Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5HSMFG5XKH68KTSG894QM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.000518
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight, three measured raps that no one in the building ever used. Rory set down the takeaway container, crossed the sitting room on silent feet, and looked through the peephole. Charcoal suit. Platinum hair. That cane. She considered not opening the door. She considered it for a full ten seconds, which was ten seconds longer than she'd considered anything in weeks, and then she unlatched the chain. "I'm not hiring you." "Good evening to you too, Carter." Lucien Moreau leaned on the ivory handle, and she noticed—because her traitorous eyes had always noticed everything about him first—that he favored his left leg more than usual. Blood on his trouser cuff, dried brown. "May I come in?" "No." He held up a paper bag. Grease marks bloomed through the bottom where something hot had been pressed against it. "I brought vindaloo. From the Golden Empress. I know you work Thursdays and I know you never eat before close, and I know you'll pretend this doesn't move you." She left the door open and walked back inside, which was as good as an invitation and they both knew it. He followed, closed the door with his heel, and set the bag on the kitchen counter like a man returning to a house he'd once lived in. Maybe he had. The coat hook by the door still held the ghost of his hat. "You're limping." "I was shot." Her stomach dropped before she could stop it. "Where?" "Thigh. Through and through. I've stitched it." He lowered himself onto her sofa with a care that confirmed the wound, laid the cane across his knees. "It's not why I came." "Then why did you come?" He looked at her. That was always the trouble with Lucien—one amber eye and one black, and both of them saw too much. "Three weeks, Rory. Three weeks and nothing. You sell me the best vindaloo in Whitechapel and you look through me like a window. I want to know what I did." "You know what you did." "I genuinely don't, which should tell you something about how many things I've done." The flat was small and the distance between them smaller. She stood by the window with her arms crossed, the streetlight cutting her in half, and wished he'd yell so she could yell back. He never yelled. That was the whole problem with him. He'd sat in this exact spot last spring and told her, in that infuriating silver voice, that the men hunting her had put a price on her head, and he'd smiled while he said it, and she'd thought—she'd thought he was telling her for money. She'd found out later he'd turned down two hundred thousand to keep her name out of the ledger. By then she'd already said the unforgivable things. He'd already walked out with his hat and his cane and that terrible, unbroken dignity. "Eva told me," she said. "About the two hundred grand." The mask didn't move, but something behind it did. She could always tell. "Eva talks too much." "You let me stand in that bar and call you a mercenary. You let me call you worse. You could have said one word, Lucien. One word, and I—" "And you what?" He leaned forward, elbows on knees, and his voice stayed gentle in a way that was almost cruel. "You would have believed me? You'd have taken my word over the evidence in front of your eyes? Rory. You fled a man who lied to you beautifully for two years. Your instincts saved your life. I wasn't going to ask you to amputate them for my sake." "That's not your decision to make for me." "Then what is?" He gestured, and for the first time the gesture had a crack in it, a real frustration. "You weren't speaking to me. Three weeks, Carter. I gave you space and you treated it like a verdict." "Because I was ashamed!" It came out louder than she meant. Ptolemy—no, that was Eva's cat; here it was just the radiator ticking and the street noise below—right, no cat, just her own pulse in her ears. "Because I looked at the only person who'd ever put me first and I read him like a contract. Because my instincts, the ones you're so bloody complimentary about, got you wrong. Everything about you wrong. Do you know what that does to a person? To find out the one time she judged cruelly, she was the cruel one?" He said nothing. The clock on the shelf did its work. "You're supposed to argue," she said. "You argue for a living." "I'm listening. It's a rare commodity. I hoard it." "You're impossible." "I've been called that in four languages." He rose, wincing, and crossed to her window. This close, she could smell the copper under his cologne, see the fatigue dragging at the corners of his eyes. "I want to say something and I want you to hear it without a lawyer's cross-examination. Can you do that?" She lifted her chin. "No promises." "Good enough." He turned to face her. "I didn't tell you about the money because the moment you knew, everything I did after would be suspect. You'd wonder if the coffee was penance, if the warning about Kessler was guilt, if I was buying something. I'd rather you think the worst of me than perform gratitude at me. That's the truth, unglamorous as it is." A pause. "The fancier truth, which you may cross-examine at will: I stayed in this city, in this business, at some personal risk, because leaving meant you'd have no one. That wasn't charity. Charity implies I did it for you." The words landed somewhere under her ribs and stayed there, warm and terrifying. "That's the worst apology I've ever heard." "It's not an apology. It's a confession. Apologies come after I've determined culpability." The ghost of a smile, the one that had gotten her into all of this in the first place. "You could have died tonight." "I frequently could." "Lucien." "Rory." He said her name like a verdict and