Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GX5R72YGR4RWWF2833NQSB

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Duration:
9m 8s
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$0.082852
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Z.AI

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"If Eva's eaten my bhuna on the stairs, she's funding my next three orders." I opened the door with the fork still in my hand, stopped at the chain, and forgot the curry existed. The corridor bulb did its dying flicker, and each stutter handed me another piece of him. A charcoal shoulder, damp at the seam. An ivory-handled cane. One amber eye and one black one, both fixed on me with the patience of a creditor. My hand stayed on the chain a beat too long. I closed the door. "Aurora." Only Lucien used the whole name. Even the tax office settled for Rory. "Wrong flat, Frenchman." "Your name is on the buzzer. Also, your bulb has died, and your staircase is acquiring a small red decoration." A soft tap against the boards. Then another. I pressed my eye to the peephole and there he stood, warped into a fishbowled stranger, his left hand held away from his body while something dark crept off his fingertips and tapped the floor. Tap. Tap. "You're bleeding on Silas's stairs." "It's largely someone else's." Damn him. I slid the chain off and hauled the door wide. He moved past me and the flat shrank around him. One room, a kitchenette, hops and fryer oil rising through the boards from the bar below. My thermal delivery bag slumped against the counter with its golden dragon, a bicycle wheel soaking in the bathtub, three weeks of Eva's library haul stacked sideways on the windowsill. His jacket went over the chair back, one hole punched clean through the sleeve. He catalogued the whole flat in a glance, and I hated that I watched him do it. "The Golden Empress." He read the bag upside down. "The underworld's loss is crispy duck's gain." "Noodles to the fourth floor. Vicious territory." I jabbed the fork at the kitchen chair. "Sit. Sleeve up." From the cupboard above the sink I pulled the first aid kit I kept for bike crashes, the one with the proper suture needles, and put the kettle on for something to do with my hands. He rolled his cuff. The gash ran along the outside of his forearm, shallow at the wrist, deep near the elbow. A blade mark. Recent. My stomach rolled with it, and I blamed the copper in the air. "Antiseptic first. This will sting." "It generally does." "When did you last have a tetanus jab?" "My blood objects to vaccination on principle. Half of it comes from Avaros. The needle would sulk." He didn't flinch at the iodine. He flinched when my knee braced against his thigh to hold his arm still, one breath pulled through his teeth, gone before I could decide if I'd invented it. His skin ran fever-warm. When I leaned in for the first stitch, his black eye caught the lamp and held a spark of it, red, a coal floating in oil. I looked away and tied the knot. "Talk." "Voss is alive." The needle stopped above his skin. "Voss is dead. His own guardians dragged him under when the ledger left that vault. You told me nothing walks away from there." "Something did. Someone paid his account from the outside, and the collectors released him to rebalance the books." I pushed the needle through while he spoke, and he watched my hands instead of the wound. "He has been retracing the job. Yusuf went first. Then the Kavanagh twins. He found me tonight outside the Bell and Bone." "The twins are dead?" "Balanced." He said it the way a bank clerk says settled. "So you're the fifth, and you came to hide behind a delivery driver. Flattering." "No." His good hand caught my wrist, thumb finding the small crescent scar there without looking, a habit I never gave him permission to learn. "You are the account, chérie. Malphora's name runs through every page that survived. Your palm opened the clasp. Your blood signed it." The needle slipped. A fresh bead of blood welled beside the stitch line, and he didn't so much as blink. I pulled my wrist free and threaded a new needle. "Then burn the pages." "We tried. By morning the ash had reassembled on my desk. In order." "What happens if he catches me?" "Yusuf kept a shop in Deptford. The shop is still trading. Yusuf isn't in it." Cold walked up my arms. I'd picked the name Malphora off a graveyard stone when I was nineteen and stupid, and it had followed me here, to a flat above a bar, to a man I'd sworn was behind me. "You're the broker. Broker something. Sell my debt to a bigger fish, that's your whole industry." "There is no bigger fish. There is only the arithmetic, and the arithmetic is short one signature." I tied the last knot and cut the thread. Silence did its work while I taped the dressing down. He watched me with both wrong-coloured eyes, and under the copper and iodine I caught the rest of him, bergamot and cigarette smoke, the exact scent of a city I'd promised myself I'd forget. "You look well," he said, and it sounded like it cost him. "Nine months of cardio and nobody shooting at me. Suits me." "Nine months." He turned his cuff button in his fingers. "I considered an apology, but you'd have auctioned it." "You'd know. You auction everything." The kettle climbed towards its whistle. "There was an envelope on your pillow." My spine went cold in the warm room. I lifted the kettle off the heat before it could scream. "I don't take payment, Lucien." "So I gathered. It was sealed when I got back. I'd gone out for croissants." The clock over the stove ticked into the quiet. Somewhere below, the bar's bass thudded through my feet, and nine months of a grudge shifted under me like a loose floorboard. "It was a key," he said. "To what?" "Two rooms above the Vieux-Port. Third floor. Morning light across the whole bed. I signed the lease that morning while you slept." I poured two mugs without asking. He took his black, no sugar. I'd remembered that with my whole body, and I resented every nerve that had kept the file. "You could have found me before tonight. You find people for a living." "Eight months, three forged deaths and one small war in Lambeth." His knuckles had gone white around the ivory handle. "And I still stood at the bottom of your stairs for an hour, deciding whether I'd earned the climb." "You speak four languages, Lucien. You had nine months and four languages." "I left at dawn to buy you bread." Each word dropped flat and separate, like coins on a counter. The music below died mid-song. The silence came up through the floorboards, huge. Lucien's head tilted, animal-quick, and the warmth left the room. Footsteps on the stairs. Heavy, unhurried, landing flat. "Eva knocks like a woodpecker with a grudge." I kept it under my breath. "Correct. And Silas climbs on his heel. This tread belongs to neither." The cane twisted in his grip. The handle slid, and a thin blade came free with a sound like a held breath released. Two fingers at my hip moved me behind him, gentle and absolute, and my eyes went to the door, to the chain hanging loose against the frame. I hadn't put it back on. Three knocks. Measured. Courteous. "Aurora Carter." The voice through the wood was soft and unhurried, older than the building, and its accent came from no city I could name. "We would like a word about Marseille." Lucien's lips barely moved. "Two of them." "One of them knows my name." "That would be the one on your stairs. The window above the bath drops onto the fire escape. When I say run, you run, and you do not look back at this door." Below us, the bar's front door gave its two-note chime. Silas's welcome climbed and died halfway through. My hand found the knife block at my back and closed around the handle. Then glass. A whole shelf of it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.453
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"stomach"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"footsteps"
5"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1359
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions6
wordCount860
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien3
Rory1
Eva1
Malphora1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like it cost him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1359
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"hated that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean19.14
std18.18
cv0.95
sampleLengths
014
120
243
314
41
513
63
720
845
95
104
1112
1287
1316
1418
1574
165
173
188
1917
2072
211
223
236
2423
2557
264
2711
2814
2947
3030
314
3213
336
3415
3540
3616
3717
3853
3912
4011
4119
425
436
447
4519
465
4715
4831
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences120
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.015011547344110854
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0023094688221709007
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean11.33
std8.73
cv0.771
sampleLengths
014
120
216
37
43
517
610
74
81
96
107
113
1220
136
142
1535
161
171
185
194
202
2110
2210
2316
2430
2514
2617
279
287
2915
303
3136
324
3317
343
351
3613
375
383
398
4017
416
4229
434
4426
457
461
473
486
4923
69.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"Only Lucien used the whole"
1"Even the tax office settled"
2"Somewhere below, the bar's bass"
ratio0.043
17.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences69
matches
0"I opened the door with"
1"My hand stayed on the"
2"I closed the door."
3"I pressed my eye to"
4"I slid the chain off"
5"He moved past me and"
6"My thermal delivery bag slumped"
7"His jacket went over the"
8"He catalogued the whole flat"
9"He read the bag upside"
10"I jabbed the fork at"
11"He rolled his cuff."
12"My stomach rolled with it,"
13"He didn't flinch at the"
14"He flinched when my knee"
15"His skin ran fever-warm."
16"I looked away and tied"
17"I pushed the needle through"
18"He said it the way"
19"His good hand caught my"
ratio0.507
39.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences69
matches
0"I opened the door with"
1"The corridor bulb did its"
2"A charcoal shoulder, damp at"
3"An ivory-handled cane."
4"My hand stayed on the"
5"I closed the door."
6"A soft tap against the"
7"I pressed my eye to"
8"I slid the chain off"
9"He moved past me and"
10"My thermal delivery bag slumped"
11"His jacket went over the"
12"He catalogued the whole flat"
13"He read the bag upside"
14"I jabbed the fork at"
15"He rolled his cuff."
16"The gash ran along the"
17"A blade mark."
18"My stomach rolled with it,"
19"He didn't flinch at the"
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I pushed (push)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.151
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.038
90.0075%