Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5AVA95Z2ECA26SNY07M8W

Run Details

Duration:
39.9s
Cost:
$0.000352
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gates of Richmond Park locked at dusk. Rory climbed the wall instead, palms scraping mossy brick, and dropped into the black expanse of grass beyond. She'd told herself she wouldn't come after dark. She'd told Eva the same thing, twice, on the phone while packing her bag: it's just a look, I'll be in and out, the stones only mark the edge of the grove. But the Heartstone pendant had started pulsing against her collarbone the moment she'd stepped off the bus at Robin Hood Gate, and it hadn't stopped. A faint rhythm under her coat, like a second pulse that didn't quite match her own. Warm. Insistent. The grove lay a mile in, past the deer paddocks, past the old oak with the lightning scar. Her torch made a small yellow island in the dark and she kept it aimed at her feet, which was why she never saw the deer leave. She only noticed the silence they left behind. Richmond at night was never truly quiet—foxes screamed somewhere in the city, owls worked the tree lines—but the closer she walked to the standing stones, the more the sound thinned out, as if the park were holding its breath around her. The pendant beat faster. The oaks rose out of the fog first. Twelve of them in a rough circle, older than anything else in the park, their trunks twisted into shapes that looked less like growth and more like gripping. Between them, the wildflowers glowed pale in her torchlight, acres of them, blue and white and a red she didn't have a name for, blooming in November like it was midsummer. She stopped at the boundary. The last time she'd come here it had been mid-afternoon, with Isolde laughing beside her, and the grove had felt like stepping into a warm bath. Now it felt like standing at the edge of a mouth. "Okay." Her voice came out flat and small in the fog. "In, look around, out. Twenty minutes." The pendant pulsed so hard she felt it in her teeth. She crossed the line of stones. The temperature changed first—warmer, the way it had been before, and that wrongness alone made her skin crawl, because nothing here should be warm in November. Then the smell hit her: loam and honey and underneath it something older, something like the air in a house that had been shut up for a long time. Her torch beam didn't seem to reach as far as it should. The grove was bigger inside than it had appeared from the outside—she knew that, it was a fae thing, space bent in here—but tonight the far edge of the clearing was swallowed in a darkness her light gave up on four metres out. She swept the beam along it. The darkness didn't reflect anything back. No. Not nothing. There, at the very end of the light—a shimmer, like heat off tarmac, vertical and tall and thin as a door left ajar. The pendant burned against her sternum. "Right," she whispered. "That's a portal. That's a Hel portal. That's—fine. That's what I came to check." Her breath didn't fog in the warm air. She walked the circle instead of heading straight for it, the way her father taught her to walk a room before a case—get the shape of it first, know your exits. The stones passed on her left, one, two, three, and each one wore carvings she didn't remember from her daytime visits: spirals, and lower down, rows of small marks like tally strokes. She counted them without meaning to. One hundred and six. She didn't know what they counted. She decided, firmly, not to find out. On her fourth stone, she heard the humming. It came from behind her—soft, tuneless, a woman's voice carrying a melody with no edges. She spun, torch up. The clearing was empty. Wildflowers swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel. She hadn't imagined it. It had been right there, close, the way a voice is close when someone stands just behind your shoulder. "Isolde?" The name cracked on the way out. The humming stopped. In its place, silence pressed against her ears like water. She backed toward the gap in the stones where she'd entered. Her heel caught on something and she looked down. A fox lay in the flowers, curled neatly, as if asleep. Its chest didn't move. Its fur was dry. Around its body the wildflowers had grown up and through it, stems threading between its ribs, blooming in a perfect ring. It hadn't been there when she crossed the boundary. She was sure. She was almost sure. Don't run. Running in fae ground was a rule she'd absorbed without ever being taught it—running was an invitation, running was a scent. She made herself walk, counting the stones back, three, two, one, the torch beam shaking now despite her grip, and when she reached the last oak she looked up at the gap between it and its neighbour and the fog on the other side of it was the wrong colour. Grey-green. Deeper than night. The gap she'd come through was gone. The pendant hammered. Behind her, the shimmer in the dark distance brightened by a degree. Warmth rolled against her back like an open oven door, and with it came the smell again, and under the honey she caught the other smell properly now: copper. Old pennies. She turned, slow, torch raised. The portal hung in the dark like a split in a photograph—taller than she'd thought, taller than a person, edges trembling. Through it, something moved. Not through it. Behind it. Shapes crossing the shimmer the way fish pass under ice, unhurried, patient, and each time one passed her torchlight caught a wet gleam that might have been an eye. The humming started again. From everywhere now. From the flowers, from the stones, from behind her own teeth. Rory pressed her back against the standing oak and did not run. Her fingers found the pendant and closed around it, hot as a coal, and she made her voice work. "I'm just passing through." The humming stopped. Every wildflower in the clearing turned toward her at once.
created_at"2026-09-02T13:36:00.849Z" 9/2/2026, 1:36:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"firmly"
4"perfect"
5"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1034
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1007
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.2
worstName"Richmond"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Eva1
Heartstone1
Robin1
Hood1
Gate1
November2
Isolde1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Robin"
2"Hood"
3"Gate"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite match her own"
1"felt like stepping into a warm bath"
2"felt like standing at the edge of a mou"
3"something like the air in a house that had b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1034
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"knew that, it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.54
std26.59
cv0.9
sampleLengths
026
183
294
34
467
542
617
711
86
955
1067
1126
126
1317
148
1569
164
1713
188
1931
2023
218
2213
2360
2416
2577
267
2746
285
2959
3018
3131
324
333
3410
92.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"being taught"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs161
matches
0"were holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences85
ratio0.094
matches
0"Richmond at night was never truly quiet—foxes screamed somewhere in the city, owls worked the tree lines—but the closer she walked to the standing stones, the more the sound thinned out, as if the park were holding its breath around her."
1"The temperature changed first—warmer, the way it had been before, and that wrongness alone made her skin crawl, because nothing here should be warm in November."
2"The grove was bigger inside than it had appeared from the outside—she knew that, it was a fae thing, space bent in here—but tonight the far edge of the clearing was swallowed in a darkness her light gave up on four metres out."
3"There, at the very end of the light—a shimmer, like heat off tarmac, vertical and tall and thin as a door left ajar."
4"She walked the circle instead of heading straight for it, the way her father taught her to walk a room before a case—get the shape of it first, know your exits."
5"It came from behind her—soft, tuneless, a woman's voice carrying a melody with no edges."
6"Running in fae ground was a rule she'd absorbed without ever being taught it—running was an invitation, running was a scent."
7"The portal hung in the dark like a split in a photograph—taller than she'd thought, taller than a person, edges trembling."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1019
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02649656526005888
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0068694798822374874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean12.16
std10.86
cv0.893
sampleLengths
08
118
28
332
425
516
61
71
818
927
108
1141
124
138
1428
1531
165
1726
1811
1911
206
2111
226
2326
2429
2512
2643
276
286
291
302
3123
326
333
3414
358
3631
3732
386
394
406
417
428
4315
444
454
468
474
4819
498
68.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4588235294117647
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners39
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Then the smell hit her:"
ratio0.014
66.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences73
matches
0"She'd told herself she wouldn't"
1"She'd told Eva the same"
2"Her torch made a small"
3"She only noticed the silence"
4"She stopped at the boundary."
5"Her voice came out flat"
6"She crossed the line of"
7"Her torch beam didn't seem"
8"She swept the beam along"
9"Her breath didn't fog in"
10"She walked the circle instead"
11"She counted them without meaning"
12"She didn't know what they"
13"She decided, firmly, not to"
14"It came from behind her—soft,"
15"She spun, torch up."
16"She hadn't imagined it."
17"It had been right there,"
18"She backed toward the gap"
19"Her heel caught on something"
ratio0.384
69.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences73
matches
0"The gates of Richmond Park"
1"Rory climbed the wall instead,"
2"She'd told herself she wouldn't"
3"She'd told Eva the same"
4"A faint rhythm under her"
5"The grove lay a mile"
6"Her torch made a small"
7"She only noticed the silence"
8"Richmond at night was never"
9"The pendant beat faster."
10"The oaks rose out of"
11"She stopped at the boundary."
12"The last time she'd come"
13"Her voice came out flat"
14"The pendant pulsed so hard"
15"She crossed the line of"
16"The temperature changed first—warmer, the"
17"Her torch beam didn't seem"
18"The grove was bigger inside"
19"She swept the beam along"
ratio0.781
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Now it felt like standing"
ratio0.014
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Richmond at night was never truly quiet—foxes screamed somewhere in the city, owls worked the tree lines—but the closer she walked to the standing stones, the m…"
1"Then the smell hit her: loam and honey and underneath it something older, something like the air in a house that had been shut up for a long time."
2"Around its body the wildflowers had grown up and through it, stems threading between its ribs, blooming in a perfect ring."
3"Shapes crossing the shimmer the way fish pass under ice, unhurried, patient, and each time one passed her torchlight caught a wet gleam that might have been an …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.333
80.9714%