Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GX0FKAWMHF1YFZJ9HFGC5S

Run Details

Duration:
12m 58s
Cost:
$0.121106
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Half eleven on a wet Tuesday, and Greek Street belonged to Rory and the rain. She propped the moped under the fire escape, ducked through the green haze the sign threw across the pavement, and pushed into The Raven's Nest with steam rising off her jacket and a cancelled order in her bag. "Twenty spring rolls," she announced, setting them on the bar like tribute. "Paid for by nobody. They've been round the block twice." "They'll taste like the block." Silas took the bag anyway. He had the till open and the chairs up. Rain ran the window, and the light off the sign came through it green, so the old maps on the walls looked like they were underwater. "How's the empress?" "Short-handed. Forty-two runs and a wedding." "Barefoot?" "Helmets. Mostly." The bell over the door. Silas's head came up. His eyes went first to the bookshelf at the back of the room, then to the door. The glass in his hand went still. A muscle moved under the grey-streaked beard. The man in the doorway was wrong for the hour — long gray coat gone shiny at the cuffs, city shoes drowned through, a canvas bag held the way a man holds a bag when everything he owns fits in it. He didn't come to the bar. Customers come to the bar. He crossed to the far wall, to the photographs, and stopped in front of the one of Wenceslas Square — the November, flags and smoke and the National Museum behind it all — and laid two fingers on the frame. "You kept it." His voice had been kept somewhere dark too. "You were never a sentimental man. I used to lie awake wondering if you'd thrown Prague out with the knee." "Marek." The stranger turned. He had been a big man once — Rory could see the architecture of it, the shoulders of a wardrobe — but the filling had gone out of him, and his hands, coming out of his pockets, carried a tremor he made no attempt to hide. One pass of his eyes took in the door behind him, the bookshelf, the stairs, her, the routes out. Silas came last. "You got old." "You got thin." "Between us, one healthy man." Silas came around the bar, the left knee setting its own pace. The two of them stood in the middle of the floor like duelists who had forgotten which end of the story they were at. Silas put a hand on Marek's shoulder. Marek looked at the hand until it dropped. "Sit down. Please." Marek took the end stool, the one facing the door, which happened to be Rory's. "Forgive me." A small bow over drowned shoes. "I like the door." She swapped stools without argument. "Thirty-four years," Silas shook his head, "and you still won't turn your back on a room." "The habit outlived the reason. Most things did." Silas crouched to the low shelf of the fridge and came up with a bottle of Kozel. Rory had restocked that fridge all year. Those bottles lived in the left-hand corner, and every month a fresh one appeared and an old one vanished, and no customer had ever ordered one. He poured it into a glass and set it down. He poured a second and left it at his own side of the bar. "You still keep it." Marek turned the glass with both hands. "It sells." Marek looked down the length of the empty room. "To whom?" "You were supposed to come sooner." "I was detained." Silas's mouth moved once and settled. He hung his rag on its hook as if the hook mattered. Rory pushed the spring rolls between them, the crescent scar on her left wrist flashing past her cuff. "Full disclosure, they're cold. Everything about them is bad." Marek looked at them, then at her, then at Silas. "Yours?" "Tenant. Lives upstairs, carries noodles for the restaurant across the road, owes me three weeks of fire-escape repairs." "In Prague we would have called this fusion and hated it." He ate one. Then a second. Something in his shoulders came down a centimeter. He glanced at the window, where the sign ran green in the rain. "The Raven's Nest. You know a raven remembers a face for years? One bad turn, and the bird shuns you until it dies. Scientists with masks proved it." "That's crows." "Ravens too." He wiped his fingers, one at a time. "I had time to check." "I planned this," he touched his own chest, "for half my life. Speeches. On the bridge. In the cell. In the workshop. Whole paragraphs — some of them were good." He folded the napkin into quarters. "You know what survived all that planning?" "Say it." "One question. Did the film arrive?" "Three days later. Through Vienna, in a diplomatic bag." Silas's hand found the edge of the bar. "You pushed it into my coat and walked back toward them." Marek nodded for a long time, the way a man nods when a thing becomes true thirty-four years late. "Then it was not for nothing." "It was for nothing. By spring, half the men in those photographs had sold themselves to the Americans for a visa and a lecture circuit. You paid twelve years for a fortnight's secrets." "I paid twelve years for the act. What the act bought is the bank's business." Silas turned the silver signet ring once around his finger. "They made me sign the cable. 