Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GWHGH5HWBYQHYHPJBRBMBR

Run Details

Duration:
6m 27s
Cost:
$0.047342
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain on the service gate had rusted itself into a single knot, and the bolt-cutter marks across it were the freshest metal in sight. Detective Harlow Quinn counted the steps down the emergency stairwell — forty-two — and walked out of a Camden June into a February nobody had warned her about. Her breath fogged at the bottom. The last time that had happened at a summer crime scene, Morris had still been alive. She pressed her thumb against the worn leather strap of her watch and kept moving. Tripod lamps burned along the platform. White-suited figures bent over crates, over dust, over a body laid out beneath the empty poster frames like an exhibit the station had been keeping for someone. Beyond the lamps the dark pooled into both tunnels and waited. DS Vance lifted the tape for her with a gloved hand. "Keep your gloves on, guv. Network Rail surveyor found him at six-forty, checking the tunnels for the redevelopment. No wallet, no phone, no ID. Brogues and a cashmere coat, so not one of your rough sleepers. My money's on urbex kids. They party down these holes all summer, one of them takes something naughty, panics, and we all stand around in the cold until the tox screen saves us." Quinn crouched beside the body. Mid-thirties, clean-shaven, arms straight at his sides. His right fist was closed around something pale. The pathologist knelt on his left. "No wounds. No petechiae, no ligature marks, no injection sites. And before you ask — lividity is fixed on his right flank, but he's lying flat on his back. He died on his side, and someone repositioned him hours later. Carefully." "Show me the drag marks." "That's the thing, Detective. There aren't any." Quinn swept her torch across the dust. It lay over the platform like grey felt, thick enough to write a name in. Around the body, a perfect oval of undisturbed felt. No smears. No scuff. Not one print matching the brogues anywhere on the platform. "Somebody carried him," Vance offered. "Two of them, or a stretcher. Kids stage the scene, leg it up the vents." "The vents are nine inches wide. I checked on the way down." She stood and levelled the torch at him. "So did the BTP inspector. The gate chain was rusted shut for years, and the inner bolt was thrown from the inside. Show me how your party got in." Vance's jaw worked. "Then they had a key. A copy. Some maintenance bloke runs a little side trade down here." He gestured at the crates stacked along the wall, each one chalked with numbers and a spiral mark. "That's a dealer's ledger. I've seen the same code in county lines runs. He bought something, it stopped his heart, they tidied up and went home." Quinn crossed to the track bed. Frost feathered the third rail. Ice beaded the sleepers in neat rows, and a ring of candle stubs stood nearby with their wax frozen mid-drip, little chandeliers of it hanging from the tallow. "Frozen wax, Vance. It's twenty-nine degrees above us. When did you last see wax refuse to melt in a heatwave?" The platform clock hung above them, hands dead at 3:14. She leaned over the body and turned his wrist with two fingers. His watch had stopped at 3:14. "Two clocks. One minute." She checked her own watch ticking against her wrist, then lifted her chin toward the crate the scene-of-crime officer was photographing. "What's in that one?" "Straw and an old compass. Brass, all verdigris. Probate junk. Our friend was probably a collector slumming it." Quinn lifted it out. The casing wore its green patina like bark, and sigils had been etched into the face — the same spiral as the chalk marks. The needle stood steady, pointing down the platform to the north tunnel arch, which had been bricked up since before she was born. She turned the compass in a slow circle. The needle held its line. She set it flat on the crate and held her phone beside it. The phone's needle swung to the stairwell behind her. The brass needle swung back to the arch. "It's demagnetised," Vance insisted. "It's broken. It's junk." "Broken needles wander. This one has a preference." She crouched again and pulled the dead man's left hand into the light. His fingertips wore the same green-grey stain as the compass. "It sat in this hand long enough to mark him. It was found thirty feet away in straw. Somebody took it out of a dead man's grip and dropped it in the nearest box on their way somewhere." "On their way where, guv?" She followed the drag furrows. Dozens of them, shallow trenches scored into the felt-dust, all of them running from the platform down the north tunnel. Every furrow ended at the bricked arch. Every single one. A voice came down the stairwell, echoing off the tiles — a young woman with a leather satchel dragging one shoulder toward the floor, curly red hair escaping its clip, round glasses gone white with fog the moment she reached the cold. She cleaned the lenses on her cardigan cuff without looking at them. "Dr. Kowalski. British Museum. Your CSU flagged a brass artefact for identification?" She spotted the crates and stopped walking. Freckles drained of colour beneath the lamps. "Where was the brass item found?" "That crate. Where are you going?" Eva had already crossed to the compass. She picked it up with both hands, turned it over twice, and her breath came out in a long white ribbon. "Can I see his hand? The right one." Quinn walked her over. Eva knelt, looked at the bone disc locked in the dead fist, and tucked a curl behind her left ear. "That's a chit. A bone chit. Where did he get this?" "He was holding it. Why?" "Because this is a market." Eva rose and turned a slow circle, taking in the crates, the chalk, the furrows, the candle ring. "This is where the Veil Market sits. Sat. It's a black market — enchanted goods, banned substances, information — and it has no fixed address. That's the entire point of it. It moves. Every full moon, the whole thing packs up and relocates, stalls and stock and customers." She freed a hand from the satchel strap and pulled out her phone, thumbing at it. "Last night was the full moon." Vance laughed without humour. "You're telling me a flea market teleports." "I'm telling you the moon set at half four this morning." Eva pointed her chin at the dead man's watch. "His clock stopped at fourteen past three." Quinn looked at the fist. The chit. The entry requirement. "He paid to get in," she said. "He never paid to get out." "And this?" Eva turned the compass over in her palm. "This is a veil compass. Shade-made — the verdigris doesn't tarnish, it grows, it's part of the crafting. The needle doesn't find north." She held it level. The needle stood at the arch, steady as a drawn line. "It finds tears. Thin places. Whatever word you want. And it's found one." "It's a wall, guv. You're both describing a wall." Quinn was already walking the furrows. The arch rose out of the tunnel mouth in Victorian brick, generations of soot blackening every joint — except one. A seam of mortar ran floor to crown, pale, sharp-edged, unweathered. She stripped a glove and pressed two fingers to it. The cold there went past brick, past stone, into the cold of a walk-in freezer left shut for years. Frost crept along the floor where wall met ground. "The market didn't get robbed, Vance." She ran her bare fingers along the seam. "It closed. Last night, between fourteen past three and the moonset, this whole platform was emptied out — crates dragged, stock hauled, candles left burning — and everything went through this arch. Except him. He got left behind, along with whatever was in his hand when his heart stopped." Vance crouched at the nearest furrow and followed it with his eyes to the brick. "Through it. Through eight feet of Victorian wall." She knocked on the seam with a knuckle. Solid. She moved along it and knocked again. Solid. She reached the frost line at the base, and the wall answered hollow. Every furrow in the dust ran into that brick and stopped. Thirty feet behind her, the needle held its line straight through her spine. "Get me a hammer."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.683
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.049
96.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"etched"
2"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1427
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount843
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn8
Camden1
June1
February1
Morris1
Vance6
Freckles1
Eva5
Victorian1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Vance"
4"Freckles"
5"Eva"
places
0"February"
1"Victorian"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1427
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"into that brick"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean30.36
std22.24
cv0.733
sampleLengths
053
16
231
344
411
569
620
747
85
97
1045
1120
1249
1364
1439
1520
1628
1729
1818
1951
2013
2130
228
2369
245
2535
2654
2732
286
2928
308
3124
3211
335
3493
3511
3627
3710
3813
3961
409
4175
4263
4323
4430
4524
464
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"been etched"
1"been bricked"
99.75% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs133
matches
0"was photographing"
1"was already walking"
35.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences106
ratio0.038
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn counted the steps down the emergency stairwell — forty-two — and walked out of a Camden June into a February nobody had warned her about."
1"The casing wore its green patina like bark, and sigils had been etched into the face — the same spiral as the chalk marks."
2"A voice came down the stairwell, echoing off the tiles — a young woman with a leather satchel dragging one shoulder toward the floor, curly red hair escaping its clip, round glasses gone white with fog the moment she reached the cold."
3"The arch rose out of the tunnel mouth in Victorian brick, generations of soot blackening every joint — except one."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount850
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same green-grey stain"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.01411764705882353
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001176470588235294
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean13.46
std12.05
cv0.895
sampleLengths
025
128
26
316
415
56
627
711
811
969
105
117
128
136
1441
155
167
177
1815
199
202
212
2210
235
2415
2520
2629
273
2835
2926
306
315
3228
3320
3410
3512
366
3725
384
3918
404
4124
4223
438
445
4513
469
478
484
494
69.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.46226415094339623
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences71
matches
0"Her breath fogged at the"
1"She pressed her thumb against"
2"His right fist was closed"
3"It lay over the platform"
4"She stood and levelled the"
5"He gestured at the crates"
6"She leaned over the body"
7"His watch had stopped at"
8"She checked her own watch"
9"She turned the compass in"
10"She set it flat on"
11"She crouched again and pulled"
12"His fingertips wore the same"
13"She followed the drag furrows."
14"She cleaned the lenses on"
15"She spotted the crates and"
16"She picked it up with"
17"She freed a hand from"
18"She held it level"
19"She stripped a glove and"
ratio0.338
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences71
matches
0"The chain on the service"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn counted the"
2"Her breath fogged at the"
3"The last time that had"
4"She pressed her thumb against"
5"Tripod lamps burned along the"
6"DS Vance lifted the tape"
7"Quinn crouched beside the body."
8"His right fist was closed"
9"The pathologist knelt on his"
10"Quinn swept her torch across"
11"It lay over the platform"
12"She stood and levelled the"
13"Vance's jaw worked."
14"He gestured at the crates"
15"Quinn crossed to the track"
16"Frost feathered the third rail."
17"Ice beaded the sleepers in"
18"The platform clock hung above"
19"She leaned over the body"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Vance insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.049
84.6509%