Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5FZDFKBCAVWCBCDKV0XG1

Run Details

Duration:
54.1s
Cost:
$0.000407
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant had been warm for three days before Rory worked out why. Not warm like a coin left in sunlight. Warm like skin. It sat against her sternum and pulsed, slow and patient, and every time she pressed a fingertip to the crimson stone she felt it answer her heartbeat a half-second late — as if it were listening, then copying. The Heartstone led her north through Richmond Park at eleven at night, past the locked gates, along a deer fence that smelled of cold iron and wet grass, and the whole time the pulse quickened until it felt less like a pendant and more like a second heart strapped to the outside of her chest. She stopped at the old oak standing stones. She'd been to the Grove before, in daylight, with Eva chattering at her elbow about the time dilation and the wildflowers and how Isolde never crossed the boundary after dusk. In daylight the stones looked like a garden feature. Something tourists would photograph and forget. At night they looked like teeth. The oaks rose from the dark in twisted columns, their bark splitting into knots that could have been faces if she squinted, and she made a point of not squinting. The wildflowers glowed faintly at the edge of the clearing — pale white and violet, blooming in November as if the season simply didn't apply inside — and beyond them the Grove sat in a stillness that pressed against her eardrums. No wind. No owls. No traffic hum from the A3, which should have been audible from anywhere in the park. Nothing. "I just need to ask her about the pendant," Rory said aloud. Her voice came out flat and small and dropped dead two feet from her mouth. "That's all. In and out." Something in the dark answered with her own words, a half-beat behind. Quieter. Muffled. The way a voice sounds underwater. She stood very still, one hand on the strap of her bag, and told herself it was an echo. There was nothing to echo off of — no walls, no rock face, just open parkland and oaks — but her brain scrabbled for the rational option the way a person scrabbles for a banister on a dark staircase. She crossed the boundary between the stones. The air changed. That was the only way to describe it. The cold went from weather-cold to something older, a cold that seemed to come from the ground and the flowers and the hollows between the roots, and the pendant against her chest flared hot enough that she hissed and pulled it out from under her jacket. The crimson stone glowed now, an inner light like a coal breathing. The flowers had all turned to face her. Every bloom in the clearing, hundreds of them, heads lifted toward where she stood. "Okay." She laughed, and the laugh bounced wrong, swallowed by the stillness. "Okay, that's — fine. Flowers track light. I've got a light." She had no light. She hadn't brought a torch. She hadn't needed one, because the pendant had glowed brighter with every step and she'd been so focused on the pulse and the path that she'd walked into a fae grove at midnight like a woman following breadcrumbs out of her own fairy tale. In the stories, nobody ever wondered why the birds followed. She moved toward the centre of the Grove, where Isolde's usual seat waited — a flat slab of white stone set among the roots of the largest oak. The slab was empty. A ring of frost circled it, though frost touched nothing else, and the grass within the ring was bent flat in a spiral, as if something had walked around and around and around it. The pendant pulled. Not warmth now — weight. It dragged at the chain on her neck like it wanted to be set down on the stone. "Not a chance." She lifted the chain over her head anyway — she didn't examine why, her hands seemed to decide on their own — and held it at arm's length, stone dangling, watching it swing. The swing slowed. Stopped. The pendant hung motionless, angled toward the slab, quivering like a compass needle finding north. Behind her, a twig snapped. She turned. Nothing. Just the oaks and their knots and the flowers with their pale upturned faces, and the dark between the trunks where the dark was thicker than dark had any right to be, layered, like the shadows had depth. "Isolde?" Her voice barely carried. "I know you don't like visitors after dark. This'll take two minutes." Silence. Then, from her left — the same direction, exactly the same direction — a second twig snapped. Identical. Same weight. Same spacing. A recording of a sound, played twice. Rory backed toward the boundary stones, eyes sweeping the tree line, and her heel caught on something soft. She looked down. Wildflowers. A trail of them, laid flat in a line pointing toward the white slab, pressed into the grass the way you'd press flowers in a book. Someone — something — had arranged them since she'd arrived. She had not heard a footstep. She had not heard anything at all. The pendant went cold. That was worse. That was so much worse than warm, and her body knew it before her mind did, because her legs were already moving, walking her backward between the standing stones, and the darkness between the oaks moved with her. Not following. Keeping pace. A presence at the edge of vision on both sides, never quite resolving, glimpsed only as the suggestion of a long shape that leaned the way a person leans when they're being very, very patient. At the boundary the cold released her. The night air of the park hit her lungs and she realised she'd stopped breathing somewhere back among the flowers. She turned and ran. The pendant stayed cold all the way to the deer fence, all the way to Pen Ponds, and she didn't look back until she reached the road, hands shaking, chest heaving, streetlights buzzing overhead. Behind her the park lay black and ordinary. An owl called. Somewhere distant, a car passed. She looked down at the Heartstone in her fist. Cold as a grave coin. And pressed into her palm, delicate and pale, a single wildflower she had never picked. Its stem was warm. It was pulsing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
85.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"resolving"
count1
8
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
3"echo"
4"warmth"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"resolving"
8"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1074
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1032
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Heartstone2
Richmond1
Park1
Grove3
Eva1
Isolde2
November1
Silence1
Pen1
Ponds1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Pen"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a garden feature"
1"looked like teeth"
2"cold that seemed to come from the ground and the flowers and the hollows between the roots, and the pendant against her chest flared hot enough that she hissed and pulled it out from under her jacket"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1074
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean29.83
std22.87
cv0.767
sampleLengths
013
149
255
38
445
56
671
720
81
932
1020
1158
127
1369
148
1514
1623
1753
1810
1966
2026
2155
225
2341
2417
2530
2621
2750
284
2980
3027
314
3250
3329
344
353
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
76.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs162
matches
0"were listening"
1"were already moving"
2"was pulsing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences85
ratio0.094
matches
0"It sat against her sternum and pulsed, slow and patient, and every time she pressed a fingertip to the crimson stone she felt it answer her heartbeat a half-second late — as if it were listening, then copying."
1"The wildflowers glowed faintly at the edge of the clearing — pale white and violet, blooming in November as if the season simply didn't apply inside — and beyond them the Grove sat in a stillness that pressed against her eardrums."
2"There was nothing to echo off of — no walls, no rock face, just open parkland and oaks — but her brain scrabbled for the rational option the way a person scrabbles for a banister on a dark staircase."
3"She moved toward the centre of the Grove, where Isolde's usual seat waited — a flat slab of white stone set among the roots of the largest oak."
4"Not warmth now — weight."
5"\"Not a chance.\" She lifted the chain over her head anyway — she didn't examine why, her hands seemed to decide on their own — and held it at arm's length, stone dangling, watching it swing."
6"Then, from her left — the same direction, exactly the same direction — a second twig snapped."
7"Someone — something — had arranged them since she'd arrived."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1022
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03522504892367906
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00684931506849315
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean12.64
std12.99
cv1.028
sampleLengths
013
18
23
338
455
58
630
79
86
96
1030
1141
122
132
1416
151
1612
1715
185
1912
201
211
226
2319
2439
257
263
278
2846
2912
308
3114
3212
3311
344
355
3644
3710
3828
394
4034
413
425
4318
4436
453
461
4715
485
492
56.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4235294117647059
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"Just the oaks and their"
1"Then, from her left —"
2"Somewhere distant, a car passed."
ratio0.045
94.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences67
matches
0"It sat against her sternum"
1"She stopped at the old"
2"She'd been to the Grove"
3"Her voice came out flat"
4"She stood very still, one"
5"She crossed the boundary between"
6"She laughed, and the laugh"
7"She had no light."
8"She hadn't brought a torch."
9"She hadn't needed one, because"
10"She moved toward the centre"
11"It dragged at the chain"
12"She lifted the chain over"
13"Her voice barely carried"
14"She looked down."
15"She had not heard a"
16"She had not heard anything"
17"She turned and ran."
18"She looked down at the"
19"Its stem was warm."
ratio0.313
79.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences67
matches
0"The pendant had been warm"
1"It sat against her sternum"
2"The Heartstone led her north"
3"She stopped at the old"
4"She'd been to the Grove"
5"Something tourists would photograph and"
6"The oaks rose from the"
7"The wildflowers glowed faintly at"
8"Rory said aloud"
9"Her voice came out flat"
10"Something in the dark answered"
11"The way a voice sounds"
12"She stood very still, one"
13"She crossed the boundary between"
14"The air changed."
15"That was the only way"
16"The cold went from weather-cold"
17"The crimson stone glowed now,"
18"The flowers had all turned"
19"Every bloom in the clearing,"
ratio0.761
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It sat against her sternum and pulsed, slow and patient, and every time she pressed a fingertip to the crimson stone she felt it answer her heartbeat a half-sec…"
1"The Heartstone led her north through Richmond Park at eleven at night, past the locked gates, along a deer fence that smelled of cold iron and wet grass, and th…"
2"The oaks rose from the dark in twisted columns, their bark splitting into knots that could have been faces if she squinted, and she made a point of not squintin…"
3"The wildflowers glowed faintly at the edge of the clearing — pale white and violet, blooming in November as if the season simply didn't apply inside — and beyon…"
4"The cold went from weather-cold to something older, a cold that seemed to come from the ground and the flowers and the hollows between the roots, and the pendan…"
5"A ring of frost circled it, though frost touched nothing else, and the grass within the ring was bent flat in a spiral, as if something had walked around and ar…"
6"A presence at the edge of vision on both sides, never quite resolving, glimpsed only as the suggestion of a long shape that leaned the way a person leans when t…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She laughed, and the laugh bounced wrong, swallowed by the stillness"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
71.4477%