| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora stepped around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 91.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1231 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 951 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Isolde | 8 | | Shadow | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Moonsilver | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | December | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Shadow" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Moonsilver" | | 5 | "Heartstone" | | 6 | "December" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Tube" |
| | globalScore | 0.869 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1231 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 35.17 | | std | 20.62 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 93 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was like chasing" | | 1 | "was running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.163 | | matches | | 0 | "Between them the night air moved wrong — a pressure settled in Aurora's ears, the same squeeze she got dropping into the Tube on a bad day." | | 1 | "Aurora saw only dark trees and darker sky, but against her sternum the Heartstone woke — one shallow pulse of warmth, then another, a heartbeat testing the water." | | 2 | "Blackbirds sang somewhere overhead — blackbirds, in the last week before solstice." | | 3 | "A rose the size of her fist opened against a bank of brown, dead bracken — spring and autumn holding hands across a foot of soil." | | 4 | "She flipped her wrist twice to be sure; the second hand swept anticlockwise, serene, certain." | | 5 | "They flexed it solid, jaw tight — or the place a jaw would be." | | 6 | "\"You're welcome.\" Aurora stepped around a cluster of poppies — and the heads turned." | | 7 | "She caught syllables she almost knew — the bones of Welsh in them, her mother's cadences bent through a keyhole." | | 8 | "A bell-flower chimed as her sleeve brushed it, a pure glass note, and something in her chest unknotted enough that she laughed — one short bark of a laugh, startling her more than the sound had." | | 9 | "Cold bled through Aurora's sheath — the Fae blade always ran cold, but here the cold carried a hum, a note below hearing, and when the sourceless light pooled across her hip the dagger's edge gave off a pale glow." | | 10 | "No moon, no sun, no sky at all — and moonlight on her hands anyway." | | 11 | "The water stood motionless — not calm, motionless, the way glass is motionless — and it held stars." | | 12 | "Most of the reflected sky ran black and star-strewn, but through its middle wound a river of amber — warm, honey-coloured, thick as syrup, shot with stars she had no names for." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 946 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.026427061310782242 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003171247357293869 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 15.39 | | std | 9.38 | | cv | 0.61 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 36 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 89.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.55 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the trees broke apart" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no prints in" | | 1 | "Their voice arrived the way" | | 2 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 3 | "She stepped through the arch." | | 4 | "Her watch was running backwards." | | 5 | "She flipped her wrist twice" | | 6 | "They flexed it solid, jaw" | | 7 | "They rose, and their boots" | | 8 | "She caught syllables she almost" | | 9 | "They walked deeper." | | 10 | "She looked up for the" | | 11 | "Her reflection arrived a half-second" | | 12 | "She leaned closer, breath fogging" |
| | ratio | 0.206 | |
| 47.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost had stiffened the bracken" | | 1 | "She left no prints in" | | 2 | "Aurora's breath tore white from" | | 3 | "Isolde didn't turn" | | 4 | "Shadow poured from a hawthorn" | | 5 | "Their voice arrived the way" | | 6 | "Aurora touched the sheath at" | | 7 | "Moonsilver didn't count." | | 8 | "The path climbed." | | 9 | "Nyx stopped at the arch's" | | 10 | "Aurora saw only dark trees" | | 11 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 12 | "Isolde's lavender eyes caught light" | | 13 | "She stepped through the arch." | | 14 | "Aurora followed, and December ended" | | 15 | "Warmth climbed her throat and" | | 16 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 17 | "Blackbirds sang somewhere overhead —" | | 18 | "Light came from everywhere and" | | 19 | "The canopy wove shut above" |
| | ratio | 0.825 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Pools of it gathered on the moss like spilled honey, and in those pools grew flowers that had no business sharing a postcode: snowdrops shoulder to shoulder wit…" | | 1 | "The pendant beat against Aurora's sternum like a second pulse, and in the still water the amber current turned, slow and bright, carrying its stranger stars tow…" |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde glided on, grass standing upright in her wake" | | 1 | "She leaned, breath fogging the water's memory of a sky" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "their boots pressed (press)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |