Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5A9WWZSJ7BGRCQBEX44Z4

Run Details

Duration:
44.5s
Cost:
$0.000395
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant pulsed the moment Rory stepped between the standing stones. She stopped, hand pressed flat against the nearest oak. The bark was warm. Alive-warm, like a sleeping animal's flank, though the October night had a bite to it and her breath came out in small white ghosts. Above her, the oaks closed ranks, their canopy stitched so tight that the sky showed only in coins and slivers, starlight leaking through like water through a cracked ceiling. "Okay," she said. Her voice fell flat, swallowed by the grass. "Okay, Laila. In, find the ring, out. Twenty minutes, tops." The Heartstone sat against her sternum, deep crimson and faintly luminous, beating like a second heart. It had done nothing for three weeks. Not when she'd walked past the abandoned tube station. Not when she'd taken Yu-Fei's deliveries to the creepy house on Ladbroke Grove. Only here, in the Grove, did it wake up — which meant Hel's reach stretched into this pocket between worlds, and that meant answers. Maybe Eva's answers. Maybe her own. The wildflowers glowed. Not metaphorically. Small white blooms carpeted the clearing floor, and each one carried a soft phosphorescence, pale as drowned moonlight. Rory crouched and touched one. Cold. The light didn't dim under her fingers. They weren't reflecting anything; there was nothing to reflect. The light came from inside them, patient and constant, like they'd been burning all night, all year, waiting for someone to notice. She stood and wiped her palm on her jeans. Richmond Park wasn't silent at night. She'd read that much before coming — deer moving through the bracken, owls, the M3 a low constant murmur to the east. But inside the Grove the world had been muted, scrubbed clean, as if someone had lifted the park out of existence and set down a replica with the sound turned off. Her own footsteps made no noise on the grass. She tested it twice, stamping. Nothing. Her phone read 11:47 p.m. when she'd entered. She checked it now. 11:47. "Great." She walked the clearing's edge, counting stones. Seven oaks arranged in a rough circle, each one thicker than a car, their faces gnarled into shapes that her eyes kept resolving into features — a brow here, a downturned mouth there — before sliding back into ordinary bark. The ring of flowers followed the stones exactly, a perfect glowing corona maybe ten metres across. Beyond it, darkness. Absolute. Her phone's torch threw a weak cone that simply stopped at the flowers' boundary, the beam bending, she was almost sure, bending slightly outward as it crossed. The pendant beat faster near the northernmost stone. Rory turned to face it and felt the warmth spread through her ribs, through her wrist where the old crescent scar sat, itching the way it always did when something was about to go wrong. "There's a door here," she murmured. "Fine. Good. That's what I came for." Something rustled at the far side of the clearing. She froze. The sound had been small — dry leaves, a single shifting of weight — but in the muffled air it landed like a gunshot. She turned slowly, torch up. The flowers glowed. The stones stood. Nothing moved. A deer. It had to be a deer; the park was full of them, and they wandered at night. She resumed walking the perimeter, keeping the stones at her back, and told herself the prickling along her scalp was the cold. Ten steps later, the rustle came again. Behind her now. Same sound. Same length. Identical, note for note, like a recording played on a loop. Rory's mouth went dry. She spun, torch swinging, and caught it — she was almost certain she caught it — a shape at the edge of her vision, low to the ground, unfolding backward out of sight the way a reflection moves when you turn your head too fast. The torch beam found grass and flowers and the knuckled root system of an oak, and nothing else. "Hello?" Her voice cracked on the second syllable. The word didn't echo. It should have echoed — stone and wood everywhere, a natural amphitheatre — but the sound dropped dead a metre from her lips, as if the clearing ate it. As if it were keeping her voice. Collecting it. Her phone still read 11:47. She stopped checking. She made herself stop checking, because every time she looked, the screen was a little dimmer, the numbers a little greyer, like the device itself was being drained in increments too small to see. The battery indicator had been at 83% when she entered the stones. She didn't want to know what it was now. The Heartstone was hot through her shirt. She retreated toward the gap where she'd come in, walking backward, keeping the torch ahead of her, and the pendant's heat traced a line across her chest — strongest toward the north stone, but also, now, faintly, toward the centre of the clearing. Toward nothing. Toward the empty flower-carpeted middle where there was no door, no stone, no reason for a Hel portal's signature at all. She looked at the centre. The flowers there had begun to turn. Not wilt — turn. Rotate on their stems, all together, all at the same slow speed, a thousand small white faces swinging around to point at her. The motion was silent. The motion was smooth. And the glow in their petals brightened as they aligned, so that the centre of the clearing now shone brighter than anywhere else, a soft underwater radiance pooling around a circle of bare earth she would have sworn had been covered a minute ago. In the middle of the bare earth, the grass was pressed flat. Flattened in the shape of something that slept there. Something long, and jointed, and much larger than a deer. Rory backed into an oak. The bark was warm against her spine, warmer than before, and it flexed — a slow, almost imperceptible swell, like a chest drawing breath. Under her palm, she felt a rhythm. Not the tree's. Not hers. A third pulse, deep and patient, matching the pendant against her chest beat for beat. From the darkness beyond the flowers, the rustle came again. Closer now. And with it, faint, almost gentle, a voice with no shape to it — the exact pitch and cadence of her own. "Okay," it said. "Okay, Laila. In, find the ring, out. Twenty minutes, tops."
created_at"2026-09-02T13:35:43.01Z" 9/2/2026, 1:35:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"resolving"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"aligned"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"footsteps"
2"resolving"
3"perfect"
4"warmth"
5"weight"
6"echo"
7"echoed"
8"traced"
9"aligned"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1079
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1029
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Rory5
October1
Heartstone2
Yu-Fei1
Ladbroke1
Grove3
Hel2
Eva1
Park1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Hel"
4"Eva"
places
0"Ladbroke"
1"Grove"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1079
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"read that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean33.72
std28.4
cv0.842
sampleLengths
011
166
221
375
43
564
69
774
813
91
1094
1143
1213
139
1439
1541
1610
1782
188
1942
205
2158
227
2366
245
257
2679
2731
285
2951
3034
3113
94.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"been muted"
1"being drained"
2"been covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs160
matches
0"weren't reflecting"
1"were keeping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences98
ratio0.122
matches
0"Only here, in the Grove, did it wake up — which meant Hel's reach stretched into this pocket between worlds, and that meant answers."
1"They weren't reflecting anything; there was nothing to reflect."
2"She'd read that much before coming — deer moving through the bracken, owls, the M3 a low constant murmur to the east."
3"Seven oaks arranged in a rough circle, each one thicker than a car, their faces gnarled into shapes that her eyes kept resolving into features — a brow here, a downturned mouth there — before sliding back into ordinary bark."
4"The sound had been small — dry leaves, a single shifting of weight — but in the muffled air it landed like a gunshot."
5"It had to be a deer; the park was full of them, and they wandered at night."
6"She spun, torch swinging, and caught it — she was almost certain she caught it — a shape at the edge of her vision, low to the ground, unfolding backward out of sight the way a reflection moves when you turn your head too fast."
7"It should have echoed — stone and wood everywhere, a natural amphitheatre — but the sound dropped dead a metre from her lips, as if the clearing ate it."
8"She retreated toward the gap where she'd come in, walking backward, keeping the torch ahead of her, and the pendant's heat traced a line across her chest — strongest toward the north stone, but also, now, faintly, toward the centre of the clearing."
9"Not wilt — turn."
10"The bark was warm against her spine, warmer than before, and it flexed — a slow, almost imperceptible swell, like a chest drawing breath."
11"And with it, faint, almost gentle, a voice with no shape to it — the exact pitch and cadence of her own."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount417
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.03597122302158273
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.014388489208633094
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.01
std10.62
cv0.965
sampleLengths
011
19
24
324
429
53
68
710
816
97
109
1113
1224
133
143
153
162
1718
185
191
207
219
2222
239
246
2522
2631
279
285
291
305
313
324
331
341
357
3640
3716
383
391
4027
418
4235
436
447
459
462
4724
485
493
61.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.422680412371134
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Only here, in the Grove,"
1"Maybe Eva's answers."
2"Maybe her own."
ratio0.039
95.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences77
matches
0"She stopped, hand pressed flat"
1"Her voice fell flat, swallowed"
2"It had done nothing for"
3"They weren't reflecting anything; there"
4"She stood and wiped her"
5"She'd read that much before"
6"Her own footsteps made no"
7"She tested it twice, stamping."
8"Her phone read 11:47 p.m."
9"She checked it now."
10"She walked the clearing's edge,"
11"Her phone's torch threw a"
12"She turned slowly, torch up."
13"It had to be a"
14"She resumed walking the perimeter,"
15"She spun, torch swinging, and"
16"Her voice cracked on the"
17"It should have echoed —"
18"Her phone still read 11:47."
19"She stopped checking."
ratio0.312
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences77
matches
0"The pendant pulsed the moment"
1"She stopped, hand pressed flat"
2"The bark was warm."
3"Her voice fell flat, swallowed"
4"The Heartstone sat against her"
5"It had done nothing for"
6"The wildflowers glowed."
7"Rory crouched and touched one."
8"The light didn't dim under"
9"They weren't reflecting anything; there"
10"The light came from inside"
11"She stood and wiped her"
12"Richmond Park wasn't silent at"
13"She'd read that much before"
14"Her own footsteps made no"
15"She tested it twice, stamping."
16"Her phone read 11:47 p.m."
17"She checked it now."
18"She walked the clearing's edge,"
19"The ring of flowers followed"
ratio0.662
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"As if it were keeping"
ratio0.013
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But inside the Grove the world had been muted, scrubbed clean, as if someone had lifted the park out of existence and set down a replica with the sound turned o…"
1"It should have echoed — stone and wood everywhere, a natural amphitheatre — but the sound dropped dead a metre from her lips, as if the clearing ate it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.25
89.2558%