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Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9CD3P9Z30FV29DPVG6SRV
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.7 Flash (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.001142
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
94.18%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
72.02%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
84.74%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
99.05%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
33.44%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
85.3588%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
Aurora kicked the rotting boot
heel free from the tangle of briar roots.
Greaseproof paper bit into her
ribs.
Yu-Fei's delivery note promised exact
coordinates, yet the map showed nothing but empty scrubland beyond the park gates.
Her compass needle spun like
a drunkard's prayer.
The Heartstone pendant hammered against
her collarbone, warm as a fever, dragging her feet toward the ring of ancient oak standing stones. Cold seeped through her trainers. Copper stung her nostrils. Old iron and damp earth filled her lungs, heavy and
oppressive
.
She crossed the threshold between
the trees. Distant traffic noise vanished. Silence pressed against her eardrums, thick as wool. Temperature plummeted.
Breath plumed white before her
face.
The air tasted of ozone
and crushed violets. She stepped onto packed mud.
Grass grew waist-high, blades curved
in unnatural spirals.
Snowdrops pushed through frozen mulch
beside bursts of scarlet poppies. Flowers bloomed in
chaotic
clusters, stems twisting into shapes resembling human limbs. Aurora kept her gaze forward.
Eyes scanning the periphery revealed
motion. Gray shapes darted between fern fronds.
Shapes dissolved when she turned
her head. Parlor tricks of exhaustion. Double shift at Golden Empress drained her reserves. Yet the hairs on her arms stood rigid. The pendant
pulsed
again. Throb-
warmth
-
throb
. Pointed deeper into the clearing. Whispers threaded through the
silence
. Soft clicks. Hisses. A child giggling backwards. Words formed indistinct syllables. *Deliver. Pay. Stay.* Aurora pressed a hand to her chest. Metal burned through her jumper. Heat seared her sternum. She ignored the pain. Panic served no function. Analyze the threat. Assess escape routes. The grove offered none. Trees blocked all exits, trunks warped and fused together like melting wax. Bark
shimmered
with iridescent slime. Veins of gold ran beneath the surface, throbbing in rhythm with the stone. Footsteps crunched behind her. Heavy drag. Scraping. Click-clack. Click-clack. Aurora halted. Turned. Shadows stretched wrong. Direction pointed toward the centre of the grove rather than away from the moonlight filtering through the canopy. Movement
flickered
in the corner of her vision. Tall silhouette bending double. Limbs too long. Joints articulated in reverse. She focused directly. Empty space. Only wind-swaying foliage. Her heart rate climbed. Controlled breathing. In for four counts. Hold for four. Out for four. Calm returned. Logic reasserted dominance. "You hear me too," she muttered. Voice cracked dry throat. Silence answered. No
echo
rebounded from the stone walls. Sound died instantly. She resumed walking. Knees locked. Shoulders squared. Crescent scar on left wrist
throbbed
with phantom ache. Childhood accident faded compared to current
peril
. Ruthlessness from years evading Evan honed her instincts. Survival demanded precision.
She reached the heart of
the grove. Oval patch of flattened grass surrounded by concentric rings of white pebbles. Stone basin occupied the centre. Basin filled with liquid mirroring the sky
perfectly
. Stars reflected upside down. Constellations rotated counter-clockwise. Ripples spread outward without source. Water flowed uphill. Droplets lifted from surface, defying gravity. Arced toward branches. Vanished upon contact. Aurora approached basin. Reflection showed her face pale. Bright blue eyes wide. Hair plastered to forehead with cold sweat. Behind reflection stood a figure. Cloaked in rags of woven brambles. Face hidden behind mask carved from bleached antler. Eye sockets gouged deep. Mouth stitched with golden thread. Aurora whirled. No figure stood behind her. Reflection remained. Mask tilted. Stitched mouth strained. Thread snapped. Needle-like teeth gleamed. "Don't look at the basin," Aurora whispered. Commanded herself. Shut eyes tight. Palms pressed over eyelids. Felt stone
pulse
violently. Searched pockets with trembling fingers. Pulled out yellowed receipt. Ink bled across paper. Letters rearranged themselves. *
Golden Empress Restaurant
* transformed into *
Golden Cage Sanctuary
*. *
Delivery: Midnight Shift
* shifted to *
Collection: Eternal Servitude
*.
Stomach churned
acid bile. Yu-Fei knew. Delivery service masked collection point. Parcels contained offerings. Not food. Soul fragments bound in wax. *"Curious gift. Mortals usually bargain. You simply obey."* Voice slithered into skull. No sound waves impacted ears. Thought implanted directly. Tone amused. Melodious. Sharp edges hid beneath
silk
words. "I follow contracts," Aurora projected thought. Mind hardened like tempered steel. "Terms agreed. Payment promised." *"Payment?"* Laughter rippled through trees. Leaves shivered without breeze. Branches snapped under unseen
weight
. *"Gold? Silver? You pay in flesh. Time drains from veins. Memories rot on teeth. We feast on essence."* Roots erupted from soil.
Pale translucent tendrils lashed around
her ankles. Wood texture gave way to fibrous muscle fibres wrapped in bark. Tendons flexed. Pulled. Hard. Aurora slammed elbows backward. Impact struck hard shell. Grunting sound emanated from plant matter. Tendrils recoiled briefly. Regenerated instantly. Thickened. Constricted. Calves cramped. Blood flow restricted. Numbness crept upward. She kicked desperately. Trainers made purchase on slimy ridges. Torqued hips sideways. Friction burned denim. Slid free of one ankle. Dropped to knees. Mud soaked trousers instantly. Cold penetrated bone marrow. *"Signatures required,"* voice purred closer. Smell wafted nearby. Rotten eggs masked by heavy floral perfume. Metallic tang lingered underneath. *"You brought the key. Willing participant. Door opens wider for friends."* Aurora grabbed fallen root. Tore strip of fabric from jumper sleeve. Wrapped knot tight above knee. Pressure relieved
pulse
. Circulation returning. Strength trickled back. Used knife from utility belt. Cleaved binding tendril. Sap sprayed. Black viscous fluid hissed on contact with air. Tendril withered. Receded into earth. Other strands coiled tighter. Dragged her prone body forward. Toward basin. Toward reflection staring up with malevolent grin. Reflection spoke. Lips moved independently of aurora's. *"Join us. Leave the burden of choice. Here no pain awaits. No Evan. No debt. Just eternal stillness."* Aurora spat in basin. Saliva landed on mirror surface. Ripples distorted image. Reflection screeched. Teeth bared impossibly wide. Jaw unhinged. Tongue elongated into forked whip. Lashed upward. Aurora rolled left. Tendril missed shoulder by inches. Clawed digits scraped spine. Fabric ripped. Skin burned where touch landed. Ice-cold fire spread through nerves. Paralysis threatened. "Name yourself!" Aurora shouted. Voice boomed unnaturally loud. Echo returned multiplied. *Name yourself! Name yourself! Name yourself!* Acoustic weaponization. Sonic assault rattled teeth. Faint vibration shook loose pebbles. *"Names hold power,"* entity hissed. Form emerged from shadow of willow archway woven from living branches. Six limbs unfolded. Insectile elegance masking grotesque proportions. Chitin plates clicked. Mandibles ground together. Green bioluminescence
pulsed
along carapace. Eyes compound facets mirrored thousands of variations of Aurora's terror. *"You offer name freely? Gift accepted."* Antennae twitched. Sensory organs targeted mind. Pressure built behind temples. Migraine spike blinding. Thoughts
fragmented
. Memory slips drifted loose. First kiss. Mother's voice. Cardiff streets. Dissolving like sugar in rain. Resistance faltered. Surrender felt warm. Comfortable. Dangerous comfort. Aurora bit tongue. Pain sharpened focus. Blood flooded mouth. Iron taste grounded reality. Gritted teeth. Grabbed stone from chest. Held aloft. Crimson gem ignited. Inner glow blazed. Light cut through
gloom
like sword beam. Shadows shrieked. Flailed away from illumination. Entity shielded faceted eyes. Chitin plates rattled. Retreated half-step. Vulnerability exposed. Ventral slit parted
slightly
. Soft tissue glistened wet purple. Weak spot identified instinctively. *"Return the artifact!"* Screak tore air. Jagged sound waves
disrupted
concentration. Aurora's vision blurred. Limb swung. Razor blade appendage slashed downward. Aurora ducked. Slash severed hair lock. Scalp tingled where blade passed. Rolled forward. Sprang to feet. Leg muscles screamed protest. Balance
