| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "streaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1239 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.59% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1010 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Friday | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Rory | 12 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.906 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like fingers" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1239 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 29.5 | | std | 23.79 | | cv | 0.807 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 106 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 96 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Cold went through them first — deep-water pressure that popped her ears — and then the cold broke, and Aurora Carter stepped out of the rift into warmth." | | 1 | "No sun hung anywhere to take the credit — no sun, no moon, only a glow that came from everywhere at once, the way heat comes off an oven door." | | 2 | "Nyx poured up out of the vine shadows a moment later — blackness gathering into a tall silhouette, violet eyes kindling." | | 3 | "Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone beat — a warm, patient pulse, quicker than her own heart." | | 4 | "Around them the vineyard curved away over the shoulder of a hill, row after row, the trunks older than any church Rory had ever seen — black, twisted, muscular with age." | | 5 | "Beneath every sound — the bees, the wind, the creak of old wood — ran a hum, low and endless, like a bell struck long ago that had never finished ringing." | | 6 | "A bell had begun to toll somewhere below — one stroke, bronze-heavy, rolling up the hill — and the whole valley stopped mid-motion." | | 7 | "The terraces began where the vineyard ended — black stone walls worn round by centuries of hands, steps cut into each wall's spine." | | 8 | "Steam curled out from beneath and reached toward her — reached, unfolding into something like fingers." | | 9 | "Smoke stood over a city on the valley floor — chimneys in ranks like organ pipes, the smoke rising from them in slow gold ropes that never scattered." | | 10 | "The gem's warmth waned when she faced away from the valley; when she turned back, it flared, pulsing quick as a startled bird, pulling toward the smoking city." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1003 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.024925224327018942 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0019940179461615153 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 11.8 | | std | 8.08 | | cv | 0.685 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 82.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5142857142857142 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind quit, the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled, absurd as it" | | 1 | "Their whisper came from everywhere," | | 2 | "She drew out the silver" | | 3 | "It hovered over the nearest" | | 4 | "They followed the rows downhill." | | 5 | "Her mouth flooded." | | 6 | "Her stomach roared loud enough" | | 7 | "She got the Fae blade" | | 8 | "She used that cold like" | | 9 | "Her voice shook, and she" | | 10 | "She turned a slow circle," |
| | ratio | 0.141 | |
| 81.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The warmth smelled of browned" | | 1 | "It smelled, absurd as it" | | 2 | "Amber, all the way up." | | 3 | "Darker bands drifted through it," | | 4 | "Rory's breath came back to" | | 5 | "Isolde turned a slow circle," | | 6 | "Nyx poured up out of" | | 7 | "Their whisper came from everywhere," | | 8 | "Rory's hand had gone to" | | 9 | "She drew out the silver" | | 10 | "The crimson gem lay on" | | 11 | "Isolde leaned close without bending" | | 12 | "Grapes hung garnet-dark and fat" | | 13 | "The soil between the rows" | | 14 | "A bee droned past Rory's" | | 15 | "The thing was the size" | | 16 | "It hovered over the nearest" | | 17 | "Isolde told her" | | 18 | "They followed the rows downhill." | | 19 | "Knives on boards." |
| | ratio | 0.756 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Cold went through them first — deep-water pressure that popped her ears — and then the cold broke, and Aurora Carter stepped out of the rift into warmth." | | 1 | "Nothing but the steam moving, and the wine in every goblet trembling, as if the table itself were breathing." | | 2 | "And on the far ridge, catching all that sourceless light, a palace gleamed, its towers and balustrades shaped like pulled sugar, its walls dripping in places in…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.029 | | leniency | 0.059 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |