Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H96NQKEQ8TTRVZNC1VCNZR

Run Details

Duration:
53.6s
Cost:
$0.000819
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against the cobblestones outside, turning Soho into a slick reflection of bruised sky and streetlamp halos. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air carried the sharp tang of roasted coffee beans, damp wool, and aged cedar. Green neon bled through the front window, casting long geometric shadows across the floorboards. Maps covered the plaster walls, their faded coastlines peeling at the seams. Black-and-white photographs lined the upper shelves, subjects staring out from decades past. Rory stood near the bar, shaking water from a waxed canvas jacket. Her straight shoulder-length black hair clung to her nape. She rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist, feeling the hardened ridge beneath her thumb. The brass bell above the door chimed. A man stepped inside, folding a black umbrella with mechanical precision. Water dripped from his charcoal coat onto the scuffed wood. He stopped. His gaze swept the room, bypassing the empty stools, landing on her. Five years compressed into a single breath. Liam. He used to drag her through St David’s Hall concerts, arguing constitutional law until three in the morning over burnt coffee near Llanthony Priory Bridge. The man standing before her wore a tailored navy suit, a silk knot pulled tight against his throat. Dark hair showed premature silver at the temples. Posture held the rigid alignment of someone who spent twelve hours a day in glass towers. He rested his umbrella against the wall. Polished leather shoes gleamed under the low bulbs, entirely out of place on Soho streets. “Rory.” His voice dropped half an octave, stripped of the easy cadence she remembered. She wiped moisture from her palms onto her thighs. “Liam.” He approached the bar. Steps measured. Weight distributed evenly. Silas leaned against the mahogany counter, a lint roller in his grip. Hazel eyes tracked the exchange. Silas pushed off the wood, his left knee catching slightly before he adjusted his stride. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the overhead filament. “What are you drinking?” Silas asked. “Guinness.” Rory watched condensation pool at the base of her glass. “On tap.” “Whiskey.” Liam rested both hands flat on the polished surface. Fingers interlaced. Knuckles pale. “Neat.” Silas poured three fingers of single malt, sliding it across the wood. He turned his attention to rolling dust off a wooden stool. The silence stretched, filled only by the low hum of the cooler and the muffled bass vibrating through the ceilingboards. “I heard you relocated last autumn,” Liam said. He kept his gaze fixed on the label behind the bar. “Since September.” Rory traced the rim of her glass. “Above the establishment. Before that, Cathays.” “You look fatigued.” The words struck without warning. She lifted her eyes. Pupils dark. Unblinking. “So do you.” He offered a tight curve of his lips. It failed to engage his cheekbones. “Senior associate. Hartwell & Pierce. I manage continental acquisition portfolios.” He tapped a platinum band against the glass. “Elena handles municipal zoning. We purchased a property in Richmond. South-facing gardens.” Rory nodded. Memory surfaced unbidden. Liam sitting on a threadbare rug, reading legal philosophy aloud while sleet battered the windows. He used to dismantle systems with surgical precision. Talk about building structures that endured. Now he recited council tax bands and mortgage rates. “Did you complete your research fellowship?” she asked. “Terminated.” He lifted the whiskey, let it burn his throat. “Grant funding collapsed. Familial obligations.” He set the glass down with a sharp ceramic click. “Compromise prevailed.” “It always does.” “Does it?” He finally locked eyes with hers. Hazelnut irises reflected the emerald glow. “I monitored your trajectory. Post-Cardiff. Paralegal certification. Logistics routing. Why abandon litigation? Your paternal line commands influence in Westminster chambers. Academic records placed you in the top tier.” She shifted her stance. Floorboards groaned beneath steel-toed boots. “My father observes professional boundaries. I honored mine.” “Through flight?” “Through preservation.” Her tone remained flat. Fingers tightened around the stem. Water droplets gathered on her skin. “You recall Julian. You recall the mechanics of that situation. I fled jurisprudence. I fled a household where affection required compliance.” Liam flinched. Jaw muscle twitched. He examined a row of crystal decanters. Glass shoulders fractured the ambient light. “I dialed sequentially. Every forty-eight hours. Network blocks disabled connectivity.” “I required acoustic isolation.” “You required exit velocity.” He poured a second measure without requesting approval. Hand trembled. Palm stabilized against the varnish. “We occupied that bridge for seventy-two hours debating administrative oversight. You wept during the comparative economics lecture. I believed you would reconstruct institutional frameworks.” “Architects repaint rooms. Foundations crack.” She maintained eye contact. Fingernails pressed into her palm. Scar tissue pulled tight. “Yu-Fei requires personnel versed in unauthorized access corridors. Engine failure protocol. Tactical evasion. I identify structural weaknesses.” Liam leaned forward. Forearms braced on the counter. Space between them compressed. Static accumulated. “You charted urban infrastructure for recreation. Memorized transit algorithms. You claimed chaos contained measurable architecture.” “Blueprints decay.” She met his stare. “Relocation exposes alternative networks.” He retrieved a weathered volume from his jacket interior. Cracked spine. Discolored typography. He advanced it across the polished surface. Paper fibers absorbed ambient humidity. “I revisited the text recently.” Voice reduced to a murmur. “Protagonist assumed exemption from consequence. Structural collapse occurred. Comprehension deepens. Regret accumulates.” She observed the cover. Thickness demanded two hands. Edges softened. Pressure built beneath her thumbs. “Retention suggests unfinished business.” “Unfinished business demands archival storage.” “Archives gather dust.” She advanced the novel back across the barrier. “Preservation serves the keeper.” “Keeper tolerates decay.” “Decay verifies continuity.” Silas released the lint roller. Adjusted rimless spectacles. Lens surfaces remained spotless. Old operative mapped emergency egress points. Registered atmospheric displacement. Operatives recognized conversational triage. “Richmond lacks industrial noise,” Liam stated. “Industrial noise prevents auditory hallucination.” “Sustainability diverges from survival metrics.” She enveloped her glass with both hands. Cold transferred to dermal layers. “Consumption replaces evacuation.” Exhale escaped slowly. Trapezius muscles lowered. Tailored construction failed to contain postural collapse. Veneer fractured. Exhaustion emerged through microscopic fissures. “I navigate Cathays intersections nocturnally. Olfactory memory triggers damp fiber degradation. Strong tannin infusion. Administrative law dispute. Nomenclature assignment contested. Mutual dismissal occurred. Subfloor accommodation resolved spatial deficits.” “Subfloors prevent ceiling collapse.” She gripped the book. Embossed lettering registered friction. “Retention confirms persistence.” “Persistence generates fatigue.” Outside, transmission gears engaged. Wet rubber scraped pavement. Emergency vehicles traversed arterial routes, descending toward financial districts. Neon illumination stuttered. Shadows elongated across cartographic displays. Liam glanced at a chronometer. Steel casing refracted light. “Transit schedule enforces departure parameters.” “Return to scheduled progression.” “Return to operational baseline.” Footwear rotated toward the entrance. Palms contacted brushed nickel hardware. Cold alloy surrendered to rotational force. Brass mechanism activated. Acoustic signal registered. Atmospheric displacement opened the threshold. Dampness entered the sealed environment.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.358
leniency0.717
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"affection"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"fractured"
count2
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"resolved"
count1
12
word"parameters"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"silk"
2"measured"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"traced"
6"affection"
7"crystal"
8"fractured"
9"trembled"
10"navigate"
11"resolved"
12"parameters"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
98.94% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount1
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0.007
matches
0"“I navigate Cathays intersections nocturnally. Olfactory memory triggers damp fiber degradation. Strong tannin infusion. Administrative law dispute. Nomenclature assignment contest…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1123
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount798
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Liam"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
St1
David1
Hall1
Llanthony1
Priory1
Bridge1
Rory4
Liam8
Fingers2
Hazelnut1
Hand1
Fingernails1
Silas5
Embossed1
Palms1
persons
0"David"
1"Rory"
2"Liam"
3"Fingers"
4"Hazelnut"
5"Hand"
6"Fingernails"
7"Silas"
8"Embossed"
9"Palms"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"St"
3"Llanthony"
4"Priory"
5"Bridge"
globalScore0.999
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1123
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.41
std26.23
cv1.075
sampleLengths
0140
1111
214
310
453
56
613
715
843
919
1015
113
1215
1344
1443
158
1627
173
1842
1917
202
2138
2228
234
2443
2535
2629
2710
2825
2922
3019
315
3215
333
343
3525
366
375
385
3915
4048
4115
423
4339
444
4536
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences153
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount802
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"beneath steel-toed boots."
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.00997506234413965
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007481296758104738
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean7.34
std5.45
cv0.743
sampleLengths
018
119
214
312
412
512
69
716
87
911
1010
112
1212
137
141
1525
1618
178
1816
197
2015
2114
229
231
244
252
263
2712
285
2915
3012
316
3211
332
3410
352
362
371
3812
3911
4020
418
4211
439
446
453
465
474
482
491
98.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.7124183006535948
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners109
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences101
matches
0"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
1"She rubbed the crescent scar"
2"His gaze swept the room,"
3"He used to drag her"
4"He rested his umbrella against"
5"His voice dropped half an"
6"She wiped moisture from her"
7"He approached the bar."
8"He turned his attention to"
9"He kept his gaze fixed"
10"She lifted her eyes."
11"He offered a tight curve"
12"It failed to engage his"
13"He tapped a platinum band"
14"He used to dismantle systems"
15"He lifted the whiskey, let"
16"He set the glass down"
17"He finally locked eyes with"
18"She shifted her stance."
19"Her tone remained flat"
ratio0.297
63.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences101
matches
0"Rain drummed against the cobblestones"
1"Maps covered the plaster walls,"
2"Rory stood near the bar,"
3"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
4"She rubbed the crescent scar"
5"The brass bell above the"
6"A man stepped inside, folding"
7"Water dripped from his charcoal"
8"His gaze swept the room,"
9"He used to drag her"
10"The man standing before her"
11"Posture held the rigid alignment"
12"He rested his umbrella against"
13"His voice dropped half an"
14"She wiped moisture from her"
15"He approached the bar."
16"Weight distributed evenly."
17"Silas leaned against the mahogany"
18"Hazel eyes tracked the exchange."
19"Silas pushed off the wood,"
ratio0.792
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now he recited council tax"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Posture held the rigid alignment of someone who spent twelve hours a day in glass towers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She maintained (maintain)"
1"Liam stated (state)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.189
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.075
90.4361%