Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GWJZM5SV9SA4NYPY8DGGS1

Run Details

Duration:
4m 4s
Cost:
$0.028122
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory had meant only to look. The pendant had run warm for three days. Warm at breakfast, warm through every shift at the Golden Empress, warm against her sternum while she slept. Whenever her delivery route bent past Richmond Park, the heat climbed another notch — a compass needle with a grudge. Tonight it had crossed into something more, and the crimson stone's inner glow seeped through her shirt like an ember under linen. So she finished her last drop of the night, leaned the bike against the railings outside Silas' place, and caught the night bus to the edge of the park. The gates were chained at this hour. She called Eva while she hunted for a gap in the fence, and got voicemail, which felt like a small mercy. "It's me. Don't freak out. The pendant's doing the warm thing again, and it's dragging me out to Richmond Park, of all the places on this earth." She wedged the phone between ear and shoulder and hauled herself over the railings, boots scraping rust. "One look. Twenty minutes, tops. If I'm late, it's because I stopped for chips on the way home. Go back to sleep. Love you." She dropped into long grass on the other side, and the pendant flared, hot as a struck match, before settling into a steady burn that pulled at her like a hand closed on her collar. Richmond Park after midnight was another country. Bracken stood waist-high and silvered with frost, and beyond it the dark went on and on, bigger than any park had a right to be inside a city. She followed a firebreak path because the pendant wanted her straight ahead, and straight ahead it was. The deer came first. Six of them stood in the bracken, pale rumps catching what little light there was. Richmond's deer ignored people in daylight; at night they scattered from footsteps. These did neither. None of them grazed. None of them shifted their weight. Every head was turned toward the same point in the dark ahead of her, ears angled forward, still as garden statues. Not one of them looked at her, which was worse. She walked the path with six frozen gazes aimed past her shoulder, and it took her a hundred metres to notice she'd started matching her steps to something — some rhythm — without deciding to. She stopped. The rhythm went on without her for two more beats, then stopped as well. Her own footsteps. That was all. Echoes off the firebreak, arriving late. She rubbed the crescent scar on her wrist, an old habit from courtrooms and worse rooms, and kept walking. Somewhere between the deer and the treeline, London stopped. There was no moment when it happened — the traffic hum just wasn't there anymore, and no plane crossed the black sky, and no siren wound through the distance. She had lived above a bar for two years; she knew what silence cost in this city. Air like this belonged to caves. The quiet sat on her ears like water, and beneath it she could hear the frost ticking off the bracken, and beneath that, if she let herself listen, something that was almost a hum. Low. Tuneful. Familiar in a way she refused to examine yet. The pendant pulled her through a stand of birch, and the oaks rose up in front of her. Seven of them, grown in a ring where no ring should be, each trunk broad as a cottage, black bark scored with marks that might have been bark's own doing and might have been carved by hands with too many joints in the fingers. They stood like standing stones. Like a boundary. Between the second and third trunk, the gap showed a clearing that glowed — a faint, sourceless dimness, as if moonlight pooled there without bothering to fall from the moon. November frost rimed the grass right up to the ring. Inside it, wildflowers bloomed. The pendant went from burn to sting. The silver chain bit her neck, and the stone's pulse quickened against her sternum, throb, throb, throb, patient as a second heart. She checked her phone to prove to herself what time it was. 1:47. Signal gone, the bars eaten down to nothing. "Right," she told the dark, because saying it out loud made her the kind of person who said things out loud, and that person was braver. "One look." She stepped between the oaks, and winter ended. Warm air folded around her, June-warm, and the smell of the clearing arrived with it — honey, and under the honey something sweet gone off, fruit rotting in a closed room. Her breath stopped fogging. The frost line sat a foot behind her heels like a tide mark. The flowers covered the whole clearing, hundreds of them, open and faintly lit from inside their own petals. No wind moved in that air, and still they swayed, all of them together, all one way, then all the other way, like a crowd shifting its feet. She crouched to look at the nearest cluster and the blooms tilted toward her — slow, the way a face turns. She pulled her hand back before touching anything. The hum was louder in here. She knew the tune now and wished she didn't. Her mother used to sing it, the Welsh lullaby, sung over her bed in Cardiff when she was small enough to believe the words kept the dark out. It came from the far side of the clearing, soft and looping, the same eight bars over and over, and it stopped the instant she stopped walking. She stood in the warm dark among the leaning flowers, and the silence after the humming had a texture to it, an attention, the particular hush of a room where someone has just noticed you came in. "Hello?" Her voice landed flat and dead, absorbed by the clearing like the clearing had eaten it. At the edge of her sight, between the sixth and seventh oak, something stood. Tall and narrow, with the shape of a person the way a scarecrow has the shape of a person. She turned her head and it was gone, and the gap between the trunks looked as empty as before — except every flower in that corner of the clearing had turned to face it. She counted the oaks, because numbers behaved, numbers had never once let her down. Seven. She walked the curve of the ring to see them all, counting again. Eight. She stood still, spine cold inside the June-warm air, and counted a third time and got seven — but the gap she'd come through was on the far side now, and she had not moved, and the humming had started again without her. It wasn't a lullaby anymore, quite. The same eight bars, the same voice, but the timing had slid, the pauses sitting wrong, like the tune had been learned from watching her mother's mouth rather than hearing her mother sing. Her phone said 3:12. She had been inside ten minutes. The stone pulsed at her chest, slow and patient, and for the first time she felt what the pulse was not. Not her heartbeat — hers ticked fast and shallow at her throat, a bird's. The pendant beat its own rhythm below it, and between the two, faint, from the deep part of the clearing where the humming lived, came a third pulse, answering the second, call and response, the way you knock on a door when you know someone's home. Rory stood among the flowers, and every last bloom in the clearing rotated on its stem to face her, and the humming stopped. "Who's there?" The dark between the oaks held its breath. Then, from just behind her shoulder — close, close enough that the warm air stirred — it answered in her own voice, her own cadence, word for word: "Who's there?"
created_at"2026-09-02T11:03:10.222Z" 9/2/2026, 11:03:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1316
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1316
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count3
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"throb"
count3
8
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"weight"
2"echoes"
3"silence"
4"familiar"
5"pulse"
6"quickened"
7"throb"
8"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"listen"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1328
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1256
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.24
worstName"Richmond"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond3
Park2
Eva1
London1
June-warm2
Welsh1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Eva"
places
0"Golden"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
4"June-warm"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a small mercy"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1328
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean41.5
std32.48
cv0.783
sampleLengths
06
197
228
368
435
552
64
7106
816
912
1019
11106
1218
1382
1414
1550
1628
1756
1846
1929
206
21101
2217
2367
2472
2539
2610
2781
2823
292
3036
312
87.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences81
matches
0"were chained"
1"been carved"
2"was gone"
3"been learned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences85
ratio0.141
matches
0"Whenever her delivery route bent past Richmond Park, the heat climbed another notch — a compass needle with a grudge."
1"Richmond's deer ignored people in daylight; at night they scattered from footsteps."
2"She walked the path with six frozen gazes aimed past her shoulder, and it took her a hundred metres to notice she'd started matching her steps to something — some rhythm — without deciding to."
3"There was no moment when it happened — the traffic hum just wasn't there anymore, and no plane crossed the black sky, and no siren wound through the distance."
4"She had lived above a bar for two years; she knew what silence cost in this city."
5"Between the second and third trunk, the gap showed a clearing that glowed — a faint, sourceless dimness, as if moonlight pooled there without bothering to fall from the moon."
6"Warm air folded around her, June-warm, and the smell of the clearing arrived with it — honey, and under the honey something sweet gone off, fruit rotting in a closed room."
7"She crouched to look at the nearest cluster and the blooms tilted toward her — slow, the way a face turns."
8"She turned her head and it was gone, and the gap between the trunks looked as empty as before — except every flower in that corner of the clearing had turned to face it."
9"She stood still, spine cold inside the June-warm air, and counted a third time and got seven — but the gap she'd come through was on the far side now, and she had not moved, and the humming had started again without her."
10"Not her heartbeat — hers ticked fast and shallow at her throat, a bird's."
11"Then, from just behind her shoulder — close, close enough that the warm air stirred — it answered in her own voice, her own cadence, word for word:"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount136
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.022058823529411766
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.007352941176470588
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean15.62
std11.96
cv0.765
sampleLengths
06
18
218
320
422
529
67
721
844
924
1035
117
1228
1317
144
1515
1612
173
184
196
2021
2110
2235
232
2414
253
263
276
2819
299
3029
3117
326
3334
341
351
369
3718
3844
395
403
4130
4210
434
447
4522
4612
471
488
4926
72.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.47619047619047616
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners40
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Somewhere between the deer and"
1"Then, from just behind her"
ratio0.027
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences75
matches
0"She called Eva while she"
1"She wedged the phone between"
2"She dropped into long grass"
3"She followed a firebreak path"
4"She walked the path with"
5"Her own footsteps."
6"She rubbed the crescent scar"
7"She had lived above a"
8"They stood like standing stones."
9"She checked her phone to"
10"she told the dark, because"
11"She stepped between the oaks,"
12"Her breath stopped fogging."
13"She crouched to look at"
14"She pulled her hand back"
15"She knew the tune now"
16"Her mother used to sing"
17"It came from the far"
18"She stood in the warm"
19"Her voice landed flat and"
ratio0.36
86.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rory had meant only to"
1"The pendant had run warm"
2"Tonight it had crossed into"
3"The gates were chained at"
4"She called Eva while she"
5"She wedged the phone between"
6"She dropped into long grass"
7"Richmond Park after midnight was"
8"She followed a firebreak path"
9"The deer came first."
10"Richmond's deer ignored people in"
11"These did neither."
12"None of them grazed."
13"None of them shifted their"
14"Every head was turned toward"
15"She walked the path with"
16"The rhythm went on without"
17"Her own footsteps."
18"That was all."
19"Echoes off the firebreak, arriving"
ratio0.747
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Whenever her delivery route bent"
ratio0.013
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She dropped into long grass on the other side, and the pendant flared, hot as a struck match, before settling into a steady burn that pulled at her like a hand …"
1"The quiet sat on her ears like water, and beneath it she could hear the frost ticking off the bracken, and beneath that, if she let herself listen, something th…"
2"Seven of them, grown in a ring where no ring should be, each trunk broad as a cottage, black bark scored with marks that might have been bark's own doing and mi…"
3"Between the second and third trunk, the gap showed a clearing that glowed — a faint, sourceless dimness, as if moonlight pooled there without bothering to fall …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She wedged, boots scraping rust"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.6437%