Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5CBDF0HYW174D8V9513Y8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.000401
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stones appeared where no stones should have been. Rory had walked Richmond Park a hundred times since moving to London — joggers, deer, the amber smear of streetlights along Pen Ponds — and never once seen the ring of oaks standing sentinel in the fern-brake off the eastern track. Tonight they rose out of the ground like the ribs of something long-dead, bark silvered and split, trunks wider than the van she drove for the Golden Empress. "Are those teeth or trees?" She kept her voice low, as though the park might overhear. "Both. Neither." Nyx poured themselves out of the shadow of a hawthorn and stood beside her, a man-shaped absence with two violet embers where eyes should be. "The boundary between your world and theirs has always been hungry. Trees are what hunger looks like when it grows patient." Her Heartstone pendant had been warm since the moment she'd stepped off the path. It sat against her collarbone now, pulsing in a rhythm too slow to be her heartbeat, and when she pressed it between two fingers it answered with a flush of heat that ran down her sternum like swallowed wine. "The cold iron," she said, touching the dagger at her hip. Isolde's gift. Moonsilver, leaf-shaped, always cold no matter how long it rode against her body. "Do I need it in there?" "You will know when you need it." Nyx drifted toward the gap between the two largest oaks. "Which is a coward's answer, but Shades and Fae share a fondness for cowards' answers." The air inside the ring was different before she'd even crossed it — thicker, sweeter, the way air near a struck match goes honeyed for half a second before the smoke. She ducked between the stones. The park vanished. Not dimmed. Not faded. Vanished, the way a page turns. Behind her there was only more grove: a bowl of grass glowing faintly green-gold as though lit from beneath, wildflowers open in every direction — foxgloves the size of her forearm, bluebells ringing without sound, small white blooms she couldn't name turning their faces toward her as she passed like sunflowers tracking a sun that didn't exist here. Overhead, no sky she recognised. A canopy of leaves stitched with constellations, and between the stars, a slow shimmer, like heat-haze over ice. The Veil. She could see it. Here, at its thinnest point, the barrier between worlds was visible to her bare eye — a soap-bubble distortion arcing across the dark, and through it, occasionally, something moved. A wing. A lantern. A hand with too many fingers. "Rory." Nyx's whisper came from three directions at once. "Breathe. The grove tastes fear the way your kitchen staff taste salt." "I'm not afraid." "You are. That's fine. Just don't season yourself with it." She laughed, and the sound came back to her wrong — delayed, layered, as though five other Rorys in five other groves had laughed half a breath later. The grass whispered against her boots with no wind to stir it. Warmth radiated up through the soles, the slow animal warmth of something sleeping just below the roots. They followed the curve of the bowl downward. Isolde had left no trail — of course she hadn't, the woman left no footprints anywhere — but the grove seemed to want them to find its heart. The flowers parted. The stars overhead rearranged, subtle as furniture moved in the night, always nudging the same path open ahead of them. At the centre stood the oldest oak, so vast that Rory first mistook it for a hillside. Its roots reared out of the earth like the buttresses of a cathedral, hollowed at the base into an archway tall enough to drive the van through. Its bark was scored with script. She leaned close. The letters moved. Not crawling, not writhing — drifting, the way clouds drift, each character circling the trunk at its own pace, some old and angular, some recognisably Ogham, one line in a hand so modern it could have been written yesterday. "Isolde's." "No." Nyx materialised beside the trunk, close enough that their shadow-form rippled against the silvered bark. "Isolde is three hundred years old. This tree is older than the concept of three hundred. This is her ledger — every vision she has ever given, the grove keeps. She doesn't record them. It does." "She can't lie." Rory traced one drifting character without touching it. The Heartstone flared against her chest, and the nearest letters swirled toward her fingers like iron filings finding a magnet. "So the grove keeps her honest." "The grove keeps everything. Look." Nyx gestured, and Rory stepped back far enough to see the whole trunk again — and understood. Every prophecy, every riddle, every misleading half-truth Isolde had ever spoken to every mortal who'd wandered into this clearing across three centuries, written and rewritten and rewritten, the words revising themselves as futures branched and collapsed. A sentence three feet long near the base was crossed out and recrossed out so many times the bark beneath had gone black with ink-shadow, and beneath the last strike-through, a single fresh line glowed: *The one who carries the heart will open the door on the longest night.* The pendant burned. She staggered back. Nyx's violet eyes flared brighter, and every flower in the grove turned its face toward her at once, a thousand small attentiones. "That's not — I'm not opening anything. I came here for answers, not doors." "Did you?" The voice came from behind her, from above, from the roots themselves — and there was Isolde, walking down the great root's curve as though descending a staircase, barefoot on the bark, silver hair falling to her waist, no footprints in the moss. Her lavender eyes found the pendant, then Rory's face. "A door is only an answer shaped a certain way." "You knew about the pendant. Who gave it to me." "A question wrapped in a question." Isolde smiled, and it was not entirely kind. "The grove does not like being asked things it has already answered. Listen instead to what it hasn't." The great oak groaned. All around them, the scored script lifted off the bark — thousands of characters peeling free like ash from a log, swirling upward into the stitched constellations, and the stars rearranged again, faster now, forming not a path but a picture. Rory squinted up at it, cold blade in one hand, burning pendant against her throat, while somewhere far overhead, through the shimmer of the Veil, something knocked — twice, patiently, like a knuckle on glass.
created_at"2026-09-02T13:36:50.103Z" 9/2/2026, 1:36:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"sentinel"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"sentinel"
1"whisper"
2"warmth"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords14
totalWords1104
ratio0.013
matches
0"The one who carries the heart will open the door on the longest night."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount907
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Pen1
Ponds1
Golden1
Empress1
Nyx6
Heartstone2
Isolde5
Veil2
Rorys1
Rory6
Ogham1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though descending a staircase, barefoot on the bark, silver hair falling to her waist, no footprints in the moss"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.906
wordCount1104
matches
0"not a path but a picture"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean38.07
std28.07
cv0.737
sampleLengths
09
169
216
348
453
532
632
739
891
945
1021
113
1210
1357
1459
1595
161
1752
1837
195
2088
2114
223
2325
2414
2564
2610
2732
2880
86.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences56
matches
0"was scored"
1"been written"
2"was crossed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences70
ratio0.157
matches
0"Rory had walked Richmond Park a hundred times since moving to London — joggers, deer, the amber smear of streetlights along Pen Ponds — and never once seen the ring of oaks standing sentinel in the fern-brake off the eastern track."
1"The air inside the ring was different before she'd even crossed it — thicker, sweeter, the way air near a struck match goes honeyed for half a second before the smoke."
2"Behind her there was only more grove: a bowl of grass glowing faintly green-gold as though lit from beneath, wildflowers open in every direction — foxgloves the size of her forearm, bluebells ringing without sound, small white blooms she couldn't name turning their faces toward her as she passed like sunflowers tracking a sun that didn't exist here."
3"Here, at its thinnest point, the barrier between worlds was visible to her bare eye — a soap-bubble distortion arcing across the dark, and through it, occasionally, something moved."
4"She laughed, and the sound came back to her wrong — delayed, layered, as though five other Rorys in five other groves had laughed half a breath later."
5"Isolde had left no trail — of course she hadn't, the woman left no footprints anywhere — but the grove seemed to want them to find its heart."
6"Not crawling, not writhing — drifting, the way clouds drift, each character circling the trunk at its own pace, some old and angular, some recognisably Ogham, one line in a hand so modern it could have been written yesterday."
7"Nyx gestured, and Rory stepped back far enough to see the whole trunk again — and understood."
8"\"Did you?\" The voice came from behind her, from above, from the roots themselves — and there was Isolde, walking down the great root's curve as though descending a staircase, barefoot on the bark, silver hair falling to her waist, no footprints in the moss."
9"All around them, the scored script lifted off the bark — thousands of characters peeling free like ash from a log, swirling upward into the stitched constellations, and the stars rearranged again, faster now, forming not a path but a picture."
10"Rory squinted up at it, cold blade in one hand, burning pendant against her throat, while somewhere far overhead, through the shimmer of the Veil, something knocked — twice, patiently, like a knuckle on glass."
99.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04088397790055249
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0066298342541436465
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean15.77
std12.96
cv0.822
sampleLengths
09
141
228
316
427
521
614
739
811
92
1013
116
1217
1315
1431
155
163
172
182
196
2058
215
2218
232
244
2529
262
272
286
299
3012
313
3210
3328
3412
3517
368
3728
383
3920
4017
4127
426
433
443
4539
461
4716
4836
4911
66.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.45714285714285713
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences50
matches
0"She kept her voice low,"
1"Her Heartstone pendant had been"
2"It sat against her collarbone"
3"she said, touching the dagger"
4"She ducked between the stones."
5"She could see it."
6"She laughed, and the sound"
7"They followed the curve of"
8"Its roots reared out of"
9"Its bark was scored with"
10"She leaned close."
11"She staggered back."
12"Her lavender eyes found the"
ratio0.26
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences50
matches
0"The stones appeared where no"
1"Rory had walked Richmond Park"
2"Tonight they rose out of"
3"She kept her voice low,"
4"Nyx poured themselves out of"
5"Her Heartstone pendant had been"
6"It sat against her collarbone"
7"she said, touching the dagger"
8"Moonsilver, leaf-shaped, always cold no"
9"Nyx drifted toward the gap"
10"The air inside the ring"
11"She ducked between the stones."
12"The park vanished."
13"A canopy of leaves stitched"
14"She could see it."
15"Here, at its thinnest point,"
16"A hand with too many"
17"Nyx's whisper came from three"
18"She laughed, and the sound"
19"The grass whispered against her"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Behind her there was only more grove: a bowl of grass glowing faintly green-gold as though lit from beneath, wildflowers open in every direction — foxgloves the…"
1"She laughed, and the sound came back to her wrong — delayed, layered, as though five other Rorys in five other groves had laughed half a breath later."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She kept, as though the park might overhear"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.087
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.0528%