| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.378 | | leniency | 0.757 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1200 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1200 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1187 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.06% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 850 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | December | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Victorian | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.971 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like cool water with bones in it" | | 1 | "something like a laugh" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1187 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 28.26 | | std | 24.26 | | cv | 0.858 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 83 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 85 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 78 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the first thing—winter simply ended at an invisible line, and warm air folded over her like bathwater." | | 1 | "\"The last time I passed through a Fae threshold, I was human. I came out as this.\" They spread their fingers—wings of darkness that scattered moths of shadow across the grass." | | 2 | "Light filtered down in shafts of liquid gold, and Rory watched dust motes climb in those shafts—climbing, deliberately, against every law gravity had ever passed." | | 3 | "The water ran clear as glass, and on the bottom lay coins—no, not coins." | | 4 | "\"The Seer leaves no footprints. But you will find her anyway. The Grove always delivers what you came for—\" they paused, and their whisper thinned to almost nothing, \"—plus interest.\"" | | 5 | "A flowerbed where every bloom was a different eye—amber, grey, one startlingly like her own blue—turning on slender stems to follow her as she passed." | | 6 | "The swing creaked once, deliberately, and the singing in the flowers faltered—then swelled again, louder, as if to drown out whatever sound came next." | | 7 | "A fox with fur the colour of dusk watched from a mossy stone, three eyes blinking in slow rotation, then bowed its head—an usher showing her to her seat—and trotted into a shadow that had no right to exist in this light." | | 8 | "Her feet rested on the wildflowers, and the wildflowers bent toward her, but where she stood the ground showed no impression at all—no footprints, no disturbance, nothing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 617 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03727714748784441 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009724473257698542 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 13.64 | | std | 9.22 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 87.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5517241379310345 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "It pulsed against her palm," | | 2 | "Their whisper carried the hush" | | 3 | "They spread their fingers—wings of" | | 4 | "Their grip felt like cool" | | 5 | "Its trunk had the girth" | | 6 | "Her scar prickled." | | 7 | "Her hand closed tighter around" | | 8 | "She yanked it back and" | | 9 | "they paused, and their whisper" | | 10 | "She stopped in front of" | | 11 | "Her feet rested on the" |
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| 25.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them," | | 2 | "The air between them trembled," | | 3 | "She turned the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "It pulsed against her palm," | | 5 | "Nyx slid out of the" | | 6 | "Their whisper carried the hush" | | 7 | "Rory snorted and stepped between" | | 8 | "The frost vanished." | | 9 | "That was the first thing—winter" | | 10 | "Wildflowers erupted to her knees," | | 11 | "A vibration she felt in" | | 12 | "Nyx stood at the threshold," | | 13 | "Violet eyes flared" | | 14 | "They spread their fingers—wings of" | | 15 | "Rory held out her arm." | | 16 | "Nyx took it." | | 17 | "Their grip felt like cool" | | 18 | "The oak at the grove's" | | 19 | "Its trunk had the girth" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver had gone slack in her fist, slithering between her fingers of its own accord, inching toward the water with the patience of a snake." | | 1 | "A child's swing hung from a branch, its seat glowing with moonlight despite the golden afternoon, swaying in a wind she couldn't feel." | | 2 | "The swing creaked once, deliberately, and the singing in the flowers faltered—then swelled again, louder, as if to drown out whatever sound came next." | | 3 | "A fox with fur the colour of dusk watched from a mossy stone, three eyes blinking in slow rotation, then bowed its head—an usher showing her to her seat—and tro…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.027 | | leniency | 0.054 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |