Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5E1X117ZRDEKE32ZGH1H4

Run Details

Duration:
48.0s
Cost:
$0.000370
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The grove should have been ten minutes' walk from the Pen Ponds car park. It took Rory forty. She checked her phone for the third time. 11:47. The screen glowed a sickly blue in the dark, and the GPS dot sat motionless in the middle of a green wash of parkland, refusing to believe she'd moved. Below it, the signal bars blinked down to nothing, then nothing at all. She pocketed the phone and kept walking, breath fogging in the cold, the Heartstone pendant swinging against her sternum beneath her coat. It had been warm all evening. Now it was warm and pulsing, a slow beat against her chest like a second heart that didn't match her own. The standing stones rose out of the bracken ahead, ancient oaks petrified into grey pillars, their bark gone smooth as bone. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing beyond them — she knew from Eva's warning that they bloomed year-round here, blue and white and a red she'd never been able to name, colours too vivid for December. Tonight they looked grey. Tonight the whole clearing looked like a photograph left out in the rain. Eva had told her never to come at night. She'd told her never to come alone, and never for less reason than life or death. Rory had two out of three, and the pendant burning a hole against her ribs counted as the third. Dymas was missing. The pendant had led her here — pulsing stronger with every step east, and stronger still now, until each beat pressed against her like a thumb testing fruit. She stepped between the stones. The cold changed. That was the first wrong thing. It stopped being weather and became atmosphere — the still, cellar-damp cold of somewhere underground, though the sky above the clearing was clear and crowded with stars. Too crowded. She counted without meaning to, found fourteen stars in a cluster that should have held six, and stopped counting. "Hello?" Her voice fell into the grass. No echo. The clearing swallowed sound the way sand swallowed water. The pendant thumped. Then again, quicker. She pulled it out on its silver chain and held it up. The crimson stone glowed from within, faint but steady, and as she watched, the glow brightened, dimmed, brightened — in rhythm. She pressed two fingers to her own wrist, to the crescent scar she'd carried since she was nine, and found her pulse lagging half a beat behind the stone's. As if the stone was keeping time and her heart was trying to catch up. She let the pendant fall back against her chest and walked the perimeter of the clearing instead, boots clicking on packed earth, keeping the stones in sight. The wildflowers bent as she passed, each cluster tilting after her like faces tracking movement in a room. She crouched and touched one — a white bloom, open wide as a throat — and it flinched from her fingertip. Straightening, she heard it. Off to the north, beyond the stones, past where Richmond Park ended and the Richmond town should have begun: a lullaby. Wordless. A woman's voice humming something in a key that kept bending, sliding between major and minor like light through warped glass. "Isolde?" The name came out thinner than she wanted. The humming didn't stop. It came from everywhere now — north, east, behind her, inside the stones themselves, a vibration she felt in her molars more than heard. The pendant hammered against her chest. She clapped a hand over it. At the clearing's far edge, a shadow crossed between two of the oaks. Not cast. Crossed. There was no light to cast it — no moon, no torch, nothing but stars — and yet something tall moved through the gap between stones, unhurried, and did not come out the other side. She waited for it to emerge. Ten seconds. Twenty. The hum wound tighter, sweeter, almost tender. Don't hum along. Eva had said that once, laughing, as if it were a joke. Whatever you hear in there, Rory, never hum along. Rory bit the inside of her cheek until she tasted copper. The flowers were turning. All of them, every head in the clearing, swivelling to face her with the slow synchrony of a field of satellite dishes. She backed toward the stone gap she'd entered through, and the ground under her was soft — softer than it had been, giving like flesh, and she refused to look down, refused, and walked faster. Behind her, something exhaled. Not a breath — a weather system of breath, a long drawn sigh that stirred the hair on her neck and carried a smell like wet stone and lilies and, underneath, the cloying sweetness of a room where something has been left too long. The pendant seared against her palm where she gripped it. She risked a glance back. The clearing had grown. The far stones stood further away than they should, the whole space stretched like taffy, and the flowers nearest her had opened wider — some of them beyond flowers now, petals peeling back to show pale ridged interiors, rows of them, and she turned and ran for the gap in the stones because the gap was shrinking, the two grey pillars sliding toward each other like an eyelid closing. The hum rose behind her, delighted. She threw herself sideways through the closing gap, shoulder cracking against stone, and the pillars ground together behind her with a sound like teeth. She landed in bracken on the ordinary side of the grove, rolled, came up on her hands and knees, and the pendant was shrieking against her chest — not warm now, hot, pulsing so fast it felt like a trapped bird. Silence, on the grove side of the stones. Perfect, held silence. Then, from the gap between the pillars — a gap no wider than a hand's span now — came her own voice. "Hello?" Perfectly pitched. Perfectly her. A pause, the exact length of her own pause, and then it added, in her voice, in her flat Cardiff vowels: "You forgot something." Rory got to her feet without looking at the stones again, backed away into the dark of the park, and didn't stop walking until the Pen Ponds lights showed yellow through the trees. Only then did she lift the pendant out and look at it. The crimson stone had gone dark. Cold as riverbed gravel in her palm. And in the centre of the gem, where no flaw had been before, a single hairline crack ran from edge to edge — thin as a paper cut, and shaped exactly like a crescent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1100
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Heartstone1
Eva3
December1
Richmond2
Park1
Cardiff1
Pen1
Ponds1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Ponds"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a photograph left out in the"
1"felt like a trapped bird"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1114
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"warning that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean32.76
std26.06
cv0.795
sampleLengths
018
173
227
372
475
55
657
71
817
96
1077
1166
1247
139
1440
1513
1654
1724
1811
1961
204
2159
224
2369
246
2565
2611
2722
281
2925
303
3145
3213
3334
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"been ten"
13.78% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was keeping"
1"was trying"
2"were turning"
3"was shrinking"
4"was shrieking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences83
ratio0.157
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing beyond them — she knew from Eva's warning that they bloomed year-round here, blue and white and a red she'd never been able to name, colours too vivid for December."
