Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9CPZCFRJE50KN8NNGJ6Z2

Run Details

Duration:
5m 20s
Cost:
$0.082346
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened onto Lucien Moreau. Rory set her shoulder against the frame. Her straight black hair hung damp around her neck, and the chain stayed fastened under her palm. Three deadbolts had taken her ten minutes to learn from the inside. Eva had lent her the place for the week, and one knock had undone them. Rain darkened Lucien's charcoal suit. His platinum hair lay flat against his temples. The ivory handle of his cane rested in his fist instead of the floorboards. One eye caught the stairwell light in amber. The other kept the black of a closed shutter. She kept her voice level. Her bright blue eyes stayed on the chain. "You've got the wrong flat." "Eva left the window open. I could smell turmeric from the street." "Eva isn't here." "I know. That is why I came." Rory's fingers tightened. The wood bit into her skin. "That makes less sense." "For you, perhaps." He shifted. The cane tapped the step. A dark stain widened along the side of his jacket, just above the hip. Blood. Fresh enough to shine under the bare bulb. She looked at it for one beat, then fixed on his mouth. "Get away from my door." "Your door is leaking." "It isn't mine." "Then let me bleed on Eva's floor and explain it to her when she comes back." Ptolemy squeezed between Rory's ankles. The tabby cat took one look at Lucien, flattened his ears, and sneezed. Lucien glanced down. "He remembers me." "He remembers people who bring him liver." "I brought him a tin." "You brought a tin." "It is in my left pocket. Along with a pair of scissors, three banknotes that no longer circulate, and a knife I would prefer not to explain in the hallway." Rory stared at him. The smell of frying onions rose from the curry house below and settled on her tongue. Inside the flat, a stack of papers slid from a chair and collapsed onto the floor. She lifted the chain. "Ten minutes." "The wound needs longer." "You need a hospital." "Hospitals ask questions." "This building asks worse ones." He stepped over the threshold. Rory took the cane before he could lean it against the wall and held it upright, mindful of the thin blade hidden inside the shaft. Ptolemy wound between Lucien's legs, changed his mind, and jumped onto a pile of annotated maps. Eva's flat swallowed him. Every surface carried a book, a scroll, or a note stabbed through a letter opener. A lamp stood on top of a Sumerian grammar. A takeout container balanced on a stack of council-tax warnings. Lucien stood in the middle of the clutter with rain falling from his cuffs and made the room look staged. Rory pointed to the kitchen stool. "Sit." "I prefer to stand." "You prefer to faint in private. Sit." He sat. The stool creaked. She pulled the first aid box from beneath a mound of Eva's field notes and shoved the papers aside. A photograph slipped out: Rory at nineteen, hair longer, standing outside a courthouse with her father's arm around her. She flipped it face-down. "Jacket." Lucien unbuttoned it with one hand. His fingers stalled on the third button. Rory slapped the table. "Use both." "I am using both." "You are performing independence." "Then the performance needs work." She helped him peel the jacket from his shoulders. The white shirt beneath had gone pink at the side. She worked the fabric away from the wound. The cut refused to be clean. Something had carved a shallow trench from his ribs to his hip, the edges angry and wet. Iron mixed with the curry rising through the floorboards. She opened the antiseptic. "This will sting." "I am French." "That is not an anaesthetic." "It is a temperament." She dabbed the gauze. His hand closed around the edge of the stool. The knuckles whitened. He kept his teeth shut. The room narrowed to the cut, the blood, the wet cloth turning red. Rory kept her breathing even. Her wrist brushed his skin, and the small crescent scar from a childhood accident went pale against his suit. He looked at it. "You still bite your nails." "You still notice things that do not help you." "It helps me know you." "Then you know nothing useful." "I know you took a delivery job under a name that was not yours." "I know you told me your father came from Avaros and left out the part where he collects debts from children." Lucien's jaw worked. "I told you what mattered." "You told me enough to make me ask for more. That is worse." Ptolemy dropped from the maps and landed beside the first aid box. The cat sniffed the bloody gauze and looked offended. Rory reached for fresh tape. Lucien caught her wrist. His thumb rested over her pulse, and the heat of his skin came through the cold damp of his shirt. She did not pull away. Her nails bit into her free palm. "Let go." "After." "You have no right to after." "No." The word sat on the table between the antiseptic and the tape. Rain tapped the window. Downstairs, someone dragged a crate of bottles across the curry house kitchen. The sound moved through the boards and into the soles of Rory's feet. Lucien leaned closer. Wet hair cast a line of shadow across his cheek. One eye held gold. The other held nothing she could read. "I came because you stopped answering." "I answered your messages." "You sent words. You did not send yourself." "You wanted a person who would stay out of your business." "I wanted you." "You wanted a version of me that would not ask what you did for money." "I wanted the one who asked." Her hands worked faster. She pressed the tape to the gauze and smoothed it down with more pressure than necessary. He inhaled through his teeth. "Good." "That was deliberate." "You were talking." "You were listening." She gathered the ruined gauze into a pile. His hand stayed near hers. The flat pressed in, full of paper, wet wool, and the metallic trace of his blood. Eva's research formed walls around them, a city of margins and underlined passages. Rory fixed on the clutter. It gave Lucien too many places to hide. He followed her gaze to the door. "I will leave when the street clears." "The street is clear." "There is a car outside the bookshop." "You saw it from the window." "I saw the man inside it. He has been there since Tuesday." Rory stood. She carried the bloody gauze to the sink and turned on the tap. Water darkened in the basin. "You brought trouble to Eva's flat." "I brought it to you. Eva is the only place I knew you would open the door." "That is manipulation." "Yes." She twisted the tap off. The pipes groaned. "You do not get to be honest now and expect a reward." "I expect nothing." "Liar." The shape of a smile failed to arrive on his mouth. "You opened