Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9T0M03908EE6CSBWQGECF

Run Details

Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.000736
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the cracked platform, boots striking rusted iron grates. The air tasted of copper and wet ash. Faded blue police tape fluttered against damp brickwork. Beyond it, shadows pooled thick and unmoving. The abandoned Chalk Farm branch lay swallowed by neglect, officially decommissioned before she joined the force. Now it held a body. Sergeant Miller leaned against a concrete pillar, chalk dust coating his jacket shoulders. He tapped a pen against a clipboard. Power cuts delayed our arrival. Generator died right after we entered. Quinn ignored the excuse. Her eyes tracked along the platform edge. Scuff marks aligned too perfectly. Blood smears ran parallel to the rail line, defying impact arcs. She adjusted the worn leather strap on her left wrist and stepped past the tape. A man lay sprawled near the tracks. Expensive Italian shoes. Silk shirt torn at the collar. No visible wound. His lips held a faint blue tint. Quinn knelt, gloved fingers hovering over the corpse. Skin temperature matched stone. Rigor mortis refused to set. Blunt force trauma, Miller offered, shifting his weight. Crowbar to the temple. Left it on the bench. Quinn followed his gaze. An antique brass walking stick rested beside a shattered glass jar. Greenish powder coated the wooden slats. Smell cut sharp with crushed mint and ozone. A crowbar does not dissolve tile, Quinn said. She brushed a finger along the floor. Grime peeled away cleanly. Substrate showed no fracture. Miller frowned. Chemical spill. Druggies cutting product down here. Someone pushed the reaction too far. Quinn stood. Jaw tightening, she scanned the ceiling. Water stains ran in geometric patterns. Wards painted over peeling advertisements. Protective sigils faded but intact. Shapes matched case files buried under DS Morris’s name three years ago. Files labeled closed due to lack of jurisdiction. She remembered rain slick pavement. A hollow impact. Displaced air. No blood. The official report cited structural collapse. The truth never fit neatly inside paper folders. The victim did not fall, Quinn said. He ascended. Miller dropped his pen. You are talking about ghosts now? Quinn crouched again. She traced the blood trail. It ended at a hairline crack in the platform edge. The crack vibrated. A low hum resonated through her boots. Watch your step, Miller warned. Structural damage. Engineers map it next week. Quinn ignored him. She pulled a notebook from her pocket and sketched the crack geometry. Symmetrical. Interlocking lines forming a circle. A threshold. Her inner coat pocket bulged. Nothing was inside. Only instinct. Instincts always pointed east when atmospheric pressure dropped. Check the pockets, Quinn said. Milller shrugged. Body hasn’t been bagged yet. Do it. Miller knelt. Hands worked the dead man’s trousers. He withdrew a bone token, carved with raven wings. He dropped it into an evidence envelope. Lucky charm. Fits the druggie theory. Quinn watched the token slide across paper. Bone felt warm. Corpses cooled within hours. Thermal mismatch registered instantly. She stood and walked toward the tunnel mouth. Darkness waited beyond safety lamps. Air moved inward. Pulling. Where are you going? Miller called. To find what killed him. Protocol says we wait for the coroner. Protocol relied on gravity and chemistry. Gravity failed here. Chemistry bled into forces standard manuals could not explain. Quinn clicked her torch on. Beam cut through gloom. Walls bore fresh scratches. Deep gouges marked vertical ascent. Claw marks. Or boots engineered to climb impossible angles. She followed the marks upward until they vanished into a maintenance hatch. The hatch hung open. Rusted bolts lined the rim. None showed torque deformation. Unforced entry. Inside, shadows clung to corners. Quinn stepped through. Metal stairs spiraled upward. Torch beam caught glints of metal. Brass fittings. Ward markers. A merchant setup prepared above ground. Or below. Locations shifted with the full moon cycle. Tonight matched the peak phase. The bone token in the evidence bag aligned with entry requirements etched into restricted archives. She climbed. Boots rang against iron. At the top, a narrow passage opened into a cavernous space. Pipes dripped steady rhythm. Crates stacked in neat rows. Tins labeled with alchemical symbols. Glass vials lined a workbench. Each container held swirling vapor trapped under reinforced lids. A tall figure moved between shelves. Hooded. Mask of polished obsidian obscured facial features. Quinn raised a hand. Freeze. The figure paused. Gloves lowered a burlap sack onto the table. Inside lay identical bone tokens. Dozens of them. Polished smooth from handling. Quinn focused on the far wall. Graffiti covered every surface. Tags layered over tags. Beneath the paint, carved deep into brick, ran a single phrase in Old English. Via Umbra. Path of shadows. You are trespassing, Miller’s voice echoed from below. Heavy boots climbed the stairs. Quinn! Step back! This falls outside metropolitan jurisdiction! The hooded figure turned. Obsidian mask reflected Quinn’s silhouette. One gloved hand reached into a satchel. Drew out a small brass instrument. Circular casing pitted with age. Verdigris stained metal seams. Etched protective sigils radiated from the center. Needle spun wildly, then locked. Pointed straight at Quinn. Then swung past her shoulder toward the tunnel exit. Toward London. Readings spiked on instruments Quinn had never owned. Devices only existed underground. Crafted by artisans who traded in forbidden spaces. Quinn did not blink. The compass mapped energy displacement. Rifts tore through reality like stressed fabric. The dead man sat at the epicenter. Killers did not leave scuff patterns matching dimensional stress fractures. Criminals did not carry artifacts tuned to magnetic declination shifts. It is a smuggling ring, Quinn murmured. Crates held contraband. Banned substances. Information traded in currencies untouched by tax ledgers. The clique moved through these tunnels. Operatives wore masks. Traded tokens that unlocked passages. The bone in the bag served as both key and currency. Miller appeared on the landing. Flashlight beam washed over the workspace. Christ. Who let them park a black market in a tube station? Quinn kept her gaze on the brass compass. Needle trembled. Shifted back toward Quinn’s chest. Then snapped outward again. Energy signatures clustered beneath Camden. Multiple nodes. A network. She calculated sightlines. Alignments matched ley intersections documented in municipal surveys. The market hid by rotation. Followed celestial cycles. Explained missing persons reports last quarter. All sightings occurred near active transit hubs during waxing gibbous phases. Seize everything, Quinn ordered. Tone brooked no argument. Miller hesitated. This falls under Crown property. Archaeological preservation. We require warrants. Burn the warrants later, Quinn replied. She stepped forward. Boots crushed scattered parchment. Ink-stained fingers lifted a ledger page. Names crossed out in red wax. Dates aligned with arrest records. Connections surfaced. Bankers. Lawyers. Senior officers. Investigation widened past street crews. Reached foundations the department pretended remained stable. The hooded figure backed away. Silence filled the space. Quinn noted absent fear response. Calculated retreat instead. Organized. Professionals operating outside statutes. Moving goods rewriting law could not ban. Stand down, Quinn commanded. Figure inclined its head. Mask tilted toward the compass. Needle stabilized. Locked onto Quinn. Recognition passed through the gesture. Familiarity with the badge. With the case file buried under Morris’s grave. Quinn’s thumb pressed the worn leather strap on her wrist. Memory struck sharp. Rain. Hollow impact. Compass spinning backward. Three years of silence followed. Bureau officials cited natural causes. Reality demanded scrutiny. Required patience. She gathered the ledger. Slipped the bone token into her coat pocket. Heat seeped through leather gloves. She turned her back on the shadows and began ascending the stairs toward the surface, tracking the compass needle through damp corridors.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"aligned"
count3
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"resonated"
count1
9
word"charm"
count1
10
word"standard"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"etched"
count2
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"magnetic"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"calculated"
count2
17
word"silence"
count2
18
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"aligned"
2"silk"
3"weight"
4"shattered"
5"scanned"
6"traced"
7"vibrated"
8"resonated"
9"charm"
10"standard"
11"gloom"
12"etched"
13"echoed"
14"magnetic"
15"trembled"
16"calculated"
17"silence"
18"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences239
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences239
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences239
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1252
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"A crowbar does not dissolve tile, Quinn said."
1"The victim did not fall, Quinn said."
2"Watch your step, Miller warned."
3"Check the pockets, Quinn said."
4"It is a smuggling ring, Quinn murmured."
5"Seize everything, Quinn ordered."
6"Burn the warrants later, Quinn replied."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1252
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn29
Chalk1
Farm1
Miller10
Italian1
Morris2
Old1
English1
Umbra1
London1
Camden1
Crown1
Needle3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Morris"
4"Needle"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
2"Old"
3"London"
globalScore0.342
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1252
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences239
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean32.95
std24.76
cv0.752
sampleLengths
057
131
242
343
417
529
623
715
870
99
1010
1128
1212
1341
145
157
162
1730
1835
196
205
217
2257
2372
2459
2561
2621
2778
2843
2945
3023
3164
328
3312
3448
3529
364
37104
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences239
matches
0"been bagged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs271
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences239
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1253
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Inside lay identical bone"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.019154030327214685
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006384676775738229
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences239
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences239
mean5.24
std3.04
cv0.581
sampleLengths
013
18
28
37
416
55
613
77
85
96
104
117
125
1311
1415
157
163
176
183
197
208
214
225
238
244
255
264
2711
286
298
308
317
324
334
342
352
365
376
382
396
406
415
425
4312
448
455
463
472
482
496
98.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.7071129707112971
totalSentences239
uniqueOpeners169
34.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences195
matches
0"Then swung past her shoulder"
1"Then snapped outward again."
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences195
matches
0"He tapped a pen against"
1"Her eyes tracked along the"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"His lips held a faint"
4"She brushed a finger along"
5"She remembered rain slick pavement."
6"You are talking about ghosts"
7"She traced the blood trail."
8"It ended at a hairline"
9"She pulled a notebook from"
10"Her inner coat pocket bulged."
11"He withdrew a bone token,"
12"He dropped it into an"
13"She stood and walked toward"
14"She followed the marks upward"
15"You are trespassing, Miller’s voice"
16"It is a smuggling ring,"
17"She calculated sightlines."
18"We require warrants."
19"She stepped forward."
ratio0.113
98.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount141
totalSentences195
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"The air tasted of copper"
2"The abandoned Chalk Farm branch"
3"Sergeant Miller leaned against a"
4"He tapped a pen against"
5"Generator died right after we"
6"Quinn ignored the excuse."
7"Her eyes tracked along the"
8"Scuff marks aligned too perfectly."
9"Blood smears ran parallel to"
10"She adjusted the worn leather"
11"A man lay sprawled near"
12"Silk shirt torn at the"
13"His lips held a faint"
14"Quinn knelt, gloved fingers hovering"
15"Skin temperature matched stone."
16"Rigor mortis refused to set."
17"Crowbar to the temple."
18"Quinn followed his gaze."
19"An antique brass walking stick"
ratio0.723
51.28% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences195
matches
0"Now it held a body."
1"To find what killed him."
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.9917%