Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5F0DNV0V5YNAEHBVT48DG

Run Details

Duration:
52.0s
Cost:
$0.000432
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones appeared where no stones should be. Rory stopped at the edge of the bracken, her breath clouding in the December air. Richmond Park stretched behind her, bare and brown and ordinary, but here — tucked in a hollow she'd walked past a dozen times on her delivery routes — seven oaks stood in a circle, their trunks silvered and gnarled like melted candle wax. Between them, the light was wrong. Warmer. Golden, though the sun hung pale and low behind cloud. "This is it?" She pulled her coat tighter. The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed once, twice, then settled into a slow rhythm against her collarbone, like a second heartbeat finding its pace. "It is and it isn't." Nyx poured out of the shadow of a leaning birch, their form solidifying from the knees up, violet eyes bright against the smudge of their face. "The grove exists in both places at once. The stones are the hinge. Step through and you'll feel the world... fold." "That's not comforting." "It wasn't meant to be." Rory glared at them, but her hand drifted to the dagger at her hip. The Fae blade hummed against her palm through the leather, cold even through cold leather, a sliver of winter that never thawed. Isolde had pressed it into her hands three nights ago with a riddle about debts and moons, and Rory still didn't fully understand why she'd accepted it. Only that the alternative — walking into a Fae-touched pocket realm unarmed — seemed worse. She stepped between the stones. The fold hit her like a change in cabin pressure. Her ears popped. The grey December sky stretched and thinned like pulled toffee, and then it was gone, replaced by a vault of deep green-gold, as if she stood at the bottom of a sunlit sea. Wildflowers carpeted the hollow — cowslips and orchids and flowers she had no names for, blooms with petals like blown glass, translucent, glowing faintly at their centers. It was high summer here. Somewhere, water trickled over stone. "Careful where you walk." Isolde was already inside, standing barefoot in the grass, silver hair loose to her waist. She left no prints. "The grove remembers every footstep. Some of them it keeps." "Keeps them how?" Rory looked down. Her boots pressed the flowers flat, and the flowers sprang back — slower than they should have, like things waking from sleep. "Time moves strangely here. An hour within might be a breath without, or a winter. The flowers spring back when the grove decides they spring back, not when physics does." Isolde's lavender eyes caught the strange light. "What the ground takes, it returns in its own season." Nyx drifted past them both, half-dissolved into shadow, and Rory noticed the shadows here behaved oddly too. They pooled in the wrong directions, sliding toward the standing stones rather than away from the light, as if the grove had more than one sun. "You've been here before," Rory said. "I've been everywhere the light forgets." Nyx ran a shadowed hand above a patch of blue flowers without touching them. The blooms leaned toward their fingers anyway, hungry. "Hm. Faefire orchids. They shouldn't grow this far from the Courts." "Should we be worried?" "Everything is worth worrying about. Worry is just attention wearing a frightened face." Rory followed the sound of water. A stream cut through the hollow, and she crouched at its bank — the water ran clear, but beneath the surface, lights moved. Not reflections. Small, self-luminous things, spiraling upstream against the current, like fish made of drifts of glow. When she reached toward one, a sensation rolled up her arm, a hum in the bones, low and pleasant and utterly wrong, the way a chord can be beautiful and slightly out of tune. "Don't drink it." Isolde's voice came from behind, mild as morning. "The water remembers being rain, and it remembers being the sea, and it would love to share. Three days later, you'd still be remembering." Rory snatched her hand back. The light-thing spiraled away, trailing sparks. She stood and took in the grove properly for the first time. The oaks — the seven standing stones were oaks, she realized, not stones at all, or something that was both, bark and mineral grown into each other like interlaced fingers — rose higher than any tree had a right to. Their canopy didn't open onto sky. It opened onto a second forest above, upside down, its roots hanging like pale chandeliers, birds moving through it that sang chords instead of notes. She heard one now, close by: three notes woven into one, a sound she felt in her sternum. "I thought the Veil was weakening," she said quietly. "I thought we were walking toward a wound." "You are." Isolde drifted alongside the stream, her bare feet never disturbing the grass. "But a wound has edges, and edges must be tended. The grove is the stitching. The Fae grew it long ago to hold the tear closed — a knot in the fabric, tied from both sides." "Both sides." "What do you think grows upside down above your head, child?" Unease settled into Rory's stomach, cold and specific. The pendant pulsed faster now, warm against her skin, and she realized it had been accelerating since she crossed the stones — not the Hel-warning rhythm she'd learned, but something else. A different signal. "Nyx. The pendant." Nyx solidified beside her, all sharp attention beneath the whisper-voice. "May I?" She lifted the chain over her head. The moment Nyx's shadowed fingers closed around the crimson stone, the light inside it flared — and beneath the glow, deep in the gem's heart, a second color woke. Gold. Fae-gold, the same green-gold as the strange sky. "It's answering the grove." Nyx turned the stone in their grip, and Rory watched their face, or the place where a face should be, sharpen with something like alarm. "This was cut in Dymas. Hel-fire and Fae-light don't speak to each other. They shouldn't be able to share a stone." "Shouldn't," Isolde echoed, smiling faintly, "is a word I've never been permitted to use." Rory took the pendant back. Warm. Double-hearted. Somewhere in its crimson depths, two lights that had no business coexisting circled each other like wary animals. "So the benefactor who sent me this," she said slowly, "gave me a key with two teeth." Above them, in the inverted forest, the chord-singing birds went suddenly, utterly silent. "Or a message," Nyx murmured, melting back toward the stones. "Messages come first. Keys come after." The stream's glow dimmed, all the light-things vanishing upstream at once, and the wildflowers around the grove's edge began to close, petal by petal, like eyes shutting. Isolde tilted her head, listening to something far away. "Ah. It seems the grove knows you've arrived." The nearest oak-stone shuddered. Deep in its bark, at the height of Rory's heart, a seam of gold light split open — door-shaped, patient, and exactly her size.
created_at"2026-09-02T13:38:17.15Z" 9/2/2026, 1:38:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
12.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"Isolde drifted alongside [alongside]"
2"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.188
78.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1159
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1159
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"comforting"
2"stomach"
3"whisper"
4"echoed"
5"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount877
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
December2
Park1
Heartstone1
Rory12
Fae3
Fae-touched1
Nyx7
Isolde7
Unease1
Hel-warning1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Unease"
places
0"December"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Fae-touched"
globalScore0.816
windowScore0.833
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed worse"
1"something like alarm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.853
wordCount1172
matches
0"not the Hel-warning rhythm she'd learned, but something else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean30.84
std25.49
cv0.827
sampleLengths
09
175
233
352
43
55
678
75
883
933
1028
1147
1243
136
1439
154
1613
1780
1835
1911
20101
2117
2250
232
2411
2542
263
2712
2845
2950
3014
3125
3217
3313
3416
3527
3617
3728
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences84
ratio0.107
matches
0"Richmond Park stretched behind her, bare and brown and ordinary, but here — tucked in a hollow she'd walked past a dozen times on her delivery routes — seven oaks stood in a circle, their trunks silvered and gnarled like melted candle wax."
1"Only that the alternative — walking into a Fae-touched pocket realm unarmed — seemed worse."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the hollow — cowslips and orchids and flowers she had no names for, blooms with petals like blown glass, translucent, glowing faintly at their centers."
3"Her boots pressed the flowers flat, and the flowers sprang back — slower than they should have, like things waking from sleep."
4"A stream cut through the hollow, and she crouched at its bank — the water ran clear, but beneath the surface, lights moved."
5"The oaks — the seven standing stones were oaks, she realized, not stones at all, or something that was both, bark and mineral grown into each other like interlaced fingers — rose higher than any tree had a right to."
6"The pendant pulsed faster now, warm against her skin, and she realized it had been accelerating since she crossed the stones — not the Hel-warning rhythm she'd learned, but something else."
7"The moment Nyx's shadowed fingers closed around the crimson stone, the light inside it flared — and beneath the glow, deep in the gem's heart, a second color woke."
8"Deep in its bark, at the height of Rory's heart, a seam of gold light split open — door-shaped, patient, and exactly her size."
82.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount879
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"Small, self-luminous things,"
1"above, upside down, its"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04664391353811149
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01478953356086462
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean13.95
std10.42
cv0.747
sampleLengths
09
115
243
36
41
510
68
725
831
921
103
115
1214
1322
1427
1515
165
1710
183
1933
2027
215
225
2319
244
2510
266
2722
2837
2910
3017
3126
326
3320
348
3511
364
3713
386
3923
402
4115
4234
4311
4424
455
466
4712
4840
496
90.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5595238095238095
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences60
matches
0"Only that the alternative —"
1"Somewhere, water trickled over stone."
2"Somewhere in its crimson depths,"
ratio0.05
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences60
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter"
1"She stepped between the stones."
2"Her ears popped."
3"It was high summer here."
4"She left no prints."
5"Her boots pressed the flowers"
6"They pooled in the wrong"
7"She stood and took in"
8"Their canopy didn't open onto"
9"It opened onto a second"
10"She heard one now, close"
11"she said quietly"
12"She lifted the chain over"
13"she said slowly"
ratio0.233
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences60
matches
0"The standing stones appeared where"
1"Rory stopped at the edge"
2"Richmond Park stretched behind her,"
3"She pulled her coat tighter"
4"The Heartstone pendant at her"
5"Nyx poured out of the"
6"Rory glared at them, but"
7"The Fae blade hummed against"
8"Isolde had pressed it into"
9"She stepped between the stones."
10"The fold hit her like"
11"Her ears popped."
12"The grey December sky stretched"
13"Wildflowers carpeted the hollow —"
14"It was high summer here."
15"Isolde was already inside, standing"
16"She left no prints."
17"Rory looked down"
18"Her boots pressed the flowers"
19"Isolde's lavender eyes caught the"
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The grey December sky stretched and thinned like pulled toffee, and then it was gone, replaced by a vault of deep green-gold, as if she stood at the bottom of a…"
1"They pooled in the wrong directions, sliding toward the standing stones rather than away from the light, as if the grove had more than one sun."
2"The oaks — the seven standing stones were oaks, she realized, not stones at all, or something that was both, bark and mineral grown into each other like interla…"
3"It opened onto a second forest above, upside down, its roots hanging like pale chandeliers, birds moving through it that sang chords instead of notes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.063
81.1987%