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Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GVRPFJ9ZFXW8QTTQSJJ8ZV
Run Details
Model:
Z.AI GLM 5.3 (Reasoning, Max)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
6m 20s
Cost:
$0.096370
Provider:
Z.AI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
87.41%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
27.05%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
64.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
80.32%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
70.60%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
68.43%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
93.2607%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Three knocks, even as a metronome. Nobody knocked like that.
Eva rattled the letterbox and
swore, the postman leaned on the bell, and the curry house below never climbed the stairs at all.
I had the chain off
and the door swinging wide before my brain caught up with my hands.
Lucien Moreau stood in the
corridor, charcoal suit immaculate, platinum hair swept back from a face the strip light did no favours to, one eye amber, one black as spilled ink.
He looked like a wedding
invitation with a knife hidden in it. "Rory." I shoved the door.
His cane slid into the
gap, ivory handle braced against the frame, and the wood stopped dead. No strain anywhere in him. "Ballsy way to lose a cane." "It has survived ruder welcomes."
His gaze slid past my
shoulder, into the flat. "Your kettle." Behind me, the kettle started its climb towards a scream. "Stay there."
I shut the door to
slip the chain free, turned back to open it an inch and tell him exactly where to go, and found the corridor empty. The kitchen window stood open. The curtain breathed.
He was already at the
hob, lifting the kettle off the flame with one of Eva's tea towels folded over his palm like a maître d'. "You left the fire escape unlatched." "I don't leave windows unlatched." "You do, when Eva's in Dublin and you sleep badly."
I took the bread knife
off the drainer. Not much of a weapon. Good
weight
, though, and Eva's kitchen ran short on options. "How long have you known where I sleep?" "Since the night you moved in above Silas." "Seven months of nothing, and you've been checking my windows." "Keeping collectors off your corners. There's a difference. You're welcome, by the by."
Ptolemy chose that moment to
abandon every principle he had.
He poured out from behind
a tower of research folders, crossed the kitchen, and wove figure-eights around Lucien's ankles, purring like a moped. "Traitor." "Animals favour honest monsters. It's liars they mind." "Then he can hiss at both of us."
Brick Lane hummed up through
the floorboards, cumin and frying onions and a burst of laughter from the dining room below.
Every surface of Eva's flat
wore paper.
Journals, scrolls, index cards in
a dozen different hands. When I cat-sat, I slept on a camp bed in a nest of someone else's obsession, and the place smelled of dust and pencil shavings.
Tonight it smelled of him
as well.
Bergamot over woodsmoke, and under
that, faintly, scorched cloth.
I made two mugs of
tea because my hands were on autopilot and my hands had always liked him. I hated them for it.
I set his down on
the counter, out of easy reach, and kept the knife. "You're bleeding on Eva's grout."
He glanced at his split
knuckles as though they belonged to a colleague. "Grout forgives. May I sit?" "No." I moved past him anyway, because standing by the door
felt like standing by a fire exit, and
shot all three deadbolts out of habit. Eva's rules. Even for him. "Seven months, Lucien. Not a note. Not a lawyer. And now you knock like a metronome and climb through my window to talk about, what, old times?" "The bell."
My hand knew what it
was doing
before I did. The bread knife came up between us, steady, and I let it. "I delivered your bell. Job finished. Then your masked friends folded you into the dark and I went home. End of story." "Is that the version you tell the cat?" "It's the version that's true."
He reached into his breast
pocket. The knife tracked him across the room.
He raised an eyebrow at
it, amused, and laid a small thing on the counter between the mugs. A ribbon. Green cotton, scorched at one end to a hard black lip. "I tied that." "Left-handed. A granny knot, doubled."
