Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9RCA6REPZBXBQX1X5THGS

Run Details

Duration:
56.7s
Cost:
$0.000938
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt clicked back. Cold hallway air rushed in, carrying the damp wool scent of street rain and the sharp citrus undertone of expensive cologne. She stood barefoot on the warped pine, a cardboard slip tucked under her arm, delivery uniform still crisp despite the London drizzle. His silhouette filled the doorway. Charcoal wool suit, perfectly pressed. Ivory cane resting against his thigh. Slicked platinum hair darkened at the temples from moisture. He looked exactly like the last time she saw him, only older, sharper, and entirely unwelcome. She did not step aside. Her thumb traced the crescent scar on her left wrist. The raised tissue stung against her nail. You knocked three times. Then you walked away. The lock was heavier than I remembered. His voice carried the low Marseille lilt, smoothed over by years of underground clubs and high-stakes negotiations. Amber and black eyes locked onto hers. They never blinked fast enough. It is a cheap building. Landlord won fix what works. She shifted the delivery box. Cardboard corner dug into her hip. Go upstairs. Silas serves proper tea. Silas serves watered ale and bad advice. He stepped forward. Boots crossed the threshold. Floorboards groaned under his weight. She watched his stride, memorizing the exact tilt of his shoulders, the controlled relaxation of his jaw. Ten months. Six days. Thirty-two hours. She counted every single one. What do you want, Lucien. To talk. He set the cane against the wall near a stack of contract law textbooks. The ivory handle caught the dim hallway bulb. Without leaving again. Conversation requires two participants willing to speak. She turned toward the narrow kitchenette. Kettle sat on the electric ring. She poured cold water anyway. Watched it fill the chipped ceramic pot. You packed a single leather satchel. You took the train to Dover. You didn send a postcard. You didn answer my letters for six months. Don stand in my doorway pretending this is a conversation. I answered every letter. His boots followed her into the cramped kitchen. Heat radiated off him, steady and unfamiliar. They routed through customs. I waited in Marseille. Then I waited again. Something burned the files in Cardiff. My hands tore paper until my fingers bled. Convenient. She grabbed the gas lighter. Flicked it once. Twice. Flame steadied. Always convenient for you. Do not twist my absence into permission for your anger. He moved closer. Enough that his sleeve brushed her forearm. Fabric whispered. Skin prickled. You know better than that. I know facts. She struck the match. Kettle lid rattled as steam built. You chose the syndicate over me. You picked the payout. You let me drown in paperwork and quiet nights while you chased favors across Europe. I picked survival. His voice dropped. Roughened at the edges. For both of us. Your ex tracked me. He found the warehouse. I rerouted the shipment, buried the ledger, wiped his network clean. You think I wanted to leave you standing alone in a rainstorm with nothing but a key and a promise. Promises don stop bullets. They don stop men who know where you sleep. She slammed the kettle onto the burner. Steam hissed upward, fogging the glass above the sink. You made me a target because you thought I couldn run. Then you vanished. I ran because I had to. He closed the distance. Palm flat against the counter beside her elbow. Wood grain pressed into her skin. If he knew I was watching, he would have come here. He would have taken you. I broke contact so he would lose the trail. I starved myself of proof you were safe rather than risk another strike. Proof. She finally turned. Eyes met. Bright blue against heterochromatic amber and void black. Where was it, Lucien. Where was the damn proof. In the silence. He exhaled. Shoulders dipped. The polished facade cracked, revealing exhaustion carved deep into his cheekbones. I learned silence speaks louder than promises. It keeps you breathing. She stared at his mouth. Remembered the weight of it against hers. Remembered the taste of salt and wine and surrender. Memory flashed behind her ribs. Hot. Uninvited. She pulled her arm back. Fingers curled around the counter edge. Knuckles whitened. You taught me how to read contract clauses in three languages. She measured out loose leaf. Chai. Spicy. Bitter. You showed me how to spot forged signatures. You fixed the leaky faucet. You made tea like you studied chemistry. And then you treated me like collateral. I treated you like the only thing worth protecting. He leaned in. Voice lowered to a register that vibrated in her sternum. Collateral stays alive. You needed more than safety. You needed space. Air. A life that didn revolve around my problems. My problems. She repeated the words slowly. Dripped with acid. Your problems became mine the moment you kissed me on that rooftop. You didn ask. You just took. Just like everyone else. His jaw tightened. Muscles corded along his neck. He gripped the counter too. Fingers spread. Calluses scraped against wood. I asked for five minutes. You gave me an hour. You touched me first. Because you stopped talking. She stepped sideways. Created distance. He mirrored her. Crowded it back. Because you look at me like I am a puzzle you haven solved yet. You aren a puzzle. He shook his head. Platinum strands fell across his forehead. He pushed them back with deliberate slowness. You are a storm I refused to outrun. Storms destroy things. Sometimes they wash everything clean. His hand lifted. Hovered near her cheek. Didn touch. Didn retreat. Tremor threaded through his knuckles. Real. Raw. I built walls around you. Bricked them up. Handed the mortar to the grave. You lived inside the fortress while I stood guard outside. Tell me I wasn clear. You called it isolation. She swallowed. Throat tight. I called it suffocation. You don get to decide what saves me while you disappear to Paris, to Berlin, to whatever hellhole demands your charm next week. I am not leaving this time. He finally stepped back. Cane tapped against tile. Clean break in proximity. Air rushed between them. Cool. Thin. Not without a written agreement. Not without you in the room. Not without hearing what you actually want from me. She laughed. Short. Bitter. Sharp as shattered glass. You want a negotiation. Fine. Sit. She dragged a wooden stool toward the scarred table. Legs scraped loud against linoleum. Put down the umbrella. Wipe your shoes. Lay out every file you have been hoarding. Every name you have erased. Every debt you owe. I will cross reference it with university archives. We will build a firewall stronger than your secrets. He nodded. Once. Slow. Respectful. He removed the coat. Hung it on the peg. Revealed a white shirt rolled at the forearms, sleeves stained faintly with ink and dried blood. He sat. Cane rested across his knees. Hands folded. Patient. Waiting. She filled two mugs. Set one in front of him. Ceramic clinked against saucer. Dark liquid swirled. Steam curled upward between their faces. She didn drink. She watched his throat move. Watched the pulse jump beneath pale skin. Watched the way his gaze never drifted from her hands. Start with Marseille. She said it flat. Even. Controlled. Tell me why you really came back to London. Tell me what chain you pulled when you booked that ticket. Give me the first thread. I will take it from there. His fingers drummed once against the cane handle. Ivory gleamed. Shadow pooled beneath the table. He inhaled. Lungs expanded. Chest rose. Shoulders squared. He opened his mouth. Tongue pressed against teeth. Jaw flexed. The words caught. Throat worked. Silence stretched taut. She leaned forward. Elbows on the table. Forearms parallel. Water droplets slipped from her straight black hair onto the collarbone of her faded sweater. She watched his lips part. Watched the breath escape in a ragged pull. Watched the exact second recognition settled behind his eyes. Pure. Unfiltered. Dangerous. He reached across the table. Palm open. Fingers spaced. Rested lightly beside her mug. Did not grab. Did not push. Simply waited. The heat from his skin radiated across the gap. Warmed the wood. Warmed her wrist. Warmed the scar. Aurora. He spoke her full name. Low. Steady. Frayed at the edges. Look at me. She didn blink. Didn look away. Heart hammered against ribs. Blood roared in ears. Pulse synced to the rhythm of the radiator ticking overhead. Clock ticks merged with the sound of rain drumming against single pane glass. World narrowed to the space between their hands. To the charge crackling in the air. To the unspoken truth pressing against her tongue. She pulled her chair back. Legs scraped. Floor vibrated. She stood. Straightened spine. Lifted chin. Adjusted the hem of her sweater. Breathed in sharply. Exhale long. Deliberate. She stepped around the table. Boots silent on tile. Approach slow. Measured. Exact. He rose with her. Height difference vanished. Shoulders aligned. Chest nearly touched. Warmth radiated in waves. Sweat cooled on his temple. Pupils dilated. Iris patterns sharpened. Amber molten. Black depth. Gaze locked. Locked. Locked. Her fingers hovered over his lapels. Fabric smooth. Expensive. Crisp. She pinched the material. Pulled him half an inch. Closer. Breath mingled. Salt and cinnamon and rain. Tongue traced lower lip. Teeth caught skin. Pain grounded her. Grounded him. He leaned forward. Nose brushed hers. Eyes fluttered shut. Eyelashes dark against flushed skin. Lips parted. Shape soft. Invitation plain. She tilted her head. Angle precise. Distance negligible. Thumb rubbed the seam of his jacket. Thread frayed. Wear visible. History embedded in every stitch. She felt the exact moment his restraint snapped. Muscle coiled. Breath hitched. Hand lifted. Cupped the back of her neck. Fingers tangled in hair at the nape. Gentle. Firm. Possessive. Urgent. Their foreheads touched. Bone against bone. Weight balanced. Center of gravity shifted. Gravity lost meaning. Space dissolved. Sound faded. Only rhythm remained. Pulse. Breath. Heat. Want. Need. Hunger. All waiting. All hungry. All ready to break.
