Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GW3GN92CSB7BRXXTYE5E0B

Run Details

Duration:
8m 33s
Cost:
$0.004591
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had owned Frith Street since four, and by twenty to eleven the pavement had turned to black glass, the Nest's green sign bleeding across every puddle in long ribbons. Rory shouldered through the side door with her delivery bag still breathing ginger and fryer oil, hung her wet jacket on the hook by the till, and held her hands up to the warmth like a woman surrendering. "Carter." Silas didn't look up from the glass he was polishing, though the cloth slowed around the rim and the silver signet on his right hand caught the light. "Kitchen's shut. I can offer you pickled onions and my sympathy." "Water. I've eaten my weight in salt and pepper squid for a man in Marylebone who tips in coppers." He slid a glass across. She took the stool under the till and cracked the surface tension of the water with one finger, and that was when she noticed the woman at the far end of the bar. Camel coat folded over the seat beside her. Dark hair cut clean at the jaw. A watch that caught the light every time she lifted her glass, and set it down again without drinking. "Ror." The name crossed the room before Rory could decide it was meant for someone else. Same voice. Lower. The Cardiff sanded off it. But she knew it the way she knew songs from two notes. Eva Llewellyn. The girl who had bleached stripes into her hair over a halls sink now wore it black and severe, and the old laugh lines had company — finer ones, drawn by something with less fun in it. "Christ on a bike." "Hello to you too." Eva came down the bar with her coat over her arm like it might be reclaimed. "I saw the green light from the corner and thought, that's a place that won't ask a woman questions at half ten." "It's Soho. Nobody asks questions. That's the whole economy." "Snakebite, then." Two fingers went up toward the optics. "Both of us. Blackcurrant in each." Rory stared. "You remembered that?" "I remember everything. It's the whole job." Silas built the drinks without comment and set them down. "On the house. The first snakebite in this establishment is a cultural service." He moved back toward the optics with the small hitch of a man whose left knee had withdrawn from the conversation, and made a show of counting bottles he had counted an hour ago. Eva wrapped both hands around her glass and didn't drink. Rory drank hers. The blackcurrant bloomed up through the lager, sweet and bruise-dark, and it was the union bar and mock results and the smell of a rented caravan all at once. "Who's the man with the pigeon?" Eva nodded at the wall of black-and-white photographs. "No idea. They came with the lease." "They're decent. Hung badly. Whoever put them up hung them to watch the door, not to be looked at." "You'll fit right in." "Three years." She let it sit. "Four." "It was three. You texted when I moved in here." "That was a text. Texts don't count. That's the whole point of them." "Then three years and a text." Eva's mouth did something between a smile and a wince. "Four since Porthcawl. Three since London. I've been counting both. I never told anyone the numbers." Her eyes went over Rory, over the bag slumped against the stool. "And you? Still delivering?" "For the Golden Empress. Chinese, off Tottenham Court Road. I live upstairs from here, actually." "Upstairs." Eva glanced at the ceiling, then at Silas's back. "Above a pub." "Above the landlord. The pub's downstairs and it's closed." "He looked at my hands when he took my card." "He looks at everyone's. He'll look at yours again on your way out. So tell me what you do that pays for the coat and teaches you to count like that." "Vetting. Due diligence. Somebody wants to buy somebody, I find out who they actually are before anyone signs." "Are they ever who they say they are?" "One in ten. It's why the money's good. People are mostly debts wearing suits." "And you like it." Eva turned her glass on its coaster, a degree at a time. "I'm good at it. That's not the same animal. I sit in car parks and I can tell a man's second phone by the way he holds the first one." A shrug. "You can get very good at the wrong thing, and the money doesn't care, and the years go into the till like everything else." Rory's eyes caught on the phone beside her friend's glass. Face down, and along its top edge, a strip of silver tape laid across the camera lens. "Your camera." "Hm?" "You used to take pictures of everything. Your mum's caravan. The chips. The seagull." "Porthcawl." "He bit you." "He bit everyone. It was his whole personality." Her thumb found the tape and pressed it flat. "The people I work for don't like cameras. Mine included. You stop noticing that you've stopped." Rory saw the watch again then. Heavy. Plain gold. Old Eva had never worn one; she'd called a watch a boss on your wrist. "You wear a watch." "I live in time zones. I like knowing what time it is everywhere I'm not." There was nowhere to put that, so Rory drank instead. Silas put fresh mats under their glasses without being asked, which in his language meant stay. "I used to rehearse this." Eva said it to the middle distance, past Rory's shoulder, at the maps of places neither of them had gone. "On planes. Every year. Sorry came out in different shapes. A postcard from Changi. Your favourite biscuits, which I never posted, because I'd lost your address, except I hadn't. I'd built a story where you were furious with me, because furious was easier than—" "Eva." "I should have come to Cardiff two years before I did." Ice settled somewhere behind the bar. The fridge hummed. "I saw your wrist at Hannah's wedding. You said bike chain, and I believed you, because I wanted to, because you'd have said anything with him in the room. And I stood there eating canapés for four more hours and told myself a bike story is a bike story." Rory's thumb went to the crescent on her left wrist. "It was the bike chain. You were there. Bute Street, the chain came off, you carried the bike all the way home and moaned about your shoulder for a week." Eva blinked, and something behind her face recalibrated. "I know. I know it was." A breath. "That's the worst of it, Ror. I've rewritten it so many times I can't find the real one under the guilt. There wasn't even anything to see. Not yet. It was just a room getting smaller, and me deciding I'd imagined the door." "I didn't call either." "You had reasons." "I stopped because I was tired of being the thing you'd rescued. Every call, I had to be grateful or brave or making progress, and mostly I was angry in a flat with a broken radiator. So I let it go quiet, and then the quiet was three years old and I didn't know how to break it without owning that I'd kept it." "It wasn't an intervention." "Eva. You rang me eleven times in a fortnight." Eva looked at her glass. "I was leaving too. The café. The flat over the chippy. My mum asking if I'd met a nice boy, like that was a career. I needed one person who'd take the exit with me so it wouldn't look like running." Her voice stayed level; her thumbnail had gone white against the glass. "You made it look noble. That was generous of you. It flattered us both and neither of us said so." Rory laughed — a short, surprised bark of it — and Eva's hand came up, two fingers covering her mouth. "You cover your mouth when you laugh." "Boardrooms." "You had the loudest laugh in Cardiff. You got us thrown out of lectures. Two of them." "Dr. Preece earned it. He printed 'Oral Carter' on the mock results, and you walked up in front of everyone and corrected it with his own red pen." "He left it on the desk. That's practically consent." "There she is." Eva's eyes were bright and her fingers stayed where they were. "I'm back, by the way. Properly. There's an office in London now, and a flat in Bermondsey with a washing machine and no soul. My walls are bare. Not a photograph. Living there is like living inside an alibi." "You hate it." "I sleep well in it, which worries me more." "Sunday." It was out of Rory's mouth before the fear could vote. "Lunch." "I work Sundays. Lunch shift. I deliver squid to people who eat squid at eleven." "Then you'll finish at four and I'll sit here until you do." Eva raised her voice down the bar. "Does the green light stay on late?" "Past sensible." Silas turned the glass under his cloth. Eva picked up her phone then, and with her thumbnail she peeled the silver tape from the lens. She folded the strip small, pressed the little roll flat to the bar top, and left it there like a coin she meant to come back for. "Hold still." "Eva—" "You never smiled properly when I asked. You smiled properly when you forgot I was asking." The phone came up. A click. No flash. She turned the screen around: two snakebites, the blackcurrant rising through the lager, and at the edge, blurred, the start of Rory's laugh. "For the wall." Then she lifted her glass and drank, and made the face of a nineteen-year-old.
created_at"2026-09-02T10:54:43.38Z" 9/2/2026, 10:54:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He moved back [back]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.405
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.025
96.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1637
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1637
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1640
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount709
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.12
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street1
Nest1
Rory13
Cardiff1
Llewellyn1
Two1
Eva15
Silas5
Ice1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Llewellyn"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Ice"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"Cardiff"
3"Two"
globalScore0.442
windowScore0.333
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something between a smile and a wince"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1640
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean20.76
std19.9
cv0.959
sampleLengths
031
138
240
319
472
51
635
739
84
942
109
1115
125
137
1457
1542
1614
177
1819
194
206
211
2210
2313
246
2542
2615
2713
289
2910
3031
3118
328
3314
344
3568
3627
372
381
3914
401
413
4233
4324
444
4515
4626
4769
481
4911
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"was meant"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs111
matches
0"was polishing"
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences120
ratio0.033
matches
0"The girl who had bleached stripes into her hair over a halls sink now wore it black and severe, and the old laugh lines had company — finer ones, drawn by something with less fun in it."
1"Old Eva had never worn one; she'd called a watch a boss on your wrist."
2"\"I was leaving too. The café. The flat over the chippy. My mum asking if I'd met a nice boy, like that was a career. I needed one person who'd take the exit with me so it wouldn't look like running.\" Her voice stayed level; her thumbnail had gone white against the glass."
3"Rory laughed — a short, surprised bark of it — and Eva's hand came up, two fingers covering her mouth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount711
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02109704641350211
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean13.67
std12.52
cv0.916
sampleLengths
031
138
229
311
419
55
633
78
87
919
101
1115
122
131
145
1512
162
1737
184
1920
2022
219
229
236
242
253
267
2710
2847
2910
303
3129
3214
337
3419
354
366
371
3810
3913
406
4110
4228
434
4415
4510
463
479
4810
4931
71.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners54
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Then she lifted her glass"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences49
matches
0"He slid a glass across."
1"She took the stool under"
2"He moved back toward the"
3"She let it sit"
4"Her eyes went over Rory,"
5"Her thumb found the tape"
6"Her voice stayed level; her"
7"It was out of Rory's"
8"She folded the strip small,"
9"She turned the screen around:"
ratio0.204
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences49
matches
0"The rain had owned Frith"
1"Rory shouldered through the side"
2"Silas didn't look up from"
3"He slid a glass across."
4"She took the stool under"
5"Camel coat folded over the"
6"A watch that caught the"
7"The name crossed the room"
8"The Cardiff sanded off it."
9"The girl who had bleached"
10"Eva came down the bar"
11"Silas built the drinks without"
12"He moved back toward the"
13"Eva wrapped both hands around"
14"Rory drank hers."
15"The blackcurrant bloomed up through"
16"Eva nodded at the wall"
17"She let it sit"
18"Eva's mouth did something between"
19"Her eyes went over Rory,"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The girl who had bleached stripes into her hair over a halls sink now wore it black and severe, and the old laugh lines had company — finer ones, drawn by somet…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas didn't, though the cloth slowed around the rim and the silver signet on his right hand caught the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.013
leniency0.025
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.2484%