Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GWCHAQ5A1DDQ3G4YG0TFWV

Run Details

Duration:
3m 33s
Cost:
$0.001742
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost had stiffened the bracken to silver wire, and Richmond Park held a hush so complete that Aurora walked on the balls of her feet. Ahead, Isolde's hair floated ghost-pale between the bare trees. She left no prints in the rime. Following her was like chasing a rumour. "Sign back there said the park closes at dusk." Aurora's breath tore white from her lips. "Should I be flattered by the exemption?" "The park closes. The land beneath it keeps its own hours." Isolde didn't turn. "Stay to the deer paths, little lawyer. The stags dream loudly in winter, and they wake jealous." Shadow poured from a hawthorn and assembled itself into Nyx, violet eyes drifting like lanterns on black water. "The oaks are discussing you." Their voice arrived the way wind arrives, from no particular direction. "This ground knew them before it had a name. They say you smell of courts and iron." "Courts, maybe. Iron, never." Aurora touched the sheath at her hip. Moonsilver didn't count. The path climbed. Then the trees broke apart to reveal them: two oaks grown into each other over centuries, bark fused and ridged like poured candlewax, their branches knotted into an arch no mason could have planned. Between them the night air moved wrong — a pressure settled in Aurora's ears, the same squeeze she got dropping into the Tube on a bad day. Nyx stopped at the arch's edge and stared at something above the gap. "The Veil hangs here like a curtain with a draft under it. I can see straight through the weave." Aurora saw only dark trees and darker sky, but against her sternum the Heartstone woke — one shallow pulse of warmth, then another, a heartbeat testing the water. She pressed her palm flat over her jumper. "It's never done that outside a portal." "The Veil wears thin at old roots. Every world leans close in this one spot." Isolde's lavender eyes caught light that had no source. "Hel brushes it too. Mind your heart, little lantern." She stepped through the arch. Aurora followed, and December ended mid-stride. Warmth climbed her throat and settled in her lungs. The air tasted of honey and cut grass and rain on hot stone, a whole summer compressed into a single breath. Blackbirds sang somewhere overhead — blackbirds, in the last week before solstice. Far off, bells rang with no church to hold them. Light came from everywhere and nowhere. The canopy wove shut above them, branch locked to branch, yet the grove glowed gold-green, the colour of the inside of a leaf. Pools of it gathered on the moss like spilled honey, and in those pools grew flowers that had no business sharing a postcode: snowdrops shoulder to shoulder with poppies, bluebells flooding the ground beneath hawthorn in full blossom. A rose the size of her fist opened against a bank of brown, dead bracken — spring and autumn holding hands across a foot of soil. Her watch was running backwards. She flipped her wrist twice to be sure; the second hand swept anticlockwise, serene, certain. "Time is a courtesy here." Isolde waited beneath the arch of a root taller than a doorway. "The grove extends it when it likes, and collects with interest." Nyx crouched by an oak and slid a hand toward its shadow. The shadow swallowed their fingers the way deep water swallows a stone, and they snatched back a hand gone smoke to the wrist. They flexed it solid, jaw tight — or the place a jaw would be. "There is no dark in this place worth the name. I'll be wearing this body the whole visit." They rose, and their boots pressed prints into the moss. Nyx stared down at the marks the way a man stares at his own ghost. "First time in three hundred and eighty years I've left a footprint." "You're welcome." Aurora stepped around a cluster of poppies — and the heads turned. All of them, a silent congregation, tracking her as she passed. Behind the birdsong ran a second sound, lower, like a whisper heard through a wall. She caught syllables she almost knew — the bones of Welsh in them, her mother's cadences bent through a keyhole. The crescent scar on her wrist prickled, the first itch it had given her in twenty years. A bell-flower chimed as her sleeve brushed it, a pure glass note, and something in her chest unknotted enough that she laughed — one short bark of a laugh, startling her more than the sound had. "Smell the air, not the flowers." Isolde glided on, grass standing upright in her wake. "Eat nothing. Thank no one. Give your name to no leaf, no pool, no pretty voice. The grove keeps what it is given, and it has a long memory and poor manners." "That's not ominous at all." "It is not a lie, which is better company." They walked deeper. The trunks widened until three of them linked arms couldn't circle them, bark silvered and ringed with whorls like fingerprints. Cold bled through Aurora's sheath — the Fae blade always ran cold, but here the cold carried a hum, a note below hearing, and when the sourceless light pooled across her hip the dagger's edge gave off a pale glow. Moonlight's colour, moonlight's chill. She looked up for the moon. Canopy, woven tight. No moon, no sun, no sky at all — and moonlight on her hands anyway. "The light here is remembering," Nyx murmured. "That's older light. Older than the trees it lands on." Aurora blinked, and Isolde stood twenty feet further on, though between one heartbeat and the next the seer had crossed none of the intervening ground. Frost that had ridden in on Aurora's coat had melted to a ring of damp around her, and the poppies nearest her stood a full inch taller than they had a minute ago. "Keep walking," Isolde called back. "The grove grows curious things faster when it likes them." The trees opened at last around the heart of the grove: a pool, perfectly round, rimmed in white stone worn smooth as an old coin. The water stood motionless — not calm, motionless, the way glass is motionless — and it held stars. A whole night sky wheeled slowly in it while the grove above blazed with day. Aurora crouched at the rim. Her reflection arrived a half-second late, a woman-shaped afterthought. "Don't fret it." Nyx's hand landed warm and solid on her shoulder. "The water is deciding whether you're there." Most of the reflected sky ran black and star-strewn, but through its middle wound a river of amber — warm, honey-coloured, thick as syrup, shot with stars she had no names for. The Heartstone flared against her chest, heat rolling out from the crimson gem until she felt its glow through her jumper, silver chain warming against her nape. "That amber." She leaned closer, breath fogging the water's memory of a sky. "I know that amber. Dymas." "The water keeps every sky the grove has outlived." Isolde's reflection drifted across the pool without troubling the surface. "Skies are fashions. Water keeps the classics." The pendant beat against Aurora's sternum like a second pulse, and in the still water the amber current turned, slow and bright, carrying its stranger stars toward a horizon that had gone where horizons go.
created_at"2026-09-02T10:59:38.975Z" 9/2/2026, 10:59:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora stepped around [around]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.067
91.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1231
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount951
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora12
Isolde8
Shadow1
Nyx6
Moonsilver1
Tube1
Heartstone2
December1
Welsh1
Fae1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Shadow"
3"Nyx"
4"Moonsilver"
5"Heartstone"
6"December"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Tube"
globalScore0.869
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1231
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean35.17
std20.62
cv0.586
sampleLengths
048
123
231
351
414
564
632
743
833
95
106
1152
1293
1320
1428
1549
1655
1725
1852
1936
2047
215
229
2367
2424
2517
2658
2715
2858
2914
3019
3159
3218
3326
3435
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was like chasing"
1"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences80
ratio0.163
matches
0"Between them the night air moved wrong — a pressure settled in Aurora's ears, the same squeeze she got dropping into the Tube on a bad day."
1"Aurora saw only dark trees and darker sky, but against her sternum the Heartstone woke — one shallow pulse of warmth, then another, a heartbeat testing the water."
2"Blackbirds sang somewhere overhead — blackbirds, in the last week before solstice."
3"A rose the size of her fist opened against a bank of brown, dead bracken — spring and autumn holding hands across a foot of soil."
4"She flipped her wrist twice to be sure; the second hand swept anticlockwise, serene, certain."
5"They flexed it solid, jaw tight — or the place a jaw would be."
6"\"You're welcome.\" Aurora stepped around a cluster of poppies — and the heads turned."
7"She caught syllables she almost knew — the bones of Welsh in them, her mother's cadences bent through a keyhole."
8"A bell-flower chimed as her sleeve brushed it, a pure glass note, and something in her chest unknotted enough that she laughed — one short bark of a laugh, startling her more than the sound had."
9"Cold bled through Aurora's sheath — the Fae blade always ran cold, but here the cold carried a hum, a note below hearing, and when the sourceless light pooled across her hip the dagger's edge gave off a pale glow."
10"No moon, no sun, no sky at all — and moonlight on her hands anyway."
11"The water stood motionless — not calm, motionless, the way glass is motionless — and it held stars."
12"Most of the reflected sky ran black and star-strewn, but through its middle wound a river of amber — warm, honey-coloured, thick as syrup, shot with stars she had no names for."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount946
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.026427061310782242
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003171247357293869
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean15.39
std9.38
cv0.61
sampleLengths
025
19
27
37
416
57
614
717
818
916
1017
1111
123
133
1434
1527
1613
1719
1828
198
207
2124
229
235
246
259
2621
2712
2810
296
3023
3138
3226
335
3415
3517
3611
3712
3823
3914
4028
4115
4212
4314
4411
4515
4620
4717
4836
4915
89.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.55
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners44
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Then the trees broke apart"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences63
matches
0"She left no prints in"
1"Their voice arrived the way"
2"She pressed her palm flat"
3"She stepped through the arch."
4"Her watch was running backwards."
5"She flipped her wrist twice"
6"They flexed it solid, jaw"
7"They rose, and their boots"
8"She caught syllables she almost"
9"They walked deeper."
10"She looked up for the"
11"Her reflection arrived a half-second"
12"She leaned closer, breath fogging"
ratio0.206
47.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences63
matches
0"Frost had stiffened the bracken"
1"She left no prints in"
2"Aurora's breath tore white from"
3"Isolde didn't turn"
4"Shadow poured from a hawthorn"
5"Their voice arrived the way"
6"Aurora touched the sheath at"
7"Moonsilver didn't count."
8"The path climbed."
9"Nyx stopped at the arch's"
10"Aurora saw only dark trees"
11"She pressed her palm flat"
12"Isolde's lavender eyes caught light"
13"She stepped through the arch."
14"Aurora followed, and December ended"
15"Warmth climbed her throat and"
16"The air tasted of honey"
17"Blackbirds sang somewhere overhead —"
18"Light came from everywhere and"
19"The canopy wove shut above"
ratio0.825
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Pools of it gathered on the moss like spilled honey, and in those pools grew flowers that had no business sharing a postcode: snowdrops shoulder to shoulder wit…"
1"The pendant beat against Aurora's sternum like a second pulse, and in the still water the amber current turned, slow and bright, carrying its stranger stars tow…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde glided on, grass standing upright in her wake"
1"She leaned, breath fogging the water's memory of a sky"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"their boots pressed (press)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
85.8925%