Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9MFSM34H9A9FTCPRWQ052

Run Details

Duration:
5m 8s
Cost:
$0.081110
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened, and Lucien Moreau filled the narrow landing with the smell of rain and hot metal. Aurora kept her fingers on the chain. Three deadbolts had not stopped him reaching the top floor above the curry house, and that small fact annoyed her more than his face. His hair, slicked back platinum, had gone damp. One bead of water traced the line of his jaw. The charcoal suit fit him as if London had cut it to make her memory worse. "Rory." She began to close the door. The ivory head of his cane slipped between wood and jamb. She stared at it. The handle was smooth, innocent, and she knew the thin blade sleeping inside it. "Don't." Her voice came out low and steady. She hated how much she trusted that steadiness. "Five minutes." His accent thickened around the vowels. Marseille had never left him. "If you still want me gone after five minutes, I will walk down these stairs and let Brick Lane have its opinion of me." "Eva's neighbours already have opinions." "Eva is not here." "No. I am." He looked past her shoulder into the flat. His odd eyes took in the towers of books, the scroll cases leaning against the radiator, the curry-stained table where Eva spread maps of old parishes. One eye caught the light amber. The other stayed black. "Ptolemy." The tabby had appeared between Aurora’s ankles. He wound around her legs, lifted his nose toward Lucien, then sneezed at the damp. "Do not encourage him." "I addressed the cat." "You came to my door." "Eva's door." "The one I answer." She tightened her grip on the chain. The small crescent scar on her left wrist pulled white. He noticed. He had traced that mark with his thumb while she laughed and told him it came from a broken cup, not a dramatic life. "You're bleeding." She nodded at his side. "Only a little." His hand brushed the charcoal waistcoat. A dark bloom spread under his fingers. "A client objected to my rates." "You're a fixer. Fix yourself." "I came to borrow your kitchen table." A laugh caught in her throat. It would have been a bad sound, sharp and relieved. "No." "Rory." "You do not get to say my name like you still have the lease on it." Ptolemy butted his head against Lucien's trouser leg. Lucien glanced down, then back at her. "Two minutes." "No." "I will leave the cane." "I will break it over your head." "You would make a mess. The cat will object." She should have shut the door. She should have called Eva. She should have thrown the mug of cold tea she still held in her free hand. Instead she unhooked the chain and stepped aside. He crossed the threshold. The flat seemed to contract around him, every shelf and stacked paper suddenly fragile. He moved with the old care, weight balanced on the cane, but when he reached the kitchen table he set both hands on the back of a chair. "Sit." She left please off. He sat. She went to the bathroom and came back with the first aid kit Eva kept under the sink. It smelled of disinfectant and lavender. She tossed a clean towel onto the table. "Jacket off." He worked the buttons with his good hand. His knuckles had split. She watched his fingers fumble and did not offer help until he looked up. "You enjoy this." His voice was rough. "I enjoy not helping." "Then I will suffer without an audience." "You never suffered without one in your life." "I did for six months." She stopped sorting gauze. Six months. The exact length of time since she had found his empty flat in Soho, the note with her name on it, no explanation except a date and a signature. She had gone that night to Silas’ bar and drunk enough gin to make the room smell like juniper and bad decisions. "Take off the waistcoat." He did. The shirt underneath had gone dark at the side. When he peeled it back, the cut was ugly but shallow. Blood had dried along the line of his ribs. She dampened a cloth and held it near the wound. "This will sting." "I look forward to it." She pressed the cloth down. His stomach muscles jerked under her hand. He made no sound. She cleaned the skin with short, practical strokes and tried not to remember how his skin felt under different circumstances. A bath in her old flat above Silas. His mouth at her collarbone. The way he spoke her name when he forgot to be polished. "You left." She kept her eyes on the wound. "Yes." "With no reason." "I had reasons." "Reasons need saying out loud." "Not that night." "Why not?" He looked at her. The amber eye held the kitchen light; the black one swallowed it. She had never liked the trick of his face, the sense that two different men occupied one skull. Now, close enough to count his lashes, she could see the fatigue in both. "Because if I told you, you would have come with me." "Try me." "You had just got your hands to stop shaking." His voice stayed low. "You had started sleeping more than three hours. Eva had given you keys to this place so you could be near the books and away from him. I was not going to drag you back into the street because I was selfish." Her fingers paused over the gauze. "Evan?" The name scraped her throat. "He was looking." The name sat between them. She rolled the fresh gauze between her palms, feeling the rough edge bite. "Who told him?" "I did not." "You knew." "I found out." "After he came to Golden Empress." Lucien's jaw shifted. "After." She remembered the night she had dropped a bag of noodles outside the restaurant and seen Evan across the road, one shoulder leaning against a delivery van, smiling as if she had kept him waiting. She had run to Eva. She had not told Lucien until the next day, and by then his phone had gone dead. "So you disappeared." "I made arrangements." "With who?" "People who do not sign receipts." "You sold something." "I bought something." "With what?" He did not answer. She taped the gauze in place with a harder press than necessary. His breath caught, but he stayed still. "Don't lie on my table." She smoothed the bandage. "This is Eva's table." "I am the one cleaning it." "Then thank you." She gathered the bloody cloths. He caught her wrist. Not hard. His thumb rested over her pulse as if asking permission after the fact. She looked at his hand, then at his face. "Let go." "Not until you believe I did not give him your address." "I believe you did not say it aloud." "That is not enough." "It is what I have." His fingers loosened. She pulled free and dropped the cloths into the bin. Her skin still burned where he had touched her. Ptolemy jumped onto a stack of books and knocked a brass pen to the floor. Lucien bent to pick it up. The movement pulled the fresh bandage, and he winced. "Sit still." "I am sitting." "You are sitting like you intend to impress the furniture." He straightened. His hand rested near his cane. She noticed the ivory handle had a new notch near the collar. A fresh mark. "What happened tonight?" She crossed her arms. "A meeting became unfriendly." "Because of Evan?" "No." "Because of me?" He placed the pen on the table. "Because a man who deals in names does not appreciate me withholding one." Her throat tightened. "Which name?" "Yours." The curry house below clanged a pot through the floorboards. Outside a bus groaned past. Aurora picked up the kettle because she needed to do something with her hands. "You withheld it." "For a while." "And they cut you for it." "They negotiated." "You let them." "I had better information when I left than when I arrived." His mouth curved without warmth. "That is considered a success in my trade." "You're an idiot." "I have been called worse." "Not tonight." She filled the kettle and set it on the hob. The blue flame hissed to life. Lucien watched her with that double gaze, and she could feel it like pressure behind her ribs. "Why come here?" She kept her back to him. "Because your name was the only one I could not sell." She turned from the stove. "Do not say things like that." "Why?" "Because you left. Because you cannot stand in Eva's kitchen bleeding and say sweet things." "I am not saying sweet things. I am saying true ones." "You had six months to say true ones." "I needed tonight." "What changed tonight?" He reached into his jacket pocket. She stiffened, but he drew out a folded piece of paper, damp at the corners. He placed it beside the pen. She unfolded it. A shipping ledger, cramped handwriting. One line stood out: Evan Hale, passage cancelled, payment received. Beneath it, a symbol she had seen on Lucien's old business cards, a small open key. "He is not coming after you." Lucien's fingers tapped the edge of the paper. "Not as himself. The contract is closed." "Closed how?" "Paid and sealed." "By whom?" "Me." She stared at the line until the ink blurred. "You bought him off." "I bought his absence." "With what, Lucien?" His mouth stayed shut. The kettle began to sing. She lifted it off the flame and poured water into two mugs because the motion gave her time. She pushed one mug toward him. "Drink." "I do not need tea." "You need sugar and silence." He wrapped both hands around the mug. Blood still stained his cuff. She wanted to scold him for ruining the shirt, then wanted to press her mouth to the place where his pulse beat under his jaw. Both impulses belonged to the same inconvenient body. "You can stay until you can stand without looking grey." She leaned against the counter. "I can stand." "Prove it tomorrow." "I meant now." "Then leave." Neither of them moved. Ptolemy settled on the table between the mugs and tucked his tail around his paws. Lucien's gaze dropped to her mouth, then returned to her eyes with the careful blankness of a man sealing a room. "I missed you." His voice came low under the kettle's last wheeze. She swallowed. "That is not an apology." "No." "It is not an explanation." "No." "It is not enough." "I know." The kitchen filled with the smell of tea and antiseptic. Aurora rested her hand on the table, palm up, because she had no other place to put it. Lucien looked at the crescent scar. His fingers hovered above it, not touching. "I will not ask for more than tonight." His hand remained suspended. "You won't ask." "Then I will sit here and let you decide." She drew back her hand, but only enough to wrap it around her mug. The warmth soaked into her skin. Outside, someone laughed on the street. The flat held them in its cluttered silence, books pressing close, papers curling, the cat blinking slow green eyes. "Five minutes." She set the mug down. Lucien nodded. She crossed to the front door and slid the third deadbolt home.
created_at"2026-09-02T14:51:11.038Z" 9/2/2026, 2:51:11 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His accent thickened around [around]"
dialogueSentences129
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.279
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.016
97.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1907
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1907
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"traced"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"could feel"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences143
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences254
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1907
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1290
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Moreau1
London1
Marseille1
Eva4
Aurora4
Soho1
Silas1
Evan2
Hale1
One3
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Hale"
7"One"
8"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.996
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if asking permission after the fact"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1907
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences254
matches
0"trusted that steadiness"
1"traced that mark"
2"gone that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs162
mean11.77
std14.16
cv1.203
sampleLengths
049
134
21
36
429
516
637
75
84
93
1044
111
1222
134
144
155
162
174
1843
197
2022
215
227
2316
241
251
2616
2715
282
291
305
317
329
3335
3446
355
362
3732
382
3926
407
414
427
438
445
4557
464
4741
483
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs219
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences254
ratio0.004
matches
0"The amber eye held the kitchen light; the black one swallowed it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount757
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.022457067371202115
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002642007926023778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences254
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences254
mean7.51
std6.17
cv0.822
sampleLengths
018
17
224
38
410
516
61
76
811
94
1014
118
128
138
145
1524
165
174
183
198
2026
216
224
231
247
2515
264
274
285
292
304
317
3210
332
3424
357
369
377
386
395
407
416
4210
431
441
4516
468
477
482
491
46.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.25196850393700787
totalSentences254
uniqueOpeners64
24.69% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Instead she unhooked the chain"
ratio0.007
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount81
totalSentences135
matches
0"His hair, slicked back platinum,"
1"She began to close the"
2"She stared at it."
3"Her voice came out low"
4"She hated how much she"
5"His accent thickened around the"
6"He looked past her shoulder"
7"His odd eyes took in"
8"He wound around her legs,"
9"She tightened her grip on"
10"He had traced that mark"
11"She nodded at his side"
12"His hand brushed the charcoal"
13"It would have been a"
14"She should have shut the"
15"She should have called Eva."
16"She should have thrown the"
17"He crossed the threshold."
18"He moved with the old"
19"She left please off"
ratio0.6
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences135
matches
0"The door opened, and Lucien"
1"Aurora kept her fingers on"
2"His hair, slicked back platinum,"
3"The charcoal suit fit him"
4"She began to close the"
5"The ivory head of his"
6"She stared at it."
7"The handle was smooth, innocent,"
8"Her voice came out low"
9"She hated how much she"
10"His accent thickened around the"
11"Marseille had never left him."
12"He looked past her shoulder"
13"His odd eyes took in"
14"The other stayed black."
15"The tabby had appeared between"
16"He wound around her legs,"
17"She tightened her grip on"
18"The small crescent scar on"
19"He had traced that mark"
ratio0.926
37.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Now, close enough to count"
ratio0.007
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The charcoal suit fit him as if London had cut it to make her memory worse."
1"She remembered the night she had dropped a bag of noodles outside the restaurant and seen Evan across the road, one shoulder leaning against a delivery van, smi…"
2"His thumb rested over her pulse as if asking permission after the fact."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.8052%