| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "charm" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1093 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1012 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.2 | | worstName | "Hel" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | December | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Hel" | | 1 | "December" | | 2 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like something eating the sound" | | 1 | "appeared eventually, squat and moss-backed in the moonless light, but my skin had crawled up my arms by then, and the count kept running in my head like a meter that wouldn't stop ticking" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1093 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 28.76 | | std | 25.07 | | cv | 0.872 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 101 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 45 |
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| 94.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "gets passed" | | 2 | "been written" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1015 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.0374384236453202 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007881773399014778 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 10.12 | | std | 10.15 | | cv | 1.003 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 81.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5185185185185185 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Then another, moving against the" | | 1 | "Then the flowers changed." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "I stopped at the boundary" | | 1 | "I told myself" | | 2 | "I'd done stranger things for" | | 3 | "I walked the winding path" | | 4 | "I reached sixty." | | 5 | "I pulled the bundle free," | | 6 | "It shifted against my palm," | | 7 | "I hissed and clapped my" | | 8 | "I looked around the clearing." | | 9 | "I reminded myself, and reached" | | 10 | "I stayed crouched, very still," | | 11 | "I straightened slowly." | | 12 | "My mouth went dry." | | 13 | "I wrapped the bundle tight" | | 14 | "I saw nothing, but the" | | 15 | "I backed toward the stones." | | 16 | "I stopped running." | | 17 | "My thighs shook, my breath" | | 18 | "Its outline hurt to follow," | | 19 | "It took one step into" |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against" | | 1 | "I stopped at the boundary" | | 2 | "The oak standing stones rose" | | 3 | "Wildflowers in December." | | 4 | "I told myself" | | 5 | "Isolde had asked me to" | | 6 | "I'd done stranger things for" | | 7 | "The grass swallowed my footsteps." | | 8 | "That was the Grove's trick," | | 9 | "Tonight it felt like something" | | 10 | "I walked the winding path" | | 11 | "Time behaved strangely here." | | 12 | "An hour inside could cost" | | 13 | "I reached sixty." | | 14 | "The stone appeared eventually, squat" | | 15 | "I pulled the bundle free," | | 16 | "It shifted against my palm," | | 17 | "The pendant burned." | | 18 | "I hissed and clapped my" | | 19 | "I looked around the clearing." |
| | ratio | 0.705 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against my collarbone before I crossed the stones, which was wrong, because it only did that near Hel portals." | | 1 | "I'd done stranger things for the old woman, and she paid in truths that kept me alive, so here I was, stepping between the stones while my breath fogged and the…" | | 2 | "I walked the winding path past the hawthorn, past the pool that reflected stars the sky above didn't have, and counted my heartbeats the way Isolde had taught m…" | | 3 | "The stone appeared eventually, squat and moss-backed in the moonless light, but my skin had crawled up my arms by then, and the count kept running in my head li…" | | 4 | "Old-fashioned, the kind of tune that gets passed down by grandmothers and never written down." | | 5 | "A whole line of them, white heads turning, tracking something I couldn't see, following it across the clearing like sunflowers following a sun that wasn't there…" | | 6 | "I wrapped the bundle tight and pushed it into the inside pocket of my coat, next to the pendant, which had gone cold as a coin now, sulking." | | 7 | "Then another, moving against the wind, moving toward the centre, as if something under the water had exhaled." | | 8 | "Behind me the humming resumed, cheerful now, almost jaunty, and joined by a second voice, and then a third, harmonies stacking on a melody that had never been w…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |