Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5CH1Z35XZ8EA04EX50QMJ

Run Details

Duration:
52.2s
Cost:
$0.000507
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose out of the bracken like the ribs of something enormous and long dead. Rory counted seven of them, each twice her height, their surfaces seamed with lichen the colour of old pewter. The air between them trembled, the way heat rises off summer tarmac, though December frost still clung to the grass on either side. "This is it?" She turned the Heartstone Pendant over in her gloved fingers. It pulsed against her palm, warm as a held bird. Nyx slid out of the shadow of the easternmost stone, their silhouette peeling away from the granite like ink off a wet page. "The boundary. What lies beyond is the Grove itself." Their whisper carried the hush of wind through an empty house. "Once we cross, time will stop behaving. Your watch will lie to you. Do not trust it, and do not panic when it does." "Comforting. You're a natural at pep talks." "I was a sorcerer once. Pep talks were banned by my guild." Rory snorted and stepped between the stones. The frost vanished. That was the first thing—winter simply ended at an invisible line, and warm air folded over her like bathwater. Wildflowers erupted to her knees, cornflowers and evening primrose and something purple with silver veins that she had no name for, all of it blooming at once, all of it humming. Not a sound, exactly. A vibration she felt in her back teeth. She turned. Nyx stood at the threshold, half in, half out, their shadow-form rippling where the boundary crossed them. "Problem?" "Memories." Violet eyes flared. "The last time I passed through a Fae threshold, I was human. I came out as this." They spread their fingers—wings of darkness that scattered moths of shadow across the grass. "Go slowly. Look with your eyes first. The Grove will offer you things. Refuse everything you cannot carry in your own two hands." Rory held out her arm. "Come on, then. I've got two hands and nothing worth offering." Nyx took it. Their grip felt like cool water with bones in it. The oak at the grove's centre was older than language. Its trunk had the girth of a cottage, bark folded and refolded like a giant's abandoned laundry, and its canopy swallowed the sky whole. Light filtered down in shafts of liquid gold, and Rory watched dust motes climb in those shafts—climbing, deliberately, against every law gravity had ever passed. Suspenders of moss hung from the higher branches, and somewhere above, water dripped into a pool with a sound like a struck wine glass. "Listen." Nyx's voice dropped to almost nothing. She listened. Under the dripping, under the hum of the flowers, there was singing. Wordless, threaded through itself in a hundred voices, some high as birdsong, some low as the creak of the oak's limbs. "Who's singing?" "Flowers. Water. The tree." Nyx tilted their head, and for a moment their form thinned to something barely there, almost wistful. "I could hear this once. Before. The Fae realm sings through this place because this place is a wound—a seam where two worlds pressed together and never fully healed." Rory knelt beside the pool. The water ran clear as glass, and on the bottom lay coins—no, not coins. Old buttons, a Victorian thimble, a wristwatch with its hands frozen at midnight, all glinting in the shallows like offerings. Her scar prickled. The crescent on her left wrist ached the way it always did when Evan's memory crept too close, and she clenched her fist until it passed. "Careful with the water." Nyx had drifted to the pool's far edge without moving at all. "Those are gifts people took, then threw back when the price came due. The Grove keeps accounts." "I'm not taking anything." "Good. Now put down your pendant." "What?" Her hand closed tighter around the Heartstone. "No." "It wants to join them. Look at the chain." She looked. The silver had gone slack in her fist, slithering between her fingers of its own accord, inching toward the water with the patience of a snake. The pendant's inner glow had deepened from crimson to something darker, hungrier. She yanked it back and stuffed it down her collar against her skin. "It's mine. It was given to me." "By whom?" "Someone. I don't—know." The admission scraped out of her. "It just appeared. In my delivery bag, one night at the Empress." "Old magic given without a name is a hook waiting for a fish." Nyx's eyes dimmed to embers. "Remember that when you meet her." "Meet who?" "The Seer leaves no footprints. But you will find her anyway. The Grove always delivers what you came for—" they paused, and their whisper thinned to almost nothing, "—plus interest." Beyond the great oak, the clearing continued into a second clearing, and then a third, each ringed with smaller standing stones, each holding its own impossible detail. A flowerbed where every bloom was a different eye—amber, grey, one startlingly like her own blue—turning on slender stems to follow her as she passed. A bench of woven living willow, still budding, still growing. A child's swing hung from a branch, its seat glowing with moonlight despite the golden afternoon, swaying in a wind she couldn't feel. She stopped in front of the swing. "That's not right. It's daytime." "The Fae Courts never let go of moonlight." Nyx's form rippled with something like a laugh. "It's their favourite currency. And see how it sways? Something is sitting on it. Something light." Rory's mouth went dry. "Is there something sitting on it?" "There is always something sitting on it. Whether you can see it depends entirely on how much it wants to be seen." The swing creaked once, deliberately, and the singing in the flowers faltered—then swelled again, louder, as if to drown out whatever sound came next. Rory walked on, faster now. Unease crawled up her spine, but wonder kept pace with it, the two of them shoulder to shoulder the whole way. A hedge of hawthorn parted before her without being touched. A fox with fur the colour of dusk watched from a mossy stone, three eyes blinking in slow rotation, then bowed its head—an usher showing her to her seat—and trotted into a shadow that had no right to exist in this light. "Aurora." Nyx had gone still, form gathered tight and solid, violet eyes fixed ahead. "Look." Between two silver birches, a woman stood with her back to them. Silver hair fell to her waist. Her feet rested on the wildflowers, and the wildflowers bent toward her, but where she stood the ground showed no impression at all—no footprints, no disturbance, nothing. Rory's hand drifted to the hilt of the Fae blade at her hip. Cold moonsilver met her fingers, and faint luminescence bled through the leather of her coat. The woman turned. Lavender eyes, pale as morning frost, found Rory's and held them. "You arrive," the Seer said, "carrying a question you have not yet thought to ask, a gift you did not ask for, and a name that is only half yours."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.757
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"comforting"
4"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount850
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
December1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory9
Victorian1
Evan1
Nyx9
Fae1
Seer1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Nyx"
3"Seer"
places(empty)
globalScore0.971
windowScore1
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like cool water with bones in it"
1"something like a laugh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1187
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean28.26
std24.26
cv0.858
sampleLengths
059
123
267
37
412
57
665
719
81
958
1016
1113
1283
137
1435
152
1650
1768
1833
194
206
219
229
2353
247
252
2621
2724
282
2930
3085
3112
3232
3310
3422
3524
3678
3715
3845
3928
4014
4130
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was singing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences87
ratio0.103
matches
0"That was the first thing—winter simply ended at an invisible line, and warm air folded over her like bathwater."
1"\"The last time I passed through a Fae threshold, I was human. I came out as this.\" They spread their fingers—wings of darkness that scattered moths of shadow across the grass."
2"Light filtered down in shafts of liquid gold, and Rory watched dust motes climb in those shafts—climbing, deliberately, against every law gravity had ever passed."
3"The water ran clear as glass, and on the bottom lay coins—no, not coins."
4"\"The Seer leaves no footprints. But you will find her anyway. The Grove always delivers what you came for—\" they paused, and their whisper thinned to almost nothing, \"—plus interest.\""
5"A flowerbed where every bloom was a different eye—amber, grey, one startlingly like her own blue—turning on slender stems to follow her as she passed."
6"The swing creaked once, deliberately, and the singing in the flowers faltered—then swelled again, louder, as if to drown out whatever sound came next."
7"A fox with fur the colour of dusk watched from a mossy stone, three eyes blinking in slow rotation, then bowed its head—an usher showing her to her seat—and trotted into a shadow that had no right to exist in this light."
8"Her feet rested on the wildflowers, and the wildflowers bent toward her, but where she stood the ground showed no impression at all—no footprints, no disturbance, nothing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03727714748784441
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009724473257698542
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean13.64
std9.22
cv0.676
sampleLengths
017
119
223
313
410
523
620
724
87
912
107
113
1219
1331
144
158
162
1717
181
194
2031
2123
225
2311
243
2510
2610
2724
2825
2924
307
312
3212
3321
342
3521
3629
375
3814
3920
403
4126
4216
4317
444
456
468
471
489
492
87.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5517241379310345
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences61
matches
0"She turned the Heartstone Pendant"
1"It pulsed against her palm,"
2"Their whisper carried the hush"
3"They spread their fingers—wings of"
4"Their grip felt like cool"
5"Its trunk had the girth"
6"Her scar prickled."
7"Her hand closed tighter around"
8"She yanked it back and"
9"they paused, and their whisper"
10"She stopped in front of"
11"Her feet rested on the"
ratio0.197
25.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences61
matches
0"The standing stones rose out"
1"Rory counted seven of them,"
2"The air between them trembled,"
3"She turned the Heartstone Pendant"
4"It pulsed against her palm,"
5"Nyx slid out of the"
6"Their whisper carried the hush"
7"Rory snorted and stepped between"
8"The frost vanished."
9"That was the first thing—winter"
10"Wildflowers erupted to her knees,"
11"A vibration she felt in"
12"Nyx stood at the threshold,"
13"Violet eyes flared"
14"They spread their fingers—wings of"
15"Rory held out her arm."
16"Nyx took it."
17"Their grip felt like cool"
18"The oak at the grove's"
19"Its trunk had the girth"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The silver had gone slack in her fist, slithering between her fingers of its own accord, inching toward the water with the patience of a snake."
1"A child's swing hung from a branch, its seat glowing with moonlight despite the golden afternoon, swaying in a wind she couldn't feel."
2"The swing creaked once, deliberately, and the singing in the flowers faltered—then swelled again, louder, as if to drown out whatever sound came next."
3"A fox with fur the colour of dusk watched from a mossy stone, three eyes blinking in slow rotation, then bowed its head—an usher showing her to her seat—and tro…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.6424%