Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GX57B2XZFQ1Y9E619BT0AB

Run Details

Duration:
6m 32s
Cost:
$0.003270
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain caught at six inches and there he was, filling the gap with rain and expensive wool — charcoal shoulders darkened to ink, platinum hair still swept back, a manila folder tucked under one arm. "No." "Aurora." "I'm not letting you in." "Then we conduct this through the gap, and half of Brick Lane enjoys it with their vindaloo." Water ran off the end of his nose. "Eva's in Cambridge until Friday. I know. I checked. That's either romantic or the most sinister thing anyone has ever said to you, and you'll have to open the door to find out which." Her knuckles whitened on the chain. Cardamom and fried onion drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below, warm and stupid, the smell of every ordinary evening she'd spent here while her life sat in pieces. The chain rattled loose. Lucien stepped over the threshold and Ptolemy abandoned all feline dignity to pour himself around the man's ankle. He set the ivory cane against Eva's tower of scrolls — out of arm's reach, she noted. The blade sleeps by the door. "Traitor." She glared at the cat. "Six weeks." He straightened, dripping onto Eva's rug. "Forty-one days." "Forty-two. You left on a Tuesday." Her jaw tightened. "Don't." "I've hated Tuesdays since. It's ruined a perfectly good delivery schedule." "Do not stand in Eva's flat and make jokes about deliveries." "Then let's be accurate instead." He unbuttoned his coat. Only the shoulders had taken the rain. "You found a folder with my handwriting on it and you went down the fire stairs rather than ask me one question." "I read enough." Her voice came out flat, a door closing. "My father's chambers. Evan's new address. Photographs of me carrying chow mein through Soho like a job you were running. And page three." She shoved her sleeve up. The crescent scar sat pale on her left wrist. "You wrote down my scar, Lucien. I've lied about that scar to everyone I've met since I was nine, and yours was in a locked drawer." He looked at her wrist the way men look at a wound they didn't make and can't take back. "Was I a job?" Her hands curled into fists. "Every Tuesday. Every favour. The whole — whatever it was. Were you building a file?" "Four months." "What?" "You'd been delivering to my office four months before that folder existed." He crossed onto the rug, water marking it. "The first Tuesday you got lost between floors and told the lift exactly what you thought of it. In Welsh. I paid Silas to teach me the words afterwards, and Silas overcharged me, and none of them were appropriate for a man of my standing." The laugh climbed halfway up her chest before she killed it. "You ordered the number thirty-four." She jabbed a finger at him. "Extra chili oil. You told Silas the Golden Empress was inedible. Yu-Fei heard about it. She nearly banned the address." "Silas asked, and lying to Silas is a full-time occupation I already hold." His eyes didn't leave her face — one brass, one jet. "I also ordered the number thirty-four every Tuesday for four months. It's greasy. The chili oil is a war crime. I intend to order it again this week, if you'll let me." "You hated it." "Immensely." "Then the folder." He lifted the manila thing under his arm. "A broker in Whitechapel put Malphora on a table last spring. Two other bidders. One collects debts. The other isn't strictly alive. I bought it before breakfast and paid a sum that would embarrass you." "And kept it." "Burning it changes nothing. Copies breed. Keeping it meant knowing where it was, every hour of every day — a service I provide other people and had never needed for myself." "In your desk." "Under lock." "Which I opened." "You were looking for a pen." Something crossed his face, quick and gone. "I had three versions of the truth drafted for that evening. Short, medium, and honest. You were down the fire stairs before I could use any of them." "And after?" "After, I told myself the file protected you better than an explanation would. I told myself often enough that I nearly believed it." He closed the last two feet between them. Rain, cold wool, cold air. "I'm a coward, Aurora. I'm impeccably dressed about it, but there it is." She should step back. She had the whole rug to retreat across and forty-one days of practice at being furious. "Why now?" "Because I've watched you leave twice in your life." His voice dropped. "I wasn't going to stand in the street and watch for a third." He held the folder out. "It's the only copy. No ledger entry, no second buyer — cash, and the receipt is ash. It's yours. Burn it, shred it, line the cat's tray with it. The moment it's in your hands it stops being leverage, and I would rather it be paper than a thing between us." She took it. The card was soft at the corners, one edge rain-warped. He'd carried it through weather like this before. She opened it. Photographs first, her life reduced to grainy squares: the restaurant door, the bar, Brick Lane. Then the typed description block — height five-six, hair black, eyes blue, bright blue, someone had underlined it twice — and across the top of page three, in his neat slanted hand, beneath a photograph of her laughing outside a curry house with two bags of food she'd delivered to the wrong door: Aurora. Not for sale. "You wrote that." Her voice split on the second word. "Six weeks ago. It's the only sentence in that folder I don't regret." The folder bent in her grip. She read it twice and let him watch her do it, because hiding from Lucien Moreau had never once worked. "Tell me to go." His hand rose and stopped short of her jaw, hovering. "I'll go. I'll hate every staircase in this city on the way down, but I'll go." "You'd go?" "I'd go." "I should tell you to." She could hear her own breathing over the curry house vents. "I should tell you to, burn this, change the locks, and never order the number thirty-four again." "You should." She closed the distance instead. His mouth was cold from the rain. The folder hit the rug. Her fist found his lapel and stayed, and his hands landed at last — one at her jaw, careful of nothing now, the other sliding into her black hair — and somewhere the cane clattered against Eva's scrolls and neither of them cared. Kissing Lucien Moreau, it turned out, was like arguing with him: infuriating, meticulous, and over far too soon when he drew back an inch, forehead against hers. "Forty-two days." His lips moved against her brow. "Forty-one." "You left on a Tuesday." "I'm back on one." Ptolemy yowled from the counter and headbutted an empty bowl hard enough to rattle the scrolls. "He's hungry." She kept her fist in the lapel. "You're paying for dinner." "Number thirty-four?" "Extra chili oil." She pulled his mouth back down to hers, and the door didn't matter anymore. It was already shut, the chain swinging unused against the wood.
created_at"2026-09-02T11:13:07.948Z" 9/2/2026, 11:13:07 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"sinister"
count1
highlights
0"sinister"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount581
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Eva3
Rain1
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora1
Lucien3
Moreau2
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1219
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean19.05
std21.01
cv1.103
sampleLengths
036
11
21
35
459
538
64
741
86
98
102
116
124
1311
1411
1538
1674
1719
1824
192
201
2165
2211
2331
2456
253
261
2746
283
2931
303
312
323
3341
342
3549
3620
372
3825
395
4051
4121
423
4368
444
4510
4613
4726
4830
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
61.11% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs96
matches
0"was, filling"
1"was like arguing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences96
ratio0.052
matches
0"The chain caught at six inches and there he was, filling the gap with rain and expensive wool — charcoal shoulders darkened to ink, platinum hair still swept back, a manila folder tucked under one arm."
1"He set the ivory cane against Eva's tower of scrolls — out of arm's reach, she noted."
2"\"Silas asked, and lying to Silas is a full-time occupation I already hold.\" His eyes didn't leave her face — one brass, one jet."
3"Then the typed description block — height five-six, hair black, eyes blue, bright blue, someone had underlined it twice — and across the top of page three, in his neat slanted hand, beneath a photograph of her laughing outside a curry house with two bags of food she'd delivered to the wrong door:"
4"Her fist found his lapel and stayed, and his hands landed at last — one at her jaw, careful of nothing now, the other sliding into her black hair — and somewhere the cane clattered against Eva's scrolls and neither of them cared."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount577
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.029462738301559793
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0017331022530329288
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.7
std11.83
cv0.932
sampleLengths
036
11
21
35
425
534
66
732
84
918
1017
116
126
138
142
156
163
171
1811
1911
209
217
2222
2311
2428
259
2626
2719
289
2915
302
311
3220
3345
3411
3511
3620
3724
3832
393
401
4111
4235
433
4431
453
462
473
4813
4928
70.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Only the shoulders had taken"
1"Then the typed description block"
ratio0.038
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences52
matches
0"Her knuckles whitened on the"
1"He set the ivory cane"
2"She glared at the cat"
3"He straightened, dripping onto Eva's"
4"Her jaw tightened."
5"He unbuttoned his coat"
6"Her voice came out flat,"
7"She shoved her sleeve up"
8"He looked at her wrist"
9"Her hands curled into fists"
10"He crossed onto the rug,"
11"She jabbed a finger at"
12"His eyes didn't leave her"
13"He lifted the manila thing"
14"He closed the last two"
15"She should step back."
16"She had the whole rug"
17"His voice dropped"
18"He held the folder out."
19"She took it."
ratio0.635
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences52
matches
0"The chain caught at six"
1"Water ran off the end"
2"Her knuckles whitened on the"
3"Cardamom and fried onion drifted"
4"The chain rattled loose."
5"Lucien stepped over the threshold"
6"He set the ivory cane"
7"The blade sleeps by the"
8"She glared at the cat"
9"He straightened, dripping onto Eva's"
10"Her jaw tightened."
11"He unbuttoned his coat"
12"Her voice came out flat,"
13"She shoved her sleeve up"
14"The crescent scar sat pale"
15"He looked at her wrist"
16"Her hands curled into fists"
17"He crossed onto the rug,"
18"The laugh climbed halfway up"
19"She jabbed a finger at"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He crossed, water marking it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.2281%