Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GVSSAYWFPJVK0W2V065N25

Run Details

Duration:
3m 47s
Cost:
$0.001675
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven's Nest bled into the rain like a bruise on the black face of Soho. Harlow Quinn stood in a doorway across Frith Street, collar up, coffee gone cold in her hand, and watched the alley door three weeks of surveillance had taught her to care about. 23:31. The worn leather strap of her watch was dark with water against her left wrist. The door opened. Tomás Herrera stepped out with a trauma bag slung over one shoulder, hunched into the rain like it owed him money. Curly hair flattened to his skull, bag clutched the way a man clutches a child. He looked both ways — not for traffic — then moved north at pace. Quinn gave him half a block. It was discipline, not mercy. Eighteen years of it, drilled into her the way the Met drills nothing else: patience, angles, the arithmetic of a tail. Herrera was the thread that had survived every tug. He left the Nest after the bad nights. He carried the bag. Nobody bled out in Soho on a Tuesday and walked into A&E with no paperwork unless somebody had stitched them first, and nobody stitched them for free. He clocked her at Seven Dials. She knew the exact moment — a hitch in his stride, the small recalibration of a man who has done this before — and then he simply ran. Rain came down in ropes. Quinn took off after him, boots hammering the flooded pavement, past a shuttered bookmaker, through a cut between a wine bar and a chiropodist where the gutters ran like streams. Herrera was fast, but he wasn't a runner; he was a man who knew the geometry of the city, every alley that doubled back, every kerb that would trip an unwary pursuer. He hurled a sandwich board behind him without breaking stride, apologised — actually apologised — to a woman he shoulder-checked near Shaftesbury Avenue, Lo siento, perdone, and kept going. She caught him at a recessed doorway off Tottenham Court Road. Got two fingers into his collar, wrenching him around, and for one second they were chest to chest in the dry dark under the shop awning, his warm brown eyes wide and afraid, olive skin bloodless, breath coming fast. He didn't hit her. That was the thing she'd remember later. A man fighting for his freedom, and he didn't hit her — just twisted, dropped his weight, and tore himself loose with a sound of ripping canvas. Something small and pale jumped from his torn pocket and skittered away across the wet paving stones. Herrera glanced at it, glanced at her coming in low, and made a choice. "Keep it," he said, in an accent that had crossed an ocean and thirty years of London winters. "Do yourself a favour, señora. Don't use it." Then he was gone, down the station steps, and Quinn dropped to one knee and found the thing in the lamplight: a disc of bone, small as a two-pound coin, carved with a spiral that seemed to go on past the edge of it. It was warm. That bothered her more than anything else so far. Nothing on a London street at midnight had any business being warm. She pocketed it and ran down into the Underground after him. The northbound Northern Line was the usual midnight disaster — a judder of sickly light, a few drunks, a man singing something mournful about a woman named Delilah. Herrera stood at the far end of the carriage with his bag, watching her openly now, as if the race were a formality. She stood her ground and let him look. When the train stopped at Camden Town he was through the doors before the chime finished, and she went up the stairs behind him, her Airwave set hissing into pure dead static somewhere around the second landing, the way it always did underground, the way she told herself it always did. The rain was harder above ground. Camden High Street wore its neon like war paint, all of it running. Herrera turned up Chalk Farm Road with the steadiness of a man who could see a finish line, past the lock shops and the closed market stalls, and stopped — she flattened herself behind a skip three doors back — in front of a bricked-up arch squeezed between a phone repair shop and a fried chicken place. A ghost of a sign above it, paint worn to shadow: SOUTH KENTISH TOWN. A station that hadn't stopped a train in a hundred years. He rapped the brick. Three, pause, two. A section of wall she'd have sworn was Victorian masonry swung inward on oiled hinges, and light the colour of bone spilled out. A figure filled the gap — tall, too tall, in a long coat, holding a lantern that cast no shadow she could find. Herrera dug through his torn pockets, said something low and urgent, and then, with the air of a man paying a ransom, lifted a chain over his own head. The medallion. Saint Christopher, she thought, watching him surrender it into a grey, wrong-jointed hand. The patron saint of travellers, paying a toll at a door. The tall thing in the doorway weighed the medallion in its palm, nodded once, and Herrera slipped inside. The wall began to swing shut. Quinn stepped out of the dark. The lantern turned toward her. The face above it was a face the way a mask is a face, and its eyes had the flat shine of pond water. She held up the bone token between two fingers, the way you'd hold a warrant card, and kept her breathing even, and her voice flat. "I'm following the man with the bag." The