| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 87.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1167 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1167 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "resolving" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1177 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "We leave no mark, darling. The earth doesn't remember us, and we don't remember it, and that's the whole tragedy of the Fae in one sentence." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 890 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Time | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Time" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.713 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like nothing from the path — just" | | 1 | "something like it" | | 2 | "looked like she'd been carved from the co" | | 3 | "looked like a sunset that had been happen" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 37.97 | | std | 29.85 | | cv | 0.786 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 104 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 112 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 72 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 67 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 61 | | 30 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones looked like nothing from the path — just old oaks gone strange with age, their trunks thickened into pillars by centuries of standing still." | | 1 | "Their violet eyes — twin smudges of light in a face made of evening — turned slowly, taking it in." | | 2 | "Wildflowers blanketed the ground in defiance of the season outside — crimson and bone-white and a violet so deep it looked bruised, some of them nodding in a breeze Rory couldn't feel on her own skin." | | 3 | "No portal here, then — or at least nothing the stone recognized as one." | | 4 | "There were her footprints — and beside each one, nothing." | | 5 | "She heard it before she saw it — water moving in a way water shouldn't, a sound like a song played backward, each ripple unwinding rather than spreading." | | 6 | "A kitchen she almost recognized — Yu-Fei's back room, steam curling off the dumpling boilers." | | 7 | "A sound drifted across the flowers then — singing, or something like it." | | 8 | "The silver hair was what Rory saw first — a fall of it, luminous, moving through the far ring of stones like moonlight poured from a jug." |
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| 92.97% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 687 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.048034934497816595 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005822416302765648 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 14.71 | | std | 11.46 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 80.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5125 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind them, the standing" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It was only when Rory" | | 1 | "she said, because nothing smarter" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes — twin" | | 3 | "they whispered, and even though" | | 4 | "She kept her voice low" | | 5 | "They drifted forward, their edges" | | 6 | "She filed that away and" | | 7 | "Her boots pressed prints into" | | 8 | "She glanced back and stopped." | | 9 | "*We leave no mark, darling." | | 10 | "She heard it before she" | | 11 | "Her stomach clenched and she" | | 12 | "Her skin prickled." | | 13 | "She was three hundred years" | | 14 | "She gestured, and Rory saw" | | 15 | "Her smile faded into something" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones looked like nothing" | | 1 | "It was only when Rory" | | 2 | "The next, sound fell away." | | 3 | "The air went warm and" | | 4 | "she said, because nothing smarter" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes — twin" | | 6 | "they whispered, and even though" | | 7 | "The clearing opened ahead of" | | 8 | "Wildflowers blanketed the ground in" | | 9 | "The oaks formed a loose" | | 10 | "Every time she tried to" | | 11 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 12 | "Rory touched it without thinking," | | 13 | "That was something." | | 14 | "She kept her voice low" | | 15 | "The clearing seemed to want" | | 16 | "They drifted forward, their edges" | | 17 | "She filed that away and" | | 18 | "Her boots pressed prints into" | | 19 | "She glanced back and stopped." |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air went warm and green-scented, thick as breath, and the light slanted down at an angle that had nothing to do with the grey morning they'd left behind." | | 1 | "The oaks formed a loose ring around the whole space, but they were wrong here, too: their roots rose and arched above the soil like the ribs of some buried cath…" | | 2 | "Her stomach clenched and she stepped back, and the pool showed her only sky then, amber-gold and cloudless, as if embarrassed." | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed once, warm and steady, and overhead the amber light thickened toward what looked like a sunset that had been happening for a thousand years a…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde had (have)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |