Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9FJWEAMNST78392HQ447K

Run Details

Duration:
5m 11s
Cost:
$0.081328
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain needled the green neon over the Raven's Nest and turned the sign into a wet blade above the door. The bar sat low and dark, old maps and black-and-white photographs crowded behind the window glass. Detective Harlow Quinn stood in the mouth of a closed newsagent's across the street, one shoulder against the shutter, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair darkening under the water. The worn leather watch on her left wrist clicked against the metal of her holster when she shifted her weight. Eighteen years with the Metropolitan Police had taught her to count exits. The Raven's Nest had two. She watched both. A man in a grey coat came out of the bar. He carried a black canvas bag against his ribs and kept his face angled from the streetlight. Harlow's fingers tightened on the radio. "Unit Nine. Subject leaving the Nest." Static answered, then a controller's voice. "Backup's ten out, Detective." "Ten out gets me nothing." The man crossed the kerb. He did not look left or right. He stepped into a black cab that had been waiting with its engine breathing exhaust into the gutter. Harlow moved. She pulled her unmarked car from the loading bay, wipers slapping rain from the glass. The cab pulled away through the shine of Soho, tail lights bleeding red over wet tarmac. She let two vans slide between them, then followed. The streets threw reflections at her: pub windows, bus shelters, a row of bicycles chained to railings. Every puddle held a distorted street sign. Her phone sat in the cradle, screen lit with the case file. Morris's last known location blinked at the top. Three years old. Still open. The cab took Oxford Street, then cut north. Harlow kept her distance by the glow of brake lights, her hands steady at ten and two. The rain thickened. It drummed on the roof and filled the gaps between buildings with grey noise. When the cab reached Camden High Street, it swung hard into a side road and stopped beside a hoarding stripped with concert posters. Harlow killed her headlights. The man in the grey coat paid the driver through the window and walked into the mouth of an alley. He did not wait for change. Harlow stepped out into the rain. Water ran down the sharp line of her jaw and soaked the collar of her jacket. She checked the radio. "Unit Nine. Subject on foot, Camden, service alley off the High Street." No reply. She thumbed the transmit again. Static crackled through the speaker, wet and broken. She put the radio away and went after him. The alley narrowed between a shuttered market stall and a brick wall tagged with silver paint. Bottles stood in black sacks. A drain ran with rain and cigarette ends. The man ahead set a hard pace, the canvas bag swinging against his hip. Harlow's shoulders stayed square. The old military precision held even in pursuit. Her shoes found slick brick and held. She kept to the shadow where she could. He looked back. His face flashed white under a security lamp. Young. Thin. One cheek marked with a fresh scrape. Recognition hit his eyes. He shoved a dustbin into the alley and ran. The bin came at Harlow on squeaking wheels. She sidestepped, caught the rim, and sent it crashing into the wall. Glass bottles burst inside. She vaulted a fallen crate and came out on a cobbled yard. The man disappeared through a gap in a hoarding. Harlow followed. Beyond the boards, a rusted stairwell dropped into the earth. The concrete around it had gone green with damp. An old Tube roundel hung crooked over the entrance, its letters burned out. The red circle had faded to the colour of dried blood. A chain closed across the first step, but the padlock lay open on the wet ground. Harlow stopped at the chain. Below, the stairwell breathed. Warm air rose past her ankles, carrying the smell of hot metal, animal fat, and wet stone. Voices came from the dark, not loud, but many. A bell rang. Something heavier shifted, like a train passing far under the city. She drew her torch. The beam cut down the stairs. Tiles gleamed. Someone had painted symbols along the wall in white pigment. They looked like bone splinters. At the bottom, a gate stood half open. A figure waited beside it. Harlow descended. Each step put more heat on her face. The rain faded above her until it became a distant hiss. The torch found the figure at the gate: a broad man in a waxed coat, his head shaved, his eyes set in deep sockets. He held a walking stick topped with iron. Behind him, the tunnel opened into a vaulted platform lit by hanging lamps. Harlow lifted her warrant card. "Metropolitan Police. A man came through here." The gatekeeper did not look at the card. He looked at her hand. "Token." "I said a man came through." "He paid." The gatekeeper extended his palm. In it lay a disk carved from bone, thin as a coin, its surface etched with a crow's skull. Harlow's jaw tightened. "Open the gate." "Not with that." He nodded at the warrant card. His iron stick tapped the tile floor once. From the platform beyond, a woman laughed. Another voice answered in a language Harlow did not know. The market hummed behind the gate. Stalls lined the old ticket hall under tarps of black plastic. Tables held jars, blades, stacks of paper, and things under cloth that moved without wind. One table displayed rows of banned alchemical salts in labelled tubes. Another offered information folded into waxed paper and tied with black thread. Harlow put her hand near her holster. "You're obstructing a police investigation." The gatekeeper smiled without opening his mouth. "Down here, love, you're obstruction." A figure stepped from the shadows behind the gate. Tomás Herrera. Rain had not touched him. His short curly dark brown hair stayed dry, and the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat caught the lamplight when he raised his hand. "Don't draw, Detective." Harlow's brown eyes narrowed. "Herrera." He wore a field jacket over scrubs. The scar along his left forearm showed where his sleeve had rolled up. The NHS had taken his license after he stitched wounds no surgeon wanted logged. He kept the kit. His warm brown eyes moved from her face to the gatekeeper's stick, then to the bone token in the man's palm. "He won't let you pass for the badge." "Then get out of my way before I arrest you both." Tomás gave a short breath. Not quite a laugh. "You're three floors under Camden with no signal and no token. The Market moves every full moon. Tonight it's here. Tomorrow it's a meat locker in Whitechapel or a crypt under Lewisham. You want to make an arrest, bring more than a card." Harlow stepped closer. The heat from the tunnel touched the wet fabric of her coat. "The man in the grey coat came from the Raven's Nest. He's carrying evidence connected to a death." Tomás tilted his head. "Whose death?" The question sat between them. Harlow felt the weight of the file in her car, the photograph of DS Morris in the evidence box, the empty space where his partner's statement should have been. "Mine to close." Tomás studied her. The gatekeeper shifted his stick. Above, rainwater ran down the stairwell wall and dripped onto the tiles. Tomás stepped closer to the gate. His voice dropped. "The boy with the bag is not your only problem. There are sellers down there who keep their own justice. You go in flashing copper, they'll shut every stall, every door, every tongue. If you want him, you go in quiet." "You know him." "I know the bag. He came to me two nights ago with a puncture wound and paid in information. He asked about the Veil Market. I told him the price of entry." Harlow's hand left her holster. "What did he buy?" Tomás glanced at the gatekeeper. "Passage." The gatekeeper's fingers closed around the bone token. Harlow looked past the gate. The platform stretched into a low tunnel of brick and tile. The market had grown from the bones of the abandoned station. Stalls pressed against the old ticket windows. A row of lamps hung from chains, their flames blue at the edges. People moved between tables in coats and hoods. One stall sold jars filled with silver liquid. Another had a cage covered by a cloth that trembled. A man in a surgeon's apron weighed dark pills on a brass scale. The suspect in the grey coat had vanished. Harlow checked her watch. The leather strap was soaked black. Backup remained ten minutes out, or more. The suspect could vanish into the tunnels. The evidence could vanish. Morris's case could go cold for another three years. She looked at Tomás. "Why are you here?" "I need supplies. Gauze that stops bleeding from teeth marks. A tincture for burns that don't heal in daylight." He touched the medallion once. "I don't ask what you're hunting. You don't ask who I'm treating." "I can ask." "You can." The gatekeeper rapped his stick. "Token or street." Harlow's radio stayed silent. The stairwell behind her held only rain and the far sound of traffic. No sirens. No footsteps from backup. The man in grey had taken the only route down. She turned back to Tomás. "Give me yours." His eyebrows rose. "You don't ask." "You have another." He opened his jacket. Inside, stitched to the lining, hung a row of bone tokens. He took one shaped like a rib, smooth and yellowed, and held it out. Harlow reached for it. Tomás kept it between his fingers. "If you use that, you enter by the Market's rules. Not yours." Harlow took the token. It sat heavy in her palm, warmer than the air. "I know whose rules I'm breaking." The gatekeeper watched her. His iron stick rested against his shoulder. Harlow placed the bone token in his hand. He closed his fist, then struck the gate latch with the stick. The gate swung inward with a groan of rusted metal. The noise of the Veil Market rose around her: haggling, low music, the clink of glass, a child's voice calling a name that did not sound human. Tomás stepped aside. His eyes stayed on her face. "Keep your weapon holstered. If they see steel, they'll answer with steel." Harlow wiped rain from her chin. "Where did the grey coat go?" Tomás pointed with his chin toward the far end of the platform, where a narrow archway had been bricked over and reopened with fresh mortar. "The old escalator shaft. He'll try the lower market next." Harlow moved past the gate. The heat closed around her. The bone token in her pocket pressed against her hip. Behind her, the gatekeeper shut the gate and left the latch open. Above, the rain kept falling on the streets of Camden. Below, the lamps burned in the throat of the abandoned station, and the Veil Market spread its stalls into the dark. Harlow Quinn walked into it.