'Asset compromised. Contact severed.' I argued—" "You signed." "I signed." Rain filled the pause. Rory developed a deep interest in the spring-roll bag. "My lawyer got me a copy. Ninety-two." Marek's delivery stayed level, an inventory read aloud. "Of everything that was ever said about me, that page is the only thing you sent. I kept it with Klara's photographs." "I wrote to you." The polish came off Silas's voice. "Every Christmas. Some years twice." "Address?" The ring went around again. "I was in one place, Blackwood. Twelve years, one place. Very easy to find." "You were my friend before you were my handler. Klara used to say no man survives being both." "She was right." "She usually was." Silas set both hands flat on the bar. "You should hate me." "I managed it. Six years. Seven." His mouth bent without finishing the motion. "Hate keeps a man warm in there, warmer than the radiators, but it takes up the whole cell, and I needed the space. I sewed gloves. Ten thousand pairs, at least. You learn small in that work. Small hands, small voice, small hope. I got so good at small that Klara had to look twice when I came home." "Klara—" "March. Cancer, the quick kind. The kind you thank." His eyes went up to Wenceslas Square. "She kept my books and my name. Not every wife does either." He worked a telephone out of the coat and laid it flat on both palms, the way you'd offer water to a bird. The screen showed a baby, fat and furious, in a knitted hat. "Dana. My daughter. She married an Englishman — Ealing, he mends boilers. And this is Edita. Born in June." Silas looked for a long time. "She has Klara's frown." "She has opinions. Four months old, opinions about everything." The phone went back into the coat. "I came for the christening. I had one day free of grandchildren, and I spent it finding this bar. A man in Ealing found you for me in four minutes, with a telephone." He looked at the door, at the room he had mapped on arrival. "Thirty-four years. I told myself you were hidden. Service-hidden. Some nights it helped." "Excuse me a moment." Silas pressed the shelving behind the optics; a section of wall swung inward on darkness and closed behind him like the wall had never opened. Marek watched the bookshelf for a while after it had stopped being interesting. He turned to Rory. "He was the bravest man I ever met in Prague, and the most obedient. One of those got him home. You can guess which." She searched for a foothold. "He keeps your beer in the fridge. I've stocked it all year and never asked." "Don't stop." Marek lifted his glass a centimeter, a toast to the bottle. "The keeping is the brave part. The rest of him did as he was told." Silas came back with slivovitz in three small glasses. "You remember." "It's Czech." "So is that beer, and look at it." But he drank the slivovitz off in one, and it shook a cough out of him, and he covered the cough the way a man covers a bet. He looked at Rory again. "He will have told you nothing about Prague." "He tells me nothing about anything. I learn by accident." "In November, ninety, we sat in a pub on the Small Side, waiting for a signal, and I sang, and the room went quiet around me. He will tell you it was courage. It was advertising. A singing man is a trusted man." He turned his glass over on the bar, finished with it. "I haven't sung since. After the bridge I learned what fear was for, and nobody sings where they sent me." "You stopped a room, Marek." "I did." He looked at the photograph again. "That was the trouble. The room remembered me." He took up the beer in both hands and drank half of it with his eyes shut, then set the glass down soft, the way you put down something sleeping. "Still water." "It's Czech. That's the point of it." Something crossed Marek's face and was gone. "You still buy the worst beer in Europe." "You still drink like a man leaving in ten minutes." "I am." He finished the rest standing, then did the coat up to the throat, button by button, a man closing a letter. Silas came around the bar. "Take the spare room. It's made up." "No. Dana believes I'm at a hotel. It's better that I'm at a hotel." The last button. "I came for a beer. I got the beer." He walked the length of the bar. At the door he stopped, hand on the frame, eyes on the photographs for a last time. "In my head, you are still loud." "In mine you're still upright." Silas stood with his hands open at his sides. "We're both out by the same amount." "One more thing." Marek dug in the canvas bag and set something small on the end of the bar. Brass, worn smooth — a tram token, older than Rory. "They published the other half of the raven study last year. The birds remember the faces that feed them, too. They bring those ones gifts. Buttons. Bottle caps. Thirty years of buttons for one sandwich." He settled his collar against the rain. "For the beer, Blackwood. Goodnight, Silas." The door swung twice behind him. The rain took him in pieces — coat, shoulders, gray head, the reflection in the puddle. Silas stood in the middle of his empty bar. His own beer sat where he had poured it, the head gone, untouched since. Rory reached for it. "Leave it." She drew her hand back. He lifted his rag off the hook and started down the bar, glass by glass, polishing what was already clean.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.452
