Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GWRKM50AGZRA595PBDRYGD

Run Details

Duration:
5m 42s
Cost:
$0.002886
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park locked its gates at dusk, but the fence by Pen Ponds had a gap the width of a shoulder blade, and Rory had wriggled through it enough times to manage it with her delivery satchel still on. Frost had silvered the grass. Her breath came out in short white flags, and the moon hung low and orange, streetlamp-coloured, as though it had been dipped in the city. She set off across the open ground with her collar up and the Heartstone warm against her sternum. It had been warm for three days. Warm, then pulsing, keeping a rhythm a shade off from her own heartbeat. She fished it out as she walked: deep crimson stone, silver chain, thumbnail-sized, its inner glow too faint to light her fingers. The thing was meant to wake near a Hel portal, and there was nothing Hel within a hundred miles of Richmond. "Three days." She held the stone up to the moon. "You pick now to grow opinions." Isolde would explain it. Isolde explained everything, and made it sound like Rory's fault into the bargain. Except Isolde had missed the Thursday handoff at the Golden Empress, and the Grove was the only place she went when she wanted not to be found, and she'd told Rory once — fingers closed around Rory's wrist, so there'd be no mistaking it — never after dark. "You said never after dark." Rory tucked the pendant away. "So you'd better be home, because I'm not doing this twice." The boundary oaks rose out of the frost ahead, two of them, trunks wider than doorframes, standing a few strides apart. Ten paces out she felt the change in the air — heat spilling between the trunks like an open oven door, wet and green, June-smelling in November. The frost stopped in a clean line at the edge of their shade. She stepped through. The cold ended on her skin mid-stride. Dry grass under her boots, soil warm through the leather, the air thick with the smell of cut stems. Wildflowers ran to her knees, open in the dark, white and violet and a red so deep it drank the moonlight. Above the canopy the moon sat straight overhead, white and high, when ten steps ago it had been low over the trees. "Isolde?" The grove handed the word back a heartbeat later. Her voice, near enough — except stripped. No cold in it. No Cardiff. She turned a full circle. Trunks, blooms, black netted sky. Nothing between the trees. "It's Rory. Your stone's been misbehaving and I want it off my neck." The echo came back before she finished, folding over her last word, then running on past it into silence. She stood in the middle of it and waited, and the silence waited with her, and it had a texture she didn't care for — the hush of a room where someone has stopped breathing to hear you better. She tested it. "Chromatography." Back it came, whole, perfect, hers. "Polony." Perfect again. She said nothing after that, and the grove said nothing, and her own breath sounded loud and wrong in her ears. She walked toward a flat stone at the clearing's centre — table-flat, moss on its north face, the spot where Isolde held court — and under her crunch came a second crunch, a breath behind hers. She stopped with one foot forward. The other step landed anyway. She lifted her boot. Set it down. The second one came after, half a beat late. On the third stride it stopped being late. It walked level with her, off her right shoulder, and the right side of her body knew it the way you know a hand hovering over the back of your neck. She did not look. Her thumb found the crescent scar on her wrist and pressed there, and she fixed her eyes on the flat stone and counted her strides out loud, because her own voice was better than the alternative. "Four. Five. Six." Wood complained overhead — a long creak, the sound of a bough taking weight. She looked up through the net of branches. None of them moved. One swayed at its tip in small settling arcs, the way a branch swings when something has just left it. Her phone said 23:47. She pocketed it, walked another dozen paces, checked again. 23:47. The second hand ticked against the same second, twitching in place like a moth against glass. She put it away and did not check a third time. Her shadow lay long across the flowers, thrown from behind the treeline, from a direction where no light was. That was wrong twice over — the moon overhead should have folded the shadow under her feet — and at its edge sat a second shape, thin, jointed where joints don't go, which moved when she moved and stopped when she stopped and took a breath to catch up. She raised her arm. Her shadow raised its arm. The thin one followed, late. She dropped the arm and stopped granting the edges of her vision any more glances. Every time she turned her head, shapes stood between the far trunks — tall, narrow, still as the oaks themselves — and by the time her eyes arrived they had never been there at all. "Aurora." Isolde's voice. The vowel shapes, the light lift at the end, note for note — except Isolde had never once used that name. Isolde called her Rory, or girl, or Laila when the deal was serious. "Rory." She kept her eyes on the flat stone. "Nobody in this park gets the full version." The pendant went from warm to hot. It beat against her skin, fast, a bird's heart under her collar, and the glow inside the stone had strength now, staining her shirt red through the fabric. "Aurora Carter." Both names, given and family, spoken with the care of someone reading them off the inside of her skull. "You wore it here to us." The skin between her shoulder blades pulled tight, the way it does under a stare with weight. Not one stare. Several, spaced around the clearing at even intervals, the way people stand around a thing they've caught. She backed toward the boundary oaks, counting aloud. "Three. Four. Five." She had counted five strides coming in. At six she stopped, because there were three oaks in the boundary now. The third stood in the middle of the gap she'd used, young and smooth-barked, no moss, no ivy, its bark still tight, its roots fresh-turned in the earth. The grove went still all at once. The leaf-wind overhead quit. The second footsteps — gone. Even the hush changed, dropping over everything at once, and inside it she could hear the pendant beating hot against her chest. She turned to face the clearing. Every wildflower had turned to face her. Thousands of open heads, white and violet and that deep drinking red, all of them aimed at the place where she stood, and not one of them had been facing her a moment before. The stone bit through her shirt. "There you are," came from the middle of the grove, where nothing stood.
created_at"2026-09-02T11:06:14.542Z" 9/2/2026, 11:06:14 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"silence"
2"perfect"
3"weight"
4"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1140
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Pen1
Ponds1
Rory6
Heartstone1
Hel2
Richmond2
Isolde7
Thursday1
Golden1
Empress1
Grove1
June-smelling1
November1
Cardiff1
Laila1
persons
0"Ponds"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Grove"
4"June-smelling"
5"Laila"
places
0"Park"
1"Hel"
2"Richmond"
3"Golden"
4"November"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"used that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean29.44
std22.4
cv0.761
sampleLengths
039
148
263
316
465
521
661
73
869
91
1022
1114
1213
1358
144
156
161
1723
1842
195
2055
2140
223
2346
2441
2582
2650
271
2836
2917
3035
3127
3237
338
343
3548
3638
376
3841
396
4013
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"been dipped"
1"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences94
ratio0.106
matches
0"Except Isolde had missed the Thursday handoff at the Golden Empress, and the Grove was the only place she went when she wanted not to be found, and she'd told Rory once — fingers closed around Rory's wrist, so there'd be no mistaking it — never after dark."
1"Ten paces out she felt the change in the air — heat spilling between the trunks like an open oven door, wet and green, June-smelling in November."
2"Her voice, near enough — except stripped."
3"She stood in the middle of it and waited, and the silence waited with her, and it had a texture she didn't care for — the hush of a room where someone has stopped breathing to hear you better."
4"She walked toward a flat stone at the clearing's centre — table-flat, moss on its north face, the spot where Isolde held court — and under her crunch came a second crunch, a breath behind hers."
5"Wood complained overhead — a long creak, the sound of a bough taking weight."
6"That was wrong twice over — the moon overhead should have folded the shadow under her feet — and at its edge sat a second shape, thin, jointed where joints don't go, which moved when she moved and stopped when she stopped and took a breath to catch up."
7"Every time she turned her head, shapes stood between the far trunks — tall, narrow, still as the oaks themselves — and by the time her eyes arrived they had never been there at all."
8"The vowel shapes, the light lift at the end, note for note — except Isolde had never once used that name."
9"The second footsteps — gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1134
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.027336860670194002
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001763668430335097
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.84
std11.02
cv0.858
sampleLengths
039
15
225
318
47
513
622
721
810
96
104
1113
1248
1310
1411
1521
1627
1713
183
197
2019
2121
2222
231
249
257
264
272
285
295
304
3113
3219
3339
343
351
366
371
382
3921
4036
416
425
434
443
459
468
4731
484
4936
63.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.43010752688172044
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners40
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Even the hush changed, dropping"
ratio0.013
68.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences79
matches
0"Her breath came out in"
1"She set off across the"
2"It had been warm for"
3"She fished it out as"
4"She held the stone up"
5"She stepped through."
6"Her voice, near enough —"
7"She turned a full circle."
8"She stood in the middle"
9"She tested it."
10"She said nothing after that,"
11"She walked toward a flat"
12"She stopped with one foot"
13"She lifted her boot."
14"It walked level with her,"
15"She did not look."
16"Her thumb found the crescent"
17"She looked up through the"
18"Her phone said 23:47."
19"She pocketed it, walked another"
ratio0.38
54.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences79
matches
0"Richmond Park locked its gates"
1"Frost had silvered the grass."
2"Her breath came out in"
3"She set off across the"
4"It had been warm for"
5"She fished it out as"
6"The thing was meant to"
7"She held the stone up"
8"Isolde would explain it."
9"Isolde explained everything, and made"
10"Rory tucked the pendant away"
11"The boundary oaks rose out"
12"The frost stopped in a"
13"She stepped through."
14"The cold ended on her"
15"Wildflowers ran to her knees,"
16"The grove handed the word"
17"Her voice, near enough —"
18"She turned a full circle."
19"Trunks, blooms, black netted sky."
ratio0.81
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her breath came out in short white flags, and the moon hung low and orange, streetlamp-coloured, as though it had been dipped in the city."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3865%