Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GWNC48R89E427R3ED4QQ9B

Run Details

Duration:
10m 25s
Cost:
$0.069796
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ladder ran forty feet down a throat of Victorian brick, and the smell climbed up to meet her: mould, wet iron, and beneath both something sweet, like incense burned in a church nobody attended. Harlow Quinn counted the rungs out of habit — she'd learned to count her way down from service transports — and stepped off into the dead station. Work lamps on stands turned the platform the colour of stale margarine. Tiles the shade of weak tea climbed the walls, cracked into continents. Blue-and-white tape sagged between two pillars, and past it, figures in white suits knelt around a shape on the boards. "Boss." DS Priya Nair came along the platform with a folded paper suit under her arm. "Danny Wexler. Thirty-four, small-time fence — we've lifted him twice. Two urban explorers found him at half five, rang it in anonymous, then did a runner." Quinn snapped the suit open. "And why am I underground before my second coffee?" "Because he didn't come with a postcode." Nair lifted the tape for her. "Station's been dead since the thirties. No trains, no current in the running tunnels. Rats, damp, the odd photo crew. And him." Wexler lay face-down, one arm folded beneath his chest, a black courier bag flattened under his ribs. Cheap parka, work boots, dark hair matted to one side. The pathologist crouched over him, lamp angled at his flank. "One entry wound, left side, under the ribs," Okonkwo told her. "Narrow blade. And before you ask — yes, it's odd. There's a teacup's worth of blood on his shirt and not a drop on the boards." Quinn pulled on gloves and knelt. She turned her torch along the boards, low, so the light lay almost flat. Dust hung on the platform like grey felt, and in it — footprints. Dozens. Boots, trainers, a narrow heel, a child's size. All of them walked one direction, towards the far end, and all of them stopped at a chalk line drawn across the boards in front of a bricked-up arch. None of them came back. "His soles are dry," Quinn said. "So?" "How did we get down here?" "The ladder. Or the running tunnel north, and that's knee-deep." "His socks would wring. There's no splash on the laces, no tide mark on the leather." She rose and followed her own light. "Priya, his prints start in the middle of the platform. He didn't come down the ladder and he didn't wade the tunnel. He starts twenty feet from the body, walks a straight line, and drops." "Maybe the prints got traipsed over. Half the Met's been through here." "With his boots and nobody else's?" Nair folded her arms. "Right. Here's my read. The tunnel crews run little markets down these holes — fags, vapes, knocked-off perfume. Word goes round on Telegram, they shift location every few weeks. Wexler comes down to buy, the deal goes sideways, the seller sticks him, everyone scatters and sanitises on the way out." "Then the killer took the goods." Quinn crouched again and worked the breast pocket of the parka. The button was still done. She peeled it open and fanned out a fold of twenties. "Three hundred and forty quid, buttoned in. Some robbery." Her fingers found something flat in the inside pocket, wrapped in chamois. She unrolled it on her palm: a brass compass, small, its casing furred green with age, its face etched with rings of fine script. "And this. That's an antique. A fence would price that faster than his own mother." The needle lay pressed against the glass, pointing down the platform. Quinn stood and held the compass level. Her phone's compass put north a quarter-turn to the left. She walked the length of the wall, and the needle swung to keep its nose on one spot — the bricked arch — and nothing else. She set the compass on the boards and the needle strained against the glass like a dog at a door. "Old feeder cables in that wall," Nair said. "Magnetic field. I've seen needles do worse." "Then she'd drag anywhere along the wall. Watch." Quinn paced it, twenty feet each way, the needle pivoting on the single arch and ignoring the rest. "It's not the wall she likes. It's that one opening." She turned back to the body and lifted Wexler's wrist. The watch glass had a crack running off the nine. Stopped at fourteen past three. "Okonkwo. Your window?" "Rigor's full but the livor's still mobile. I'd start him around one and want until three, no later." "And the watch says he died at twelve past three." Quinn turned the crown with a gloved fingertip. It was already pulled half out. "You stop a watch by pulling the crown. Somebody stopped his." "Cracked in the fall," Nair offered. "Crowns snag." "On what? He's lying on gravel dust and pigeon muck." Quinn laid the wrist down and raked her torch along the boards again. Rust freckles fell in a line down the platform, thrown off the ceiling bolts, and among them sat rounder spots — dark, brown-black, each with a spattered edge. She walked them off. "Nine, ten, eleven paces. The drips start at the chalk line and end at the body. He came out of that arch already bleeding, walked twenty-two feet, and dropped." "There is no way through that arch. The brick's original — the coping's stamped 1931. Nobody's opened it since Coronation year." Quinn didn't answer. She was looking past the chalk line, at the tiles behind it. Somebody had scrubbed them, hard, but under the flat of her torch the ghost of white lines came up out of the glaze — rings, circles inside circles, drawn in the same hand as the script on the compass face. Her thumb found the worn leather of her own watch strap and pressed along it. She'd photographed chalk like that once before, in the doorway of a lock-up in Bethnal Green, the night Morris— She lowered the torch. Overhead, iron hooks sat in a grid along the ceiling beams. The boards below them wore clean rectangles in the dust, the shape of stalls stood and struck. Oil had darkened the timber in strips, like the aisles between trestle tables. Wax pooled at the base of one pillar, and against it leaned a slate, chalked with columns of tallies, each column headed with a moon — thin crescents at one end, swelling to a fat disc at the other. The tallies under the full moon ran longest, and the last mark still smudged under her glove. "Squatters love a moon calendar," Nair said. "Squatters who chalk warding marks and sweep their floors on the way out?" Voices carried down the shaft. Nair glanced up. "That'll be the museum lot. I rang about the tile script — they keep an archive crowd who catalogue this sort of thing." Boots hit the platform, and a small woman came along the boards with a leather satchel clanking against her hip, red curls escaping a wool hat, round glasses fogged to two white ovals. She pushed a curl behind her left ear and the world came back into her lenses. "Sorry — Eva Kowalski. Restricted archives, British Museum. Someone asked about markings?" She was already past the tape and crouched at the tiles, phone out, and then she stopped moving altogether. "This isn't an alphabet. It resolves inward — every ring turns towards the centre. It's warding script. I've seen it once, in a private folio, and that collector swore it kept things on the correct side of a door." Her head turned. She'd seen the compass in Quinn's hand, and the colour went out of her freckles. "Where did you get that?" "It was in his pocket. It doesn't point north." "It's not meant to. It's a finder." Eva got up too fast and her satchel swung. "There's a sketch of one just like it in the Vaudrey folio — verdigris casing, those exact sigils. The folio says the collector paid a fortune for it, and that the maker wasn't human. It calls them Shades. The margin notes say the needle pointed him to openings." She swallowed. "Doors." Quinn took the bone disc from the evidence tray and held it out on her palm — thumb-sized, carved with a spiral of small teeth. "That's a token." Eva's voice dropped. "You don't spend those. You show them. Like a ticket." Her gaze went to the slate and its columns of moons. "There's a line in the folio — 'the fair keeps the moon's calendar.'" She counted the tallies under the fat disc with her eyes. "Last night was full." Quinn stood with all of it for a moment: the dry boots, the drips, the crowd of prints that walked towards a wall and never walked away. "Here's what happened," she said, walking them back down the platform. "Wexler came down last night with three hundred and forty quid, a ticket, and a finder's compass. He was a customer. He bought something — or lifted something — because somebody stopped his watch to move the hour, and the only reason to move a dead man's hour is to move yourself away from it. Then he walked out through that arch already bleeding, made it twenty-two feet, and dropped on top of an empty bag. The killer took one thing and left the cash, the compass, and the ticket. That's not a robbery. That's a repossession. And then the whole market folded — stalls struck, floors swept, chalk scrubbed — and every soul in this room walked out through the same arch and never came back." Nair looked from her to the brickwork. "You're telling me a market walked through a wall." "I'm telling you the wall's a door, and doors open from both sides." Quinn levelled the compass at the arch and the needle lay flat against the glass, straining towards the mortar. "Get me a mortar sample off that brickwork. Bag the slate. And Miss Kowalski — I want that folio on a scanner by this afternoon."