the door." "You bled on the step." "You let me inside." "I wanted to see how bad it was." "And now?" Now. Rory looked at his mouth, then at the wound she had dressed. Her fingers itched to touch his jaw, to push the wet hair from his forehead, to shove him back into the rain. She had done all three in dreams that arrived after late shifts, when Golden Empress grease clung to her sleeves and the flat above Silas' bar felt like a box she had climbed into willingly. Ptolemy climbed onto Lucien's lap. The cat stared up at him, then kneaded the uninjured side of his thigh. Lucien's hand moved to the cat's neck. His thumb found the spot behind Ptolemy's ear, and the traitor leaned into it. Rory crossed her arms. "You are making my cat complicit." "He accepted a bribe." "That tin better not have been from my shelf." "It was from a shop in Soho. I had to threaten the owner." "With charm?" "With a second language." Her mouth moved toward a smile and failed. She took the cane from where she had propped it against the counter and set it beside him. The ivory handle gleamed under the lamp. "If you pull that blade in here, I will put it through your other side." "I would not insult Eva's hospitality." "You are sitting in it." "Then I will not insult it twice." The flat creaked around them. Rain thickened against the glass. Rory remained standing, Lucien sitting, Ptolemy purring between them, a stubborn warm motor. The door stood open a few inches, the chain hanging loose, the deadbolts undone. Cold air moved across Rory's ankles. She did not shut it. Lucien looked at the gap. "Do you want me to go?" She picked up the first aid box. The metal latch clicked under her fingers. "I want you to answer one question without turning it into a riddle." "Ask." "Why did you come here instead of calling your fixer friends?" His thumb stilled on Ptolemy's fur. The cat head-butted his palm, demanding more. Lucien did not look at the wound, or the door, or the bloody gauze in the sink. He looked at her. "Because you were the only person I could imagine opening the door and hating me for needing it." Rory set the first aid box down. She stepped into the narrow space between the kitchen table and Eva's tallest stack of books. Her knee brushed his. The wet wool of his trousers cooled her skin. His breath moved against her chin when he spoke. "I can leave." "You are bleeding." "You gave me ten minutes." "One went to your jacket." "Then I have nine." She put her hand flat against the table beside his hip. The tendon in his throat moved. She felt the heat of him through the thin bandage, the damp shirt, the suit that cost more than her rent. Ptolemy wound between them and pressed his spine to Rory's shin. Lucien raised his hand. His fingers stopped beside her face, not touching. The space around his hand thickened. "Rory." "Don't." "I have not said anything." "You are going to." "Yes." The word came low and certain. It took the shape of every message he had sent and every one she had not answered. Her chest rose against it. His hand stayed near her jaw. She could have stepped back. She could have taken the cane and pushed him toward the door. Instead she looked at the blood she had wiped from his side and then at his mouth, and the flat waited around them, full of paper and rain and the small living sound of the cat.
created_at"2026-09-02T14:46:56.246Z" 9/2/2026, 2:46:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences97
tagDensity0.01
leniency0.021
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1804
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1804
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"charm"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences232
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1804
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1217
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien17
Moreau1
Rory19
Sumerian1
Eva5
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy8
Rain3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rain"
places(empty)
globalScore0.719
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1804
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences232
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs143
mean12.62
std15.6
cv1.236
sampleLengths
06
151
244
313
45
512
63
77
89
94
103
1130
1212
135
144
153
1616
1718
183
193
207
215
224
2330
2436
254
262
274
284
293
305
3146
3258
336
341
354
367
3747
381
3913
404
412
424
434
445
4559
464
473
483
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences232
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.0189873417721519
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010548523206751054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences232
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences232
mean7.78
std5.8
cv0.746
sampleLengths
06
17
217
312
415
55
68
714
88
99
105
118
125
1312
143
157
163
176
184
193
202
215
2214
231
248
2512
265
274
283
2916
305
3113
323
333
347
355
364
3730
384
3916
4016
414
422
434
444
453
465
475
4825
4916
44.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.23275862068965517
totalSentences232
uniqueOpeners54
25.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"Instead she looked at the"
ratio0.008
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences130
matches
0"Her straight black hair hung"
1"His platinum hair lay flat"
2"She kept her voice level."
3"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
4"She looked at it for"
5"She lifted the chain."
6"He stepped over the threshold."
7"She pulled the first aid"
8"She flipped it face-down."
9"His fingers stalled on the"
10"She helped him peel the"
11"She worked the fabric away"
12"She opened the antiseptic."
13"She dabbed the gauze."
14"His hand closed around the"
15"He kept his teeth shut."
16"Her wrist brushed his skin,"
17"He looked at it."
18"His thumb rested over her"
19"She did not pull away."
ratio0.385
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences130
matches
0"The door opened onto Lucien"
1"Rory set her shoulder against"
2"Her straight black hair hung"
3"Eva had lent her the"
4"Rain darkened Lucien's charcoal suit."
5"His platinum hair lay flat"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"The other kept the black"
8"She kept her voice level."
9"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
10"Rory's fingers tightened."
11"The wood bit into her"
12"The cane tapped the step."
13"A dark stain widened along"
14"She looked at it for"
15"Ptolemy squeezed between Rory's ankles."
16"The tabby cat took one"
17"Lucien glanced down."
18"Rory stared at him."
19"The smell of frying onions"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.7529%