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1897
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1897
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"the room went quiet"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1906
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1051
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Greek1
Street1
Rory10
Raven1
Nest1
Silas19
Wenceslas2
Square2
November1
National1
Museum1
Marek12
Kozel1
Brass1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Marek"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Raven"
3"Wenceslas"
globalScore0.596
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they were underwater"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1906
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"restocked that fridge"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean19.06
std19.86
cv1.042
sampleLengths
053
122
248
36
41
52
65
735
892
93
108
1120
121
1371
143
153
165
1751
183
1915
2012
215
2216
238
2450
2524
2611
272
289
292
306
313
3218
3327
3410
351
3618
3766
382
3915
4043
412
426
4328
4419
456
4633
4715
4810
4912
97.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"been kept"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
34.36% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences158
ratio0.038
matches
0"The man in the doorway was wrong for the hour — long gray coat gone shiny at the cuffs, city shoes drowned through, a canvas bag held the way a man holds a bag when everything he owns fits in it."
1"He crossed to the far wall, to the photographs, and stopped in front of the one of Wenceslas Square — the November, flags and smoke and the National Museum behind it all — and laid two fingers on the frame."
2"He had been a big man once — Rory could see the architecture of it, the shoulders of a wardrobe — but the filling had gone out of him, and his hands, coming out of his pockets, carried a tremor he made no attempt to hide."
3"\"Excuse me a moment.\" Silas pressed the shelving behind the optics; a section of wall swung inward on darkness and closed behind him like the wall had never opened."
4"Brass, worn smooth — a tram token, older than Rory."
5"The rain took him in pieces — coat, shoulders, gray head, the reflection in the puddle."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02480916030534351
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean12.06
std10.76
cv0.892
sampleLengths
015
138
212
310
410
59
626
73
86
91
102
115
124
1317
147
157
1641
176
185
1940
203
218
2220
231
243
2546
2619
273
283
293
305
3112
3224
337
348
353
3615
378
384
395
4016
418
4217
437
4426
4510
4614
4711
482
499
53.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.36075949367088606
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners57
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then a second."
ratio0.011
76.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences89
matches
0"She propped the moped under"
1"she announced, setting them on"
2"He had the till open"
3"His eyes went first to"
4"He didn't come to the"
5"He crossed to the far"
6"His voice had been kept"
7"He had been a big"
8"She swapped stools without argument."
9"He poured it into a"
10"He poured a second and"
11"He hung his rag on"
12"He ate one"
13"He glanced at the window,"
14"He wiped his fingers, one"
15"he touched his own chest,"
16"His mouth bent without finishing"
17"His eyes went up to"
18"He worked a telephone out"
19"He looked at the door,"
ratio0.36
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences89
matches
0"Half eleven on a wet"
1"She propped the moped under"
2"she announced, setting them on"
3"Silas took the bag anyway"
4"He had the till open"
5"Rain ran the window, and"
6"The bell over the door."
7"Silas's head came up."
8"His eyes went first to"
9"The glass in his hand"
10"A muscle moved under the"
11"The man in the doorway"
12"He didn't come to the"
13"Customers come to the bar."
14"He crossed to the far"
15"His voice had been kept"
16"The stranger turned."
17"He had been a big"
18"Silas came last."
19"Silas came around the bar,"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He hung his rag on its hook as if the hook mattered."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she announced (announce)"
1"Silas pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.022
leniency0.043
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.043
84.8633%