created_at"2026-09-02T11:04:28.561Z" 9/2/2026, 11:04:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.039
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1666
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1666
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen124
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1689
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount912
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Victorian1
Quinn14
Priya1
Nair8
Wexler2
Rust1
Bethnal1
Green1
Morris1
Voices1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Nair"
2"Wexler"
3"Morris"
4"Voices"
places
0"Bethnal"
globalScore0.732
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1689
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean38.39
std31.75
cv0.827
sampleLengths
062
144
242
314
435
537
637
776
86
91
106
1110
1258
1312
146
1554
1693
1711
1863
1915
2036
2125
223
2318
2435
258
2684
2721
2889
294
3097
317
3213
3331
3449
3593
369
3767
3825
3955
4027
41138
4216
4357
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences101
ratio0.079
matches
0"Harlow Quinn counted the rungs out of habit — she'd learned to count her way down from service transports — and stepped off into the dead station."
1"Dust hung on the platform like grey felt, and in it — footprints."
2"She walked the length of the wall, and the needle swung to keep its nose on one spot — the bricked arch — and nothing else."
3"Rust freckles fell in a line down the platform, thrown off the ceiling bolts, and among them sat rounder spots — dark, brown-black, each with a spattered edge."
4"Somebody had scrubbed them, hard, but under the flat of her torch the ghost of white lines came up out of the glaze — rings, circles inside circles, drawn in the same hand as the script on the compass face."
5"She'd photographed chalk like that once before, in the doorway of a lock-up in Bethnal Green, the night Morris—"
6"Wax pooled at the base of one pillar, and against it leaned a slate, chalked with columns of tallies, each column headed with a moon — thin crescents at one end, swelling to a fat disc at the other."
7"Quinn took the bone disc from the evidence tray and held it out on her palm — thumb-sized, carved with a spiral of small teeth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount911
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.020856201975850714
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean16.72
std15.44
cv0.923
sampleLengths
035
127
212
312
420
516
626
75
89
913
1022
1117
1210
1310
1411
1526
166
1714
1813
191
208
2129
225
236
241
256
2610
2723
2835
2912
306
314
3250
3317
345
3511
3621
3724
3815
3911
407
4110
4226
4320
448
457
4626
4710
4810
4910
95.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.594059405940594
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences66
matches
0"She turned her torch along"
1"She rose and followed her"
2"She peeled it open and"
3"Her fingers found something flat"
4"She unrolled it on her"
5"Her phone's compass put north"
6"She walked the length of"
7"She set the compass on"
8"She turned back to the"
9"It was already pulled half"
10"She walked them off."
11"She was looking past the"
12"Her thumb found the worn"
13"She'd photographed chalk like that"
14"She lowered the torch."
15"She pushed a curl behind"
16"She was already past the"
17"Her head turned"
18"She'd seen the compass in"
19"Her gaze went to the"
ratio0.333
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences66
matches
0"The ladder ran forty feet"
1"Harlow Quinn counted the rungs"
2"Work lamps on stands turned"
3"Tiles the shade of weak"
4"DS Priya Nair came along"
5"Quinn snapped the suit open."
6"Nair lifted the tape for"
7"Wexler lay face-down, one arm"
8"The pathologist crouched over him,"
9"Okonkwo told her"
10"Quinn pulled on gloves and"
11"She turned her torch along"
12"Dust hung on the platform"
13"None of them came back."
14"She rose and followed her"
15"Nair folded her arms."
16"Quinn crouched again and worked"
17"The button was still done."
18"She peeled it open and"
19"Her fingers found something flat"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.196
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.1471%