Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
56
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"whisper that seemed to arrive inside her ears rather than at them"
1
"something between a sob and a sigh, a whisper l"
2
"not quite oaks — their bark spiraled rather than cracked, and their leaves were silver on one side, deep green on the other, and when they moved overhead they chimed, faint and bell-like, a sound like a distant wedding"
"Rory had walked Richmond Park a hundred times since moving to London, and she was certain she'd never seen this part of it — a fold of land behind a stand of ancient oaks, where the bracken grew wrong, bending toward the center of the clearing like iron filings drawn by a magnet."
1
"They were carved — she could see that now that she was close — with spirals and thin, looping lines that reminded her of Celtic knots, if Celtic knots had been designed by something with too many joints in its hands."
2
"Nyx poured out of the shadows at the third stone — she never saw them arrive anymore, only watched them coalesce, the violet glow of their eyes kindling last, like lamps lit in a darkened room."
3
"It was cool and still against her fingers — no pulse of warmth, no threat of a Hel portal."
4
"Her fingers were pale, nearly the same silver as the rock, and where they touched, the carved spirals began to glow — a light like moonlight through water, moving in slow currents across the stone's face."
5
"She'd seen the Veil once before, at a rift point under Silas's bar, and that had been different — torn, bleeding at the edges, wrong."
6
"She stepped between the stones and was simply — elsewhere."
7
"The sensation lasted a heartbeat — a cool rushing feeling, as if the air itself were flowing through her rather than around her — and then her boots met grass, and the world had changed."
8
"Wildflowers covered the meadow before her in bloom after bloom she could not name — flowers the color of stained glass, petals translucent, faintly luminous, shivering even where there was no wind."
9
"A stream cut through the middle distance, and where it ran, the water sang — actually sang, a low consonant hum, a choir of small voices in a language that made her teeth itch pleasantly."
10
"Not sugared — sweet like the smell of hay and apples and rain on hot stone, all at once, layered."
11
"And then Rory did smell it — sudden and sharp, woodsmoke and her mother's rye bread, the kitchen in Cardiff, a Saturday twenty years gone — and her eyes stung before she could stop them."
12
"Nyx came through behind her and stopped dead — Rory heard it, the absence of their usual liquid movement."
13
"Nyx made a sound Rory had never heard from them before — something between a sob and a sigh, a whisper losing its wind."
14
"The meadow opened into a grove of trees that were not quite oaks — their bark spiraled rather than cracked, and their leaves were silver on one side, deep green on the other, and when they moved overhead they chimed, faint and bell-like, a sound like a distant wedding."
15
"Time went strange — Rory felt it happen, the way an hour inside might be a minute outside, or a day, or a season."
16
"There was too much to see: a fox with fur like smoke watching them from a hollow, its eyes human-clever; a tree hung with hundreds of tiny glass bells that rang a different name for every passerby (hers, when she passed, was Laila, and she flinched, and Isolde said nothing, which was its own kind of mercy); a pond that reflected not the golden sky but a night sky, stars wheeling in it, and when Nyx leaned over the water their reflection stood solid — a man, dark-haired, thirty-ish, wearing a scholar's robe — and wept."
17
"And indeed, past the pond, the meadow rose to a low hill, and on the hill stood a circle of stones far older than the ones at the boundary — vast, half-sunk, covered in the same many-jointed spirals, glowing faintly gold from within, as if the rock were only a shell around a slow-burning coal."
18
"The Heartstone pulsed once against Rory's collarbone — faint, warm, and entirely wrong for this place — and the nearest stone's inner light shifted, gold to a deep attentive red."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
38
technicalSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"The sensation lasted a heartbeat — a cool rushing feeling, as if the air itself were flowing through her rather than around her — and then her boots met grass, …"
1
"A stream cut through the middle distance, and where it ran, the water sang — actually sang, a low consonant hum, a choir of small voices in a language that made…"
2
"The meadow opened into a grove of trees that were not quite oaks — their bark spiraled rather than cracked, and their leaves were silver on one side, deep green…"
3
"There was too much to see: a fox with fur like smoke watching them from a hollow, its eyes human-clever; a tree hung with hundreds of tiny glass bells that rang…"
4
"And indeed, past the pond, the meadow rose to a low hill, and on the hill stood a circle of stones far older than the ones at the boundary — vast, half-sunk, co…"