Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9WH8TP76YH8ZQEWCQXPG8

Run Details

Duration:
7m 14s
Cost:
$0.115448
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pulled the door open and found Lucien Moreau standing in the narrow stairwell, rain sliding from his platinum hair into the collar of his charcoal coat. Her straight black hair hung loose around her shoulders, and the stairwell light caught the bright blue of her eyes. The chain still held the door to the frame, leaving him a slice of yellow light and the smell of fried onion from the curry house below. "You look like you knocked with your teeth." Her hand stayed on the chain. His mouth curved, but the smile stopped at the mismatched pair of his eyes. One amber. One black as a wet road. "You took three bolts off before you opened. Progress." "The fourth's stuck." "May I come in?" "No." Ptolemy squeezed between Rory's ankles, orange fur bristling as he inspected the visitor. Lucien lowered his gaze to the cat, then to the paper bag in his left hand. Steam darkened the paper. "I brought food." "From where? The bin behind the kebab shop?" "Golden Empress. Yu-Fei told me you skipped your shift." "I sent a message." "She told me you skipped it in person." Rory kept her hand on the door. Her delivery jacket hung on the hook beside her, sleeves still damp from earlier, and the sight made her stomach twist. Lucien always knew how to find the loose thread in her day and pull. "Eva's not here." "She's in Edinburgh. You're minding the cat and sleeping under her research." "I'm staying here." "Then I have come to your flat." "It's Eva's flat." "You answered the door in your socks. It counts." She stared at him. Three months since he had stood in her kitchen and told her he was done with jobs that involved her. Three months since she had thrown a glass at the wall and missed him by a hair. The memory sat between them, wet and smoking. Ptolemy wound around Lucien's trouser leg and left orange hairs on the charcoal fabric. Lucien did not move. He let the cat claim him. Rory undid the chain. "In. Kitchen chair. Don't touch the papers." The flat took him in the way it took everyone: by forcing him to sidestep stacks of books by the skirting, scrolls tied with twine on the windowsill, Eva's research notes pinned to the wall like leaves after a storm. Lucien moved through the room with care, cane finding gaps in the clutter. The ivory head of his cane tapped once against the table edge. She remembered the thin blade hidden in the shaft. He set the bag of food on the only clear patch of table, then waited. "Sit." "I am sitting." "You are hovering near a pile of Sufi ward theory." He sat on the edge of the wooden chair. She pulled her first-aid box from beneath a tower of paperbacks and placed it between them. Ptolemy jumped onto the table and sniffed the bag. "Down." The cat ignored her. Lucien peeled off his coat. His white shirt had gone translucent across the shoulders, and a red stain spread along the left side, soaking the fabric into a bruised pink. Rory fetched a towel and tossed it at his head. He caught it one-handed and pressed it to the wound without flinching. "Shirt." "I beg your pardon?" "Unless you want me to cut through Savile Row with kitchen scissors." "This is not Savile Row." "It thinks it is." He worked the buttons with long fingers, slower than he needed to be. She looked away at the sink, at the two mugs she had not washed, at the rain stitching the window. When she looked back, his shirt hung open, revealing a clean line of muscle and the dark smear of blood beneath. She knelt and opened the kit. Antiseptic. Gauze. Tape. Her hands stayed steady. He had once called that steadiness a weapon. She had called his restraint a coffin. "You can tell me how you got it." "I took a wrong turn." "In what? A knife fight?" "A negotiation." "With a blade?" "With several." She dabbed the cut. He drew in a sharp breath through his nose. "Merde." "Sorry." "Don't be." "You always liked pain." "I like context." The cut ran along his ribs, shallow but long. She cleaned it, aware of his gaze on her hair, her mouth, the small crescent scar on her wrist when her sleeve slipped. He reached out and caught her hand before she could pull back. "What happened here?" "Childhood. Gate latch." "Not Evan?" "No." His thumb moved over the scar once. The touch had no flourish, only a pressure that made the flat feel smaller. "Good." "Why?" "Because if he had marked you, I would have had to find him." She met his eyes. The black one drank the lamplight. The amber one held it. "You lost the right to hunt my exes." "I know." "You lost it when you told me I was a liability." "I told you you made me reckless." "Same thing, in your mouth." He released her wrist. She kept working, though her pulse beat in her fingertips. Ptolemy butted his head against Lucien's elbow until the man set a hand on the cat's back. "I came to give you this." He reached into his waistcoat and produced a key on a frayed ribbon. Brass, dull, familiar. Rory stopped with the tape between her fingers. "My old flat?" "They changed the lock after you left. I kept the key." "Why?" "Because I could not bring it back then." "And now?" "Now I need somewhere to sit until the streets calm down." She taped the gauze in place. Her ribs pressed inward. He had come back to return a key and bleed on Eva's floor. Both things felt like an apology. Neither felt like enough. "You could have posted it." "I wanted to see you." "You could have called." "You would not have answered." "That doesn't mean you get to show up." "No." "You don't get to sit there with your fancy suit and your blood and act like you did me a favour." "I did not come to act like anything." "Then what?" He leaned forward. The chair creaked. His hand hovered near her jaw, not touching, the way a person stands at the edge of a platform before a train. "I came because I have spent ninety days hearing your voice in every room I enter. I came because Yu-Fei told me you were working too many late deliveries and eating what the kitchen didn't sell. I came because I am a coward with good shoes and no sense." She laughed once, hard and humourless. "That's a speech." "It is a fact." "You left me standing in your office with my coat on." "Yes." "And you told me you were done with me." "I told you I was done using you as a weakness." "I was not a weakness." "You were the only thing I could not protect." The words dropped into the room and lay there. Rain tapped the glass. Downstairs, the curry house clattered pans. Rory set the scissors in the kit and closed the lid. "So you protected me by leaving." "I protected myself by leaving." "There it is." "There it is." She stood. He remained seated, looking up at her with that ruined elegance she had once called posh nonsense to make him smile. The cut pulled at his skin; he kept his spine straight and his hands loose. She wanted to push him against the books and kiss him. She wanted to shove him back into the stairwell and lock all three bolts. Ptolemy meowed at the bag. Lucien glanced at the cat. "He will open the food." "He has no thumbs." "He has ambition." Rory tore the bag open. Steam rose, carrying ginger and garlic. Her stomach clenched with hunger she had ignored all day. She set the container on a book, then remembered the first-aid kit and tucked it under her arm. "Eat. Then you can tell me who cut you." "And after that?" "After that, you can leave when the rain stops." "It will not stop before morning." "How do you know?" "Because the sky over Brick Lane has no respect for my plans." The corner of her mouth lifted. He saw it and did not press. He lifted the container with both hands and ate a mouthful with the patience of a man who had learned to wait for doors to open. Rory leaned against the counter, arms folded, watching him. Blood and rain dried on his shirt. The key lay beside the food, small and tarnished. She picked it up. The metal held the heat of his body. "You don't get to stay because of the weather." "No." "You don't get to stay because you're hurt." "No." "You don't get to stay because I haven't thrown you out yet." "I know." She closed her fingers around the key. The crescent scar on her wrist pulled with the motion. "You can sleep on the floor. The sofa is full of Eva's notes, and if you move one scroll she will know." "I have slept on worse." "You have paid for better." "Tonight I want the worse." She tossed him a spare blanket from the hall cupboard. He caught it against his chest. Ptolemy inspected the blanket, then settled on it as if he had called it first. Lucien looked at the cat, then at Rory. "May I?" He held out his hand. Not to take. To ask. She stared at it until the rain blurred the streetlights outside. Then she placed her fingers in his. He drew her close with care, stopping when her knees brushed his. His free hand rose to her cheek, thumb brushing the corner of her mouth. "Tell me to stop." "You know I can't stand that phrase." "Then tell me what you want." The room narrowed to the heat of his palm. Books leaned in stacks. The key bit into her palm. Rory leaned forward and kissed him. His mouth tasted of rain and spice and the bitter tea he always drank too hot. His fingers tightened in her hair, then released. When she drew back, his eyes had gone bright and dangerous. "Stay for the night. Only the night." He touched his forehead to hers. "Only the night." Ptolemy stretched across the blanket and yawned.
created_at"2026-09-02T14:55:34.69Z" 9/2/2026, 2:55:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
2"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences217
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1740
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1131
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Moreau1
Rory11
Eva2
Ptolemy7
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an apology"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1740
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences217
matches
0"called that steadiness"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs142
mean12.25
std15.36
cv1.254
sampleLengths
074
18
26
322
49
53
64
71
833
93
108
119
124
138
1442
153
1612
173
187
193
209
2149
2224
234
247
2589
261
273
2810
2934
301
3134
3222
331
344
3512
365
374
3854
3928
408
415
425
432
443
452
4613
471
481
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs189
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences217
ratio0.005
matches
0"The cut pulled at his skin; he kept his spine straight and his hands loose."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1134
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02292768959435626
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001763668430335097
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences217
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences217
mean8.02
std6.59
cv0.822
sampleLengths
027
120
227
38
46
514
62
76
89
93
104
111
1213
1316
144
153
168
179
184
198
207
2121
2214
233
2412
253
267
273
289
294
3020
3117
328
3314
344
356
364
377
3840
3913
4012
419
4215
431
443
4510
469
4716
489
491
44.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2995391705069124
totalSentences217
uniqueOpeners65
30.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then she placed her fingers"
ratio0.009
31.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences108
matches
0"Her straight black hair hung"
1"Her hand stayed on the"
2"His mouth curved, but the"
3"Her delivery jacket hung on"
4"She stared at him."
5"He let the cat claim"
6"She remembered the thin blade"
7"He set the bag of"
8"He sat on the edge"
9"She pulled her first-aid box"
10"His white shirt had gone"
11"He caught it one-handed and"
12"He worked the buttons with"
13"She looked away at the"
14"She knelt and opened the"
15"Her hands stayed steady."
16"He had once called that"
17"She had called his restraint"
18"She dabbed the cut."
19"He drew in a sharp"
ratio0.472
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences108
matches
0"Rory pulled the door open"
1"Her straight black hair hung"
2"The chain still held the"
3"Her hand stayed on the"
4"His mouth curved, but the"
5"Ptolemy squeezed between Rory's ankles,"
6"Lucien lowered his gaze to"
7"Steam darkened the paper."
8"Rory kept her hand on"
9"Her delivery jacket hung on"
10"Lucien always knew how to"
11"She stared at him."
12"The memory sat between them,"
13"Ptolemy wound around Lucien's trouser"
14"Lucien did not move."
15"He let the cat claim"
16"Rory undid the chain."
17"The flat took him in"
18"Lucien moved through the room"
19"The ivory head of his"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9428%