Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5CCMASTKJAM9TKBK81JAS

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Duration:
52.9s
Cost:
$0.000437
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the door buzzed like a wasp against the November drizzle. Rory ducked under it, shook rain from her jacket, and pushed into the warmth of the Raven's Nest. Ten hours of deliveries, three of them in a downpour, and her shoulder still ached where a moped mirror had clipped her near Oxford Circus. Silas looked up from the till and reached for a glass before she'd cleared the door. "You look like a drowned cat that lost a fight with a lawnmower." "Good to see you too." She dropped onto the end stool. "Whisky. The one you keep for people you actually like." "That narrows it to three bottles." He poured something amber into a tumbler the size of a fist. "Rough day?" "Rough decade. Just happens to be concentrated into today." The door swung open behind her, letting in a gust of cold air and saxophone from the street. Rory took a sip, and it was the burn of the whisky, not the voice from the doorway, that made her choke. "Rory?" She turned on the stool slowly, the way you turn toward a sound in an empty house. Eva stood just inside the entrance, wearing a charcoal coat that cost more than Rory's rent. Her hair, once a wild dark bob that Rory used to braid badly on sleepovers, was now sleek, pinned back, cut sharp as a folded letter. Gold at her ears. A thin scar—no, a crease, surgical and precise—along her jaw that hadn't existed when they were twenty-two. "Eva. God." Rory's hand found the bar to steady herself. "You look... grown up." "You look exactly the same." Eva crossed the floor, heels measuring out each step. "That's meant as a compliment. I'm not sure it lands as one." Silas set down a second glass without being asked. Eva slid onto the stool beside Rory, and for a moment they just looked at each other, the way you'd look at a photograph you'd half forgotten existed. "What are the odds," Rory said. "I've been in London four years. Four years, Eva." "I know where you've been. I've known the whole time." The whisky went cold in Rory's chest. "That's a strange thing to say to someone." "It's a strange life I've ended up in." Eva turned her glass a quarter-circle on the wood. "Is that man staring at us the landlord, or a problem?" "Both. Silas, this is Eva. We grew up sharing a wall in Cardiff. Her mum taught me to swear in Welsh." "Mrs. Pritchard's daughter." Silas nodded once. "She used to feed you both chips through the fence." Eva blinked. "That's... yes. Actually yes." "He collects facts like other people collect stamps," Rory said. "Don't encourage him." "I'll leave you to it." Silas moved down the bar, wiping glasses that were already clean, close enough to hear everything and pretending not to. Eva took a breath. Up close, Rory could see the cost under the polish—faint hollows beneath the cheekbones, hands that stayed very still, the way her eyes tracked the room in sweeps instead of resting anywhere. "You want to tell me why you've known where I've been for four years?" Rory said. "Because that sentence is doing a lot of heavy lifting, and none of it comforting." "Because I checked. When I got out." Eva's voice stayed level, but something moved behind it, water under ice. "I got out of what I was in, and the first thing I did was look you up. And there you were, in a photograph outside some restaurant, carrying bags of takeaway, laughing at someone off camera. And I thought—she got out too. She's fine. I don't need to drag her into whatever I've become." "So you watched from a distance for four years." "I was waiting until I was clean." "Of what?" Eva smiled, and for a second it was the old smile, the one that got them both thrown out of a cinema in Splott for laughing during the sad part. Then it folded away. "Does the name Meridian mean anything to you?" "No." "Good. That means I did my job." She drank, small and controlled. "I worked for them. Nine years. Diplomatic logistics, I told my mother. She told the neighbours I worked in shipping, which was closer to the truth than she knew. I moved things. People, mostly. Some of them deserved what happened when they arrived. Some of them—" Her hand tightened around the glass. "Some of them didn't, and I stopped asking which was which around year four, because asking made the work impossible, and not asking made me something I didn't recognise in the mirror." The bar seemed to contract around them. Rory set her whisky down. "Eva. Look at me." Eva looked. Up close her eyes were the same brown as always, but the light in them had been rearranged, tidy where it used to be chaotic. "I ran," Eva said. "Eleven months ago. They let me, which scares me more than a chase would have. And since then I've been rebuilding myself from the studs, and the first thing I wanted, the only thing I wanted, was to sit across from you and find out if any of me was still in there." She laughed, short and airless. "Some friend. Four years of surveillance and a debrief." "You knew about Evan." It wasn't a question. It arrived in Rory's mouth whole. "The years before London. You knew." "I knew." Eva's jaw worked. "I knew and I didn't call, because I was in Zurich holding a passport for a man who did to governments what Evan did to you, and I told myself I was in no position to save anyone. Do you know how