it made her chest ache. "Come here." She didn't move. "You're bleeding on my floor." "I'm bleeding on your rug. There's a distinction, legally." And that—God help her—that did it. The laugh broke out of her before she could stop it, ragged at the edges, three weeks of silence coming out sideways. He reached up and tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear, careful, like she was the one who'd been shot. "I missed you," he said quietly. "In the interest of full disclosure." "You're bleeding, exhausted, and emotional. Nothing you say in this state is admissible." "Mm. Then I'll say it again when I'm better. Repeatedly. I'm told I'm very persistent." "Move your hand an inch and I'll bite you." "Noted for future reference." But he didn't move his hand, and she didn't step back, and the gap between them had shrunk to the width of a held breath. She pressed her palm flat against his chest, over the heartbeat, feeling for a lie. There wasn't one. There never had been. That was the part she couldn't forgive herself for. "Dinner first," she said, voice not quite steady. "Then you tell me everything Eva told you that you don't know she told me. And then—" She stopped. "Then?" He raised an eyebrow. "Then we'll see. I'm a lawyer's daughter. I never sign on the first read." "Nor should you." He picked up the vindaloo bag. "I brought two forks. I planned for negotiations." She took the bag from him and walked to the kitchen, and halfway there, without turning around, without meaning to at all, she said it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.036
96.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"determined"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"stomach"
2"pulse"
3"determined"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1296
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"She took the bag from him and walked to the kitchen, and halfway there, without turning around, without meaning to at al…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount707
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.28
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Blood1
Lucien2
Ptolemy1
Eva1
God1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"God"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite steady"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1296
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean24.45
std25.66
cv1.049
sampleLengths
036
16
231
34
445
51
649
764
82
93
109
1131
125
1353
145
1514
16107
1723
1810
1917
2029
2169
228
2339
2496
2511
2611
279
282
2955
306
31105
3213
337
3432
355
363
371
3816
398
409
4150
4212
4313
4415
459
4629
4731
4827
495
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"been pressed"
1"been shot"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs126
matches
0"was telling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences98
ratio0.051
matches
0"\"Good evening to you too, Carter.\" Lucien Moreau leaned on the ivory handle, and she noticed—because her traitorous eyes had always noticed everything about him first—that he favored his left leg more than usual."
1"That was always the trouble with Lucien—one amber eye and one black, and both of them saw too much."
2"He'd sat in this exact spot last spring and told her, in that infuriating silver voice, that the men hunting her had put a price on her head, and he'd smiled while he said it, and she'd thought—she'd thought he was telling her for money."
3"Ptolemy—no, that was Eva's cat; here it was just the radiator ticking and the street noise below—right, no cat, just her own pulse in her ears."
4"And that—God help her—that did it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount715
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.033566433566433566
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0013986013986013986
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.22
std12.14
cv0.918
sampleLengths
018
118
22
32
42
56
625
74
834
97
104
111
126
1314
1429
1521
1627
173
1813
192
203
218
221
2326
245
255
264
2719
2830
295
3014
3110
3224
333
347
3545
3618
378
3815
395
405
419
424
434
4429
4521
4648
478
4820
4919
56.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37755102040816324
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners37
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Maybe he had."
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences53
matches
0"She considered not opening the"
1"She considered it for a"
2"He held up a paper"
3"She left the door open"
4"He followed, closed the door"
5"Her stomach dropped before she"
6"He lowered himself onto her"
7"He looked at her."
8"She stood by the window"
9"He never yelled."
10"He'd sat in this exact"
11"She'd found out later he'd"
12"He'd already walked out with"
13"She could always tell."
14"He leaned forward, elbows on"
15"He gestured, and for the"
16"It came out louder than"
17"He said nothing."
18"He rose, wincing, and crossed"
19"She lifted her chin."
ratio0.566
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences53
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory set down the takeaway"
2"She considered not opening the"
3"She considered it for a"
4"Lucien Moreau leaned on the"
5"Blood on his trouser cuff,"
6"He held up a paper"
7"Grease marks bloomed through the"
8"She left the door open"
9"He followed, closed the door"
10"The coat hook by the"
11"Her stomach dropped before she"
12"He lowered himself onto her"
13"He looked at her."
14"That was always the trouble"
15"The flat was small and"
16"She stood by the window"
17"He never yelled."
18"That was the whole problem"
19"He'd sat in this exact"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He lowered (lower)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.036
82.7539%