Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HA4TGZSD6WMWZSH845TS7Q

Run Details

Duration:
4m 12s
Cost:
$0.058368
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest bled into the wet street. Rory ducked under the awning with her insulated delivery bag knocking against her hip. Rain drummed the pavement. She pushed the door open with her shoulder. Inside, the air smelled of beer, lemon polish, and old paper. She had not meant to go in. The shift at the Golden Empress had finished twenty minutes earlier, but her phone had died, and the bus had swallowed itself into traffic. She needed a charger, a corner, five minutes. The bar was narrow and dim. Maps hung in frames along the wall, their creases white as bones. Black-and-white photographs crowded between them: men in overcoats, women with cigarettes, a city square dusted with snow. Behind the bar stood a man with grey-streaked auburn hair and a neatly trimmed beard. He polished a glass and listened to two customers argue about horses. Rory stepped closer to the end of the bar. The man looked up. His hazel eyes caught the low light. The glass stilled in his hand. “Aurora?” The name landed on her shoulders like a coat she had thrown away. Her fingers tightened around the strap of her bag. “Rory.” He set the glass down. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against the wood. “Rory.” He tested the word. “You look well.” “So do you.” He came around the bar. His left leg carried a hitch, a shortened beat in the rhythm of his steps. He stopped near a high stool and rested one hand on its back. “Seven years,” he said. “Six, if we’re counting from the station.” “Seven if we’re counting from the last letter.” She glanced at the door. Rain streaked the glass. The customers argued. One laughed and slapped the bar. “I can’t stay,” she said. “You already stayed.” She lowered the bag to the floor. The embroidered dragon from the Golden Empress stared up, threadbare at one claw. “Just water.” He returned behind the bar and filled a tumbler. His movements had not changed: measured, economical, the way he handled a map or a lie. But the line of his mouth had deepened, and his beard carried more grey than the colour she remembered. When he slid the water across the counter, his hand lingered near the ring. “You work for Yu-Fei now?” he asked. “Delivery. Twice a week, sometimes more.” “And the law?” Rory drank. The water tasted of cold metal and lemon. “The law got a better offer.” “Aurora.” “Rory.” He waited. She set the glass down. “Cardiff wasn’t working out,” she said. “That has never stopped you.” “It stopped me.” He studied her face, then the bag, then the damp cuffs of her jacket. She kept her left hand curled, the crescent scar on her wrist tucked against her sleeve. He noticed anyway. His gaze moved away before she could hate him for it. “I heard you left,” he said. “Eva talks.” “Eva worries. She came here looking for you two months ago.” Rory’s chest pulled tight. “You saw Eva?” “She wanted a room above the bar. I told her the flat was small and the stairs were steep.” “It is.” “She said you’d taken it.” The words sat there. Rory looked at the ceiling, where a water stain spread like a pale continent. “I pay rent to the agency,” she said. “I keep the books.” “Convenient.” “I own the building, Rory.” She laughed once, dry and short. “Of course you do.” He did not smile. “You could have told me.” “I didn’t know you were still in London.” “I never left.” She looked at him then. The old anger rose, not hot but heavy, a stone she had carried so long she had forgotten its shape. “You did once,” she said. His jaw tightened. “Prague.” “You left a note.” “I left instructions.” “To wait.” “To stay alive.” The horse argument died behind them. One customer paid and stepped into the rain. The other lingered, elbows on the bar. Silas lifted the hinged flap at the end of the counter and nodded toward the back of the room. “Come through.” “No.” “The bookshelf is stuck today. I need to check the latch.” “I remember how it works.” “Then help.” She followed him because leaving would have meant another admission. The shelves along the rear wall held rows of cracked spines and dust-dark bottles. Silas pressed his thumb against a brass rose hidden beneath a map of old Berlin. The bookcase swung inward on silent hinges. A narrow room waited beyond, lit by a single amber lamp. A table. Two chairs. A wall of photographs with pins stuck through their corners. Rory stopped on the threshold. “You still collect secrets,” she said. “They collect me.” She entered. The air in there felt pressed down, as if the walls had absorbed too many low voices. Silas eased the shelf closed until only a finger’s width of light remained. He did not sit. “You were supposed to meet me at the station,” she said. “I was.” “I waited until the last train.” “I know.” “How do you know?” “Because I stood on the platform and watched you leave.” Her breath caught. She put her bag between her feet and gripped its strap. “You didn’t come over.” “If I had, they would have seen you with me.” “Whose they?” “The wrong ones. Evan had friends in the wrong places.” The name made her skin crawl. She did not say it again. “Evan is gone,” she said. “I know.” “You know that too?” “Eva told me.” “Then you know everything.” “Not even close.” He touched the table, fingertips brushing a folded map. His ring flashed. She remembered the ring on his hand when he had once pressed a ticket into her palm. Come with me, she had said. Not yet, he had answered. He had been older then, but not grey like this. The bar had not yet swallowed his field coat and turned him into a keeper of bottles. “You opened a pub,” she said. “A bar.” “It pours pints.” “It also listens.” “For who?” “For whoever needs a place to sit without being found.” She looked at the photographs. Some had names written on the back. One showed a younger Silas beside a woman with cropped hair and a severe mouth. The woman’s face had been crossed out in pen, then half wiped away. “Is that Prague?” Rory asked. “Yes.” “Did she survive?” He did not answer right away. His thumb moved over the signet ring, turning it a quarter circle. “She survived me,” he said. Rory sat. The chair creaked. She felt the day in her bones, the rain, the missed bus, the smell of fried garlic on her jacket. She had spent months riding through London with her head down, delivering noodles and rice, counting tips, learning which streets had CCTV and which had shelter. She had told herself she was safe. Safety looked like a small flat above a bar and a job that asked no questions. “I left law in my final year,” she said. “Your father knows?” “He knows what he needs to.” “And your mother?” “She sends books. I send postcards.” “You never did either.” “Neither did you.” He leaned against the table. The limp made him favour his right side, but he kept his shoulders square. The authority she remembered had not vanished; it had gone underground. “I heard about Evan,” he said. “Did you?” “The night you called. I was in Prague. My phone was off by then.” “I called twice.” “I know. I got the messages after.” She looked at her hands. The scar curved pale against her skin. A childhood fall, a broken cup, her mother’s voice calling her brave. Now it felt like a mark of all the things that cut before a person understood how to step back. “You told me to choose a safe life,” she said. “I did.” “I thought law was safe.” “It was.” “It was a cage with polished bars.” “Then you should have told me.” “I did. At the station. I told you I wanted to go with you.” “You were twenty.” “I was old enough.” “You were too clever to take into something that eats clever people.” She laughed again, and this time it had teeth. “So you left me to someone else’s appetite.” His face changed. Not much. A muscle near his mouth, a shadow under the eyes. He carried guilt like a man carrying a broken knee: he had learned to walk around it, but it still set the pace. “I thought if I stayed away, Evan would lose interest,” he said. “Evan liked things he could break.” “Then I should have broken him first.” The words hung in the little room. Rory stared at him. The old Silas would have said it without heat. This one meant it, and the meaning frightened her. “Don’t,” she said. “Don’t what?” “Don’t make it neat.” “I never could.” “You made me promises.” “I made you warnings.” “They sounded like promises.” He closed his eyes for a moment. When he opened them, the amber light had deepened in the lines of his face. “I regret the station,” he said. “You regret getting caught?” “I regret that you waited.” “I stopped waiting.” “No. You changed the address.” She looked away. On the table, a map showed the Thames in blue ink, its bends careful and patient. She thought of her flat upstairs, the narrow bed, the window that looked over the alley, the way she kept the chain on the door even when she was home. She had built a life out of small locks. “Eva says I should go to my father,” she said. “Will you?” “He still calls it Pre-Law. Even now. He says I have time to go back.” “Do you want to?” Rory traced the rim of the empty tumbler she had not realized she still held. Her fingers made a circle on the glass. “I want to stop running,” she said. “That is not the same thing.” “You taught me the difference.” “I taught you how to leave. I never taught you what to do after.” The shelf behind them shifted. A murmur of voices came through as the bar grew busier. Someone laughed, sharp and sudden. Silas turned toward the sound, then back. “I have to open the latch for the delivery,” he said. “Of course.” “Stay here.” “I’m not hiding.” “Then sit. The water is yours.” He slipped out through the gap. Rory heard the shelf close with a soft wooden breath. She sat alone in the hidden room with the photographs and the maps. Her reflection floated in the dark glass of the lamp: black hair damp at the jaw, blue eyes wide, mouth set as if she had just swallowed a verdict. She did not look like the girl at the station. That girl had believed leaving was a door. This woman knew it was a corridor. The shelf opened again. Silas returned with a bottle and two small glasses. He set them on the table and filled both without asking. The liquid caught the light like dark tea. “I don’t drink on shift,” she said. “You’re not on shift.” “Golden Empress doesn’t pay me to sit in hidden rooms.” “It pays you to be careful.” “You don’t know what it pays me.” He pushed one glass toward her. His hand stopped near hers, not touching. The signet ring was cool and scratched. “To the station,” he said. Rory looked at the glass. Outside, a siren passed on the wet street and faded. The bar murmured above them, alive and indifferent. She picked up the glass and let the warmth sit against her palm. “To the last train,” she said. They drank. The whiskey burned clean through her chest. Silas set his glass down and turned the ring once more. He did not move toward the shelf. She did not stand. The lamp held its small circle around them, and the rain worked at the window high above the alley as if it had all night to get in.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:00:06.311Z" 9/2/2026, 3:00:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences132
tagDensity0.197
leniency0.394
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2033
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2033
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"traced"
2"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences168
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences274
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2033
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1408
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden2
Empress2
Rory12
Berlin1
Silas8
London1
Thames1
One3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"One"
places
0"Golden"
1"Berlin"
2"London"
3"Thames"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a small flat above a bar and"
1"felt like a mark of all the things that"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.492
wordCount2033
matches
0"not hot but heavy, a stone she had carried so long she had forgotten its"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences274
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs172
mean11.82
std15.53
cv1.314
sampleLengths
050
139
262
326
41
522
61
717
88
93
1033
114
127
138
1418
155
163
1720
182
1958
207
216
223
2310
246
251
261
277
286
295
303
3144
326
332
3411
357
3619
372
385
3918
408
414
421
435
446
454
469
478
483
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences168
matches
0"been crossed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs260
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences274
ratio0.004
matches
0"The authority she remembered had not vanished; it had gone underground."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1412
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.024787535410764873
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00141643059490085
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences274
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences274
mean7.42
std5.25
cv0.708
sampleLengths
013
114
24
38
411
57
624
78
86
912
1017
1115
1212
139
144
157
166
171
1813
199
201
215
2212
235
243
253
265
2715
2813
294
307
318
325
334
343
356
365
373
387
3913
402
419
4216
4319
4414
457
466
473
482
498
42.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.22627737226277372
totalSentences274
uniqueOpeners62
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences135
matches
0"She pushed the door open"
1"She had not meant to"
2"She needed a charger, a"
3"He polished a glass and"
4"His hazel eyes caught the"
5"Her fingers tightened around the"
6"He set the glass down."
7"He tested the word"
8"He came around the bar."
9"His left leg carried a"
10"He stopped near a high"
11"She glanced at the door."
12"She lowered the bag to"
13"He returned behind the bar"
14"His movements had not changed:"
15"She set the glass down."
16"He studied her face, then"
17"She kept her left hand"
18"He noticed anyway."
19"His gaze moved away before"
ratio0.437
11.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences135
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory ducked under the awning"
2"Rain drummed the pavement."
3"She pushed the door open"
4"She had not meant to"
5"The shift at the Golden"
6"She needed a charger, a"
7"The bar was narrow and"
8"Maps hung in frames along"
9"He polished a glass and"
10"Rory stepped closer to the"
11"The man looked up."
12"His hazel eyes caught the"
13"The glass stilled in his"
14"The name landed on her"
15"Her fingers tightened around the"
16"He set the glass down."
17"The silver signet ring on"
18"He tested the word"
19"He came around the bar."
ratio0.896
37.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her reflection floated in the dark glass of the lamp: black hair damp at the jaw, blue eyes wide, mouth set as if she had just swallowed a verdict."
1"The lamp held its small circle around them, and the rain worked at the window high above the alley as if it had all night to get in."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences132
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.379
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.6344%