head tilted. Rain ran off the brim of a hat she hadn't noticed it wearing. "Token's good," it said, in a voice like gravel poured through water. "You are not." "Then we're even." For three full seconds, nothing moved but the rain. Her radio was static. Her backup was a mile and a law away. Her watch said 23:58, and above the rooftops, through a tear in the cloud, the full moon showed itself like an eye opening — and she understood, with the cold, sliding certainty of eighteen years of instinct, that this door was only here tonight, and that some doors did not open twice. The last time she had stood at a threshold like this, DS Morris had been alive. She remembered his torch spinning across wet cobblestones, the beam catching things she had never told the review board she saw, and three years of nothing since. No answers. Just threads, and this was one, and it was pulling. "Token is the law," the gatekeeper said at last, stepping aside. "The law stops at the bottom of the stairs." "I'll bear that in mind." The passage went down in a tight helix, brick sweating on both sides, and the air changed halfway — dry, warm, smelling of tallow and hot iron, of animals and old paper. The static in her earpiece died to true silence. She took the Glock's grip once, feeling the weight of it like a promise, and let it go. The passage opened onto a platform. An abandoned one — faded enamel signage, a mosaic of peacocks gone grey, a warning lettered in flaking paint: MIND THE GAP, worn down over the decades to IND THE GAP. But below the platform, filling the dead track bed as far as the tunnel's black throat, a market burned. Hundreds of lanterns. Stalls of draped silk and hanging meat and glassware that moved when nothing touched it. A crowd — if it was a crowd — shifting and murmuring like a hive inside a bell jar, and overhead, impossible, a soft white glow through a dome of brick that fell across everything like moonlight. Like the moon itself, dragged below the earth. She found Herrera thirty feet down the platform, bag on his shoulder, watching her over the heads of the stalls. He didn't run. He just shook his head once, slow, and said something she couldn't hear, and she was almost certain it wasn't a threat. Behind her, the wall swung shut with a sound like a swallowed breath. Quinn stepped off the platform edge into the light, and her watch — the last honest thing down here — ticked against her pulse.
created_at"2026-09-02T10:49:24.582Z" 9/2/2026, 10:49:24 AM
model"z-ai/glm-5.3-flash-20260826"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency701
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time226672
tokens_prompt888
tokens_completion7110
native_tokens_prompt819
native_tokens_completion6454
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning4703
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.001674925
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.19.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1788346164-o9tVWM2kXpbxD2Q32tNH"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1788346164-cvnZPBq2MA84lcFqIVH2"
upstream_id"2026090218492454b1c7916fbe425d"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"8e9fe48b-2f91-41c3-a8a7-e4a93a8c4ff0"
id"2026090218492454b1c7916fbe425d"
is_byokfalse
latency701
model_permaslug"z-ai/glm-5.3-flash-20260826"
provider_name"Z.AI"
status200
total_cost0.001674925
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Z.AI"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"race"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"mosaic"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"race"
2"silence"
3"mosaic"
4"silk"
5"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
2"watch "
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1413
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1370
uniqueNames32
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Quinn6
Frith1
Street2
Herrera9
Met1
Tuesday1
Seven1
Dials1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Lo1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road2
London2
Underground1
Northern1
Line1
Delilah1
Camden2
Town1
Airwave1
High1
Chalk1
Farm1
Victorian1
Christopher1
Morris1
Glock1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Quinn"
3"Herrera"
4"Met"
5"Line"
6"Delilah"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
9"Glock"
places
0"Soho"
1"Frith"
2"Street"
3"Seven"
4"Shaftesbury"
5"Avenue"
6"Tottenham"
7"Court"
8"Road"
9"London"
10"Underground"
11"Camden"
12"Town"
13"High"
14"Chalk"
15"Farm"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"spiral that seemed to go on past the edge of it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1413
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean47.1
std36.09
cv0.766
sampleLengths
052
116
253
380
434
596
6105
714
826
968
1011
11110
12101
137
14101
1524
166
1754
187
1931
203
2174
2255
2320
245
2559
26119
2745
2813
2924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences90
ratio0.144
matches
0"He looked both ways — not for traffic — then moved north at pace."
1"She knew the exact moment — a hitch in his stride, the small recalibration of a man who has done this before — and then he simply ran."
2"Herrera was fast, but he wasn't a runner; he was a man who knew the geometry of the city, every alley that doubled back, every kerb that would trip an unwary pursuer."
3"He hurled a sandwich board behind him without breaking stride, apologised — actually apologised — to a woman he shoulder-checked near Shaftesbury Avenue, Lo siento, perdone, and kept going."
4"A man fighting for his freedom, and he didn't hit her — just twisted, dropped his weight, and tore himself loose with a sound of ripping canvas."
5"The northbound Northern Line was the usual midnight disaster — a judder of sickly light, a few drunks, a man singing something mournful about a woman named Delilah."
6"Herrera turned up Chalk Farm Road with the steadiness of a man who could see a finish line, past the lock shops and the closed market stalls, and stopped — she flattened herself behind a skip three doors back — in front of a bricked-up arch squeezed between a phone repair shop and a fried chicken place."
7"A figure filled the gap — tall, too tall, in a long coat, holding a lantern that cast no shadow she could find."
8"Her watch said 23:58, and above the rooftops, through a tear in the cloud, the full moon showed itself like an eye opening — and she understood, with the cold, sliding certainty of eighteen years of instinct, that this door was only here tonight, and that some doors did not open twice."
9"The passage went down in a tight helix, brick sweating on both sides, and the air changed halfway — dry, warm, smelling of tallow and hot iron, of animals and old paper."
10"An abandoned one — faded enamel signage, a mosaic of peacocks gone grey, a warning lettered in flaking paint: MIND THE GAP, worn down over the decades to IND THE GAP."
11"A crowd — if it was a crowd — shifting and murmuring like a hive inside a bell jar, and overhead, impossible, a soft white glow through a dome of brick that fell across everything like moonlight."
12"Quinn stepped off the platform edge into the light, and her watch — the last honest thing down here — ticked against her pulse."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1356
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"shoulder-checked near Shaftesbury"
1"grey, wrong-jointed hand."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.022861356932153392
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004424778761061947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean15.7
std12.11
cv0.772
sampleLengths
020
132
21
315
43
521
615
714
86
95
1021
119
128
134
1427
156
1628
175
1830
1932
2029
2111
2239
234
247
2527
2617
2714
2818
298
3044
313
329
3312
3411
3528
3623
378
3851
396
4013
4157
4214
4311
444
453
4623
4723
4829
492
56.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4157303370786517
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners37
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then he was gone, down"
1"Just threads, and this was"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences81
matches
0"He looked both ways —"
1"It was discipline, not mercy."
2"He left the Nest after"
3"He carried the bag."
4"He clocked her at Seven"
5"She knew the exact moment"
6"He hurled a sandwich board"
7"She caught him at a"
8"He didn't hit her."
9"he said, in an accent"
10"It was warm."
11"She pocketed it and ran"
12"She stood her ground and"
13"He rapped the brick."
14"She held up the bone"
15"it said, in a voice"
16"Her radio was static."
17"Her backup was a mile"
18"Her watch said 23:58, and"
19"She remembered his torch spinning"
ratio0.296
27.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences81
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Harlow Quinn stood in a"
2"The worn leather strap of"
3"The door opened."
4"Tomás Herrera stepped out with"
5"He looked both ways —"
6"Quinn gave him half a"
7"It was discipline, not mercy."
8"Herrera was the thread that"
9"He left the Nest after"
10"He carried the bag."
11"Nobody bled out in Soho"
12"He clocked her at Seven"
13"She knew the exact moment"
14"Rain came down in ropes."
15"Quinn took off after him,"
16"Herrera was fast, but he"
17"He hurled a sandwich board"
18"She caught him at a"
19"He didn't hit her."
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She knew the exact moment — a hitch in his stride, the small recalibration of a man who has done this before — and then he simply ran."
1"Got two fingers into his collar, wrenching him around, and for one second they were chest to chest in the dry dark under the shop awning, his warm brown eyes wi…"
2"Then he was gone, down the station steps, and Quinn dropped to one knee and found the thing in the lamplight: a disc of bone, small as a two-pound coin, carved …"
3"Herrera turned up Chalk Farm Road with the steadiness of a man who could see a finish line, past the lock shops and the closed market stalls, and stopped — she …"
4"She remembered his torch spinning across wet cobblestones, the beam catching things she had never told the review board she saw, and three years of nothing sinc…"
5"A crowd — if it was a crowd — shifting and murmuring like a hive inside a bell jar, and overhead, impossible, a soft white glow through a dome of brick that fel…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.2668%