Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H9Y4XFGBSYAS5EYHZ8W0XB

Run Details

Duration:
6m 27s
Cost:
$0.097364
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last deadbolt clunked free. Aurora Carter pulled the door open and found Lucien Moreau standing in the narrow stairwell with rain dripping from his platinum hair onto the curry house's peeling paint. "Rory." Her fingers tightened on the door. "No." He did not move back. His charcoal suit had gone dark at the shoulders, and the ivory handle of his cane gleamed wet under his palm. One eye caught the landing bulb in amber; the other swallowed it. The same bulb caught the bright blue of her eyes as she blocked his path. "You changed the locks." "These belong to Eva." She kept her body in the gap. "And Eva gave me the keys. You remember Eva. The one you sent a moth postcard when you should have sent a name." "I sent a warning." "You sent stationery." Ptolemy wound between her ankles, sniffing the damp air with deep suspicion. The cat's tail hooked once, then stilled. Lucien looked down at him. "Bonjour." Ptolemy flattened an ear. Rory pushed the door shut. Lucien shifted his weight, and the cane's tip slid into the threshold. Not force. A request dressed as a line. "Five minutes." "You had six months." "Three minutes." "Whatever you want, Lucien, it costs more now." His gaze dropped to the crescent scar on her left wrist where her sleeve had ridden up. He looked away before she could enjoy the small hit of it. "I need Eva's notes." "She's in Krakow." "Then I need you." The words took up too much room in the hallway. Rory lifted her chin. "For what?" He opened his mouth. A thin line of red seeped between his fingers where his left hand rested against his side. The black fabric had hidden it until he moved. "That." "A scratch." "You're bleeding on her research." "A minor complication." "Outside." "Rory." "Outside, Luc." His mouth thinned at the shortened name. He did not step back. Behind them, the stairwell smelled of wet wool, fried cumin, and the sharp mineral edge of blood. Rory looked at the blood. Then at the stack of scrolls on the hall table. Then at the rain stitching the window on the turn. She stepped aside. "Kitchen chair. Nothing else." He passed over the threshold with careful economy, as if the flat might reject him. The room beyond gave him little choice. Books rose in leaning towers from the rug to the windowsill. Scrolls spilled from a bread bin. Eva's research notes papered the kitchen table, pinned under teacups, jars, and a broken stapler. Ptolemy leapt onto a stack of folklore pamphlets and watched Lucien with the full contempt of a tabby who had opinions. Rory shut the door and threw the deadbolts one by one. Habit. Annoyance. The small satisfaction of metal biting wood. "Coat off." "I am fine." "You are dripping on a first edition of something Eva will murder me for." He unbuttoned the jacket with his good hand and held it over his arm. She took it from him, hung it on the back of the nearest chair, and saw the dark smear his fingers left on the fabric. "Sit." He sat. The kitchen chair creaked under him. He set the cane against the table, where it began to slide. His hand shot out and caught it before it hit the floor. "You still keep your knives in a biscuit tin." "Eva keeps them in a drawer. I borrowed the tin." "For weapons?" "For digestives." "You use the tin as a weapon." "Only when the biscuits are stale." She pulled the first-aid box from under a heap of photocopies and set it on the table between them. Ptolemy batted at a cotton reel. Rory slapped his paw away. "Shirt." Lucien's brows rose a fraction. "We have history, Rory, not a rehearsal." "Left cuff. You're favouring it." He undid the button. His fingers fumbled on the second one, and she leaned in before she could decide not to. The heat of his skin touched her knuckles. She stilled. "Allow me." "I was about to manage." "You were about to faint." "I never faint. I retire gracefully." "Into other people's furniture." His wrist turned under her grip. The pulse there beat strong and fast. Rory kept her eyes on the cuff, not his mouth. The fabric came free, revealing a shallow cut along his forearm and, around it, a web of dark veins that did not belong to ordinary injury. She lifted his arm closer to the lamp. "That's not a scratch." "No." "What touched you?" "Something from Avaros with poor manners." "You mean a demon." "I mean a contractor." "Human enough to bleed, then." "Less human than he preferred." She soaked a gauze pad in antiseptic. He did not flinch when she pressed it to the wound, but the tendons in his forearm tightened. "You could have gone to a hospital." "Hospitals ask questions." "So do I." "You ask better ones." "Stop flattering me. It's transparent." "It worked in Cardiff." "We don't talk about Cardiff." "You ran to London from Cardiff." "And you followed me because you thought I owed you a favour." "I followed because you left your phone in my coat." "You kept it for three weeks." "I returned it." "After three weeks." Ptolemy headbutted Rory's elbow. She shifted, and her straight black hair fell across her face. Lucien lifted his free hand as if to push it back, then curled his fingers around the edge of the table instead. "The ledger." "What ledger?" "The one with your alias. Laila." The name sat between them, old and sharp. Rory unscrewed the antiseptic bottle with too much force. The cap squealed. "You knew about that." "I found out after Marseille." "After you left me with two men who called themselves brokers and had no faces." "I left you with a barrister who could get you on the train." "You vanished." "I bought time." "With my name?" "With mine." He pulled his arm from her hand, then stopped when the gauze stuck. She held it steady. He lowered his voice. "I gave them Lucien Moreau, half-demon, son of Avaros, bad debt, worse temper. I did not give them Rory." She looked at the dark veins. They pulsed once under the lamplight. "You should have told me." "You would have argued." "I argue with everyone. That is not the same as consent." "No." "You don't get to decide what I can survive." "I know." The flat filled with the sound of rain against the glass and the low murmur of the curry house below. Rory taped the gauze in place. Her fingers lingered over the bandage long enough for both of them to notice. Lucien turned his hand over. His thumb brushed the scar on her wrist. "This healed." "Most things do." "Not everything." "No. Some things form habits." He released her. She stepped back and knocked a book off the table. It landed open at a page of protective sigils. Lucien bent, retrieved it, and set it aside with too much care. "Eva's wards are good." "They should be. She pays rent in research." "Three deadbolts. Salt under the sill. A cat who hates me." "He has taste." "The ward at the window is cracked." "Because I leaned out to smoke a cigarette I don't even like." "You should not lean out." "I should do a lot of things." Ptolemy jumped onto the table and put one paw on Lucien's cane. Lucien tapped the cat's toes away. "The ledger is moving tonight." "Then move with it." "It includes your address above Silas' bar." Rory's hand went to the back of the chair. "How?" "Golden Empress receipts. Delivery routes. Someone stitched them together." "Eva told me to stop taking those routes after dark." "She was right." "That does not mean you get to stand in her kitchen and prove it." "I am not here to prove anything. I am here because the man carrying the ledger will pass Brick Lane before dawn." "Then stop him on Brick Lane." "He will use the flat as leverage if he finds it empty." "If he finds me here, he'll use me as leverage." Lucien went still. The black eye seemed deeper in the lamplight. "He will not reach the door." "You made that promise in Marseille." "Marseille had a harbour." "And this place has a curry house and a cat." "Ptolemy can be vicious." "Only to men who bleed on manuscripts." Lucien glanced at the bloodied cuff in the sink. Then at her. "I can lock the stairwell for an hour." "With what?" "A word in French, a word in older tongues, and four languages' worth of poor judgement." "Your speciality." "You will let me?" "I will let you sit there and not touch anything. The stairwell stays as it is." "The ward at the window—" "Will remain cracked because I am not letting you rewrite Eva's flat." He considered that. Ptolemy yawned, showing every tooth. "I did not come only for the ledger." Rory's hand rested on the cupboard door. "What else?" "The chance to stand in the same room as you without someone shooting at us." "That happened once." "Once is enough." "Then we wait." "We wait." Rory moved to the cupboard and pushed aside jars of turmeric and old takeaway sachets. Behind them, Eva kept a bottle of gin labelled in red marker: FOR MEDICINAL AND/OR EMERGENCY USE. Rory set two mismatched glasses on the counter. "You have no ice." "You have no invitation." "I am sitting." "A fact." She poured. The gin smelled of juniper and something herbal Eva had grown on the fire escape. One glass she placed in front of him. The other she kept. "To complicated terms." "Don't toast." "Then I will drink in silence." "You never knew how." He lifted the glass with his uninjured hand. She did not drink. He waited. After a moment, she touched her glass to his, a brief click of glass that made Ptolemy's ears swivel. "Once. Until the rain stops." "And after?" Rory looked at the door with its three deadbolts, at the scroll piles, at the bandage on his arm and the cane that hid a blade. She took a sip. The gin burned clean down her throat. "After that, you tell me everything you left out." She pulled a second chair from beneath a stack of books and sat across from him.
created_at"2026-09-02T14:56:27.58Z" 9/2/2026, 2:56:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences137
tagDensity0.015
leniency0.029
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1738
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1738
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"pulsed"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences241
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1738
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount993
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Lucien12
Moreau1
Ptolemy8
Rory14
Eva3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.795
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed deeper in the lamplight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.575
wordCount1738
matches
0"not flinch when she pressed it to the wound, but the tendons in his forearm tightened"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences241
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs175
mean9.93
std12.02
cv1.21
sampleLengths
033
11
26
31
453
54
634
74
83
919
105
111
124
1325
142
154
162
178
1829
194
203
214
2214
232
2430
251
262
275
283
291
301
312
3254
333
344
3575
3620
372
383
3914
4039
411
422
4330
449
4510
462
472
487
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences241
ratio0.004
matches
0"One eye caught the landing bulb in amber; the other swallowed it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount994
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.023138832997987926
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences241
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences241
mean7.21
std5.49
cv0.762
sampleLengths
05
128
21
36
41
55
621
712
815
94
1011
1123
124
133
1412
157
165
171
184
195
2012
212
226
232
244
252
268
2717
2812
294
303
314
3210
334
342
354
3617
379
381
392
405
413
421
431
442
457
465
4717
485
4910
47.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.26141078838174275
totalSentences241
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then at the stack of"
1"Then at the rain stitching"
2"Then at her."
ratio0.03
66.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences99
matches
0"Her fingers tightened on the"
1"He did not move back."
2"His charcoal suit had gone"
3"She kept her body in"
4"His gaze dropped to the"
5"He looked away before she"
6"He opened his mouth."
7"His mouth thinned at the"
8"He did not step back."
9"She stepped aside."
10"He passed over the threshold"
11"He unbuttoned the jacket with"
12"She took it from him,"
13"He set the cane against"
14"His hand shot out and"
15"She pulled the first-aid box"
16"He undid the button."
17"His fingers fumbled on the"
18"His wrist turned under her"
19"She lifted his arm closer"
ratio0.384
0.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences99
matches
0"The last deadbolt clunked free."
1"Aurora Carter pulled the door"
2"Her fingers tightened on the"
3"He did not move back."
4"His charcoal suit had gone"
5"The same bulb caught the"
6"She kept her body in"
7"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
8"The cat's tail hooked once,"
9"Lucien looked down at him."
10"Ptolemy flattened an ear."
11"Rory pushed the door shut."
12"Lucien shifted his weight, and"
13"A request dressed as a"
14"His gaze dropped to the"
15"He looked away before she"
16"The words took up too"
17"Rory lifted her chin."
18"He opened his mouth."
19"A thin line of red"
ratio0.919
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He passed over the threshold with careful economy, as if the flat might reject him."
1"The fabric came free, revealing a shallow cut along his forearm and, around it, a web of dark veins that did not belong to ordinary injury."
2"After a moment, she touched her glass to his, a brief click of glass that made Ptolemy's ears swivel."
3"Rory looked at the door with its three deadbolts, at the scroll piles, at the bandage on his arm and the cane that hid a blade."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.0322%