Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GV5W3NF1XKXY52HTZZ3FJR

Run Details

Duration:
5m 6s
Cost:
$0.002529
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tape across the service entrance read POLICE — KEEP OUT in three languages, and in a fourth, scrawled in marker: REALLY. Quinn ducked under it and took the stairs into the dark under Camden. Forty-one steps down, the twenty-first century gave out. Green and cream tiles wept along the arches, and a generator thudded somewhere behind her, feeding work lamps strung the length of a platform no train had served in living memory. The dead man lay at its centre, pale against the black floor, and the smell reached her before the body did — struck matches and something sweet underneath, burnt sugar with a wire of ozone in it. DS Okafor waited at the bottom of the stairs, gum working, notebook already open. "Boss. Martin Hale, thirty-four, known face, no fixed address. Survey crew for the new extension tripped over him at three this morning." "Cause of death." "Doc's provisional is cardiac arrest secondary to burns. Working theory is he cooked up, the cooker flashed, caught his shirt, and that was that. Scavengers stripped his kit before the crew arrived — no foil, no spoons, nothing." Quinn's thumb found the worn strap of her watch. 4:47. She gave the platform a long look before she gave the dead man one. Dust lay over everything, thick as felt — except for a clean oval, six feet by three, dead centre, with Hale lying in the middle of it. "Who swept the floor?" "Nobody swept—" "Someone did. Then he lay down in the middle of it and burned without a cooker, without matches, without scorching a single tile nine inches from his shirt." She crouched, gloved, lifted the hem. The burn spiralled out from his sternum, flesh charred to the ribs — and the outer face of the cotton above it sat pristine, a band logo still crisp on the chest. She turned the collar. Singed on the underside. Clean on top. "Flash fires do strange things." "Flash fires leave soot. There's none on him, none on the tiles, no accelerant, no wick, no tin." She sat back on her heels. "The fire climbed out of him, Okafor. Not onto him." Okafor's gum stopped. He wrote nothing. She rose and walked the platform edge. A line of salt, poured in one pass, ran six feet along the lip, half of it clumped where the damp had got at it. At the far end of the platform, a woman crouched at the wall with a torch between her teeth — small, round glasses fogged, red curls crushed under a hood, a leather satchel sagging with books. Chalk marks covered the tiles around her, spirals and bars, the same geometry as the burn on the dead man's chest. "The Museum sent her," Okafor said, following her look. "Kowalski. Restricted collections. We ring them about marks like these, they ring her. I'd take it as an insult to common sense if the marks weren't so strange." Quinn crossed to her. "You chalked nothing here yourself?" "Cross my heart." The woman stood, wiping her glasses on her sleeve. "These are wards. Door grammar — the kind you use to hold one side of a threshold shut. Right-handed, pressed hard, cheap chalk. Your man did this himself, and he did it in a hurry." "You've seen this hand before?" "I've seen the grammar before." She tucked a curl behind her left ear. "Not the hand." Quinn held her gaze a beat longer than politeness allowed, then turned back down the platform. "Show me his pockets." "Stripped," Okafor said. "Except—" He nodded at the tarp where the techs had laid out what little they'd found. A stub of tailor's chalk. A gold wedding band, separate. And a brass compass the size of a matchbox, green with age, wrapped in a sock. "Stripped," Quinn said, "but the ring came off his finger and got left behind. Thieves who miss gold don't miss gold." "Fingers swell." "Fingers swell. Socks don't unwrap themselves." She picked up the compass. Verdigris sat in the engraving like moss in brickwork, and around the face ran a ring of sigils — the same spirals, the same bars, chalked sixty feet away on the wall. The needle wasn't pointing north. It turned in a slow corkscrew, wobbled, and lay flat, aimed down the platform at the bricked-in arch of the north tunnel. "Voodoo tat," Okafor said. "Stall junk." The tech popped the dead man's right fist with a spatula, and something small and white rolled into the evidence tray. Bone, polished smooth, a spiral carved into it. "That's not tat." The researcher had come up quietly behind them, satchel hugged to her chest. "That's a ticket. Bone token, price-mark spiral. You don't buy one off a stall. You buy one to get into the market at all." "Which market?" She glanced at Okafor, at the tape, at the survey crew's boots at the top of the stairs. Her voice dropped. "The one that met on this platform until the moon turned Wednesday night. Then it packed and moved. It always moves. You'd need a token to have seen it, and he had one." "A market," Okafor said. "Under Camden. Right." "You'd need a token, Detective Sergeant. He had one." Quinn turned the compass in her hand. "How do you know what it sells?" The woman tucked the same curl behind her ear again. "I read." "How long since death?" "Doc says two nights minimum. Thursday, small hours." Okafor flipped his notebook closed. "Which fits a Thursday overdose." "It fits nothing." Quinn started walking, arm out, compass level. The needle dragged, swung, steadied — not at the body, not at the salt, but at the bricked arch, and it stayed there like a dog at a door. "The market left Wednesday. Hale came back Thursday to an empty station. Chalked his wards, poured his salt line, stood in the middle of the platform with a finder in his pocket, and asked a tunnel that's been bricked up since before the war to open." "Boss—" "Look at the floor." She pointed with the compass. "Every bootprint on this platform belongs to the survey crew, and it stops at the stairs. No prints to the body. No drag marks. And the dust — it's not swept, it's scoured. Pulled toward the middle, same as the air was." She nodded at the far wall, where a grey ribbon of dust drifted along the skirting toward the arch, against the draught, like the room was breathing in. "He didn't walk onto this platform. He arrived on it. The fire didn't come at him. It came through him. Whatever opened on the other side of that door didn't ask him for his token." Okafor looked at the arch, then at her, then at the arch again. "You're saying a wall killed him." "I'm saying a door did, and it hasn't closed." She pressed her bare palm flat to the mortar. Warm. Flask-of-tea warm, in a tunnel that hadn't seen a sunbeam in eighty years. She took her hand back and wiped it on her coat. The researcher had gone very still, glasses pushed up into her curls. "You've felt that before. At another scene." "Once." "Boss." Okafor held out an evidence bag, flat. "The compass goes in the bag. All of it does. This is a crime scene, not a ghost hunt." Quinn wrapped the compass back in its sock and slid it into her coat pocket. "Bag the rest. Nobody files this as an overdose. Nobody drills that wall, leans on it, or takes so much as a photograph of it with a personal phone. And a uniform stands exactly where I'm standing until I say otherwise." "The compass is evidence, Detective." "It's not evidence. It's a pointer." She looked at the arch, where the needle lay flat against the face, patient as a clock. "And it's still pointing."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She sat back [back]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.358
leniency0.717
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.038
92.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1320
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount733
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Okafor"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Okafor"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Okafor10
Hale1
Quinn8
Verdigris1
Warm1
persons
0"Okafor"
1"Hale"
2"Quinn"
3"Verdigris"
4"Warm"
places(empty)
globalScore0.818
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
48.48% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.515
wordCount1320
matches
0"not at the body, not at the salt, but at the bricked arch"
1"not at the salt, but at the bricked arch"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean28.7
std27.3
cv0.951
sampleLengths
035
176
214
322
43
538
651
74
82
977
105
1134
126
1389
1437
159
1647
175
1816
1920
2045
2121
222
2370
246
2529
2640
272
2854
297
309
3114
3212
334
3418
3585
361
37114
3819
3943
4019
411
4227
4356
445
4527
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
78.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs110
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
1"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences94
ratio0.074
matches
0"The tape across the service entrance read POLICE — KEEP OUT in three languages, and in a fourth, scrawled in marker: REALLY."
1"The dead man lay at its centre, pale against the black floor, and the smell reached her before the body did — struck matches and something sweet underneath, burnt sugar with a wire of ozone in it."
2"Dust lay over everything, thick as felt — except for a clean oval, six feet by three, dead centre, with Hale lying in the middle of it."
3"The burn spiralled out from his sternum, flesh charred to the ribs — and the outer face of the cotton above it sat pristine, a band logo still crisp on the chest."
4"At the far end of the platform, a woman crouched at the wall with a torch between her teeth — small, round glasses fogged, red curls crushed under a hood, a leather satchel sagging with books."
5"Verdigris sat in the engraving like moss in brickwork, and around the face ran a ring of sigils — the same spirals, the same bars, chalked sixty feet away on the wall."
6"The needle dragged, swung, steadied — not at the body, not at the salt, but at the bricked arch, and it stayed there like a dog at a door."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount731
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02188782489740082
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0027359781121751026
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean14.04
std12.6
cv0.897
sampleLengths
022
113
28
331
437
514
622
73
838
99
101
1114
1227
134
142
1534
1632
174
184
193
205
2124
2210
233
243
257
2625
2736
2821
299
3028
314
325
3312
3435
355
3613
373
3816
394
403
4116
425
435
4416
4521
462
4711
4832
495
80.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5161290322580645
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences54
matches
0"She gave the platform a"
1"She crouched, gloved, lifted the"
2"She turned the collar."
3"She sat back on her"
4"He wrote nothing."
5"She rose and walked the"
6"She tucked a curl behind"
7"He nodded at the tarp"
8"She picked up the compass"
9"It turned in a slow"
10"She glanced at Okafor, at"
11"Her voice dropped."
12"She pointed with the compass"
13"She nodded at the far"
14"She pressed her bare palm"
15"She took her hand back"
16"She looked at the arch,"
ratio0.315
24.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences54
matches
0"The tape across the service"
1"Quinn ducked under it and"
2"The dead man lay at"
3"DS Okafor waited at the"
4"Quinn's thumb found the worn"
5"She gave the platform a"
6"Dust lay over everything, thick"
7"She crouched, gloved, lifted the"
8"The burn spiralled out from"
9"She turned the collar."
10"She sat back on her"
11"Okafor's gum stopped."
12"He wrote nothing."
13"She rose and walked the"
14"A line of salt, poured"
15"Chalk marks covered the tiles"
16"Okafor said, following her look"
17"Quinn crossed to her."
18"The woman stood, wiping her"
19"She tucked a curl behind"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Okafor held out, flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.226
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.038
83.0355%