| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Isolde drifted alongside [alongside]" | | 2 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 78.43% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1159 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1159 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1172 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 877 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | December | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Fae | 3 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 7 | | Unease | 1 | | Hel-warning | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Unease" |
| | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Fae-touched" |
| | globalScore | 0.816 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed worse" | | 1 | "something like alarm" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.853 | | wordCount | 1172 | | matches | | 0 | "not the Hel-warning rhythm she'd learned, but something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 30.84 | | std | 25.49 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 83 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 80 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 101 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 28 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park stretched behind her, bare and brown and ordinary, but here — tucked in a hollow she'd walked past a dozen times on her delivery routes — seven oaks stood in a circle, their trunks silvered and gnarled like melted candle wax." | | 1 | "Only that the alternative — walking into a Fae-touched pocket realm unarmed — seemed worse." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the hollow — cowslips and orchids and flowers she had no names for, blooms with petals like blown glass, translucent, glowing faintly at their centers." | | 3 | "Her boots pressed the flowers flat, and the flowers sprang back — slower than they should have, like things waking from sleep." | | 4 | "A stream cut through the hollow, and she crouched at its bank — the water ran clear, but beneath the surface, lights moved." | | 5 | "The oaks — the seven standing stones were oaks, she realized, not stones at all, or something that was both, bark and mineral grown into each other like interlaced fingers — rose higher than any tree had a right to." | | 6 | "The pendant pulsed faster now, warm against her skin, and she realized it had been accelerating since she crossed the stones — not the Hel-warning rhythm she'd learned, but something else." | | 7 | "The moment Nyx's shadowed fingers closed around the crimson stone, the light inside it flared — and beneath the glow, deep in the gem's heart, a second color woke." | | 8 | "Deep in its bark, at the height of Rory's heart, a seam of gold light split open — door-shaped, patient, and exactly her size." |
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| 82.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 879 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Small, self-luminous things," | | 1 | "above, upside down, its" |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04664391353811149 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01478953356086462 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 13.95 | | std | 10.42 | | cv | 0.747 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 40 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 90.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5595238095238095 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Only that the alternative —" | | 1 | "Somewhere, water trickled over stone." | | 2 | "Somewhere in its crimson depths," |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her coat tighter" | | 1 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 2 | "Her ears popped." | | 3 | "It was high summer here." | | 4 | "She left no prints." | | 5 | "Her boots pressed the flowers" | | 6 | "They pooled in the wrong" | | 7 | "She stood and took in" | | 8 | "Their canopy didn't open onto" | | 9 | "It opened onto a second" | | 10 | "She heard one now, close" | | 11 | "she said quietly" | | 12 | "She lifted the chain over" | | 13 | "she said slowly" |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 35.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones appeared where" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Richmond Park stretched behind her," | | 3 | "She pulled her coat tighter" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 5 | "Nyx poured out of the" | | 6 | "Rory glared at them, but" | | 7 | "The Fae blade hummed against" | | 8 | "Isolde had pressed it into" | | 9 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 10 | "The fold hit her like" | | 11 | "Her ears popped." | | 12 | "The grey December sky stretched" | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the hollow —" | | 14 | "It was high summer here." | | 15 | "Isolde was already inside, standing" | | 16 | "She left no prints." | | 17 | "Rory looked down" | | 18 | "Her boots pressed the flowers" | | 19 | "Isolde's lavender eyes caught the" |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 44.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The grey December sky stretched and thinned like pulled toffee, and then it was gone, replaced by a vault of deep green-gold, as if she stood at the bottom of a…" | | 1 | "They pooled in the wrong directions, sliding toward the standing stones rather than away from the light, as if the grove had more than one sun." | | 2 | "The oaks — the seven standing stones were oaks, she realized, not stones at all, or something that was both, bark and mineral grown into each other like interla…" | | 3 | "It opened onto a second forest above, upside down, its roots hanging like pale chandeliers, birds moving through it that sang chords instead of notes." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |