Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HA62RVJ8NAKN9TNF2RV2SZ

Run Details

Duration:
6m 13s
Cost:
$0.093674
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt gave way under Aurora's thumb, and the door swung into a slice of landing light where Lucien Moreau stood with rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit. Her bright blue eyes took in the blood on his hand, the cane, the set of his mouth. He filled the narrow frame. One hand rested on the ivory head of his cane. The other pressed against his left side. His platinum hair lay slicked back, wet strands cut sharp at the temple. The amber eye caught the bulb above the stairwell; the black one swallowed it. "You have thirty seconds." "Ten will do." "You're bleeding on my mat." He looked down. A dark bead slid from his fingers and struck the rope edge. "I'll pay for it." "With what, information? A favour? Another lie wrapped in French?" His mouth tightened. "With the truth, if you want it." Behind her, the flat held the day's deliveries: grease from the Golden Empress clinging to her jacket, receipts curling on the counter, the mini-fridge humming against the wall. Below, Silas slammed a keg, and the floorboards answered. She kept her hand on the door. "Who's after you?" "Two men from the Clerkenwell set. They think I moved a ledger." "Did you?" "I moved it away from them." She opened the door wider. "Inside. If you drip on the stairs, Silas will charge us both." He stepped over the threshold. The scent of bergamot and wet wool came with him, underneath it copper. She shut the door and threw the chain. The click sat between them like a dropped knife. "Coat." "It's fine." "Lucien." His fingers worked the buttons. The garment came off in a stiff sweep, and the white shirt beneath bloomed crimson at the ribs. He folded the coat over his arm as if offering it to a cloakroom attendant. "Bin." "It's bespoke." "It's evidence." He released the coat into the black bag beside the sink. She pulled a clean dish towel from the rail and pressed it against his side. He sucked air through his teeth. "Sorry." "No, don't." "Don't what?" "Apologise for touching me." She lifted the towel. The cut ran shallow but long, enough to keep bleeding. His skin around it had gone grey. She fetched the first-aid tin from the shelf above the kettle: antiseptic, gauze, plasters, a bottle of vodka Silas had taken from a student. "Shirt." "The buttons are mother-of-pearl." "I'll mourn them." He undid them with blood-slick fingers. When the fabric parted, a ledger of pale marks showed beneath the fresh one. She refused to look at them. The antiseptic stank. She soaked a pad and touched it to the wound. His hand closed on the edge of the counter. Wood groaned. "Breathe." "I am breathing." "You're holding it." "You're enjoying this." "I'm cleaning you." "A dangerous hobby." "You chose it." She taped the gauze down, then noticed his gaze on her left wrist. The crescent scar sat pale against her skin where her sleeve had ridden up. She pulled the cuff down. "Who knew you were in London?" "Three people. One is dead. One owns a club in Soho. One is you." "Eva's flat had three deadbolts. This place has a chain and a landlord who keeps a shotgun under the till." "I prefer your odds." "You don't get to choose." "You opened the door." She stripped the used pad and pressed a fresh one. His ribs moved under her knuckles. The heat there had nothing to do with fever. She remembered the last time she had stood this close to him: a back room in Whitechapel, candle smoke on the walls, his mouth against her ear as he told her she was a liability. She had left before dawn and never answered his calls. "You called me expensive." "I called you expensive to protect." "Same thing." "It was not." "You made it sound like a bill." He caught her wrist. His grip did not bruise. His thumb rested over the crescent scar, and his pulse beat against her skin faster than hers. She did not pull away. "I sent you away because Evan had found your route." Her fingers curled around the gauze. "Evan's in Cardiff." "Evan was in Cardiff. Then he came here. He asked the right questions in the wrong pubs. I bought his silence with a name that wasn't yours." The vodka bottle tipped. She steadied it with her free hand. "What name?" "A woman who owed me money. He hurt her instead." The room narrowed to the cut under her palm, the wet shine of his black eye, the rain ticking at the single window. She had spent months telling herself Lucien used people because that was his trade. It was easier than admitting he had moved her around like a chess piece and called it protection. "You should have told me." "You would have walked into his hands to prove you weren't afraid." "I would have made my own choice." "Yes. That was the problem." A knock hit the downstairs door. Both of them went still. Silas called something about closing time, then another voice cut through, low and polite. Lucien's fingers left her wrist and closed around his cane. The ivory head twisted a fraction. The hidden blade whispered against its sheath. She turned off the kitchen light. The bar's neon sign bled red through the gap in the curtains. Two sets of boots moved under the floorboards. Silas grunted. Glasses clinked. Then footsteps came up the private stair, one slow, one quick. "Closet." "No." "They'll see the blood." "They'll see me leave." "They won't see you at all." She grabbed a roll of bin liners and shoved them over the bloodstained mat. "Back room. Window's painted shut. You can't jump." "I can open it." "You'll tear the wound." "I haven't got stitches." "Then you'll bleed over the crates in the yard." She pushed him toward the narrow bedroom. "Move." He went. She swept the dish towel into the sink, ran cold water through it, and draped it over the tap as if she had been cleaning glasses. The knock came at her door. Two beats. Controlled. She opened it a crack. The chain held. A man in a damp trench coat filled the gap. His partner waited by the stairs, shoulders wide enough to block the landing window. "Evening. We're looking for a friend of yours. French. Cane." "I deliver curry. That's international enough." "This is serious." "So is my rent." Her voice stayed level. "No Frenchman. No cane. Unless you mean the one in the pub downstairs, and that's the landlord's walking stick. He hits the barrels with it." The man looked past her. She shifted her weight so the line of his sight met the red neon, the counter, the open bathroom door. Lucien made no sound. The flat tightened around her lungs. "Blood?" "Period." She kept her face blank. "You want to inspect it?" He stepped back. "My mistake." "Bill the mistake to someone else." She closed the door and leaned against it. Her knees lost their certainty. She locked the chain again and slid down until her spine met the wood. The hallway light carved a thin strip across her face. Lucien emerged from the bedroom. He had not drawn his blade. His shirt hung open, gauze white under the torn cotton. "They'll circle back." "Then we'll lie better." "You didn't have to do that." "I did it for the deposit." "You gave them a lie with your own blood on the floor." "I gave them a fact. Men like that never know what to do with one." A sound escaped him. Not a laugh. Something closer to a wound. He lowered himself into the chair opposite the kitchen table and set the cane across his knees. The rain moved over the glass. She stayed on the floor, arms around her drawn-up knees. "Why here?" "Because you don't sell addresses." "You have three others." "Two are compromised. One belongs to a man who would have slit my throat and invoiced his estate." "And I wouldn't?" "No." She lifted her chin. "You don't know me." His amber eye caught the red light. The black one stayed deep. "I know you keep a first-aid tin for people who can't afford hospitals. I know you work fourteen hours and keep the porch light on for the barmaids. I know you left Evan with nothing but a locked phone and a bruise he couldn't explain. I know I have no right to ask for anything from you, and I asked anyway." The words sat in her chest where they had no business fitting. She looked at the blood on the mat she had missed, at the wet coat balled in the bin bag, at his hands steady around the cane. Her anger held shape, but it had lost its clean edge. "You called me a complication." "I called you the only thing I couldn't price." "That's worse." "I know." She rose. The room felt smaller with him in it, all angles and breath. She pulled the chain from her hair, and straight black strands fell around her shoulders. His gaze tracked the movement, then returned to her face with effort. "Sit." "I am sitting." "On the bed. I need to check the wound." "It can wait." "It can bleed elsewhere." He stood and moved toward the bedroom doorway. She followed. Inside, the bedspread was a faded blue quilt from a market in Cardiff, and the nightstand held a stack of law textbooks she had not opened in months. The window looked down on the bar's yard, where empty crates sat stacked under a tarp. The room smelled of turmeric from the curry box she'd left on the counter and the soap Lucien had used at her sink. He sat on the edge of the mattress. She peeled back the tape. The gauze had stuck. She wet a fresh pad from the basin she carried in and held it to the cotton until the red loosened. "You should have gone to Eva's." "She left for Dublin. She gave me Ptolemy's feeding schedule and a list of boiler threats." "The cat would have defended the flat better." "Ptolemy defends nobody. He judges." He watched her hands. "Rory." She paused. The name sat in his mouth like a coin he had been saving. "Don't." "Don't what?" "Say it as if we never ended." "We ended badly." "That's not the same as never." His fingers found her wrist again, this time beneath the cuff. The pad of his thumb traced the crescent scar. Heat climbed her arm and gathered low in her stomach. She should have pulled away. The thought arrived late, then stayed, arguing with the feel of his skin. "You left before I could explain." "You made explaining impossible." "I was afraid." "You? The man who walks into demon debt meetings with a blade in a cane?" "Yes. That man. Afraid of one delivery rider with a bad taste in exes and a mind I couldn't anticipate." She laughed once, sharp. "That's not an apology." "It's the start of one." The window rattled. Below, a car door shut. They both listened. No boots on the stairs. No knock. The night kept moving without them. She removed the soaked pad and replaced it with clean gauze. This time she taped it with care, fingers brushing the lean plane of his ribs. His muscles tensed under her touch. He did not move away. When she lifted her gaze, his face was close enough to count the rain clinging to his lashes. One eye burned amber. The other held blacker than the room. His mouth held restraint instead of precision. "Tell me to leave." "You're bleeding." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one you're getting." His hand slid up her forearm. Her breath snagged on the edge of it. He stopped there, waiting. She could have stepped back. The door was behind her. The chain was on the front door. The night had not yet decided anything for them. She fisted the front of his ruined shirt and pulled him the last inch.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:00:47.526Z" 9/2/2026, 3:00:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences116
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.086
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2034
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2034
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"footsteps"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences146
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences257
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2034
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1346
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Lucien6
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas4
Whitechapel1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Empress"
4"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Whitechapel"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if offering it to a cloakroom attendant"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2034
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences257
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs141
mean14.43
std17.29
cv1.198
sampleLengths
030
167
24
33
45
519
610
710
844
93
1012
112
126
1317
1435
151
162
171
1838
191
202
212
2232
231
242
252
264
2745
281
294
303
3139
3211
331
343
353
363
373
383
3941
4014
4120
424
435
444
4570
464
476
482
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences257
ratio0.004
matches
0"The amber eye caught the bulb above the stairwell; the black one swallowed it."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1350
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"other pressed against his"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences257
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences257
mean7.91
std6.99
cv0.884
sampleLengths
030
118
25
310
47
513
614
74
83
95
103
1112
124
1310
143
157
1628
179
187
193
2012
212
226
235
2412
255
2613
278
289
291
302
311
325
3318
3415
351
362
372
3811
3915
406
411
422
432
444
454
4610
477
4824
491
43.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2529182879377432
totalSentences257
uniqueOpeners65
24.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"Then footsteps came up the"
ratio0.007
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount76
totalSentences136
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes took"
1"He filled the narrow frame."
2"His platinum hair lay slicked"
3"He looked down."
4"His mouth tightened."
5"She kept her hand on"
6"She opened the door wider."
7"He stepped over the threshold."
8"She shut the door and"
9"His fingers worked the buttons."
10"He folded the coat over"
11"He released the coat into"
12"She pulled a clean dish"
13"He sucked air through his"
14"She lifted the towel."
15"His skin around it had"
16"She fetched the first-aid tin"
17"He undid them with blood-slick"
18"She refused to look at"
19"She soaked a pad and"
ratio0.559
4.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences136
matches
0"The deadbolt gave way under"
1"Her bright blue eyes took"
2"He filled the narrow frame."
3"The other pressed against his"
4"His platinum hair lay slicked"
5"The amber eye caught the"
6"He looked down."
7"A dark bead slid from"
8"His mouth tightened."
9"She kept her hand on"
10"She opened the door wider."
11"He stepped over the threshold."
12"The scent of bergamot and"
13"She shut the door and"
14"The click sat between them"
15"His fingers worked the buttons."
16"The garment came off in"
17"He folded the coat over"
18"He released the coat into"
19"She pulled a clean dish"
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He folded the coat over his arm as if offering it to a cloakroom attendant."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0421%