Never had an address that stayed." He unclipped the bag at his feet and set it on the bar. Criminal Law: Cases and Materials. The spine gone white, corners soft, and inside the front cover her own name in her own handwriting, R. Carter, and years of her margins marching down every page she could see. Wrong, she'd written once, twice underlined, next to some lord's reasoning. "You took this to bar school?" "Every year. You taught me half the evidence syllabus and never charged me." His thumb moved along the broken spine. "I've read your handwriting more than my wife's. That's either a confession or a eulogy. I haven't decided." She turned a page. Her younger self argued in the margins like it was breathing. "I'd forgotten I was right about that one." "You were right about most of them. That was the problem." Silas came down the bar, set a jug of water between them without comment, read the room the way he read everything, and went to flip the sign on the door. Through the glass his silhouette stood a moment in the rain, giving Soho back its privacy. "Say it, then. The speech." "I practised it in the car. Cardiff to here, every service station." He looked at the bottle instead of her. "I wanted to say I knew. I knew, and I said nothing, and when you vanished I told myself you'd gone to London because London's where people go. Not because I'd served you to the worst man at my own table and called it hospitality." The glass stopped turning under his hand. "So. I'm sorry, Rory. Six years late, and it's still not enough." She made herself look at him. The pinstripes, the wedding ring, the careful man built over the boy with the guitar who'd once failed a contracts test on purpose so she wouldn't sit at the bottom of the curve alone. "It's enough." "It isn't. But I'll take it." He stood and counted notes onto the wood; she pushed them back with two fingers. "House pour. My tab." "Carter—" "Bevan." He left the book on the bar. "It was always yours. I only borrowed the margins." At the door he stopped, one hand on the frame. "Same number. It never changed." He didn't look round. "I checked it most days." She pulled a receipt slip toward her, wrote four letters on it, and held it out. He read it. "There she is." The bell gave its small brass note and the rain took him. Silas came back down the bar, collected the glasses, nodded at the book. "Friend of yours?" "He was." She slid the casebook under the counter, next to the till, where the money lived. "He is."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.515
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1228
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount635
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas7
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
Penderyn1
Law1
Cases1
Materials1
Soho1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Penderyn"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.949
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1228
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"learned that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean18.33
std19.57
cv1.068
sampleLengths
064
16
227
34
412
544
64
753
82
910
1056
1119
1212
1341
144
154
164
1727
188
193
2032
211
221
2324
249
253
2634
273
2822
293
3041
311
3262
3313
342
3518
3618
371
3826
3937
403
412
4276
436
4438
4515
468
4711
4847
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs99
matches
0"was breathing"
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences105
ratio0.029
matches
0"Silas could handle the drunks; he'd had fifty years of practice and one good knee."
1"\"And you?\" His eyes went over her — the black hair, the apron, the bag by the sink."
2"He stood and counted notes onto the wood; she pushed them back with two fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount637
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.02197802197802198
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.7
std9.82
cv0.839
sampleLengths
014
122
228
36
412
515
64
712
89
922
105
118
124
1329
1424
152
1610
173
1823
1917
207
216
2219
2312
2422
2519
264
274
284
2924
303
318
323
3318
3414
351
361
3722
382
399
403
4125
429
433
443
457
462
4710
483
4941
77.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.49523809523809526
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then it wasn't."
1"Then, quieter: He unclipped the"
ratio0.037
34.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences54
matches
0"She kept her back to"
1"She turned with the cloth"
2"He hung his coat over"
3"He pressed somewhere along the"
4"She'd learned that the hard"
5"He turned his glass once"
6"He laughed, and the crooked"
7"His eyes went over her"
8"She wiped a glass that"
9"He leaned in over the"
10"He pulled the words out"
11"She let it go."
12"She took the bottle and"
13"He smiled at the wood"
14"His thumb moved along the"
15"She turned a page."
16"Her younger self argued in"
17"He looked at the bottle"
18"She made herself look at"
19"He stood and counted notes"
ratio0.463
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences54
matches
0"Rory stacked the last chairs"
1"The bell over the door"
2"She kept her back to"
3"Silas could handle the drunks;"
4"The voice landed in the"
5"She turned with the cloth"
6"A man stood dripping on"
7"The same crooked front tooth"
8"He hung his coat over"
9"Silas didn't ask."
10"He pressed somewhere along the"
11"Rhys studied the maps on"
12"Some doors you weren't meant"
13"She'd learned that the hard"
14"Silas set down two glasses"
15"He turned his glass once"
16"He laughed, and the crooked"
17"His eyes went over her"
18"She wiped a glass that"
19"He leaned in over the"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The pinstripes, the wedding ring, the careful man built over the boy with the guitar who'd once failed a contracts test on purpose so she wouldn't sit at the bo…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His eyes went over, the apron, the bag by the sink"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.1182%