He said it the way
other men describe wine. "I took it out of a Tithe-man's fist in Camden tonight. He was spread across three postcodes, so he kept his opinions to himself. The fence he'd visited was more talkative." "I sold that bell fair and square." "You sold a story to a fence who owes me four favours. He'd have bought the moon landing." "Whose bell is it, Lucien?" He looked at me then, properly, both eyes, and the amber one had gone still. "My father's." The curry smell couldn't
quite cover the silence
. "You let them drag you into the dark for a relic." "I let them take the thief they came for." "You were the broker." "I was the thief. The client behind the cut-out, the job, the fee, the lie that hired you. All mine." A pause, tidy as a bow tie. "Iron answers to blood in Avaros. The bell would have burned any hand that owed my father anything. I scoured London for a thief who owed him nothing. There was exactly one, and she had blue eyes and a delivery job." "So everything, the route through Southwark, the whole job, was scaffolding." "The stairwell wasn't scaffolding." "Don't." The knife point dipped, came back up. "You kissed me in that stairwell. Less than a day later I was on my knees on wet cobbles with a claw on my neck, and you told them I was nothing. You said rien. Like the word was cheap." "I said what would make them drop the leash."
His voice never rose
. It never had to. "Avaros collects debts, not couriers. If they had believed you mattered to me, they would have taken you instead, and my father is not gentle with the things I love. I gave them the only lie that let you run." "Say it again without the if." "Rory." "Out loud, Lucien. One word for what I was. Any word. Go on." He was quiet for the length of a whole breath. The black eye drank the light. The amber one did something worse. It warmed. "In my father's court, spoken things become owed things. Every word I have ever said aloud, he has collected. I've paid for my sentences my whole life, and I won't put you on that bill." "That is the most French way of saying nothing I have ever heard." "You cut your hair." "It gets in the delivery bag." "I liked it long." "I liked you." The words fell out of me like a dropped tray. Somewhere below, a tandoor clanged. Ptolemy washed a paw on a stack of scrolls, elegant and unbothered, and Lucien Moreau looked at me the way a starving man looks through a bakery window. "Wrong tense." "It's the only safe one." He moved. One step, quiet for a man with a cane, and his fingers closed around my left wrist. Not the knife hand. The other one. His thumb crossed the small crescent scar, slow, reading it. "A door did this. Cardiff. You were nine, carrying a cat you'd been told not to carry." "You've read my file." "I wrote your file." "Then you know why I left. I've done one liar already. I know the steps. He hummed while he lied. You fold your cuffs." "He lied to keep you. I lied to let you go. Chérie, those are not the same steps." The word undid something small and load-bearing in my chest. Up close, his split knuckles hovered an inch from my jaw without touching. My
pulse
ticked in my wrists like a countdown. He leaned in. I stood my ground, which was a decision, and kept my eyes open, which was a lie, because my lids had plans of their own. The bell tolled. No clapper, no strike, no sound the air carried. It arrived through the floor instead, through the soles of my feet and up my shins, and settled in my back teeth. Both mugs shivered into rings. Ptolemy's tail bottled to twice its size and he vanished under the camp bed with a yowl. I wrenched back from Lucien, crossed to the shelf where the biscuit tin sat between a first aid kit and Volume II of something in Greek, and dug through the kibble. The bell came up wrapped in a Golden Empress tea towel. Fist-sized, black iron, dented, no clapper. Warm as a fresh loaf. "Take it." I held it out at arm's length, the whole thing between us. "Take it and vanish again." He stepped back. Lucien Moreau, who had never once refused to take anything. "It would know my blood. The last relative who touched it burned down to the wedding ring." He nodded at the tea towel, at my hand inside it. "It isn't ringing because it's been found. It's counting. One toll, one of my father's collectors across the river. It rang twice before I reached Brick Lane." "That was the third." "Yes." Below us, the curry house door chimed. The same note. Exactly the same note. The laughter in the dining room stopped as though a hand had covered it. Boots on the stairs. Slow. Patient. Even. Three knocks landed on the door of the flat. Even as a metronome. The first deadbolt slid back on its own. Click. The second. "Rory." The ivory handle came off the cane with a quarter turn, and the blade that slid free was thin as a pencil and drinking the kitchen light. "Behind me. Now." The chain hung loose by my hand, useless. The third.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
65
tagDensity
0.108
leniency
0.215
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1589
