Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5934PDZ9F96609XC6VJP9

Run Details

Duration:
45.4s
Cost:
$0.000430
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tape across the station entrance flapped in the wind off Camden High Street, and Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under it without breaking stride. The old Tube station hadn't seen passengers since the eighties. Now it had a body. DC Ferro caught up with her on the stairs, torch beam jittering over tiles furred with soot. "You're going to want to see this before the techs trample it any worse." "How many techs?" "Four." "Then it's already trampled." Quinn's boots found the bottom step. The platform stretched out in the dark, and somewhere past the tiled arch at the far end, somebody had strung work lights. Their glare pooled yellow on the concrete. The dead man lay in the middle of that light, on his back, arms at his sides like a man in a display case. Expensive coat. One shoe missing. Face calm to the point of serenity. "Callum Marsh, forty-seven. Property developer. Wife reported him missing nine days ago." "Nine days." Quinn crouched at the edge of the light, hands in her pockets, and let her eyes do the walking. "So he's been down here since at least Tuesday." "Guessing so." "Guessing is how innocent people go to prison." She leaned closer. No bloating. No smell beyond the station's own damp-iron breath. A body nine days dead in a warm, enclosed space should have announced itself to half of Camden. Ferro crouched beside her. "Cold down here. Slows things." "Not this much. Not unless he was refrigerated, and there's no fridge in an abandoned station." Quinn circled the body slow. "Look at his hands. Clean. A man who crawls into a derelict tunnel picks up filth. His soles — well, sole. Where's the other shoe?" "Dog walker found it a mile off, near the canal. That's what puts him here, trail leading down." "Or someone walked that shoe along the canal and dropped it for us to find." Quinn stopped at the man's head. "And this. Look at the hairline. There's a dust shadow, an outline, like he wore something over his face. A hood, maybe. Or a mask." "Kidnappers hood their victims. Not news." "Then they kept the hood on for nine days and fed him, because there's no lividity on the face and no petechiae from suffocation." She straightened. "He wasn't strangled, smothered, stabbed, or shot, and there's no bruising at the wrists or ankles. Nobody held this man against his will. He sat down and died." Ferro shone her torch along the platform, over to the arch at the far end. Chalk marks climbed the tiles there — a spiral of them, careful and repeated, worn glossy in places like a door handle. "Ferro. How long has that been there?" "Techs think it's old. Street art." "Street art doesn't get polished." Quinn walked to the arch and ran her thumb along one of the marks. White, waxy, half worn away, and beneath the chalk the tile itself was discoloured — heat damage, the kind you see on the back of a toaster. The whole spiral had been baked into the wall a few degrees at a time, over and over. "Something came through here. Repeatedly." "Through a wall." "Through an arch in a station that closed forty years ago, where a man in a good coat sat down, took off one shoe, put something over his face, and died with a smile." She turned back to the body. "What's in his pockets?" "Ferro handed her an evidence bag: a wallet, cash untouched. A folding knife, expensive, never used. And a brass disc the size of a pocket watch, green with age, glass scratched nearly opaque. "What's this, a compass?" Quinn tipped it into her palm through the bag. The needle under the scratched glass should have been rattling loose or stuck. Instead it held steady, dead level, pointing not north but sideways — straight through the tiled wall of the arch, into solid earth. "That's broken." "That's pointing." Quinn turned a slow half circle. The needle swung with her, always insisting on the same patch of wall. She looked at the chalk spiral, then the compass, then the spiral again. "Whoever he was, he wasn't down here to vandalise. He came with an instrument to find something, and then he found it." "A hole in a wall." "Nine days missing and no decomposition, which means either our pathologist is about to embarrass herself or time moved differently for him down here. Take your pick." "You're talking like a nutter, guv." "I'm talking like someone who's read the file on the Holloway case. Remember it? Three years ago. My partner found what was left of DS Morris under similar conditions, and I spent eighteen months being told the evidence didn't add up because I was emotional and grieving." Her watch glinted as she crouched again, checking the dead man's wrist. Nothing. Left wrist bare, right wrist bare — except for a pale band of skin, wider than a watch, lower down, closer to the hand. "He wore something on his arm. Removed before death or after. Not a watch — wrong placement." "Robbery?" "Robbers don't take a bracelet and leave four hundred quid." The needle of the compass twitched. Quinn felt it through the bag more than saw it — a tremor, like a dog waking. She held it flat and watched the needle swing a hard right, toward the stairs, toward the street, then stop mid-arc and steady on a new heading: deeper into the station, down the dead tunnel past the arch. "It's tracking something. It was tracking the wall, and now it's tracking something that moved." "Guv—" "Get everyone away from that tunnel. Now." Quinn was already walking, compass flat in her palm like a waiter's towel. "And put a call through to the British Museum. Restricted archives. Ask for anyone who studies—" She paused at the mouth of the dead tunnel, where the air ran colder than it should and smelled faintly of struck matches. "—ask for anyone who studies things that shouldn't exist." Ferro's radio crackled behind her, and far down the black throat of the tunnel, the needle swung again — toward something coming.
created_at"2026-09-02T13:35:03.326Z" 9/2/2026, 1:35:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.043
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1027
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1027
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences43
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1034
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount575
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Tube1
Ferro4
White1
Take1
Remember1
Morris1
British1
Museum1
Restricted1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Ferro"
3"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"British"
4"Museum"
5"Restricted"
globalScore0.717
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.967
wordCount1034
matches
0"not north but sideways"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean25.85
std22.51
cv0.871
sampleLengths
024
132
214
33
41
539
636
712
830
92
1039
119
1246
1318
1446
156
1654
1737
187
196
2069
213
2244
2333
2449
252
2656
275
2827
296
30101
311
3210
3361
3415
351
3636
3723
389
3922
88.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences43
matches
0"been baked"
1"being told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs86
matches
0"was tracking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences71
ratio0.099
matches
0"Chalk marks climbed the tiles there — a spiral of them, careful and repeated, worn glossy in places like a door handle."
1"White, waxy, half worn away, and beneath the chalk the tile itself was discoloured — heat damage, the kind you see on the back of a toaster."
2"\"What's this, a compass?\" Quinn tipped it into her palm through the bag. The needle under the scratched glass should have been rattling loose or stuck. Instead it held steady, dead level, pointing not north but sideways — straight through the tiled wall of the arch, into solid earth."
3"Not a watch — wrong placement.\""
4"The needle of the compass twitched. Quinn felt it through the bag more than saw it — a tremor, like a dog waking. She held it flat and watched the needle swing a hard right, toward the stairs, toward the street, then stop mid-arc and steady on a new heading: deeper into the station, down the dead tunnel past the arch."
5"\"—ask for anyone who studies things that shouldn't exist.\""
6"Ferro's radio crackled behind her, and far down the black throat of the tunnel, the needle swung again — toward something coming."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount469
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.014925373134328358
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0021321961620469083
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean14.56
std13.95
cv0.958
sampleLengths
024
110
25
317
414
53
61
710
822
97
1024
112
123
137
1412
1521
169
172
1811
192
208
2118
224
235
2421
2525
2618
2721
2825
296
3026
3128
3215
3322
347
356
3619
3727
3818
395
403
4140
424
4333
4449
452
4643
4713
485
4924
91.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.676056338028169
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences37
matches
0"Their glare pooled yellow on"
1"She leaned closer"
2"She turned back to the"
3"He came with an instrument"
4"My partner found what was"
5"It was tracking the wall,"
6"She paused at the mouth"
ratio0.189
95.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences37
matches
0"The tape across the station"
1"The old Tube station hadn't"
2"DC Ferro caught up with"
3"Quinn's boots found the bottom"
4"The platform stretched out in"
5"Their glare pooled yellow on"
6"The dead man lay in"
7"Quinn crouched at the edge"
8"She leaned closer"
9"A body nine days dead"
10"Ferro crouched beside her."
11"Quinn circled the body slow"
12"Quinn stopped at the man's"
13"Ferro shone her torch along"
14"Chalk marks climbed the tiles"
15"Quinn walked to the arch"
16"The whole spiral had been"
17"She turned back to the"
18"Quinn tipped it into her"
19"Quinn turned a slow half"
ratio0.73
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences37
matches
0"Now it had a body."
ratio0.027
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.5789%