1"The pendant had led her here — pulsing stronger with every step east, and stronger still now, until each beat pressed against her like a thumb testing fruit."
2"It stopped being weather and became atmosphere — the still, cellar-damp cold of somewhere underground, though the sky above the clearing was clear and crowded with stars."
3"The crimson stone glowed from within, faint but steady, and as she watched, the glow brightened, dimmed, brightened — in rhythm."
4"She crouched and touched one — a white bloom, open wide as a throat — and it flinched from her fingertip."
5"It came from everywhere now — north, east, behind her, inside the stones themselves, a vibration she felt in her molars more than heard."
6"There was no light to cast it — no moon, no torch, nothing but stars — and yet something tall moved through the gap between stones, unhurried, and did not come out the other side."
7"She backed toward the stone gap she'd entered through, and the ground under her was soft — softer than it had been, giving like flesh, and she refused to look down, refused, and walked faster."
8"Not a breath — a weather system of breath, a long drawn sigh that stirred the hair on her neck and carried a smell like wet stone and lilies and, underneath, the cloying sweetness of a room where something has been left too long."
9"The far stones stood further away than they should, the whole space stretched like taffy, and the flowers nearest her had opened wider — some of them beyond flowers now, petals peeling back to show pale ridged interiors, rows of them, and she turned and ran for the gap in the stones because the gap was shrinking, the two grey pillars sliding toward each other like an eyelid closing."
10"She landed in bracken on the ordinary side of the grove, rolled, came up on her hands and knees, and the pendant was shrieking against her chest — not warm now, hot, pulsing so fast it felt like a trapped bird."
11"Then, from the gap between the pillars — a gap no wider than a hand's span now — came her own voice."
12"And in the centre of the gem, where no flaw had been before, a single hairline crack ran from edge to edge — thin as a paper cut, and shaped exactly like a crescent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount7
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean13.42
std12.45
cv0.928
sampleLengths
014
14
28
31
429
513
622
76
821
921
1034
114
1213
139
1416
1519
163
1728
185
193
206
2127
222
2319
241
256
262
279
283
293
3012
3121
3229
3315
3427
3518
3621
374
3821
391
4021
419
424
4324
446
456
4613
472
481
4935
71.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.47560975609756095
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then again, quicker."
1"Then, from the gap between"
2"Only then did she lift"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences70
matches
0"It took Rory forty."
1"She checked her phone for"
2"She pocketed the phone and"
3"It had been warm all"
4"She'd told her never to"
5"She stepped between the stones."
6"It stopped being weather and"
7"She counted without meaning to,"
8"Her voice fell into the"
9"She pulled it out on"
10"She pressed two fingers to"
11"She let the pendant fall"
12"She crouched and touched one"
13"It came from everywhere now"
14"She clapped a hand over"
15"She waited for it to"
16"She backed toward the stone"
17"She risked a glance back."
18"She threw herself sideways through"
19"She landed in bracken on"
ratio0.286
88.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences70
matches
0"The grove should have been"
1"It took Rory forty."
2"She checked her phone for"
3"The screen glowed a sickly"
4"She pocketed the phone and"
5"It had been warm all"
6"The standing stones rose out"
7"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing beyond"
8"Tonight they looked grey."
9"Tonight the whole clearing looked"
10"Eva had told her never"
11"She'd told her never to"
12"Rory had two out of"
13"Dymas was missing."
14"The pendant had led her"
15"She stepped between the stones."
16"The cold changed."
17"That was the first wrong"
18"It stopped being weather and"
19"She counted without meaning to,"
ratio0.743
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Now it was warm and"
1"As if the stone was"
ratio0.029
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Now it was warm and pulsing, a slow beat against her chest like a second heart that didn't match her own."
1"A woman's voice humming something in a key that kept bending, sliding between major and minor like light through warped glass."
2"Not a breath — a weather system of breath, a long drawn sigh that stirred the hair on her neck and carried a smell like wet stone and lilies and, underneath, th…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.5995%