| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1115 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1115 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1127 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1075 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Rory | 7 | | Fae | 1 | | Hel | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like patience in them" | | 1 | "felt like forty, boots tearing through" | | 2 | "something like burnt sugar" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.887 | | wordCount | 1127 | | matches | | 0 | "not the steady ember warmth she knew, but a flickering, arrhythmic stutter, like a heart in trouble" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 34.15 | | std | 21.11 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 71 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem pulsed against her palm — a slow heartbeat of warmth — and she exhaled." | | 1 | "Wildflowers still carpeted the clearing in colours that didn't exist in any florist's catalogue — violet bleeding into gold, petals that shimmered like wet glass." | | 2 | "The glow inside the gem had shifted — not the steady ember warmth she knew, but a flickering, arrhythmic stutter, like a heart in trouble." | | 3 | "She waited, counting her breaths, and on the seventh breath the count broke — because her breath wasn't the only one." | | 4 | "Clicked it again, faster, and the rapid clicking sounded — absurdly, horribly — like insect legs on stone." | | 5 | "The pendant flared in her hand — one hard pulse of crimson, then cold again." | | 6 | "It burned suddenly, savagely hot, and she gasped — and in that gasp she caught the smell of it, under the copper and the wet dark: rot and hawthorn and something like burnt sugar." | | 7 | "The pendant burned hotter, dragging her hand upward, and where the crimson glow touched the air it left a seam — a thin vertical line of red, hanging in the darkness like a wound in the world." | | 8 | "And behind it, at the edge of the glowing grove, she saw the torch — her torch — lying on the ground near her rucksack, exactly where she'd knelt, untouched, as though she had never moved at all." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1068 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sickly blue-green wash" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03745318352059925 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010299625468164793 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 10.53 | | std | 8.73 | | cv | 0.829 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 67.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.45794392523364486 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond the trees, an" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "It cut off, clean as" | | 1 | "She zipped her jacket to" | | 2 | "Her breath fogged, though the" | | 3 | "Her voice came back at" | | 4 | "She knelt by the spiral's" | | 5 | "She'd been coming here for" | | 6 | "She said it out loud" | | 7 | "It wasn't a protection thing." | | 8 | "She pulled the pendant out" | | 9 | "She spun with the torch." | | 10 | "She waited, counting her breaths," | | 11 | "It didn't sound like an" | | 12 | "She couldn't tell which, and" | | 13 | "She clicked the switch." | | 14 | "She ran what felt like" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked" | | 16 | "She turned anyway." | | 17 | "It had no face, but" | | 18 | "It raised one long arm." | | 19 | "It burned suddenly, savagely hot," |
| | ratio | 0.244 | |
| 76.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung wrong over" | | 1 | "Rory checked the pendant one" | | 2 | "The crimson gem pulsed against" | | 3 | "Hel's portal was close." | | 4 | "The grove hadn't changed." | | 5 | "Wildflowers still carpeted the clearing" | | 6 | "The ancient oaks formed their" | | 7 | "That was the first thing." | | 8 | "The silence after the owl's" | | 9 | "It cut off, clean as" | | 10 | "She zipped her jacket to" | | 11 | "Dew soaked through Rory's trainers." | | 12 | "Her breath fogged, though the" | | 13 | "Her voice came back at" | | 14 | "She knelt by the spiral's" | | 15 | "Yu-Fei would be furious about" | | 16 | "Rory dug out a torch" | | 17 | "The second thing happened when" | | 18 | "The flowers had turned." | | 19 | "Every bloom in the clearing" |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers still carpeted the clearing in colours that didn't exist in any florist's catalogue — violet bleeding into gold, petals that shimmered like wet glas…" | | 1 | "Faint bioluminescence seeped from the petals, a sickly blue-green wash that turned the clearing into the inside of a drowned thing." | | 2 | "Something behind her, in the voice of something that had never used a throat, whispered back." | | 3 | "And behind it, at the edge of the glowing grove, she saw the torch — her torch — lying on the ground near her rucksack, exactly where she'd knelt, untouched, as…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, and the words came out steadier than she felt" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |