| 78.79% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.485 | | leniency | 0.97 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |
| 92.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "remarkable" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1416 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1103 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 12 | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 1 | | December | 2 | | Wonder | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "December" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.911 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Not visibly — she would have sc" | | 1 | "f it had moved visibly — but when she pres" | | 2 | "something like foxglove, each bell chimed fa" | | 3 | "metal that seemed to have moonlight suspended in it rather than merely reflecting it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.706 | | wordCount | 1416 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sharp pulse it gave near Hel portals, but a gentler heat, a recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 39.33 | | std | 27.31 | | cv | 0.694 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 128 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 79 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 73 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 84 | | 21 | 69 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 67 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 69 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 67 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 28 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "been mistaken" | | 1 | "been gathered" | | 2 | "was lit" | | 3 | "been made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.14 | | matches | | 0 | "Not visibly — she would have screamed if it had moved visibly — but when she pressed her palm flat and held it there, she could feel something underneath, slow and rhythmic, like a pulse slumbering in the heart of the tree." | | 1 | "She had walked ahead without seeming to walk at all — Rory kept checking, and the silver-haired woman never displaced so much as a fern." | | 2 | "The Richmond night vanished — the distant orange glow of London, the rumble of the A-road, the bite of December air, all of it stripped away in the space of one step." | | 3 | "Wildflowers covered the ground in drifts — she recognized a few, snowdrops and bluebells, but growing side by side, blooming simultaneously, as if the year had been gathered up and crumpled so all its seasons touched." | | 4 | "The grass made no sound underfoot, but the flowers did — as Rory brushed past a bank of something like foxglove, each bell chimed faintly, a note too high to hear properly, felt more in the teeth than the ears." | | 5 | "The water was clear past clearness — there was no bottom, no murk, just depth going down and down into a darkness that had warmth in it, somehow, like looking into a well that led somewhere else entirely." | | 6 | "Every flower chiming, every tree pulsing with that slow heartbeat, the sky refusing to be night or day — all of it was alive, and all of it was watching her." | | 7 | "Somewhere high above, invisible birds — or things doing an excellent impression of birds — sang in rounds, each phrase answered a moment later from a different quarter of the canopy, a conversation in a language made entirely of music." | | 8 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat warmed against her skin — not the sharp pulse it gave near Hel portals, but a gentler heat, a recognition." | | 9 | "She drew something from the air itself — her hand dipped into the light and came back holding a blade." | | 10 | "\"See that you do. Now go. You've been here—\" she glanced at the unchanging sky, \"—longer than you have.\"" | | 11 | "Rory took one last look at the clearing — the chiming flowers, the uphill stream, the vast oak with its patient heart — and felt the strangest grief at leaving a place she'd known for less than an hour, or perhaps less than a minute, or perhaps her whole life." |
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| 84.54% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1002 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "high above, invisible birds —" |
| | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.0499001996007984 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020958083832335328 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 16.47 | | std | 12.32 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 38 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 81.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5232558139534884 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they reassembled, tall and" | | 1 | "Somewhere high above, invisible birds" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 80.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped to touch one," | | 1 | "She had walked ahead without" | | 2 | "She stood in a clearing" | | 3 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 4 | "It had no source she" | | 5 | "she said quietly" | | 6 | "Her breath didn't fog here." | | 7 | "She wasn't sure it needed" | | 8 | "They moved deeper." | | 9 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 10 | "Her reflection looked back at" | | 11 | "She stood up quickly." | | 12 | "They crossed the clearing toward" | | 13 | "It dwarfed the others, roots" | | 14 | "She closed her hand around" | | 15 | "It wasn't a question" | | 16 | "It never was, with Isolde." | | 17 | "She drew something from the" | | 18 | "She caught it an inch" | | 19 | "she glanced at the unchanging" |
| | ratio | 0.35 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks did not look" | | 1 | "She stopped to touch one," | | 2 | "The grain moved." | | 3 | "She had walked ahead without" | | 4 | "Nyx said, and their whisper" | | 5 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 6 | "The change was immediate and" | | 7 | "The Richmond night vanished —" | | 8 | "She stood in a clearing" | | 9 | "Wildflowers covered the ground in" | | 10 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 11 | "It had no source she" | | 12 | "she said quietly" | | 13 | "Her breath didn't fog here." | | 14 | "She wasn't sure it needed" | | 15 | "Nyx murmured, but there was" | | 16 | "A Shade who existed between" | | 17 | "They moved deeper." | | 18 | "The grass made no sound" | | 19 | "She pulled her hand back" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Even here, in this endless" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped to touch one, half expecting bark, but the surface was warm and faintly yielding, like skin that had been mistaken for wood from a distance." | | 1 | "Wildflowers covered the ground in drifts — she recognized a few, snowdrops and bluebells, but growing side by side, blooming simultaneously, as if the year had …" | | 2 | "Ahead, Isolde waited beside a pool fed by a stream that ran uphill to reach it, water climbing over pale stones with a sound like low laughter." | | 3 | "The water was clear past clearness — there was no bottom, no murk, just depth going down and down into a darkness that had warmth in it, somehow, like looking i…" | | 4 | "Slender, leaf-shaped, forged of a metal that seemed to have moonlight suspended in it rather than merely reflecting it." | | 5 | "The moonsilver was cold as a winter lake and lighter than it had any right to be, balanced as if it had been made for her hand specifically, which she suspected…" | | 6 | "The pendant pulsed once, warm against her sternum, as if something on the other side of the Veil had noticed the blade and was not pleased." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.39% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |