Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GTXRP00WCA8C53SJDBGD0D

Run Details

Duration:
6m 7s
Cost:
$0.062343
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The note pinned to Rory's door had said moonrise, Richmond Park, and nothing else. It hadn't mentioned the cold, or the long dark walk from the bus stop, or the way the park went quiet the moment she left the trail. She found the stones in a hollow past Pen Ponds. Twelve of them, standing in a ring, each taller than she was. Not quarried rock — oak, gone to stone, the grain still legible in the faces of it, growth rings spiraling down their flanks. Frost furred the grass to an invisible line around the ring and stopped, as if winter had knocked and been refused. The shadow of a park bench stretched, stood up, and became Nyx. "Twelve." Rory counted them a second time, her breath smoking. "Like the hours." "Or the months." Nyx's whisper carried no fog. It never did. "Older than either." She pressed a palm to her jacket, over the pendant beneath. The gem lay cold against her sternum, its faint crimson glow drowned by nothing at all. "No warmth. Whatever this is, it isn't Hel." "Hel is young next to this." Nyx drifted along the ring, violet eyes pale in the dark. "Three nights to the solstice. The Veil runs thin when the sun stops falling, and places like this bruise through." "So we walk in." "You walk in. I slip." A thread of amusement ran through the whisper. "Try to keep up." Rory stepped between two of the stones. Sound fell off her like a coat let go — the last plane out of Heathrow, the far road, a dog barking toward Kingston, all of it snipped mid-note. Warm air moved against her face, smelling of honey and cut grass and rain that hadn't fallen yet, and under that the sesame and ginger her delivery bag had been steeping in all evening. The light came from nowhere in particular. Silver-green, the way light arrives in dreams. The frost ended in a circle at her heels. Inside the ring, wildflowers grew to her ankles. Primrose. Harebell. Foxglove spires in the dead of December, a bee asleep inside one of the bells, furred with pollen. "It's December," Rory managed. "The flowers disagree." There was no moon above the grove. She had watched one rise — a nail-paring low over the rooftops — and yet this sky held only unfamiliar stars, arranged in spirals, as if someone had raked them into place too. She dug out her phone. 11:47. She watched the screen while Nyx watched the dark. The colon between the numbers didn't blink. The battery read forty-one percent, then thirty-nine, then thirty-six. "The clock's stuck and the battery's bleeding out." "Time runs sideways in the folds between worlds. Nothing here knows how old it is. Your phone is trying to find the bottom." Rory pocketed it. Her thumb found the small crescent scar on her left wrist and worried at it. "Folds between worlds. You know this how?" Nyx crouched and laid their fingers against the soil, and for a long moment said nothing. "The ritual that took me opened into a room with this same texture. 1643." The whisper thinned. "I know the feel of a between-place the way you know the smell of your own home. That one held me for four hundred years. This one is wider." "Wider's good. Wider means room to leave." Nyx didn't answer that. Rory went back to the threshold, pulled a Golden Empress menu from her bag, and weighted it flat under a chip of fallen stone. Free delivery within two miles, glossy red, absurd among the harebells. "In case the door moves." "Doors here don't move. They stop being where you left them." "That's the same thing." "It is not." The grove widened as they walked — that was the only word for it. The far stones never came closer. New flowers unfolded from the dark ahead of them, buds splitting with small wet sounds, petals unrolling like fists relaxing. A path of pale gravel led inward, raked into spirals, and the ground pulsed warm through her boots — slow, patient, like something vast asleep beneath the blooms. Rory stepped onto the path, glanced back, and stopped. The grass she'd crushed was lifting itself upright again, blade by blade. In seconds there remained no print, no scuff, not one bent stem. "We're not leaving footprints." "Then nothing can follow us home." "That's not comforting. That's the opposite of comforting." A hawthorn grew at what she guessed was the grove's heart — guessed, because the ring of stones had thinned to a suggestion, a paler dark against the dark. Ribbons hung from every branch. Hundreds. Scraps of navy wool, silk gone stiff with age, nylon, polyester, cloth she couldn't name — some bright enough to have been tied that morning, some rotted to threads that powdered when the breeze touched them. At the roots lay offerings. A saucer of milk. A clay pot of honey with a wooden dipper. A loaf with its crusts cut away, pale as the missing moon. Candle stubs fused to saucers by their own old wax. Coins struck with kings' faces she didn't recognize, one thin as a fingernail. A pocket watch rusted open at an hour that had meant something once. A wedding band threaded onto a ribbon a hundred years younger than the ring. "People keep coming back here." Her voice dropped low without her deciding to. "Or they came once." She let that sit. The flowers nearest the hawthorn began to turn. All of them together, unhurried, faces rotating toward her the way faces would. She stopped walking; they stopped turning. "They're watching us." "They're listening." Nyx knelt among them, and a foxglove leaned into their hand — leaned, unforced, the whole stem bowing. Nyx went still in a way that had nothing to do with stillness. "It's soft." "You can feel that?" "I remember soft." The violet in their eyes banked down to embers. "I haven't touched anything since the seventeenth century that touched back." When they drew their hand away, the stem curved after it, slow as syrup. Nyx rose and put two careful steps between themselves and the flowerbed. Somewhere, water ran over stones. Chimes sounded where no chimes hung, brief and silver, then gone. Rory turned a full circle — the spiraled gravel, the turning blooms, the ribbons breathing on their branch — and found she couldn't see the entrance. No red flash of the menu. No stones. "I can't see the door anymore." "Then we're where we were going." "That is not how doors work." Nyx's form sharpened, every edge drawn in ink. "Someone is coming. Look at the dew." Frost and dew beaded the grass as far as she could see, silvered by the sourceless light, marked everywhere by nothing. No prints ahead of them, none behind. A voice came through the flowers before its owner did, clear and unhurried: "Two travelers. One who casts every shadow in this place and none of their own. One who carries a stone that has eaten somebody's heart and keeps asking it polite questions." The blooms parted along a line no wider than a woman. Silver hair spilled to her waist. Lavender eyes, ageless, moved from one of them to the other. She walked barefoot through the December dew, and the dew stayed whole — not one bead disturbed, not one blade bent. "The flowers have been expecting you since Tuesday." Rory glanced at her phone, still stuck at 11:47, then back. "It's Friday." "Not here."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"whisper"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count2
4
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"comforting"
4"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1261
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount958
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Richmond1
Park1
Pen1
Ponds1
Nyx10
Heathrow1
Kingston1
December2
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Kingston"
3"December"
globalScore0.978
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1261
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"tied that morning"
1"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean22.93
std21.35
cv0.931
sampleLengths
041
166
212
313
414
535
637
74
817
97
1077
1137
124
133
1440
1531
168
1723
1825
1916
2046
217
224
2335
245
2511
264
273
2877
2924
304
316
328
3371
3480
3513
364
374
3827
393
4035
414
4223
4326
4450
456
466
476
4815
4941
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"been refused"
1"been tied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was lifting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences114
ratio0.096
matches
0"Not quarried rock — oak, gone to stone, the grain still legible in the faces of it, growth rings spiraling down their flanks."
1"Sound fell off her like a coat let go — the last plane out of Heathrow, the far road, a dog barking toward Kingston, all of it snipped mid-note."
2"She had watched one rise — a nail-paring low over the rooftops — and yet this sky held only unfamiliar stars, arranged in spirals, as if someone had raked them into place too."
3"The grove widened as they walked — that was the only word for it."
4"A path of pale gravel led inward, raked into spirals, and the ground pulsed warm through her boots — slow, patient, like something vast asleep beneath the blooms."
5"A hawthorn grew at what she guessed was the grove's heart — guessed, because the ring of stones had thinned to a suggestion, a paler dark against the dark."
6"Scraps of navy wool, silk gone stiff with age, nylon, polyester, cloth she couldn't name — some bright enough to have been tied that morning, some rotted to threads that powdered when the breeze touched them."
7"She stopped walking; they stopped turning."
8"\"They're listening.\" Nyx knelt among them, and a foxglove leaned into their hand — leaned, unforced, the whole stem bowing."
9"Rory turned a full circle — the spiraled gravel, the turning blooms, the ribbons breathing on their branch — and found she couldn't see the entrance."
10"She walked barefoot through the December dew, and the dew stayed whole — not one bead disturbed, not one blade bent."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount735
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02040816326530612
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0027210884353741495
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean11.06
std8.01
cv0.724
sampleLengths
014
127
210
312
423
521
612
710
83
98
103
113
1211
1316
148
1517
1620
174
1813
194
207
2129
2234
237
247
259
268
271
281
2918
304
313
327
3333
345
351
369
377
389
398
4023
413
4215
437
4416
4517
4629
477
484
4924
68.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4690265486725664
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners53
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Somewhere, water ran over stones."
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences76
matches
0"It hadn't mentioned the cold,"
1"She found the stones in"
2"It never did."
3"She pressed a palm to"
4"She had watched one rise"
5"She dug out her phone."
6"She watched the screen while"
7"Her thumb found the small"
8"Her voice dropped low without"
9"She let that sit."
10"She stopped walking; they stopped"
11"She walked barefoot through the"
ratio0.158
71.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences76
matches
0"The note pinned to Rory's"
1"It hadn't mentioned the cold,"
2"She found the stones in"
3"Frost furred the grass to"
4"The shadow of a park"
5"Rory counted them a second"
6"Nyx's whisper carried no fog"
7"It never did."
8"She pressed a palm to"
9"The gem lay cold against"
10"Nyx drifted along the ring,"
11"A thread of amusement ran"
12"Rory stepped between two of"
13"Sound fell off her like"
14"The light came from nowhere"
15"The frost ended in a"
16"Foxglove spires in the dead"
17"She had watched one rise"
18"She dug out her phone."
19"She watched the screen while"
ratio0.776
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Warm air moved against her face, smelling of honey and cut grass and rain that hadn't fallen yet, and under that the sesame and ginger her delivery bag had been…"
1"She had watched one rise — a nail-paring low over the rooftops — and yet this sky held only unfamiliar stars, arranged in spirals, as if someone had raked them …"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx knelt, and a foxglove leaned into their hand — leaned, unforced, the whole stem bowing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.1875%