Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5DCRG2YMASKW4FYX30A4G

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Duration:
49.9s
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$0.000709
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Z.AI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came again, and I knew before I opened the door who it would be. Nobody knocked like that, three slow raps, patient as a debt collector. I unbolted Eva's deadbolts, all three of them, and there he stood in the yellow glow of the stairwell lamp. Charcoal suit, ivory cane, that platinum hair slicked back like he'd never once had a bad morning in his life. Lucien Moreau. Six months since I'd seen him, and my body still reacted before my brain caught up, heart slamming, palms damp. "You're not answering your phone, chérie." "My phone's broken." "Your phone rang when I called it from the street." Right. Broken in the sense that I'd chucked it in a drawer. "What do you want, Lucien?" "May I come in?" "No." He glanced past my shoulder at the chaos behind me, Eva's books stacked in towers, scrolls unrolled across the sofa, Ptolemy glaring from the bookshelf like a small furry judge. "Your friend Eva invited me. Something about a translation she cannot finish." "Eva invited you?" "Her exact words were, and I quote, 'Tell Rory to stop being childish and get in here.'" He smiled, thin and knowing. "I merely softened the delivery." I stepped aside. Mistake number one. He swept past, and the smell of him hit me, sandalwood and something darker underneath, something I'd spent half a year trying to forget. His cane tapped across the floorboards as he surveyed the flat, the amber and black of his mismatched eyes cataloguing everything. Ptolemy leapt down and wound around Lucien's legs. Traitor. "The cat remembers me." "Cats are terrible judges of character." "Perhaps. Or perhaps they simply hold no grudge." He settled onto the one clear chair, laying the cane across his knees. "You, however, chérie, hold grudges like a professional." "This from the man who sold my name to the Vane syndicate." The words came out steadier than I expected. I'd rehearsed them for months, in the shower, on delivery runs, at three in the morning staring at the ceiling above Silas' bar. And here they were, finally, and he didn't even flinch. "I did not sell your name." "You told them where I was." "I told them nothing." He leaned forward, elbows on the cane. "I told them there was a courier in East London moving objects of interest. That is all. If I had given them your name, Rory, you would not have had six months of delivering noodles for Monsieur Cheung. You would have had forty seconds and a bag over your head." The truth of it landed like a punch. I gripped the back of the sofa. "That's your defence? You only sold them half of me?" "My defence," he said, rising slowly, "is that they already knew. They came to me with your description, your route, the crescent scar on your left wrist. My only options were to confirm what they had, or point them elsewhere and buy you time. I bought you time." He was close now, too close, close enough that I could see the tension I'd missed before, a tightness around his jaw that hadn't been there six months ago. "You did not stay to hear the rest." "You gave me no chance to." "You ran before I finished my sentence." Because I had. God, I'd run. One sentence into his explanation and I'd grabbed my coat and walked out of that wine bar, out of his orbit, out of the best and worst six months of my life. His hand had been half-raised, reaching for me, and I'd flinched like he was going to hit me. Like I was back with Evan, counting exits. "I know," I said. Silence. Ptolemy chirped from the windowsill. Somewhere below us, the curry house sent up a plume of cumin and frying onions through the floorboards. "You could have called," he said quietly. "Any time. You know people who know people. You knew how to find me." "Calling you would have meant it was finished." "And it is finished?" "Not for me." The admission slipped out before I could stop it. His expression didn't change, but something in the room did, the air thickening, pressing in. He set the cane against the chair. "Eva's translation," I said, stepping back, retreating to safe ground. "The one you can't help her with. Let's see it." "Rory." "Eva said get in here. I'm in here. Show me the scroll." He held my gaze for a long moment. Then, instead of the scroll, he reached into his breast pocket and drew out a folded piece of paper, cream-coloured, worn soft at the creases. I knew that paper. I'd written on paper like that, once, in his flat in Rotherhithe, practising ward-symbols by candlelight while he corrected my hand. "What is it?" "Read it." I unfolded it. My own handwriting looked back at me. A note I'd left on his kitchen counter the night I disappeared, all those months before the wine bar, before everything. *Gone out. Don't wait up. R.* I'd written it in charcoal because his pens were all imported and terrifying. "You kept my shopping list." "I kept," he said, "the last thing you left me before you vanished for three weeks, and I was certain they had taken you. I kept it through the wine bar. I kept it through six months of silence." He took the paper from my fingers, folding it with careful precision, and tucked it away again. "You asked what I want, chérie. I want you to hear the rest of the sentence you ran from." My mouth went dry. "Which was?" "The syndicate wanted you because of what you are, not what you carry. Malphora. The bloodline they've hunted for two centuries." He said it plainly, no drama, the way you'd report the weather. "And I have known since the first week I met you. I said the rest at the wine bar. I said, 'They are coming, and I would burn every bridge in this city before I let them touch you.' You were out the door before I reached the word burn." The floor seemed to tilt. Ptolemy's eyes gleamed at me from the shelf. Eva's scrolls rustled in some draft I couldn't feel, and Lucien stood there, patient as ever, waiting for me to run again or stay. "You knew what I was," I managed. "All that time." "Since the first week." "And you stayed." "Chérie." He picked up his cane, and the smile he gave me was the first honest one I'd seen on him, tired and crooked and real. "I have never once stayed anywhere. That should have told you everything." Footsteps sounded on the stairs outside, heavy, deliberate, more than one pair. Lucien's smile vanished. He moved between me and the door in a single fluid motion, blade whispering free of the cane. "Third landing," a voice called up the stairwell. "I can smell her."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.26
leniency0.52
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.04
95.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"the last thing"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"silence"
2"the last thing"
3"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1162
ratio0.005
matches
0"Gone out. Don't wait up. R."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount682
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Lucien4
Evan1
Silence1
Rotherhithe1
Footsteps1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
5"Footsteps"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1162
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"knew that paper"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean21.92
std23.05
cv1.051
sampleLengths
028
162
26
33
410
512
65
74
81
942
103
1127
1251
139
144
156
1629
1712
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206
2161
2215
2310
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256
267
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3021
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324
333
3431
3520
361
3712
3858
393
402
4150
425
4375
446
4583
4637
4710
484
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences98
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount597
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.023450586264656615
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0033500837520938024
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.86
std12.42
cv1.048
sampleLengths
016
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220
320
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520
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378
387
3910
4077
418
426
437
443
453
4632
4718
488
494
76.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4897959183673469
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"Somewhere below us, the curry"
1"Then, instead of the scroll,"
ratio0.038
23.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences53
matches
0"I unbolted Eva's deadbolts, all"
1"He glanced past my shoulder"
2"He smiled, thin and knowing"
3"I stepped aside."
4"He swept past, and the"
5"His cane tapped across the"
6"He settled onto the one"
7"I'd rehearsed them for months,"
8"He leaned forward, elbows on"
9"I gripped the back of"
10"he said, rising slowly, He"
11"His hand had been half-raised,"
12"he said quietly"
13"His expression didn't change, but"
14"He set the cane against"
15"I said, stepping back, retreating"
16"He held my gaze for"
17"I knew that paper."
18"I'd written on paper like"
19"I unfolded it."
ratio0.491
44.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences53
matches
0"The knock came again, and"
1"Nobody knocked like that, three"
2"I unbolted Eva's deadbolts, all"
3"Charcoal suit, ivory cane, that"
4"He glanced past my shoulder"
5"He smiled, thin and knowing"
6"I stepped aside."
7"Mistake number one."
8"He swept past, and the"
9"His cane tapped across the"
10"Ptolemy leapt down and wound"
11"He settled onto the one"
12"The words came out steadier"
13"I'd rehearsed them for months,"
14"He leaned forward, elbows on"
15"The truth of it landed"
16"I gripped the back of"
17"he said, rising slowly, He"
18"God, I'd run."
19"His hand had been half-raised,"
ratio0.83
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Because I had."
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.7911%