created_at"2026-09-02T14:53:18.542Z" 9/2/2026, 2:53:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1677
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"lightly"
4"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1677
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"facade"
count1
7
word"measured"
count2
8
word"vibrated"
count2
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"charm"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count3
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"aligned"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"lilt"
2"weight"
3"electric"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
6"facade"
7"measured"
8"vibrated"
9"grave"
10"charm"
11"shattered"
12"pulse"
13"unspoken"
14"aligned"
15"warmth"
16"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences364
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences364
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
2"look"
hedgeMatches
0"appear to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences364
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1677
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1677
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
London2
Marseille3
Lucien2
Dover1
Cardiff1
Europe1
Paris1
Berlin1
You27
Watched5
Shoulders3
Fingers4
Didn3
Tell3
Warmed3
Breath3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"You"
2"Shoulders"
3"Fingers"
4"Didn"
5"Breath"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
2"Dover"
3"Cardiff"
4"Europe"
5"Paris"
6"Berlin"
globalScore0.695
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1677
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences364
matches
0"booked that ticket"
73.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean39.93
std16.26
cv0.407
sampleLengths
088
130
236
327
447
55
627
766
845
916
1029
1138
1253
1343
1462
1523
1629
1741
1846
1942
2032
2133
2229
2329
243
2552
2635
2744
2869
2941
3048
3140
3241
3349
3440
3515
3660
3740
3834
3959
4055
4136
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences364
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs367
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences364
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1679
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"blue against heterochromatic amber"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.030970815961882073
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.009529481834425254
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences364
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences364
mean4.61
std3.53
cv0.766
sampleLengths
04
121
222
35
45
56
69
716
85
910
107
114
124
137
1417
157
165
175
185
195
206
212
224
237
243
254
265
2717
282
292
302
315
325
332
3414
358
363
377
386
396
405
417
426
436
445
458
4610
474
488
497
84.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.5576923076923077
totalSentences364
uniqueOpeners203
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences252
matches
0"Then you walked away."
1"Then I waited again."
2"Always convenient for you."
3"Then you vanished."
4"Bright blue against heterochromatic amber"
5"Just like everyone else."
6"Sometimes they wash everything clean."
7"Only rhythm remained."
8"All ready to break."
ratio0.036
45.40% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount110
totalSentences252
matches
0"She stood barefoot on the"
1"His silhouette filled the doorway."
2"He looked exactly like the"
3"She did not step aside."
4"Her thumb traced the crescent"
5"You knocked three times."
6"His voice carried the low"
7"They never blinked fast enough."
8"It is a cheap building."
9"She shifted the delivery box."
10"He stepped forward."
11"She watched his stride, memorizing"
12"She counted every single one."
13"He set the cane against"
14"She turned toward the narrow"
15"She poured cold water anyway."
16"You packed a single leather"
17"You took the train to"
18"You didn send a postcard."
19"You didn answer my letters"
ratio0.437
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount180
totalSentences252
matches
0"The deadbolt clicked back."
1"She stood barefoot on the"
2"His silhouette filled the doorway."
3"Charcoal wool suit, perfectly pressed."
4"Ivory cane resting against his"
5"He looked exactly like the"
6"She did not step aside."
7"Her thumb traced the crescent"
8"The raised tissue stung against"
9"You knocked three times."
10"The lock was heavier than"
11"His voice carried the low"
12"Amber and black eyes locked"
13"They never blinked fast enough."
14"It is a cheap building."
15"Landlord won fix what works."
16"She shifted the delivery box."
17"Cardboard corner dug into her"
18"Silas serves proper tea."
19"Silas serves watered ale and"
ratio0.714
99.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences252
matches
0"If he knew I was"
1"Because you stopped talking."
2"Because you look at me"
3"To the charge crackling in"
4"To the unspoken truth pressing"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.1555%