| 23.53% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "Isolde said serenely [serenely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |
| 89.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1492 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1492 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "resolved" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "comfortable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1513 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1264 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 16 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Varga | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Warmth | 1 | | December | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Eldest | 1 | | Oak | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Warmth" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.867 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1513 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 42.03 | | std | 25.43 | | cv | 0.605 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 95 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 93 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 74 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 76 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 69 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 12 |
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| 84.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been carved" | | 2 | "was lit" | | 3 | "was supposed" | | 4 | "were fixed" | | 5 | "been told" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was turning" | | 1 | "were looking" | | 2 | "was beating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.167 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park at midnight was supposed to be empty — deer and dark and the distant amber smear of London — but Isolde Varga stood among the seven ancient oaks as if she had been carved there alongside them, silver hair spilling to her waist, unbothered by a cold that was turning Rory's fingers numb through her gloves." | | 1 | "Behind her, Nyx poured out of the dark between two oaks — there was no better word for it." | | 2 | "One moment the space was empty; the next they stood six feet of living shadow against the frost-glitter, violet eyes banked low, voice arriving like a whisper that had traveled a long way to find her." | | 3 | "Sometime in the deep past — deeper than the park, deeper than the city, maybe deeper than the language Rory thought in — seven oaks had grown into monoliths, bark gone grey and dense as bedrock, each trunk wide as a doorway." | | 4 | "Rory looked down twice to be sure — frost crisp enough to squeak, and behind Isolde, nothing but unbroken silver." | | 5 | "Rory touched the Heartstone at her throat — thumbnail-sized, crimson, warm as ever against her sternum — then ducked her head and stepped between the third and fourth oaks." | | 6 | "There was only a moment where sound dropped away as if she'd plunged underwater, a pressure in her ears like descending in a plane, and then —" | | 7 | "The air smelled of honey and wet earth and crushed green stems, and the light — the light came from everywhere, gold and even and sourceless, the perpetual hour of a late summer afternoon that had forgotten how to end." | | 8 | "The gap they'd come through still stood there — two grey monoliths — but beyond them was not the frost-black park." | | 9 | "The light came from everywhere, so everything was lit from all sides at once — every trunk, every stone, every flower sharp-edged and shadowless, like figures in a painting that hadn't decided on a sun." | | 10 | "Nyx, made of dark, walking through a place with no dark in it — visible in a way nothing got to see them, every outline defined." | | 11 | "Ahead, the Eldest Oak rose from a ring of white flowers, its roots arching off the ground like the ribs of something enormous sleeping upright, and beneath that arch the air shivered — a distortion, a heat-haze in a place with no heat, as if she were looking at the world through the surface of moving water." | | 12 | "She did — and that frightened her more than anything so far, because she shouldn't." | | 13 | "Honey, bread, fat, sugar — a feast, somewhere on the other side of the shivering air, laid out and steaming." | | 14 | "Not the pulsing stone, not the feast-smell — the ease." | | 15 | "As they passed under the last of the park's ordinary trees, Isolde reached over without a word and lifted something white from Rory's shoulder — a petal, fine as paper, already stiffening, already frosting." |
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| 99.56% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1259 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.04050833995234313 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006354249404289118 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 15.76 | | std | 12.29 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 71.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.46875 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the seam breathed, and" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no prints." | | 1 | "It hit her face like" | | 2 | "It was more grove, light" | | 3 | "Her stomach dipped." | | 4 | "They walked deeper." | | 5 | "they said at last" | | 6 | "Their whisper had an edge" | | 7 | "She understood more than they" | | 8 | "She didn't say anything." | | 9 | "She touched the crescent scar" | | 10 | "She did — and that" | | 11 | "Her lavender eyes were fixed" | | 12 | "They withdrew the way they'd" | | 13 | "She stepped through into cold" | | 14 | "Her phone, when she checked," | | 15 | "They walked back through the" | | 16 | "It went to frost entirely" |
| | ratio | 0.23 | |
| 34.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost had silvered the bracken" | | 1 | "Richmond Park at midnight was" | | 2 | "The oaks were columns." | | 3 | "That was the first wrong" | | 4 | "Sometime in the deep past" | | 5 | "Lichen mapped their faces in" | | 6 | "The gaps between them were" | | 7 | "Isolde said, and began to" | | 8 | "She left no prints." | | 9 | "Rory looked down twice to" | | 10 | "Nyx went first, or rather" | | 11 | "A pause, and the violet" | | 12 | "Rory touched the Heartstone at" | | 13 | "The world turned inside out." | | 14 | "It hit her face like" | | 15 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 16 | "Wildflowers ran in every direction" | | 17 | "Scillas and poppies and things" | | 18 | "Bees droned somewhere out of" | | 19 | "The sound wove into a" |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park at midnight was supposed to be empty — deer and dark and the distant amber smear of London — but Isolde Varga stood among the seven ancient oaks a…" | | 1 | "One moment the space was empty; the next they stood six feet of living shadow against the frost-glitter, violet eyes banked low, voice arriving like a whisper t…" | | 2 | "There was only a moment where sound dropped away as if she'd plunged underwater, a pressure in her ears like descending in a plane, and then —" | | 3 | "The air smelled of honey and wet earth and crushed green stems, and the light — the light came from everywhere, gold and even and sourceless, the perpetual hour…" | | 4 | "Ahead, the Eldest Oak rose from a ring of white flowers, its roots arching off the ground like the ribs of something enormous sleeping upright, and beneath that…" |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, because her mouth was dry and her heart was beating in time with a stone" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.552 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |