Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GV4JS1T4G35X4BJK46VJ96

Run Details

Duration:
7m 43s
Cost:
$0.004190
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain held the door to a hand's width, so Rory got him in pieces: a shoulder dark with rain, the ivory head of a cane, a tie the colour of wet slate. Below, the curry house vent steamed into the night, and Brick Lane hissed with taxis. "Evening, Aurora." Six days of silence from Lucien Moreau, and here he stood on Eva's landing, elegant despite the drowning, rain coming off the gutter above him in ropes. "Eva's not home." "Whitby. The coven retreat runs through Thursday." The amber eye and the black one found her through the gap. "You're house-sitting. The cat's bowl is full, and the books are alphabetised. Eva has never alphabetised anything in her life." "That's an awful deduction." "It's a Tuesday habit of yours. You tidy other people's chaos when your own won't sit still." Rain ticked off the rail between them. "Your flat above the bar has been dark since Tuesday. May I come in? I've been in this weather since Bloomsbury, and London rain has never once done me a kindness." Her thumb rested on the chain. Every sensible thing she owned told her to leave it right where it was. She slid it free and stepped back. He came in dripping. He leaned the cane against the coat hooks, and Ptolemy emerged from behind a tower of scrolls, crossed the hall, and flattened himself against Lucien's shin with a purr like a small engine. "He doesn't do that for anyone." "Hell runs warm. Cats appreciate a radiator." Lucien glanced down at the tabby. "Traitor. I fed you sardines once." Rory shut the door and shot the bottom bolt out of habit. Her hand hovered at the middle one, then took it. The top one she threw with a click that beat the weather. His gaze moved over the flat — her holdall by the sofa, a blanket folded into a square, Eva's scrolls pushed into a wall to make room. "You've been sleeping on her sofa." "Eva's sofa and I have reached terms." "You left the lamp on the timer." "You taught me the timer." "I did." He set his shoulders back. "I've hated it every night since." She pulled the tea towel off the rail and threw it at his chest. He caught it one-handed and dragged it back through his hair, and the rain-slicked order of it gave up, white-blond falling loose across his brow, and she hated that she noticed. Her delivery jacket hung off the back of a chair, the gold lettering of the Golden Empress facing the room like an accusation. "You kept the delivery work." "It's the only honest job I've got." "It's the only job you have that I couldn't corrupt." The hall light caught his hand as he lowered the towel. Palm split in a clean line from heel to fingers, blood thinned pink by rain, dripping onto Eva's floorboards. "You're bleeding on the research." "Minor." "Chair. Now." The kitchen was four steps and a bookshelf away. She swept Eva's grimoires onto the floor, hauled the first aid kit out from under the sink — Eva kept it beside the fire blanket, which explained Eva — and dragged his hand under the light above the hob. Antiseptic foamed pink. She worked it into the cut with her thumb braced on his wrist, and under her grip his pulse ran slow and even while hers kept stumbling. "Who cut you?" "Coram's safe had opinions." "Of course it did." The gash was straight, surgical, the work of a very thin blade, and she didn't ask what it had met, because she knew what lived inside the cane by the coat hooks. "Hold still." "I am still." "You're vibrating with commentary." "I'm saving it up." "The last time I stitched you, it was a knife in Bermondsey, and you bought me dinner after." "You ate like a negotiator." "I'd earned it." The bandage went around twice. She pulled the second knot tight enough to make a point, and his face gave her nothing, which made her angrier. "Six days." "You asked for six days." "I said I never wanted to see you again. You heard six days." "You'll notice I struggle with the larger numbers." She tied it off and reached past him to fill the kettle, because her hands wanted a job that wasn't hitting him. "The Wapping job." She kept her eyes on the tap. "The parcel. Tell me it was a coincidence that Evan's people were the ones who opened it." The rain and Ptolemy's scratching under the table had the room to themselves for a moment. "Coram keeps a ledger." His voice flattened into the register he used for invoices. "Names. What people paid for names. Evan sold him a page of it three weeks ago. Yours was on it." The kettle clicked on. She faced him. "Say the rest." "Coram buys names the way other men buy stamps. I took the job to burn the book. But to get it out of his safe I needed a courier his watchers would stop and search — a courier worth following. It had to be someone Evan's people would recognise on sight." His jaw worked once. "It had to be you." "Three years I've known you. Three years of your rules. Never ask a source twice. Never drink on a job. Never let anyone learn your face." Her thumb pressed the edge of the bandage flat. "And the whole time, you were writing my name into a trap." "The alternative was your name travelling without you." "You watched me walk out of your office, and you didn't call." "Chasing you felt like collecting you." "And the job?" "I put two of Silas' cars behind you and my driver on the corner. The exchange lasted four minutes. The book is ash." "And Evan?" "Is learning that Marseille has a long memory." A beat. "He won't look at a photograph of you again." A laugh came out of her with nothing kind in it. "You put my name in a room with his people and timed it." "Aurora—" "You don't get to decide what I survive." The words came out loud enough to send Ptolemy for the bedroom. Lucien didn't move. Water dripped off his sleeve onto Eva's lino, regular as a clock. "No." He rose from the chair, and the small kitchen filled with him. "I learned that at eleven, in Marseille, watching my father's people negotiate my mother's life like a line item. I have never decided for anyone. I built an entire profession on never deciding for anyone. Then there was a page with your name on it, and I burned every rule I own before lunch." "So you used me as bait." "So I used you as bait." The black eye and the amber one held hers. "And I would do it again, and I will hate myself for it with great efficiency, and none of that is what I came here to say." The kettle began its climb toward a whistle. "The night the generator died in your office." Her voice came out lower than she wanted. "You stood up. The phone rang. You sat back down." "I remember the night." "So do I." "Then hear the part I swallowed." The bandaged hand flexed at his side. "I trade in information. It's the only inheritance my father's side ever gave me — every truth in this city has a price, and I know all of them. And the one fact I have never put on a page, for any buyer, at any price, is that it's you. It has been you since the second week, when you argued with me about oysters in front of the whole table and won, and I sat there recalculating every contract I have ever written. I priced it once, out of curiosity. There isn't a number." The kettle screamed. She crossed the four steps and kissed him, one hand fisted in the wet lapel of a very expensive suit, and he made a sound low in his chest, like a man setting down something heavy he'd carried up six flights of stairs. His good hand came to her jaw. The bandaged one stayed at his side, careful, as though she were the one who'd been cut. She broke off an inch. "You're bleeding on me now." "I'm aware." "You're staying for tea." She reached behind her and shut off the hob. "And then you're going to tell me the whole ledger, page by page, every name. I decide what I survive from now on. That's the only deal on the table." "Agreed." He tucked a wet strand of black hair off her cheek, his thumb pausing over the crescent scar at her wrist without asking what it was. "All of it. Even Marseille." "Even Marseille." She took down two of Eva's mugs — one chipped, one printed with a sun Eva never used — and set them on the counter. Ptolemy stalked back in and wound around their ankles, and behind them the door held all three deadbolts against the rain.
created_at"2026-09-02T10:37:49.737Z" 9/2/2026, 10:37:49 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His jaw worked once [once]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.162
leniency0.324
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.027
93.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen94
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1526
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount779
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien4
Moreau1
Eva9
Rain1
Ptolemy4
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Rain"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Empress"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.922
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1526
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean18.84
std19.84
cv1.053
sampleLengths
048
12
227
33
439
54
655
720
87
937
106
1119
1234
1327
146
157
167
175
1813
1968
205
217
2210
2330
245
251
262
2748
2830
293
304
314
3232
332
343
354
364
3718
385
393
4026
412
425
4313
448
4522
4627
4716
4834
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs134
matches
0"wasn't hitting"
67.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences114
ratio0.026
matches
0"His gaze moved over the flat — her holdall by the sofa, a blanket folded into a square, Eva's scrolls pushed into a wall to make room."
1"She swept Eva's grimoires onto the floor, hauled the first aid kit out from under the sink — Eva kept it beside the fire blanket, which explained Eva — and dragged his hand under the light above the hob."
2"She took down two of Eva's mugs — one chipped, one printed with a sun Eva never used — and set them on the counter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount777
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.015444015444015444
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean13.39
std13.41
cv1.002
sampleLengths
033
115
22
327
43
519
620
74
824
931
106
1114
127
134
1433
156
1613
176
1812
1910
2012
2127
226
237
247
255
267
276
2814
2931
3023
315
327
3310
3411
3519
365
371
382
399
4039
413
4227
433
444
454
4632
472
483
494
56.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.38596491228070173
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her thumb rested on the"
1"She slid it free and"
2"He came in dripping."
3"He leaned the cane against"
4"Her hand hovered at the"
5"His gaze moved over the"
6"He set his shoulders back"
7"She pulled the tea towel"
8"He caught it one-handed and"
9"Her delivery jacket hung off"
10"She swept Eva's grimoires onto"
11"She worked it into the"
12"She pulled the second knot"
13"She tied it off and"
14"She kept her eyes on"
15"His voice flattened into the"
16"She faced him."
17"His jaw worked once"
18"Her thumb pressed the edge"
19"He rose from the chair,"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"The chain held the door"
1"The amber eye and the"
2"Rain ticked off the rail"
3"Her thumb rested on the"
4"Every sensible thing she owned"
5"She slid it free and"
6"He came in dripping."
7"He leaned the cane against"
8"Lucien glanced down at the"
9"Rory shut the door and"
10"Her hand hovered at the"
11"The top one she threw"
12"His gaze moved over the"
13"He set his shoulders back"
14"She pulled the tea towel"
15"He caught it one-handed and"
16"Her delivery jacket hung off"
17"The hall light caught his"
18"Palm split in a clean"
19"The kitchen was four steps"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She swept Eva's grimoires onto the floor, hauled the first aid kit out from under the sink — Eva kept it beside the fire blanket, which explained Eva — and drag…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Her thumb pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.014
leniency0.027
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.027
83.8090%