Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9GM4T3HZ0V34XP60BRZMB

Run Details

Duration:
7m 24s
Cost:
$0.119350
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory leaned the bicycle against the Richmond Park gate and read the text again. Eva's words sat in a cracked green bubble: If I'm not at the café by midnight, go to the oak stones in the Grove. Bring the Heartstone. Come alone. The timestamp read 11:03. The phone now read 12:04. No signal. She slipped the phone into her jacket pocket and touched the pendant beneath her shirt. The crimson stone warmed against her skin. The silver chain carried no heat at all. She pushed the gate. The iron swung without a sound. That stopped her hand. Richmond's gates always complained; she had delivered within the park twice and heard the hinges squeal. She kept her fingers on the cold bar and listened. No traffic along the road. No bus brakes. No wind in the high branches. The city had stepped back and left a hole shaped like the park. The air tasted of cold metal. Her breath made no fog, though December had bitten her cheeks raw on the ride over. She noticed that too. A strand of black hair stuck to her lower lip. She wiped it away with her thumb. Rory stepped inside. The path lay pale under a thin moon. Oaks spread black limbs over it, and between their roots wildflowers stood in thick knots. White petals. Black centres. Red throats. They had no right to bloom in December, yet they lifted as her wheel passed. At the edge of her sight, a white flower head turned. Then another. They tracked her passage with no wind to blame. She left the bicycle against a tree and walked. A sound followed her. A bicycle spoke ticking. She turned. The path behind held nothing. The ticking went on for three steps after she stopped, then ceased. "Right." Her voice fell flat. The grass drank it. She took the pendant from under her shirt. The stone, thumbnail-small, held a dim red glow in its depths. It pulsed against her palm. Each beat sent warmth up her wrist. The crescent scar there tightened, though no mark had touched it. She drew a breath and kept walking. The trees opened. Twelve standing stones rose in a rough ring. They looked old enough to have worn out their purpose. Their surfaces carried the grain of oak, deep grooves and knots, yet they stood with the weight of rock. Within the ring, wildflowers grew so thick they made a pale carpet. They faced the centre, not the moon. A shadow slipped over the grass between two stones. Rory snapped her gaze to it. The grass lay empty. The shadow appeared again beside the next stone, longer than the object casting it. Silas had refused to speak much when she asked about the Richmond grove. He had wiped the same spot on the bar and told her the place took hours and gave back nothing. She had called him dramatic. She did not call him that now. Rory stopped at the boundary. "Eva?" The name left her mouth and returned from the far side of the stones. "Rory." Her hand closed around the pendant. The voice had Eva's pitch. It did not carry Eva's breath, her little habit of swallowing before a second word. It came out smooth, cut from tape. Rory checked the phone. No signal. The clock read 12:04. She watched the numbers change to 3:19, then back to 12:04. She turned the phone over. The case held nothing. The screen kept its impossible hour. She pressed the record button on the voice memo app. The red circle appeared. "Eva sent me here. The pendant is warm. The stones are inside the park. If this is stupid, blame me." The recording bar froze. The red dot pulsed. "Come on." She tapped the screen. Nothing. The app held the same second, stretched thin. From somewhere inside the ring came the chime of the Golden Empress service bell. Rory's shoulders drew back. She knew that bell. She heard it through kitchen steam and shouting every shift. It had no business standing under open trees. The bell rang again. After it came the slap of a ticket machine and Yu-Fei's voice, muffled, calling an order number. The smell of frying oil and ginger rose out of the flowers. Rory's stomach gave a painful lurch. The scent belonged to the restaurant, to her apron, to the delivery bag hanging on her flat wall. It had no place in a grove. Rory did not move. The sound stopped. In its place rose a low scrape, like a chair pulled back in another room. She took one step into the ring. The wildflowers bent away from her shoes. They did not spring up again. Behind her, the path she had followed lay gone. Trees filled it, trunk after trunk. They had grown while she looked away. The pendant pulsed. Warmth spread across her chest. She lifted her chin. "I brought the stone." The flowers stirred. A shape moved beyond the nearest standing stone. Tall. Thin. It passed behind the rock and did not come out the other side. The shape returned on the far side of the ring. It stood with its shoulders too high, its arms too long. Rory blinked. The space behind the stone held only shadow. Rory's throat closed. She forced her feet to stay. "If you want the Heartstone, show yourself." The grove answered with her own voice. "Show yourself." The words came from three places. One sounded close enough to touch her neck. She turned. The air behind her carried a smell of wet wool and old iron. No figure stood there. The flowers in that spot pressed flat, forming a narrow lane toward the centre of the ring. At the lane's end lay a scarf. Green wool. Frayed at one corner. Eva's. Rory crossed the distance before fear could argue. She crouched and touched the scarf. It was warm. Not sun-warm. Body-warm. The fibres held the shape of a fresh knot. The pendant burned. She snatched her fingers back and stared at the stone. Its red glow had brightened. Light spilled between her fingers, staining her palm. Red light climbed into her bright blue eyes. The unsigned card that had come with the pendant surfaced in her mind. It wakes near Hel portals. A breath touched the back of her neck. Rory rolled to her feet and faced the stones. Nothing moved. The grass lay still. Yet every flower around her leaned in one direction, toward a point behind the tallest stone. "Eva." Her voice cracked on the second syllable. From behind the stone came the sound of her flat door opening above Silas' bar. The hinge gave its familiar groan. The creak of the floorboard just inside. The small click of the lock when it caught. The flat sounds continued. Footsteps crossed the boards. The kettle tapped its lid. Someone set a mug on the counter with a ceramic knock. Rory knew each sound by months of living above the bar. They belonged to her rooms, not under ancient stones. Rory backed a step. Her phone lit in her hand. The screen showed a call. EVA. She answered before thought caught up. Eva's side of the line carried static. Under it, a mouth breathed. Rory gripped the phone. "Eva, I'm at the stones. Tell me where you are." The static shifted. A voice surfaced. It was Rory's own voice, low and urgent. "Don't come in." The call ended. The grove filled with the sound of phones ringing. Not one. Dozens. They rang from under the flowers, from inside the stones, from the branches overhead. All of them stopped together. One ringtone matched hers. It came from beneath a clump of red-throated flowers, close enough for her to kneel and dig. She did not kneel. The flowers parted over it and hid the sound. Rory lowered the phone. Her thumb found the crescent scar on her wrist. The skin there had gone hot. A second scarf lay near the next stone. Then another. Green wool. Frayed corner. Each one arranged in a fresh knot. Each one warm. The nearest scarf moved. The wool stretched in the middle. A pressure Rory could not see drew it upward. It held the shape of a head for one breath, then dropped. She did not pick them up. The tallest stone shifted. It did not slide or fall. It turned the way a shoulder turns, presenting a broader face. Behind it stood a stretch of dark no deeper than a doorway. The pendant jerked against her palm. Its glow beat fast, red through the silver chain, red against her fingers. The pendant's glow reached the standing stones and made their oak grain shift. The grooves deepened. Knots opened into dark holes. From those holes came the sound of breathing, thin and patient. The darkness breathed. Rory's body leaned toward the gate. Her eyes would not leave the opening. From within it came the sound of a bicycle wheel ticking. Then the Golden Empress bell. Then Eva's laugh, cut short. Rory opened her hand. The pendant clung to her skin for a moment before dropping to the flower bed. The crimson stone lay among white petals, shining with its own inner heat. The dark doorway widened. Rory took a step toward it.
created_at"2026-09-02T14:49:04.428Z" 9/2/2026, 2:49:04 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1556
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1556
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"depths"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"lurch"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"depths"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
5"lurch"
6"familiar"
7"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences212
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences212
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences223
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1556
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1502
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park1
Grove1
Heartstone1
December2
Eva6
Golden2
Empress2
Yu-Fei1
Hel1
Rory21
persons
0"Eva"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.801
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences119
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared again beside the next stone, longer than the object casting it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1556
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences223
matches
0"knew that bell"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean17.48
std14.22
cv0.814
sampleLengths
043
111
230
310
457
526
617
73
844
922
109
1127
121
138
1442
157
163
1756
1833
1945
205
211
2214
231
246
2527
2621
2715
2814
2920
308
312
3213
3314
3426
3521
3643
374
3818
397
4035
418
424
434
4426
4531
469
477
487
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences212
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs244
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences223
ratio0.004
matches
0"Richmond's gates always complained; she had delivered within the park twice and heard the hinges squeal."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1086
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.026703499079189688
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009208103130755065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences223
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences223
mean6.98
std4.44
cv0.636
sampleLengths
014
124
23
32
44
55
62
715
87
98
104
116
124
1316
1410
155
163
176
1813
196
2016
214
2210
237
243
258
2615
272
282
292
3015
3111
322
339
349
354
364
372
385
3912
401
414
424
438
4411
455
467
4711
487
493
38.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.23766816143497757
totalSentences223
uniqueOpeners53
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences188
matches
0"Then the Golden Empress bell."
1"Then Eva's laugh, cut short."
ratio0.011
98.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences188
matches
0"She slipped the phone into"
1"She pushed the gate."
2"She kept her fingers on"
3"Her breath made no fog,"
4"She noticed that too."
5"She wiped it away with"
6"They had no right to"
7"They tracked her passage with"
8"She left the bicycle against"
9"Her voice fell flat."
10"She took the pendant from"
11"It pulsed against her palm."
12"She drew a breath and"
13"They looked old enough to"
14"Their surfaces carried the grain"
15"They faced the centre, not"
16"He had wiped the same"
17"She had called him dramatic."
18"She did not call him"
19"Her hand closed around the"
ratio0.303
29.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount162
totalSentences188
matches
0"Rory leaned the bicycle against"
1"Eva's words sat in a"
2"The timestamp read 11:03."
3"The phone now read 12:04."
4"She slipped the phone into"
5"The crimson stone warmed against"
6"The silver chain carried no"
7"She pushed the gate."
8"The iron swung without a"
9"That stopped her hand."
10"Richmond's gates always complained; she"
11"She kept her fingers on"
12"The city had stepped back"
13"The air tasted of cold"
14"Her breath made no fog,"
15"She noticed that too."
16"A strand of black hair"
17"She wiped it away with"
18"Rory stepped inside."
19"The path lay pale under"
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences188
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.7665%