| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sweetly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "lurch" | | 9 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1109 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1077 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Pen | 1 | | Ponds | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | December | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | August | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pen" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "December" | | 5 | "August" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 19.66% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.803 | | wordCount | 1109 | | matches | | 0 | "Not gradually, not like a natural evening chill, but all at once, the way a cellar swallows heat" | | 1 | "not like a natural evening chill, but all at once, the way a cellar swallows heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 27.73 | | std | 20.23 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 64 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1084 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03966789667896679 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013837638376383764 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 10.66 | | std | 10.5 | | cv | 0.985 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 75.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind me, a child" | | 1 | "Then, from my left, the" | | 2 | "Then it pulsed once, twice," |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "I'd walked Richmond Park at" | | 1 | "I told the dark" | | 2 | "I stopped at the boundary" | | 3 | "My voice fell flat, swallowed" | | 4 | "I stepped over the threshold." | | 5 | "My breath fogged." | | 6 | "I'd made enough bad choices" | | 7 | "I followed the flowers toward" | | 8 | "It came away on my" | | 9 | "I was on my feet" | | 10 | "I backed away." | | 11 | "My heel caught a root" | | 12 | "I burst through the wildflowers" | | 13 | "I said to the Grove," | | 14 | "I looked down." | | 15 | "My crescent scar prickled, the" | | 16 | "My scar burned." | | 17 | "I only caught the silhouette," | | 18 | "she said, not looking at" |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant started pulsing before" | | 1 | "I'd walked Richmond Park at" | | 2 | "I told the dark" | | 3 | "Isolde's clearing opened between the" | | 4 | "Wildflowers glowed pale in the" | | 5 | "Tonight the colours sat too" | | 6 | "I stopped at the boundary" | | 7 | "Someone had chalked a symbol" | | 8 | "A spiral, drawn in a" | | 9 | "Isolde didn't chalk things." | | 10 | "Isolde didn't need to mark" | | 11 | "My voice fell flat, swallowed" | | 12 | "Tonight the clearing absorbed everything." | | 13 | "I stepped over the threshold." | | 14 | "The temperature dropped." | | 15 | "My breath fogged." | | 16 | "The pendant throbbed against my" | | 17 | "Something rustled at the treeline." | | 18 | "The oaks stood rigid, their" | | 19 | "Rory, love, this is the" |
| | ratio | 0.688 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers glowed pale in the starlight, roses in December, bluebells out of season, all of it wrong in a way that had once felt like a gift." | | 1 | "A vertical seam in the world itself, hairline-thin, weeping a red light that matched the stone at my throat." | | 2 | "Not elegantly, not heroically, just flat-out through the flowers, thorns snatching at my jeans, the chalk spiral's memory itching at the back of my skull becaus…" | | 3 | "Where the ancient stones should have stood there was only more clearing, more flowers, extending into a darkness that hadn't been there before." | | 4 | "Between my boots, the flowers had closed over ground that glistened, and the glisten was wet, and the wetness was dark, and the sweet rot of it filled my nose." | | 5 | "I only caught the silhouette, a shape too tall, folding itself through the gap the way a spider folds through a crack, joints bending in directions that made my…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, not looking at me" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |