Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H97SWFQ2PYX7RC9GJR2NKM

Run Details

Duration:
4m 15s
Cost:
$0.058836
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green sign of The Raven’s Nest hissed in the rain and threw long teeth of light across the wet street. Aurora pushed through the door with her shoulder, the Golden Empress delivery bag knocking against her hip. Steam from dumplings clung to her jacket. Her trainers squeaked on the floorboards. The bar smelled of lemon polish, spilled stout, and the damp wool of coats left too long on hooks. Old maps buckled in their frames along the walls. Black-and-white photographs sat between them, faces faded by smoke and time. A few drinkers hunched over their glasses. No one looked up. Silas stood behind the bar with a cloth in one hand and a tumbler in the other. His signet ring tapped the wood when he set the glass down. He did not lift his chin toward the corner booth. He only stopped wiping. Aurora followed the line of his attention. A woman sat beneath the map of Lisbon. Her hands rested on either side of a wine glass, fingers still. Her hair had been cut short and sharp at the jaw. The girl who had once painted suns on denim jackets and worn broken nail polish like war paint now sat in a grey wool coat buttoned to the throat. Aurora’s hand tightened on the strap of her delivery bag. Eva looked at her. For a moment neither of them moved. Rain drummed against the window. The beer taps dripped into their trays. Silas placed the cloth over his shoulder. “Table four has been nursing that glass since the rain started.” Aurora did not take her eyes off the woman. “She’s not a customer.” Silas set the tumbler on the shelf. “She paid. That makes her one.” Eva rose. Her chair scraped against the floor. The sound cut through the low murmur of the room. She stopped a few feet away, as if the distance belonged to someone else and she needed permission to cross it. “You still wear your hair like a curtain.” Aurora’s mouth tightened. “You still pick tables with the exit in sight.” Eva’s gaze dropped to the delivery bag. “You deliver food.” “I pay rent.” “You used to say you would never take orders from a kitchen phone.” “I used to say a lot of things before I learned which doors locked.” Eva flinched. The movement was small, controlled, and gone before it finished. Aurora remembered the old Eva, the one who threw her whole body into every feeling, who laughed with her head back and argued until the lights came up in the library. This woman held herself like a repaired vessel. Silas came around the bar with a slight drag of his left leg. He carried two glasses of water and placed them on the table without asking. “The back room is empty.” Aurora kept her voice flat. “We’re not hiding.” Eva’s fingers curled around the stem of her wine glass. “I am.” Silas looked at Aurora. His hazel eyes held no question. He turned and crossed to the bookshelf that lined the back wall. His hand moved along the spines until he pressed behind a cracked atlas. The shelf swung inward on oiled hinges. A narrow room waited beyond it. A lamp burned low over a scarred table. Two chairs faced each other. The walls held more photographs, a street in fog, a bridge split by winter light, a door with no handle. Silas stepped aside. Aurora went first. Eva followed. The scent of old paper and cold stone clung to the space. Silas set the water glasses down, then left them. The bookshelf closed behind him with a soft click. Aurora sat. Eva sat opposite. The lamp made hollows under their cheekbones. “You live above this place.” Aurora put her hands on the table. “You found it.” “I came in for shelter. I had a meeting near Soho. The sign looked like the kind of bar that keeps rain and questions out.” “And then?” “Then I saw the photograph by the register. Us at Penarth. You in that yellow coat with the missing button.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “I didn’t know he kept it.” “He asked if I was Eva.” “How did he know?” “He said you have a habit of naming your ghosts when you sleep.” Aurora’s jaw set. “I don’t sleep here.” “No. You sleep above the bar, where he can hear the floorboards.” The lamp buzzed. Aurora picked at the edge of the crescent scar on her wrist. Eva watched the movement. “You still do that.” “It itches when the weather turns.” “It used to itch when you lied.” Aurora dropped her hand. “Three years.” “Three years, four months.” “You counted.” “I stopped counting after the first year. Then my sister had a baby. Then my mother broke her wrist. Then I found the train ticket in my winter coat and started again.” Aurora leaned back. The chair creaked. “You kept the ticket.” Eva opened her handbag and drew out a folded slip of paper. The edges had gone soft. The print had faded to grey. She placed it on the table between them. “Platform four. Cardiff to London. You had five pounds and a bag with one zipper.” Aurora did not touch it. “You told me not to come back until I could stand.” “I meant until you could stand without looking over your shoulder.” “Same thing.” “No. One means safety. The other means you never let anyone walk behind you again.” Aurora stared at the ticket. The paper trembled from the vibration of the bar below, or from Eva’s hand, or from her own pulse. She could not tell. “He came to my flat after you left.” Aurora’s head lifted. “Evan?” Eva nodded. “Two days after. He banged on the door until Mrs. Hughes from downstairs threatened to call the police. He wanted to know where you went.” “What did you tell him?” “I told him I didn’t know.” “You should have told me.” “You were on a train with five pounds and a phone with a cracked screen. I didn’t want you to get off.” Aurora’s nails dug into her palm. “I called you from Bristol.” “You hung up.” “Your mother answered.” “She didn’t know how to tell me you were alive. She handed me the phone and I heard your breathing and I got angry.” “At me?” “At the sound of you breathing without me.” The words landed hard. Aurora looked at the wall, at the photograph of the bridge. Snow covered the railings. Someone had crossed it and left no footprints. “I wrote to you,” Eva said. “You never sent anything.” “I wrote twelve emails. Deleted them. I bought a card for your birthday and left it in a drawer. I walked past a phone box in Cardiff and stood there until a man asked if I needed help.” “What stopped you?” “You.” Aurora laughed once, without warmth. “I was four hundred miles away.” “You made yourself into a story I wasn’t allowed to finish.” Aurora picked up the water glass. Her hand was steady. She set it down again without drinking. “I needed to become someone who could sleep.” “You could have let me know you survived.” “I did. I sent you a message from a library computer. One line. ‘I’m in London.’” Eva’s eyes filled. She did not blink. “I got it at work. I read it six times. Then my boss asked for the report I was late on, and I closed the tab, and when I went back, the screen had gone dark. I thought I had imagined it.” “You didn’t answer.” “I didn’t have an answer that wasn’t an accusation.” Aurora looked at the ticket again. The folded paper held the shape of a hand. “I worked two jobs the first year,” she said. “I washed dishes until my knuckles split. I delivered flyers to flats with broken bells. I learned which streets had cameras and which doors opened if you leaned hard enough. I didn’t call you because you knew the girl who thought she deserved what happened to her.” Eva’s voice dropped. “That girl deserved better.” “She was too easy to find.” “So you buried her.” “I moved her into a room above a bar and taught her to keep her mouth shut.” Eva reached across the table. Her fingers stopped short of Aurora’s scar. “You don’t have to keep quiet with me.” Aurora looked at her hand. The nails were short, unpolished. A thin line of ink stained the side of the index finger. Some old habit remained. “You stopped painting,” Aurora said. Eva withdrew her hand. “I catalog damaged prints now. I mend paper. I work in a basement where the light comes from tubes.” “You used to paint on anything. Napkins. Train tickets. The back of my lecture notes.” “Paint dries.” “So do people.” Eva’s mouth curved, but the smile did not reach her eyes. “I married someone for eight months.” Aurora went still. “You never mentioned him.” “I never mentioned a lot of things. He worked with my brother. He liked clean surfaces. He didn’t like that I kept old tickets in my coat.” “Did he hurt you?” “No. He just made me smaller until I fit into the rooms he liked.” Aurora’s fingers closed into a fist. “You should have called me.” “I thought the same thing when I saw your photograph by the register.” The bookshelf shifted on the other side. A knock came, two beats. Silas opened the door enough to look in. “The rain has stopped.” Aurora did not turn. “We’re not done.” Silas’s gaze moved over the table, the ticket, the untouched water. “Then I’ll leave the lamp on.” He closed the door again. The click sounded final. Eva picked up the ticket and held it out. “I don’t want it anymore.” Aurora did not take it. “Why did you bring it?” “Because I wanted proof that I didn’t imagine you leaving.” “I left.” “I know. I’m still holding the receipt.” Aurora took the paper. It weighed almost nothing. She unfolded it. The date blurred where sweat or rain had touched it. Platform four. A single journey. No return. “You gave me this and told me to go.” “I also told you to eat. To wear the coat. To text when you arrived.” “I texted.” “From Bristol.” “I didn’t know what else to say.” “You could have said you were scared.” Aurora’s eyes burned. She blinked the feeling away. “I was terrified.” Eva’s shoulders loosened a fraction. “I know. I was too. I stood on that platform after the train left and I wanted to pull you back by the sleeve. I wanted to lock you in my kitchen and stand in front of the door until he forgot your name.” “You couldn’t.” “I know.” “You told me to go because you thought I would die if I stayed.” “I still think that.” Aurora folded the ticket along its old creases. She placed it in her jacket pocket, next to the receipt from the Golden Empress. Eva watched her. “You’re keeping it.” “I’m not letting it wander around your coat for another three years.” Eva let out a breath. It shook once, then steadied. “I don’t know how to do this now.” Aurora looked at the lamp, at the ring of light it made on the scarred table. “We start by not lying.” “All right.” “You came in here by accident.” “Yes.” “You wanted to leave when you saw me.” “Yes.” “You didn’t.” “No.” Aurora nodded. “Then sit here until the wine is gone.” Eva lifted her glass. The last of it caught the lamp like a bruise. She drank. Aurora watched her throat move, remembered summer nights on steps in Cardiff, cheap cider passed between them, Eva reciting bad poetry to make her laugh after a shift. Eva set the glass down. “You still owe me for that yellow coat.” “It had a missing button.” “You lost the button running for the train.” “I lost the coat last winter.” “That’s worse.” “I’ll buy you a new one.” “I don’t want a new one. I want the story of the old one.” Aurora’s mouth softened. “It smelled of chips and rain. The pocket held one train ticket and a library card that wasn’t mine.” Eva’s eyes shone. “It was mine.” “I knew.” “You kept it.” “I returned it.” “No. You kept me.” The bookshelf opened. Silas stood in the gap with a tray. Two fresh glasses of water. A plate of biscuits. He set them down without ceremony. “The bar will close in an hour. The lock sticks unless you lift the door.” Aurora looked at him. “You’re closing early.” Silas’s signet ring caught the lamp. “I’m closing when the room empties.” He left the biscuits and went out. The shelf stayed open this time. Cool air from the bar drifted in, carrying the smell of stout and lemon polish. Eva broke a biscuit in half. She pushed one piece toward Aurora. “Eat. You look like you live on tea and anger.” Aurora took the biscuit. “I live above a bar. I eat what I carry.” “Then carry this.” They ate in silence. Outside, a bus rolled through the wet street. The neon sign buzzed on through the window. Aurora finished the biscuit and brushed the crumbs from her fingers. Eva stood. Aurora stood too. For a moment they faced each other across the table, the empty glass and the plate between them. Eva buttoned her coat. Aurora pulled her delivery bag over her shoulder. They walked out of the back room. The bar had thinned. Silas wiped the counter. He did not look up as they passed, but he slid two glasses of water to the edge nearest them. Eva stopped at the bar. She took a card from her pocket and wrote a number on the back. She placed it beside Aurora’s hand. Aurora looked at the digits. Eva picked up her coat collar. “You know where to find me.” Aurora closed her fingers around the card. Eva walked to the door. The green sign outside washed her face in pale light. She pushed into the night. The bell above the door gave one short ring. Aurora remained at the bar. Silas set another glass down beside her. Outside, the rain drew lines through the neon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences133
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2400
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2400
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences176
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences306
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2400
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions101
wordCount1280
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity7.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden2
Empress2
Lisbon1
Eva32
Aurora48
Cardiff1
Silas13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Lisbon"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2400
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences306
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs214
mean11.21
std11.81
cv1.053
sampleLengths
051
150
243
37
460
510
64
726
811
99
104
117
126
1339
148
153
169
177
183
193
2013
2114
2251
2327
245
255
263
2710
282
2942
3039
313
323
3332
3412
355
367
373
3825
392
4020
413
426
436
444
4513
463
474
4812
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs218
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences306
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1282
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.014820592823712949
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00078003120124805
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences306
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences306
mean7.84
std6.79
cv0.866
sampleLengths
021
117
27
36
419
59
611
77
84
917
1012
1110
124
137
148
1512
1611
1729
1810
194
207
215
227
237
2411
259
264
277
286
292
306
3110
3221
338
343
359
367
373
383
3913
4014
412
4210
4331
448
4513
4614
475
485
493
45.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.1568627450980392
totalSentences306
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences163
matches
0"Her trainers squeaked on the"
1"His signet ring tapped the"
2"He did not lift his"
3"He only stopped wiping."
4"Her hands rested on either"
5"Her hair had been cut"
6"Her chair scraped against the"
7"She stopped a few feet"
8"He carried two glasses of"
9"His hazel eyes held no"
10"He turned and crossed to"
11"His hand moved along the"
12"She placed it on the"
13"She could not tell."
14"Her hand was steady."
15"She set it down again"
16"She did not blink."
17"Her fingers stopped short of"
18"He closed the door again."
19"It weighed almost nothing."
ratio0.202
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount151
totalSentences163
matches
0"The green sign of The"
1"Aurora pushed through the door"
2"Steam from dumplings clung to"
3"Her trainers squeaked on the"
4"The bar smelled of lemon"
5"Silas stood behind the bar"
6"His signet ring tapped the"
7"He did not lift his"
8"He only stopped wiping."
9"Aurora followed the line of"
10"A woman sat beneath the"
11"Her hands rested on either"
12"Her hair had been cut"
13"The girl who had once"
14"Aurora’s hand tightened on the"
15"Eva looked at her."
16"Rain drummed against the window."
17"The beer taps dripped into"
18"Silas placed the cloth over"
19"Aurora did not take her"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences133
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5806%