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
87.41%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1589
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"weight"
count
1
1
word
"eyebrow"
count
1
2
word
"silence"
count
1
3
word
"pulse"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"eyebrow"
2
"silence"
3
"pulse"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
93
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
93
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
150
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
41
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1589
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
9
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
21
wordCount
940
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
0.53
worstName
"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau
3
Eva
5
Lucien
5
Lane
1
Volume
1
Greek
1
Golden
1
Empress
1
Ptolemy
3
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Eva"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Lane"
1
"Greek"
2
"Golden"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
27.05%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
61
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"looked like a wedding invitation with a k"
1
"felt like standing by a fire exit, and"
2
"quite cover the silence"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1589
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
150
matches
0
"chose that moment"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
93
mean
17.09
std
16.11
cv
0.943
sampleLengths
0
33
1
18
2
43
3
1
4
26
5
6
6
16
7
10
8
2
9
28
10
8
11
26
12
6
13
5
14
10
15
23
16
8
17
8
18
10
19
13
20
33
21
1
22
8
23
8
24
62
25
16
26
39
27
5
28
13
29
5
30
1
31
30
32
27
33
2
34
22
35
22
36
8
37
5
38
31
39
13
40
3
41
45
42
7
43
18
44
5
45
15
46
2
47
8
48
11
49
9
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
93
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
143
matches
0
"was doing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
150
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
721
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
20
adverbRatio
0.027739251040221916
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.005547850208044383
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
150
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
150
mean
10.59
std
9.1
cv
0.859
sampleLengths
0
6
1
4
2
23
3
18
4
31
5
12
6
1
7
4
8
17
9
5
10
6
11
14
12
2
13
10
14
2
15
28
16
5
17
3
18
26
19
6
20
5
21
10
22
8
23
5
24
10
25
8
26
8
27
10
28
13
29
10
30
23
31
1
32
8
33
8
34
21
35
7
36
9
37
25
38
7
39
9
40
19
41
5
42
15
43
5
44
13
45
5
46
1
47
25
48
2
49
3
64.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.42
totalSentences
150
uniqueOpeners
63
80.32%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"Somewhere below, a tandoor clanged."
1
"Exactly the same note."
ratio
0.024
70.60%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
31
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"I had the chain off"
1
"He looked like a wedding"
2
"I shoved the door."
3
"His cane slid into the"
4
"His gaze slid past my"
5
"I shut the door to"
6
"He was already at the"
7
"I took the bread knife"
8
"He poured out from behind"
9
"I made two mugs of"
10
"I hated them for it."
11
"I set his down on"
12
"He glanced at his split"
13
"I moved past him anyway,"
14
"My hand knew what it"
15
"He reached into his breast"
16
"He raised an eyebrow at"
17
"He said it the way"
18
"He looked at me then,"
19
"His voice never rose"
ratio
0.373
68.43%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
65
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"Nobody knocked like that."
1
"Eva rattled the letterbox and"
2
"I had the chain off"
3
"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4
"He looked like a wedding"
5
"I shoved the door."
6
"His cane slid into the"
7
"His gaze slid past my"
8
"I shut the door to"
9
"The kitchen window stood open."
10
"The curtain breathed."
11
"He was already at the"
12
"I took the bread knife"
13
"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
14
"He poured out from behind"
15
"Brick Lane hummed up through"
16
"Every surface of Eva's flat"
17
"Journals, scrolls, index cards in"
18
"Tonight it smelled of him"
19
"Bergamot over woodsmoke, and under"
ratio
0.783
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
2
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"Even for him."
1
"Even as a metronome."
ratio
0.024
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
35
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"He glanced at his split knuckles as though they belonged to a colleague."
1
"I stood my ground, which was a decision, and kept my eyes open, which was a lie, because my lids had plans of their own."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
7
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
65
tagDensity
0.015
leniency
0.031
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
93.2607%