Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAA53PR7HQKXXJ9325FSB5

Run Details

Duration:
56.6s
Cost:
$0.000830
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stood at the perimeter of Richmond Park. Night swallowed the gravel paths. Wind died. She drew the wool collar of her delivery jacket tight across her throat. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead. Moss coated their sides. Roots knuckled into the earth. She had chased four separate tips before finding this exact coordinate. The envelope arrived with no return address. Inside sat a slip of thick cardstock. Three words typed on the front. Directions scrawled in charcoal on the back. She touched the silver chain resting against her sternum. The Heartstone pendant pressed warm through her shirt. Deep crimson stone glowed faintly. Inner light pulsed slow and steady. She adjusted it once. Metal bit into skin. Good. Grounding. She stepped past the eastern stone. Soil packed harder beneath her boots. The atmosphere shifted instantly. Damp pine and decay vanished. Sweet rot and crushed mint flooded her nose. Wildflowers erupted from the dirt in tight rings. White blossoms with yellow cores. Blue spikes pushing through cracked peat. Everything bloomed out of season. She counted the outer ring. Twelve plants. Fifteen. Twenty. The numbers tangled when she looked away. She blinked. Count restarted at seven. Time bent here. Pocket reality wrapped around the clearing like glass. She pulled a pocket notebook from her coat. Twisted cap off her pen. Drove ink onto the page. Recorded the flower count. Recorded the ambient temperature. Recorded the position of her watch hands. The numbers contradicted each other immediately. Sixty degrees. Forty-two. Sixty-five. The second hand ticked backward. She tapped the crystal face. Fingers left smudges. Glass did not crack. Mechanics did not fix themselves. She cleared her throat. Spoke to the empty air. Let the words anchor her nerves. Quiet your pulse. Map the variables. Note the deviations. Log everything. Leave nothing to assumption. Her voice sounded heavy. Absorbed by the thick atmosphere. Dropped straight to the forest floor. She nodded. Dropped the pen into the notebook. Turned her body inward. Took another step. Grass parted like silk. Canopy wove overhead. Branches braided until they formed a vaulted ceiling. Moonlight fractured through the leaves. Pale water spilled onto the moss. Shadows pooled between the trunks. Long. Deliberate. Stationary until she moved. She kept her spine straight. Shoulders relaxed. Calm hands made clean observations. Cold logic separated fact from fiction. She scanned the tree line. Tracked the perimeter. Noted the lack of animals. No birds. No insects. No rustle of rodents. Only the rhythmic drip of moisture falling from invisible heights. She advanced. Boot heels clicked against exposed roots. Sound traveled straight. Died abruptly. Returned muffled. Delayed by half a second. Echoes layered over themselves. Voices answering her footsteps. Not hers. Deeper. Friction-heavy. Sand dragging over stone. She stopped. Listened. The friction halted. Breath pooled in her lungs. She forced it out slow. Even. Controlled. She whispered again. Clear tone. Steady pitch. I am documenting the anomaly. I am recording spatial distortion. State your function. Stand down. Silence answered. Thick and complete. A twig snapped. Not behind her. Above her. She jerked her chin up. Eyes tracked the dark weave of branches. Movement flickered at the far left corner of her vision. Shape darted right. Crossed the trunk. Vanished. Too fast for a deer. Too smooth for a fox. Clean geometry. Intentional trajectory. She lowered her gaze. Resume pace. Boots crunching leaves that hadn't been there seconds ago. Brown debris in a bed of green. Seasonal rules shattered here. Physics softened. She followed the slope downward. Ground dipped inward. Center of the clearing depressed like a shallow bowl. Ferns grew broad. Leaves brushed her ankles. Cold. Wet. Alive. The pendant flared. Heat surged through her shirt. Crimson stone blazed brighter. Inner glow intensified. She pressed two fingers against the gem. Pulse hammered against her fingertips. Hel portals operated beneath the crust. Fractures in the baseline layer. This grove sat directly above one. Or anchored it. She needed confirmation. She needed a safe crossing point. She had mapped three potential exits. None aligned with the current gravity well. Plans required revision. Data overrode ego. She adjusted her route. Angled left. Followed the natural drainage of the basin. Trees thinned. Gaps appeared in the canopy. Vertical tears in the leaf cover. Rain fell through them. Straight down. Pattered onto broad fronds. Ripples spread across puddles. Water climbed the fern stems. Defied downward pull. Dropped back. Climbed again. Repetition without pause. Machine-like precision. She muttered under her breath. Keep moving. Track the anomalies. Ignore the pattern repetition. Focus on the structural weak points. The chains rattled. Heavy. Cold against her ribs. She gripped the pendant. Thumb rubbed the polished surface. Warmth spread to her collarbone. Burnished metal cooled her skin. Balance returned. She increased her speed. Shoulders driving forward. Breathing matched stride. In. Out. In. Out. Peripheral vision caught shifts. Dark masses detaching from bark. Sliding sideways. Leaving no disturbance on the moss. She refused to turn. Refused to feed the impulse to look. Observation requires stability. She maintained her line. Reached the midpoint of the clearing. Open space surrounding her. Trees circled at equal distances. Perfect symmetry. Artificial arrangement. She stopped. Lifted her notebook. Flipped to a fresh page. Sketched the layout. Marked the tree positions. Drew lines connecting the gaps. Intersected at a central point. Exactly where she stood. Geometry closed. Trap sprung. She capped the pen. Swallowed hard. Jaw locked. Throat worked. Air passed through. Steady. She spoke loudly. Cutting through the damp air. I see the alignment. I acknowledge the boundary. State your parameters. Identify yourselves. Answer me. The grove held its breath. Rain paused mid-fall. Droplets hung suspended. Suspended against gravity. Static image. Then the pendant screamed. Not sound. Pressure. Sudden drop in atmospheric weight. Ears popped. Nose bled. Warm liquid trickled over her upper lip. She wiped it with the back of her hand. Red smeared across skin. Ignored it. Focused outward. Figures emerged from the shade. Tall. Narrow. Shoulders sloping forward. Faces obscured by woven bark and shadow. Three. Five. Eight. They did not walk. They translated. Space collapsed between them. One moment distant. Next moment ten paces away. Motionless. Still as statues. Arms hanging loose. Fingers elongated. Joints bending backward at unnatural angles. They faced her. Measured her. Recorded her. She matched their posture. Feet planted. Knees unlocked. Hands open at her sides. Palms visible. Non-threatening stance. Protocol held. One figure stepped forward. Bark cracked. Splinters rained. Pale filaments glowed within the split. Sockets shaped like hollow ellipses. No pupils. No irises. Just depth. Darkness pulling light inward. It raised a hand. Palm facing her. Fingers splayed. Counting. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. Nine. Ten. Eleven. Twelve. Thirteen. Fourteen. Fifteen. Numbers matched the flower rings. Matched the recorded deviations. Matched the pages of her notebook. Coincidence collapsed. Design revealed. She exhaled sharp. Nodded once. Acknowledged the tally. Lowered her gaze to the soil. Respected the ritual. Looked up again. The figure lowered its arm. Turned ninety degrees. Pointed toward the center of the clearing. Toward a patch of bare earth. Clear of moss. Clear of flora. Clear of roots. Smooth. Flat. Ready. Rain resumed. Fell upward this time. Streams arced skyward. Disappeared into the canopy tears. Wind picked up. Swept through the grove. Carried scent of ozone and crushed bone. Temperature plummeted. Breath plumed white. She pulled her collar tighter. Stepped forward. Boots sank into the prepared earth. Mud sucked at her soles. Clay warmed beneath the surface. Fever heat radiated up through her legs. She kept walking. Center of the ring. Dead ground beneath her feet. Standing stones watched. Figures encircled. Silent guardians. The pendant grew unbearable. Heat seared her chest. Chain melted into her skin. She ignored the pain. Focused on the boundary. On the threshold. On the space between worlds. She pressed both palms flat against the warm clay. Knuckles white. Fingers spread. Applied pressure. Pushed down. Earth yielded. Cracked. Hairline fractures spiderwebbed outward. Light seeped from the fissures. White hot. Blinding. She held her position. Breath held. Heart hammered against her ribs. Muscles locked. Weight distributed evenly. Balanced. Ready. The ground groaned. Split open. Dark void yawned beneath her boots. Oxygen drained. Cold air rushed upward. Swirling vortex of vacuum. She leaned forward. Planted her feet wider. Braced. The figures bowed in unison. Bark grinding. Filaments dimming. Ritual completing. She lowered her shoulder. Bent her knees. Prepared to cross.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:03:00.994Z" 9/2/2026, 3:03:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1397
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"crystal"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"variables"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"echoes"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
15
word"aligned"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
18
word"parameters"
count1
19
word"weight"
count2
20
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"crystal"
3"pulse"
4"variables"
5"silk"
6"fractured"
7"scanned"
8"rhythmic"
9"echoes"
10"footsteps"
11"silence"
12"flickered"
13"shattered"
14"potential"
15"aligned"
16"warmth"
17"perfect"
18"parameters"
19"weight"
20"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences386
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences386
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences386
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen13
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1397
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1397
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Recorded"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Recorded"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Three3
Recorded4
Fingers4
Dropped3
Shoulders3
Cold4
Breath3
Clear4
Rain3
One3
persons
0"Fingers"
1"Dropped"
2"Shoulders"
3"Breath"
4"Rain"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1397
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences386
matches(empty)
31.65% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean139.7
std36.43
cv0.261
sampleLengths
0120
1151
260
3140
4133
5132
6166
7158
8126
9211
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences386
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs305
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences386
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1402
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.024251069900142655
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.007845934379457917
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences386
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences386
mean3.62
std2.03
cv0.561
sampleLengths
08
15
22
313
47
54
65
711
87
97
106
117
129
138
145
156
164
174
181
191
206
216
224
235
248
258
265
276
285
295
302
311
321
337
342
354
363
378
388
395
405
414
424
437
446
452
461
471
485
495
96.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.6968911917098446
totalSentences386
uniqueOpeners269
67.20% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences248
matches
0"Only the rhythmic drip of"
1"Too fast for a deer."
2"Too smooth for a fox."
3"Exactly where she stood."
4"Then the pendant screamed."
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences248
matches
0"She drew the wool collar"
1"She had chased four separate"
2"She touched the silver chain"
3"She adjusted it once."
4"She stepped past the eastern"
5"She counted the outer ring."
6"She pulled a pocket notebook"
7"She tapped the crystal face."
8"She cleared her throat."
9"Her voice sounded heavy."
10"She kept her spine straight."
11"She scanned the tree line."
12"She forced it out slow."
13"She whispered again."
14"I am documenting the anomaly."
15"I am recording spatial distortion."
16"She jerked her chin up."
17"She lowered her gaze."
18"She followed the slope downward."
19"She pressed two fingers against"
ratio0.185
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount143
totalSentences248
matches
0"Rory stood at the perimeter"
1"Night swallowed the gravel paths."
2"She drew the wool collar"
3"The ancient oak standing stones"
4"Moss coated their sides."
5"Roots knuckled into the earth."
6"She had chased four separate"
7"The envelope arrived with no"
8"Directions scrawled in charcoal on"
9"She touched the silver chain"
10"The Heartstone pendant pressed warm"
11"She adjusted it once."
12"Metal bit into skin."
13"She stepped past the eastern"
14"Soil packed harder beneath her"
15"The atmosphere shifted instantly."
16"Wildflowers erupted from the dirt"
17"Everything bloomed out of season."
18"She counted the outer ring."
19"The numbers tangled when she"
ratio0.577
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences248
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences4
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.4215%