that sounds now that I say it out loud? It sounds like a confession. It is a confession." Silas had drifted, without seeming to move, to the far end of the bar, polishing nothing. Rory reached out and took Eva's hand. The fingers were cold, and there was a callus on the index finger where Rory remembered a pen-callus from university, the same spot, some things surviving everything. "You sent me the money." "What?" "When I left Evan. Four hundred pounds, cash, in a birthday card with no return address. I thought it was my aunt." "It was me. I was in Riga at the time. The card took three weeks." Eva's voice cracked on the last word, the first fracture in all that polish. "I've done terrible things, Rory. I'm not going to list them, but I need you to know that I know. I'm not here asking for absolution. I'm here asking if there's a version of this where you let me buy you terrible wine and we talk about anything else for one night. Because I have spent eleven months being alone with it, and I would rather—" "Yes." Eva stopped. "Yes?" "Yes to all of it. Except the wine. Silas has a red that tastes like a campfire and costs more than my dignity, and you're buying." Rory squeezed her hand. "You're still in there. I could tell the second you walked in, because you ordered before sitting down and you sat facing the door." "That's habit." "That's Eva. She used to sit facing the door at Bob's chippy in case anyone from school came in and tried to take her scraps." Eva laughed then, wet and startled, and pressed her free hand over her eyes. "Ten quid says her mother still asks about you," Rory said, and reached for Silas' bottle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Silas nodded once [once]"
1"Her hand tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.339
leniency0.679
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.071
92.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"comforting"
2"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1268
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount553
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
November1
Raven1
Nest1
Oxford1
Circus1
Rory17
Eva15
Silas5
Splott1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Splott"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.789
wordCount1268
matches
0"not going to list them, but I need you to know"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean24.86
std23.37
cv0.94
sampleLengths
057
116
213
321
420
59
640
71
817
963
1014
1126
1237
1315
1410
1515
1628
1721
1816
196
2013
2125
2236
2331
2474
259
267
272
2834
298
301
3196
3212
334
3427
3571
3620
3765
3816
3934
405
411
4222
4395
441
453
4654
472
4825
4914
90.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"being asked"
1"been rearranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs97
matches(empty)
75.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences85
ratio0.024
matches
0"A thin scar—no, a crease, surgical and precise—along her jaw that hadn't existed when they were twenty-two."
1"Up close, Rory could see the cost under the polish—faint hollows beneath the cheekbones, hands that stayed very still, the way her eyes tracked the room in sweeps instead of resting anywhere."
99.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount559
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.04114490161001789
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0035778175313059034
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.92
std13.78
cv0.924
sampleLengths
014
118
225
316
413
511
610
718
82
99
1018
1122
121
1317
1416
1526
164
1717
1810
194
2014
2112
229
2328
246
259
2610
277
288
2917
3011
3121
326
3310
342
354
3610
373
3825
394
4032
4116
4215
4319
4455
459
467
472
4830
494
54.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.38823529411764707
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners33
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Then it folded away."
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences42
matches
0"She dropped onto the end"
1"He poured something amber into"
2"She turned on the stool"
3"Her hair, once a wild"
4"She drank, small and controlled"
5"Her hand tightened around the"
6"She laughed, short and airless"
7"It wasn't a question"
8"It arrived in Rory's mouth"
ratio0.214
19.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences42
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"Rory ducked under it, shook"
2"Silas looked up from the"
3"She dropped onto the end"
4"He poured something amber into"
5"The door swung open behind"
6"Rory took a sip, and"
7"She turned on the stool"
8"Eva stood just inside the"
9"Her hair, once a wild"
10"A thin scar—no, a crease,"
11"Rory's hand found the bar"
12"Eva crossed the floor, heels"
13"Silas set down a second"
14"Eva slid onto the stool"
15"The whisky went cold in"
16"Eva turned her glass a"
17"Silas nodded once"
18"Silas moved down the bar,"
19"Eva took a breath."
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A thin scar—no, a crease, surgical and precise—along her jaw that hadn't existed when they were twenty-two."
1"Up close, Rory could see the cost under the polish—faint hollows beneath the cheekbones, hands that stayed very still, the way her eyes tracked the room in swee…"
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva crossed, heels measuring out each step"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.036
85.2143%