created_at"2026-09-02T14:48:30.36Z" 9/2/2026, 2:48:30 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.051
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1873
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1873
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"etched"
2"trembled"
3"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences214
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1873
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1546
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Harlow28
Quinn2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Soho1
Oxford1
Street2
Camden2
High1
Tube1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris3
Tomás11
Veil2
Market2
One3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Police"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
9"Tomás"
10"Market"
11"One"
places
0"Soho"
1"Oxford"
2"Street"
3"Camden"
4"High"
globalScore0.594
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.534
wordCount1873
matches
0"not loud, but many"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean18.36
std22.56
cv1.228
sampleLengths
0104
134
26
310
45
530
62
789
865
94
1026
1126
1212
132
145
158
169
1770
183
1930
2036
219
222
2359
245
2544
264
2736
282
2964
305
317
3213
331
346
352
3624
373
383
393
4086
417
425
437
445
4540
463
474
481
4959
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences176
matches
0"been bricked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs260
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences214
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1550
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"red over wet tarmac."
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.016129032258064516
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0032258064516129032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences214
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences214
mean8.75
std6.68
cv0.764
sampleLengths
020
116
228
320
412
55
63
711
817
96
106
116
124
135
145
157
1618
172
1815
1916
209
2117
227
2312
248
253
262
278
2817
293
3014
3123
324
3320
346
356
3616
374
3812
392
405
418
429
4316
445
458
4614
474
488
497
47.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3177570093457944
totalSentences214
uniqueOpeners68
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences166
matches
0"She watched both."
1"He carried a black canvas"
2"He did not look left"
3"He stepped into a black"
4"She pulled her unmarked car"
5"She let two vans slide"
6"Her phone sat in the"
7"It drummed on the roof"
8"He did not wait for"
9"She checked the radio."
10"She thumbed the transmit again."
11"She put the radio away"
12"Her shoes found slick brick"
13"She kept to the shadow"
14"He looked back."
15"His face flashed white under"
16"He shoved a dustbin into"
17"She sidestepped, caught the rim,"
18"She vaulted a fallen crate"
19"She drew her torch."
ratio0.241
20.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount146
totalSentences166
matches
0"Rain needled the green neon"
1"The bar sat low and"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stood in"
3"The worn leather watch on"
4"The Raven's Nest had two."
5"She watched both."
6"A man in a grey"
7"He carried a black canvas"
8"Harlow's fingers tightened on the"
9"Static answered, then a controller's"
10"The man crossed the kerb."
11"He did not look left"
12"He stepped into a black"
13"She pulled her unmarked car"
14"The cab pulled away through"
15"She let two vans slide"
16"The streets threw reflections at"
17"Every puddle held a distorted"
18"Her phone sat in the"
19"Morris's last known location blinked"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Tables held jars, blades, stacks of paper, and things under cloth that moved without wind."
1"The noise of the Veil Market rose around her: haggling, low music, the clink of glass, a child's voice calling a name that did not sound human."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.9230%