wavered
. Recovered stance. Lunged toward ventral slit. Knife aimed true. Strike would pierce soft membrane. End threat. Blade caught on invisible barrier. Spark showered. Kinetic energy rebounded. Shockwave hurled Aurora backward. Back struck standing stone. Vertebrae compressed. Wind knocked from lungs. Knife flew from grip. Spin vanished into darkness. Heartstone dimmed. Flickered erratically. Power waning. Entity recovered balance. Mandibles dripped acidic saliva. Drones of wings buzzed overhead. Swarm descended from canopy. Dozens of insectoid horrors blotting out starlight. Wingspan each size of dinner plate. Legs spiked. Jaws gnashed hunger. *"Trickster play ends,"* voice roared. Multiple tones layered. Harmony of malice. *"Flesh belongs to grove. Bone feeds roots. Spirit binds stone."* Antler-masked figure stepped from willow arch. Bramble cloak
fluttered
. Golden thread mended mouth seamlessly. Hand extended. Palm open. Claws beckoning. Stone
trembled
in aurora's grasp. Weight increased exponentially. Chains of
spectral
force manifested around wrists. Burned flesh. Bones creaked under strain. Lifted automatically. Dragged toward waiting palm. Aurora thrashed. Legs kicked empty air. Fingers scrabbled for purchase on smooth bark. Slipped repeatedly. Desperation clawed throat. Scream trapped behind vocal cords. Swallowed sound. Fight continued. Dig fingernails into palm. Blood smeared silver chain. Anchor thought formed. Intent crystalized. Reject transfer. Refuse acceptance. Entity frowned. Head tilted confusion. Pull ceased momentarily. Uncertainty rippled aura. Opportunity flashed brief second. Aurora twisted body mid-air. Momentum redirected fall. Crashed onto mossy ground. Rolled away from outstretched claws. Scraped skin raw. Elbow joint popped dislocation. Agony white-hot. Ignored injury. Scrambled to feet. Staggered posture. Faced swarm encircling position. Blocked paths. Cut retreat. Heartstone cooled rapidly. Warmth fading. Death by hypothermia
looming
. Leader raised both arms. Wings clapped simultaneously. Sonic boom blasted air. Aurora flew helpless. Hit tree trunk. Ribs
fractured
audibly. Crack-pop-snap. Pain eclipsed everything. Vision tunnelled. Peripheral gray. Breathing shallow gasps. Blood bubbled lips. Taste copper rich. Fall came. Shoulders hit ground. Impact jarred broken bones. Spine jolted. Legs gave out paralysis. Could not move below waist. Arms pinned by
spectral
bonds. Stone floated hovering between entities. Pulsing weak red. Like dying ember. Leader snatched stone. Claws closed around gem. Squeeze applied. Gem groaned. Cracks spiderwebbed surface. Inner glow sputtered. Failed light sources. Darkness surged. Void swallowed remaining illumination. Leader laughed triumphant. Rotated stone examining prize. Revealed backside inscription. Symbols carved deep. Runes rotating. Aligning. Activation sequence initiating. Portal instability growing. Ground quaked. Trees bent inward. Branches interlocked forming cage ceiling. Sky torn apart. Purple tear widened. Hole in reality. Through hole glimpsed swirling vortex. Centrifugal force sucking debris. Rocks leaves dead animals. Drawing inward. Vacuum pressure equalizing atmosphere. Auroras ears popped. Sinuses exploded bleeding. *"Harvest complete,"* Leader announced. Stone merged into hollow chest cavity. Seam sealed skin. Flesh bulged swelling. Gem visible beneath dermis. Beat once twice three times. Heartbeat synced with tearing sky. Vortex expanded. Suction intensifying. Debris whipped upward. Chaos ensued. Entities danced joyously embracing storm. Antler-mask stepped close to aurora. Leaned down. Face inches from hers. Breath hot fetid. Eyes bored soul. *"Now,"* whispered. Finger tapped sternum right over heart. *"We collect yours."* Teeth descended. Gap widened. Rows of needle points
glistening
venom. Darkness engulfed vision. Pressure mounted crushing skull. Scream erupted finally. Torn from throat raw bloody. World
shattered
into screaming shards.
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"req-1788360406-9iMpw6NnmpXlYQzc8AKi"
session_id
(null)
preset_id
(null)
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1788360406-wz6YVSbFrnLaW5hFMXI0"
upstream_id
"chatcmpl-087eddd9-325c-9bd3-a5c3-4d30e1988d14"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"5a9a0ee6-874a-4d03-92be-e5094c0df4e7"
id
"chatcmpl-087eddd9-325c-9bd3-a5c3-4d30e1988d14"
is_byok
false
latency
628
model_permaslug
"qwen/qwen3.7-flash-20260727"
provider_name
"Alibaba"
status
200
total_cost
0.0011418
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Alibaba"
response_cache_source_id
(null)
data_region
"global"
workspace_id
"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
19
tagDensity
0.579
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
94.18%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1719
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1719
totalAiIsms
41
found
0
word
"oppressive"
count
1
1
word
"silence"
count
3
2
word
"chaotic"
count
1
3
word
"scanning"
count
1
4
word
"pulsed"
count
2
5
word
"throb"
count
2
6
word
"warmth"
count
2
7
word
"shimmered"
count
1
8
word
"footsteps"
count
1
9
word
"flickered"
count
2
10
word
"echo"
count
2
11
word
"throbbed"
count
1
12
word
"peril"
count
1
13
word
"pulse"
count
2
14
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
15
word
"stomach"
count
1
16
word
"churned"
count
1
17
word
"silk"
count
1
18
word
"weight"
count
2
19
word
"fragmented"
count
1
20
word
"comfortable"
count
1
21
word
"gloom"
count
1
22
word
"disrupted"
count
1
23
word
"wavered"
count
1
24
word
"fluttered"
count
1
25
word
"trembled"
count
1
26
word
"spectral"
count
2
27
word
"looming"
count
1
28
word
"fractured"
count
1
29
word
"glistening"
count
1
30
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"oppressive"
1
"silence"
2
"chaotic"
3
"scanning"
4
"pulsed"
5
"throb"
6
"warmth"
7
"shimmered"
8
"footsteps"
9
"flickered"
10
"echo"
11
"throbbed"
12
"peril"
13
"pulse"
14
"sanctuary"
15
"stomach"
16
"churned"
17
"silk"
18
"weight"
19
"fragmented"
20
"comfortable"
21
"gloom"
22
"disrupted"
23
"wavered"
24
"fluttered"
25
"trembled"
26
"spectral"
27
"looming"
28
"fractured"
29
"glistening"
30
"shattered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"Stomach churned"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
414
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
414
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
421
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
22
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
72.02%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
20
markdownWords
110
totalWords
1719
ratio
0.064
matches
0
"Deliver. Pay. Stay."
1
"Golden Empress Restaurant"
2
"Golden Cage Sanctuary"
3
"Delivery: Midnight Shift"
4
"Collection: Eternal Servitude"
5
"\"Curious gift. Mortals usually bargain. You simply obey.\""
6
"\"Payment?\""
7
"\"Gold? Silver? You pay in flesh. Time drains from veins. Memories rot on teeth. We feast on essence.\""
8
"\"Signatures required,\""
9
"\"You brought the key. Willing participant. Door opens wider for friends.\""
10
"\"Join us. Leave the burden of choice. Here no pain awaits. No Evan. No debt. Just eternal stillness.\""
11
"Name yourself! Name yourself! Name yourself!"
12
"\"Names hold power,\""
13
"\"You offer name freely? Gift accepted.\""
14
"\"Return the artifact!\""
15
"\"Trickster play ends,\""
16
"\"Flesh belongs to grove. Bone feeds roots. Spirit binds stone.\""
17
"\"Harvest complete,\""
18
"\"Now,\""
19
"\"We collect yours.\""
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
8
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
74
wordCount
1612
uniqueNames
26
maxNameDensity
1.3
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone
3
Golden
4
Empress
2
Aurora
21
Voice
3
Evan
1
Commanded
1
Cage
1
Midnight
1
Eternal
1
Mind
1
Leaves
1
Smell
1
Acoustic
1
Form
1
Jagged
1
Multiple
1
Stone
4
Finger
1
Eyes
3
Reflection
4
Blood
4
Pressure
3
Entity
3
Legs
3
Leader
4
persons
0
"Heartstone"
1
"Empress"
2
"Aurora"
3
"Voice"
4
"Evan"
5
"Mind"
6
"Leaves"
7
"Smell"
8
"Form"
9
"Multiple"
10
"Finger"
11
"Eyes"
12
"Reflection"
13
"Blood"
14
"Pressure"
15
"Entity"
16
"Legs"
17
"Leader"
places
0
"Golden"
1
"Stone"
globalScore
0.849
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
56
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1719
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
421
matches
(empty)
84.74%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
55.45
std
24.76
cv
0.447
sampleLengths
0
67
1
55
2
89
3
83
4
81
5
22
6
78
7
81
8
73
9
29
10
15
11
32
12
86
13
30
14
65
15
25
16
53
17
28
18
51
19
38
20
64
21
59
22
72
23
21
24
91
25
64
26
73
27
92
28
61
29
11
30
30
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
414
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
403
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
421
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1629
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"trapped behind vocal cords."
adverbCount
55
adverbRatio
0.03376304481276857
lyAdverbCount
26
lyAdverbRatio
0.01596071209330878
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
421
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
421
mean
4.08
std
2.65
cv
0.649
sampleLengths
0
13
1
6
2
18
3
8
4
22
5
5
6
4
7
11
8
7
9
4
10
8
11
2
12
6
13
8
14
5
15
8
16
10
17
12
18
5
19
6
20
6
21
7
22
4
23
8
24
8
25
4
26
1
27
5
28
5
29
2
30
1
31
4
32
4
33
1
34
1
35
8
36
5
37
4
38
4
39
4
40
3
41
3
42
4
43
12
44
5
45
13
46
4
47
2
48
1
49
1
99.05%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.7980997624703088
totalSentences
421
uniqueOpeners
336
33.44%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
299
matches
0
"Only wind-swaying foliage."
1
"Bright blue eyes wide."
2
"Pale translucent tendrils lashed around"
ratio
0.01
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
9
totalSentences
299
matches
0
"Her compass needle spun like"
1
"She crossed the threshold between"
2
"She stepped onto packed mud."
3
"She ignored the pain."
4
"She focused directly."
5
"Her heart rate climbed."
6
"She resumed walking."
7
"She reached the heart of"
8
"She kicked desperately."
ratio
0.03
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
198
totalSentences
299
matches
0
"Aurora kicked the rotting boot"
1
"Greaseproof paper bit into her"
2
"Yu-Fei's delivery note promised exact"
3
"Her compass needle spun like"
4
"The Heartstone pendant hammered against"
5
"Copper stung her nostrils."
6
"She crossed the threshold between"
7
"Breath plumed white before her"
8
"The air tasted of ozone"
9
"She stepped onto packed mud."
10
"Grass grew waist-high, blades curved"
11
"Snowdrops pushed through frozen mulch"
12
"Flowers bloomed in chaotic clusters,"
13
"Aurora kept her gaze forward."
14
"Eyes scanning the periphery revealed"
15
"Shapes dissolved when she turned"
16
"Parlor tricks of exhaustion."
17
"The pendant pulsed again."
18
"Whispers threaded through the silence."
19
"A child giggling backwards."
ratio
0.662
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
299
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
13
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
11
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she muttered (mutter)"
1
"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
2
"Aurora shouted (shout)"
3
"entity hissed (hiss)"
4
"voice roared (roar)"
5
"Leader announced (announce)"
dialogueSentences
19
tagDensity
0.316
leniency
0.632
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.632
85.3588%