Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GVCM0NJYG0KCPT208Z7PB1

Run Details

Duration:
6m 34s
Cost:
$0.003040
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"If you're from downstairs, I didn't order anyth—" The door swung wide and the rest of it curdled in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain coming off him in ropes. His platinum hair had lost its parting and hung in dark ribbons across his forehead. The ivory head of his cane shone under the porch bulb like something fished out of the Thames. "Good evening, Rory." Three weeks of silence, and he led with that. Ptolemy poured himself past her ankles, a growl building low in his chest. "Your cat remembers me fondly." "He's growling at you." "He growled last time as well. Then he slept on my ledger for two hours." Lucien's gaze travelled past her shoulder to the book towers crowding the corridor. "May I come in before I ruin your friend's floor? I promise to bleed quietly." Then she saw it. His shirt clung dark at the ribs, soaked through past charcoal into black, and the hand wrapped around the cane had gone the colour of the weather. "You're bleeding." "Minimally." "Minimally is still bleeding." "And you are still angry. We are both accurate." He swayed, corrected it, and turned the correction into something like a bow. She didn't move. The scar on her wrist prickled where it met the doorframe. "They came for Malphora tonight." The name did what three weeks hadn't. It took the door out of her hand. She shot all three deadbolts behind him and made sure he heard each one. "Charming as ever." "Sit down before you fall down." The flat smelled of cumin and old paper, warmth rising through the floorboards from the curry house below. Ptolemy led the way to the sofa, tail up, traitorous. Lucien lowered himself onto the cushions and shifted a stack of Eva's journals aside with the care of a man defusing something. The first-aid tin lived under the sink, wedged between a dead plant and Eva's boundary-dispute scrolls. Rory carried it over and knelt. "Shirt." "You could buy me dinner first." "You could have knocked before coming back from the dead." He peeled off the jacket, then the shirt, folding both over the armrest out of pure habit. A slit under his ribs, shallow, obscene with blood but honest about its size. She pressed a folded towel against it and his breath went out slow through his nose. "Talk." "A man visited my office at half nine. An employee of a client. He wished to discuss a purchase made on his employer's behalf in February." Her hands stopped. "February." "Mind the elbow." "February, Lucien." "Page fifty-one." She found the tape with fingers that wouldn't behave. "You poured the good whiskey that night. You left me alone with your desk for four minutes. Four — I counted, I was nervous, so I counted. Your ledger sat open like it had been laid out for me. A collector I'd heard your voice drop for. Next to the name: Malphora. Cardiff. Twenty-five. A crescent scar, left wrist. A courier for Yu-Fei's, of all things, listed like a line of stock." She pressed the pad down harder than the wound deserved. "What was I meant to think?" He took the pain the way he took most things, without spending more expression than the matter required. "You could have asked." "You watched me go. You held the door." "The alternative was answering you, and the answer was not for sale." Ptolemy abandoned her knee for the sofa, kneaded Lucien's thigh twice, and coiled into a purr. "Traitor." "He always had taste." She tied off the first loop of bandage. "You've been checking on me." "You left the rooms above Silas' bar owing a month's rent. Yu-Fei's nephew carries your delivery route and swears like a gargoyle about the hills of Highgate. I listen. It is what I do." "That's surveillance, not friendship." "It is the only form of it I was taught." The bandage tightened under her hands. "In January—" "In January, a client paid me to find a woman called Malphora." His voice dropped into the register she'd heard him use on men with knives. "I found you first. Then I built them a ghost. A girl from Marseille, dead of fever in 2009. I gave her your city, your scar, your trade, and a paper trail five years deep. They bought her the way people buy anything from me — without asking where the price ends." "And if they dig into her?" "The ghost holds. Ghosts are my best work." "But you let me walk out of that office believing you'd priced me." "Yes." She sat back on her heels. Rain drove against the window and the lamplight held everything in a small gold circle, books and scrolls and the two of them. "Why?" "Because telling you meant itemising it." "Itemise anyway." "Ten years of favours. Three debts I would rather have died than call in — one of them I did call in. A phone call to Marseille I had hoped never to make." His voice stayed level the way a river stays level over something drowned. "Information is only worth what it costs the seller, Rory. I have never spent so much on anything." "Then why not one sentence at that door? You had four minutes and a ledger, and when you came back in you stood at that desk like a man counting change, and you poured, and you didn't kiss me." He went still in a way that made the whole flat pay attention. "I was buying time to say one thing that wasn't a transaction." "You had four minutes." "You had three weeks." The towel in her hand had gone warm and heavy. She reached for the tape and his fingers closed around her wrist — the left one — thumb settling over the crescent scar. "The ghost had my scar." "The scar was the only part of you I was certain I remembered correctly." Up close, the lamplight gave her both his eyes at once, amber and black, and being looked at twice by him had always felt like a verdict and a pardon issued together. Her pulse knocked against his thumb, and there was no way to pretend it was the bandage. She took her hand back and stood. The loss of his touch read on her face before she could arrange it into something neutral. "That's not a sentence. That's a price tag with better lighting." He rose as well, steadier now, collecting the cane. "The client will re-count by tomorrow. When he does, he looks for the original. I want you somewhere with fewer books and more exits before morning." "You came all this way to fire me from my own life." "I came all this way because your name was in my ledger and I wanted—" He stopped. "You wanted." "Four languages, and not one of them has ever helped me with that sentence." Ptolemy slept on the warm dent Lucien had left in the cushions. Downstairs, the curry house clattered toward its last hour of service, and the rain kept up its work on the glass. "You said there were four more weeks of it." She pulled the blanket off the armchair and dropped it in his lap, blood and all. "The truth." "I did." "Then start with the night you didn't kiss me."
created_at"2026-09-02T10:42:13.148Z" 9/2/2026, 10:42:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.197
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen84
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1231
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount605
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Thames1
Eva2
Lucien5
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Thames"
globalScore1
windowScore1
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like a bow"
1"felt like a verdict and a pardon issued"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1231
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean16.2
std18.42
cv1.137
sampleLengths
08
113
246
33
49
513
65
74
843
931
102
111
124
1322
1414
155
1615
1714
183
196
2050
2122
221
236
2410
2547
261
2726
284
293
302
312
3297
3318
344
358
3612
3716
381
394
4013
4134
424
4310
448
4578
466
478
4813
491
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"being looked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs96
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences101
ratio0.01
matches
0"She reached for the tape and his fingers closed around her wrist — the left one — thumb settling over the crescent scar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount605
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.019834710743801654
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean12.19
std12.05
cv0.989
sampleLengths
08
113
213
315
418
53
69
713
85
94
1028
1115
124
1327
142
151
164
1722
183
1911
205
217
228
2314
243
256
2618
2710
2822
2916
306
311
326
3310
3417
3514
3616
371
3826
393
401
413
422
432
449
4582
466
4718
484
498
63.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42574257425742573
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners43
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Then she saw it."
ratio0.022
24.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences45
matches
0"His platinum hair had lost"
1"His shirt clung dark at"
2"He swayed, corrected it, and"
3"She didn't move."
4"It took the door out"
5"She shot all three deadbolts"
6"He peeled off the jacket,"
7"She pressed a folded towel"
8"Her hands stopped."
9"She found the tape with"
10"She pressed the pad down"
11"He took the pain the"
12"She tied off the first"
13"His voice dropped into the"
14"She sat back on her"
15"His voice stayed level the"
16"He went still in a"
17"She reached for the tape"
18"Her pulse knocked against his"
19"She took her hand back"
ratio0.489
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"The door swung wide and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"His platinum hair had lost"
3"The ivory head of his"
4"Ptolemy poured himself past her"
5"Lucien's gaze travelled past her"
6"His shirt clung dark at"
7"He swayed, corrected it, and"
8"She didn't move."
9"The scar on her wrist"
10"The name did what three"
11"It took the door out"
12"She shot all three deadbolts"
13"The flat smelled of cumin"
14"Ptolemy led the way to"
15"Lucien lowered himself onto the"
16"The first-aid tin lived under"
17"Rory carried it over and"
18"He peeled off the jacket,"
19"A slit under his ribs,"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He went still in a way that made the whole flat pay attention."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.016
leniency0.033
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.033
85.9303%