Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5GGSGBF8RBPA5BB3C59B7

Run Details

Duration:
48.1s
Cost:
$0.000394
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts. Rory had flipped all three the moment she'd heard the footsteps pause outside her door — slow, measured, weighted by something heavier than shoes. Nobody in East London climbed to the second floor of a curry house with that kind of patience unless they wanted something. She opened the door anyway. Lucien Moreau stood in the yellow light of the stairwell, charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzle, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his coat. His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — found hers and stayed there. "You changed the number." "You noticed." "I notice everything about you, Rory. It's a professional affliction." She should have shut the door. Her hand was on the wood, ready to do it, and yet her feet stayed planted on the lino. Ptolemy wound between her ankles and bolted past him into the hall, tail high, the little traitor. "Eva's not here." "I know. I watched her leave an hour ago. Blue coat, umbrella she didn't open." He tilted his head. "You're house-sitting. Books everywhere, kettle still warm, and you've made no attempt to tidy. You never tidy for yourself." "Don't profile me at midnight, Luc." "Then invite me in and I'll stop talking in a doorway." She stepped back. He crossed the threshold the way he crossed every room — as if the room should be grateful — and leaned the cane against the bookshelf, settling onto Eva's sagging sofa like it was a throne in Marseille. The hem of his coat dripped onto a stack of manuscripts on Sumerian binding rites. He moved them without looking, careful, and something in the smallness of the gesture cracked her chest open an inch. "Wine?" she said, because offering him tea felt like surrender. "You're angry." "I'm making conversation." She pulled Eva's cheap merlot from the cupboard and poured one glass, then, after a pause that lasted too long, a second. "You disappeared. Eight months. I sat across from you in that bar and told you—" The words snagged. She drank instead. "Told me you didn't do this. That whatever I was, whatever you were becoming because of me, you couldn't afford it." He accepted the glass, fingers brushing hers, deliberate. "I have the speech memorised. I replayed it in three languages." "That's not funny." "I wasn't joking. French makes it sound less pathetic. Care to hear?" "Lucien." He set the glass down untouched. The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one swallowed it. "You asked me to go. So I went. Avaros keeps me busy, and busy is what I asked for. But then the Cheung job crossed my desk this week, and the name Carter was on it, and I discovered that eight months of an entire demonic realm's bureaucracy had not managed to kill a particular habit." "Which habit?" "Checking whether you were alive." The radiator clanked. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa and claimed Lucien's lap with the shamelessness of his species, and Lucien — demon-blooded fixer, dealer in secrets, man who charged five hundred quid for a rumour — stroked the cat's ears like it was the most natural thing in the world. "You could have called," she said. Quieter now. "Could I have? You made it very clear, Rory. You were still bleeding from the last man who got close. I was the worst possible thing I could be — interested. So I gave you the space you were too proud to ask for." He looked up. "Tell me I miscalculated. Lie to me if you have to. It would make this easier." Her scar itched — the crescent on her wrist, the one from the bad summer, the one Evan had never asked about and Lucien had kissed once, wordless, in the back of a black cab on the Embankment. She curled her fingers around it. "You didn't miscalculate. That's the problem. You were right about everything, and I hated you for it." "I know." A ghost of a smile. "It's why I stayed away. Hating me keeps people safe. Ask anyone." "Anyone in Avaros, maybe." "Anyone, everywhere. You especially." She crossed the room and sat beside him — not close, one cushion of distance, Ptolemy sprawled between them like a fuzzy demilitarised zone. The rain ticked against the window. Downstairs, the curry house exhaust fan rattled its familiar rhythm, and somehow that ordinary sound made the whole night more unreal. "The Cheung job," she said. "Is that the only reason you came?" "No." He said it fast, before she could turn it into a joke. "The Cheung job is the reason I had an excuse. I've drafted forty-one messages to you. I deleted them. Tonight I threw my phone in the Thames and took a cab." "You threw your phone in the Thames." "A replacement is already being couriered. That's not the point." "The point being?" "The point being that I have spent three decades being a man people hire and nobody keeps, and the first time in my life I wanted to be kept, I was standing in a bar watching you convince yourself you were a liability to me." His hand stilled on Ptolemy's back. "So. I am here, uninvited, at midnight, soaked through, and I would like to know if I am wasting the trip." The wine sat cold in her stomach, sweet and unhelpful. She looked at him — at the rain-damp platinum hair, the careful hands, the eyes that never matched and never lied, not to her, not once. "If I say yes," she said, "things change. I'm not doing the orbiting thing again. No disappearing realms, no eight-month silences, no pretending we're acquaintances when everyone in this city knows better." "That sounds like terms." "Negotiable ones. I learned from the best." He set the cat aside and turned to face her fully, and for the first time since she'd known him, Lucien Moreau looked uncertain — a small, astonishing crack in all that tailored armour. "Then I accept your terms," he said, "with one amendment." "Which is?" "That you stop hiding at Eva's when things get hard, and come home. To the flat above the bar. Where your things already are, because I never had the heart to move the coat on the hook." Her breath caught. She looked at the door, at the three deadbolts she'd locked against the world, and then back at the man sitting in Eva's shabby sofa as if he'd been waiting eight months to be let in. "The coat's still there?" "Every day. I check." His voice dropped. "It's a professional affliction."
created_at"2026-09-02T13:39:06.678Z" 9/2/2026, 1:39:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.565
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"measured"
2"charged"
3"familiar"
4"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1111
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount578
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
East1
London1
Moreau2
Eva3
Marseille1
Sumerian1
Lucien5
Quieter1
Evan1
Embankment1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like surrender"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1111
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean23.15
std22.06
cv0.953
sampleLengths
048
15
248
34
42
510
642
73
838
96
1011
1176
1210
132
1446
1540
163
1712
181
1973
202
215
2250
238
2463
2544
2617
2719
284
294
3051
3112
3244
337
3410
353
3672
3736
3832
394
407
4134
4210
432
4437
4539
464
4711
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs92
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences76
ratio0.118
matches
0"Rory had flipped all three the moment she'd heard the footsteps pause outside her door — slow, measured, weighted by something heavier than shoes."
1"His mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — found hers and stayed there."
2"He crossed the threshold the way he crossed every room — as if the room should be grateful — and leaned the cane against the bookshelf, settling onto Eva's sagging sofa like it was a throne in Marseille."
3"The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one swallowed it."
4"Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa and claimed Lucien's lap with the shamelessness of his species, and Lucien — demon-blooded fixer, dealer in secrets, man who charged five hundred quid for a rumour — stroked the cat's ears like it was the most natural thing in the world."
5"Her scar itched — the crescent on her wrist, the one from the bad summer, the one Evan had never asked about and Lucien had kissed once, wordless, in the back of a black cab on the Embankment."
6"She crossed the room and sat beside him — not close, one cushion of distance, Ptolemy sprawled between them like a fuzzy demilitarised zone."
7"She looked at him — at the rain-damp platinum hair, the careful hands, the eyes that never matched and never lied, not to her, not once."
8"He set the cat aside and turned to face her fully, and for the first time since she'd known him, Lucien Moreau looked uncertain — a small, astonishing crack in all that tailored armour."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount569
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.028119507908611598
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0017574692442882249
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean14.62
std13.13
cv0.898
sampleLengths
02
124
222
35
426
58
614
74
82
910
106
1119
1217
133
1419
1519
166
1711
183
1938
2015
2120
2210
232
2425
2518
263
2729
2811
293
3012
311
326
3311
3456
352
365
373
3847
396
402
4147
4216
4338
446
4517
467
4712
484
494
70.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4473684210526316
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences38
matches
0"She opened the door anyway."
1"His mismatched eyes — one"
2"She should have shut the"
3"Her hand was on the"
4"He tilted his head"
5"She stepped back."
6"He crossed the threshold the"
7"He moved them without looking,"
8"she said, because offering him"
9"She pulled Eva's cheap merlot"
10"She drank instead."
11"He accepted the glass, fingers"
12"He set the glass down"
13"He looked up"
14"Her scar itched — the"
15"She curled her fingers around"
16"She crossed the room and"
17"He said it fast, before"
18"His hand stilled on Ptolemy's"
19"She looked at him —"
ratio0.632
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences38
matches
0"Rory had flipped all three"
1"Nobody in East London climbed"
2"She opened the door anyway."
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
5"His mismatched eyes — one"
6"She should have shut the"
7"Her hand was on the"
8"Ptolemy wound between her ankles"
9"He tilted his head"
10"She stepped back."
11"He crossed the threshold the"
12"The hem of his coat"
13"He moved them without looking,"
14"she said, because offering him"
15"She pulled Eva's cheap merlot"
16"The words snagged"
17"She drank instead."
18"He accepted the glass, fingers"
19"He set the glass down"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He crossed the threshold the way he crossed every room — as if the room should be grateful — and leaned the cane against the bookshelf, settling onto Eva's sagg…"
1"Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa and claimed Lucien's lap with the shamelessness of his species, and Lucien — demon-blooded fixer, dealer in secrets, man who charge…"
2"She looked at the door, at the three deadbolts she'd locked against the world, and then back at the man sitting in Eva's shabby sofa as if he'd been waiting eig…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He accepted, fingers brushing hers, deliberate"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.1460%